| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 62 | | tagDensity | 0.226 | | leniency | 0.452 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.65% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1868 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 41.11% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1868 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "gloom" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "trembled" | | 4 | "wavering" | | 5 | "throbbed" | | 6 | "chill" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "familiar" | | 10 | "comforting" | | 11 | "pulsed" | | 12 | "weight" | | 13 | "firmly" | | 14 | "throb" | | 15 | "chilled" | | 16 | "perfect" | | 17 | "roaring" | | 18 | "rhythmic" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 173 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 173 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 221 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1866 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 61 | | wordCount | 1620 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.79 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | December | 1 | | Isolde | 5 | | Rory | 29 | | Nyx | 13 | | Veil | 1 | | Seer | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | London | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Recognition | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | One | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Seer" | | 4 | "Heartstone" | | 5 | "Recognition" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.605 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 124 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like when it began to give" | | 1 | "as if listening" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1866 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 221 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 101 | | mean | 18.48 | | std | 20.8 | | cv | 1.126 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 78 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 28 | | 16 | 45 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 74 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 83 | | 29 | 29 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 92 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 31 | | 43 | 31 | | 44 | 63 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 99.18% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 173 | | matches | | 0 | "was lined" | | 1 | "was made" | | 2 | "were carved" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 268 | | matches | | |
| 91.14% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 221 | | ratio | 0.018 | | matches | | 0 | "For an instant she felt two places at once: frost under her boots, and dry, yielding soil; the sting of London winter in her nose, and the scent of bruised fruit, hot metal, and something sweet enough to make her teeth ache." | | 1 | "Not just warm now; alive with direction." | | 2 | "It came from somewhere beyond the orchards, followed by the faint swell of voices—many people gathered in a large room." | | 3 | "Vines climbed iron frames, heavy with unfamiliar vegetables—long striped gourds, round purple roots pushing through the soil, leaves beaded with drops that glowed like embers." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1626 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "green, small white blooms" |
| | adverbCount | 50 | | adverbRatio | 0.03075030750307503 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007995079950799507 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 221 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 221 | | mean | 8.44 | | std | 5.99 | | cv | 0.71 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 54.30% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.3393665158371041 | | totalSentences | 221 | | uniqueOpeners | 75 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 154 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the soft ticking of" | | 1 | "Only the burnished gold ring" | | 2 | "Then he turned and walked" | | 3 | "Then she saw the faces." | | 4 | "Somewhere beyond the walls, the" |
| | ratio | 0.032 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 154 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath smoked in the" | | 1 | "They stood beside her in" | | 2 | "Its warmth had sharpened to" | | 3 | "She could see it now:" | | 4 | "She had heard the name" | | 5 | "Her fingers went to the" | | 6 | "It throbbed once, hot as" | | 7 | "Its chill seeped through her" | | 8 | "She had brought it because" | | 9 | "she told Nyx" | | 10 | "She took one careful step" | | 11 | "Their outline thinned, then gathered" | | 12 | "Its light turned the hills" | | 13 | "She heard no birds, no" | | 14 | "Their familiar shapes looked smaller" | | 15 | "Their voice came like a" | | 16 | "It tugged at her, a" | | 17 | "she said before she could" | | 18 | "It came from somewhere beyond" | | 19 | "She started down the slope," |
| | ratio | 0.253 | |
| 50.91% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 126 | | totalSentences | 154 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "Frost silvered their bark-dark surfaces," | | 2 | "Rory stopped at the edge" | | 3 | "Her breath smoked in the" | | 4 | "The pendant under her coat" | | 5 | "Isolde stood on the far" | | 6 | "Rory glanced at Nyx." | | 7 | "They stood beside her in" | | 8 | "Isolde’s pale gaze settled on" | | 9 | "Its warmth had sharpened to" | | 10 | "Rory looked back at the" | | 11 | "She could see it now:" | | 12 | "She had heard the name" | | 13 | "This was what that looked" | | 14 | "Nyx tilted their head." | | 15 | "Isolde’s mouth curved faintly." | | 16 | "Her fingers went to the" | | 17 | "It throbbed once, hot as" | | 18 | "Isolde’s riddles were exhausting, but" | | 19 | "The distinction offered scant comfort." |
| | ratio | 0.818 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 154 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 98.21% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "No season she knew could make such colours: blue so deep it looked black at the heart, gold petals edged in green, small white blooms that shivered though the a…" | | 1 | "Fruit swung among them: pear-shaped things with translucent skins, plump scarlet bulbs, clusters of tiny silver berries that chimed softly when the branches mov…" | | 2 | "Vines climbed iron frames, heavy with unfamiliar vegetables—long striped gourds, round purple roots pushing through the soil, leaves beaded with drops that glow…" | | 3 | "The Heartstone warmed in her palm, steady now, as if listening." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 62 | | tagDensity | 0.21 | | leniency | 0.419 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.032 | |