| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.31 | | leniency | 0.619 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.69% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1584 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 55.81% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1584 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "quivered" | | 2 | "wavered" | | 3 | "silk" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "comforting" | | 6 | "streaming" | | 7 | "sense of" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "perfect" | | 10 | "trembled" | | 11 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 149 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 149 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 178 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1582 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 63 | | wordCount | 1398 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.93 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 17 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 27 | | Nyx | 10 | | Isolde | 1 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Veil | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Heartstone" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.534 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 100 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.58% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.264 | | wordCount | 1582 | | matches | | 0 | "not faded, exactly, but cut off, as if a door had shut behind them" | | 1 | "not with warning this time, but with a steady, almost eager warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 178 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 85 | | mean | 18.61 | | std | 19 | | cv | 1.021 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 78 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 54 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 56 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 61 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 55 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 48 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 74 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 32 | | 27 | 33 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 53 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 48 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 38 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 38 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 149 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 232 | | matches | | 0 | "were facing" | | 1 | "was seeing" |
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| 94.70% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 178 | | ratio | 0.017 | | matches | | 0 | "The path behind them ran through Richmond Park beneath a low ceiling of winter cloud; ahead, the earth dipped into a clearing ringed by ancient oaks." | | 1 | "The noise of the park dropped away—not faded, exactly, but cut off, as if a door had shut behind them." | | 2 | "And beneath Rory’s palm, the Heartstone had begun to pulse again—not with warning this time, but with a steady, almost eager warmth." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1406 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.03058321479374111 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0021337126600284497 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 178 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 178 | | mean | 8.89 | | std | 5.78 | | cv | 0.651 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 30 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 43.82% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.30337078651685395 | | totalSentences | 178 | | uniqueOpeners | 54 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, a pale, depthless glow" | | 1 | "Then the current swept it" | | 2 | "Then, from somewhere deeper in" | | 3 | "Somewhere beyond the trees, the" |
| | ratio | 0.031 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "Their trunks were too broad" | | 1 | "It quivered with a silver-blue" | | 2 | "Its moonsilver edge pressed through" | | 3 | "She slid it beneath her" | | 4 | "Their outline wavered at the" | | 5 | "Their voice seemed to travel" | | 6 | "She had insisted on coming," | | 7 | "It was the sort of" | | 8 | "She looked back." | | 9 | "She touched the pommel to" | | 10 | "Their trunks twisted together, forming" | | 11 | "She glanced at Eva." | | 12 | "They moved on." | | 13 | "She looked up." | | 14 | "It was made from the" | | 15 | "They crossed one at a" | | 16 | "She clamped a hand over" | | 17 | "Its trunk was silver-grey and" | | 18 | "Their violet eyes burned brighter." | | 19 | "She drew the Fae-forged blade." |
| | ratio | 0.198 | |
| 66.87% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 103 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones appeared between" | | 1 | "Aurora stopped so abruptly that" | | 2 | "The path behind them ran" | | 3 | "Their trunks were too broad" | | 4 | "The air beyond the boundary" | | 5 | "It quivered with a silver-blue" | | 6 | "Rory’s fingers closed around the" | | 7 | "Its moonsilver edge pressed through" | | 8 | "Eva leaned around her." | | 9 | "Rory glanced back at the" | | 10 | "A crow called somewhere in" | | 11 | "Traffic hissed beyond the trees." | | 12 | "She slid it beneath her" | | 13 | "Their outline wavered at the" | | 14 | "Their voice seemed to travel" | | 15 | "Eva’s hand tightened around the" | | 16 | "She had insisted on coming," | | 17 | "It was the sort of" | | 18 | "Rory took one breath, then" | | 19 | "The air folded over her." |
| | ratio | 0.786 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "It quivered with a silver-blue sheen, bending the view of the clearing as if the world there sat beneath a skin of water." | | 1 | "A young woman’s face, eyes shut, hair streaming around her as if she floated in deep water." | | 2 | "It seemed to pass through Rory’s bones, leaving each one humming." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 78.57% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Eva whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.31 | | leniency | 0.619 | | rawRatio | 0.231 | | effectiveRatio | 0.143 | |