Run: 2026-09-23-01M36R7DS7KFB08R4YANNQHP35

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59.7s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened, and Lucien Moreau caught my wrist before the knife reached his throat. His fingers closed over the crescent scar. The blade hovered beneath his jaw, close enough to nick the skin if either of us breathed wrong. “Let go.” He released me. I kept the knife between us. “You’ve got three seconds to explain why you’re at Eva’s door.” “Someone followed me.” “Then you should have kept walking.” His amber eye held mine. The black one seemed to swallow the narrow hall behind him. He wore a charcoal suit cut close to his frame, immaculate except for a dark stain spreading across one cuff. “Two seconds,” I said. “Close the door, Rory.” I almost laughed. “You don’t get to give me orders.” The stairwell behind him creaked. Lucien glanced over his shoulder. That small turn of his head did more than any plea could have. I stepped back and let him cross the threshold, then slammed the door and shot the bolts home. One. Two. Three. Ptolemy shot out from beneath the table, his tabby fur bristling. He hissed at Lucien’s cane. “Charming,” Lucien murmured. “He remembers you.” “Cats have good judgement.” “He’s never liked you.” “Then we agree on something.” I kept the knife raised. Eva’s flat offered little room for a proper standoff. Books covered the floor in uneven stacks. Scrolls and research notes spilled from the sofa to the kitchen counter. A chipped mug held three pencils and a pair of scissors. Every surface had a purpose, and none of them had enough space. Lucien took in the room, then looked at me. “How long have you been here?” “Long enough to know you won’t leave unless I make you.” “You could make me.” His gaze dropped to the knife. A faint smile touched his mouth, the same one he used when he wanted me to mistake insolence for charm. “I did once,” I said. “You remember how that ended.” The smile vanished. I lowered the knife by an inch. Not enough to trust him. Enough to speak without feeling foolish. “What happened to your cuff?” “Someone objected to my presence.” “Did they object with a blade?” “With several.” “And you brought them here?” “No.” “Your timing suggests otherwise.” He rested both hands on the ivory handle of his cane. “I came because the people who attacked me know you’re in this flat.” The knife came up again. “How?” “They followed the wrong person.” “Try again.” “They have a list of addresses. Eva’s is on it.” My throat tightened. I hated that he saw it. Hated more that he stepped closer, as if that old instinct still belonged to him. “Is Eva safe?” “I don’t know.” I moved around him towards the table. “You came to tell me you don’t know where my friend is?” “I came to get you out before they arrive.” “And if I refuse?” “Then I stay.” The words landed between us with the weight of a threat and the shape of an old promise. “You don’t get to stay,” I said. “You lost that privilege.” “I never had it.” “No. You had a key.” His gaze flicked to the table, where Eva’s notes lay open beneath my hand. One page bore a row of names in Eva’s tight script. Lucien recognised something there. His jaw set. I noticed. “What is it?” “Nothing.” “Lucien.” “Put the knife down and I’ll tell you.” I pressed the blade to the page. “I can cut paper all night.” “You’d ruin Eva’s notes.” “She’d forgive me. You wouldn’t.” “I would survive.” “Not the same thing.” His mouth tightened. The old ease between us had never been kindness. It had been a blade polished smooth from use. We knew where to cut. We knew how to make the other one lean closer before we did it. I set the knife beside the papers, within reach. “Talk.” He took a folded card from his inner pocket and laid it on the table. The card had a black mark burned into its centre, a circle split by a crooked line. I recognised the symbol from Eva’s research. She had drawn it beside a list of disappearances, then circled it twice. “Where did you get that?” “From the man who followed me.” “Is he dead?” “Yes.” “Did he say anything useful before he died?” “He said your name.” I stared at the mark. “My name’s not rare.” “Not the one he used.” My fingers curled around the table edge. Lucien’s gaze shifted to my left wrist, where the scar showed beneath my sleeve. “Don’t,” I said. “I haven’t spoken.” “You don’t have to. You’ve always been good at making silence sound like an accusation.” His face held still, but his thumb moved over the cane’s ivory handle. A small, precise stroke. “You gave the Court my name,” I said. “You stood beside me and let them write it down.” “I gave them a name.” “Mine.” “I did not give them you.” The old answer. It had sounded clever the first time. It had sounded cruel the second. Now it sounded like a lock he wanted me to pick for him. “They came to Silas’s bar,” I said. “They searched my flat. I slept on Eva’s sofa for a week because you decided I couldn’t handle the truth.” “I decided the truth would put you in their hands.” “You decided for me.” “Yes.” The word was quiet. No defence. No charm to soften it. That unsettled me more than an argument. “Why come back now?” I asked. “Because they found you.” “You told me you’d stay away.” “I meant it.” “Your intentions have never been the part I struggled with.” Something shifted behind his eyes. His hand closed on the cane. “I know.” The space between us thinned. I could smell iron beneath his cologne, fresh blood and something darker, like burned sugar. He had always carried the underworld with him, even in clean rooms and clean clothes. I had once leaned into that darkness because he looked at me as if he saw every sharp edge and wanted them all. Then he had traded my name. “You could have sent a message,” I said. “They intercept messages.” “You could have asked Eva.” “She wasn’t at home.” “Then how did you know I was here?” His gaze settled on me. “You always go where the books are.” “That’s not an answer.” “It is the one I have.” A soft scrape sounded beyond the door. We both went still. Ptolemy darted under the sofa. The sound came again, a faint drag across the wood, then stopped. Lucien’s cane shifted in his hand. I reached for the knife. “Your friend?” “No.” “You said they were following you.” “I said they followed the wrong person.” “That distinction matters to you?” “It matters if the right person is already inside.” Cold crept up my arms. I looked at the windows. One stood above the narrow courtyard, half-hidden by books and a curtain. Eva kept its latch wedged with a brass spoon. The front door had three deadbolts. The kitchen’s back door opened on a service stair shared with the curry house below. “Who’s inside?” “I don’t know.” “Then you’re useless.” “Frequently. But not at this.” He crossed towards the door. I caught his sleeve. “Don’t.” His eyes dropped to my hand. My fingers had closed around the stain on his cuff. “Let go,” he said. I released him at once. The faint pull of his mouth told me he had expected me to hold on. “Your blood,” I said. “Some of it.” “Whose is the rest?” “Someone else’s.” “Comforting.” He turned the cane in his hand. A hidden catch clicked. A slim blade slid from the shaft, bright as a sliver of moonlight. I hated the way my pulse answered it. “Stay behind me,” he said. “No.” “Rory.” “Try that again and I’ll put you behind me.” “Your bravery remains inconvenient.” “And your manners remain a choice.” For one beat, the danger outside vanished beneath the pull between us. His gaze touched my mouth. Mine followed the fine line of blood beneath his jaw. I remembered his hand at my back, his voice against my ear, the way he used to ask permission with his eyes when he knew words would ruin the moment. He had not asked before betraying me. The door handle turned. Lucien moved in front of me. I shoved his shoulder and took the lead. The handle stopped. A sharp click sounded inside the lock. The first deadbolt slid back. I grabbed Lucien’s lapel and dragged him away from the door. “You said they couldn’t get in.” “I said I locked it.” The second bolt snapped free. His cane blade flashed in the cramped space. I snatched Eva’s heavy brass lamp from the table and planted my feet. The third deadbolt clicked. Then someone on the other side whispered my name in Lucien’s voice.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences109
tagDensity0.11
leniency0.22
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1495
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1495
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"charm"
count2
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"unsettled"
count1
5
word"comforting"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"charm"
1"weight"
2"flicked"
3"silence"
4"unsettled"
5"comforting"
6"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences126
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences223
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1495
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions32
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
93.82% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount979
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.12
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien11
Moreau1
Eva6
One3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"One"
places(empty)
globalScore0.938
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like a lock he wanted me to pick f"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1495
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences223
matches
0"hated that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs152
mean9.84
std11.44
cv1.164
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015
125
22
33
417
53
66
736
84
94
1010
115
1239
1316
143
153
164
174
185
1956
209
216
2211
234
2426
2510
263
2718
285
295
306
312
325
331
344
3524
366
375
382
3910
4024
413
423
4319
449
454
463
4718
4811
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs178
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences223
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount980
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay open beneath my"
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.024489795918367346
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences223
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences223
mean6.7
std4.58
cv0.683
sampleLengths
015
17
218
32
43
56
611
73
86
95
1011
1120
124
134
143
157
165
175
1813
1918
201
211
221
2311
245
253
263
274
284
295
305
319
327
3312
3411
3512
369
376
3811
394
406
4120
425
435
443
457
465
476
485
495
45.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.273542600896861
totalSentences223
uniqueOpeners61
61.16% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences109
matches
0"Then he had traded my"
1"Then someone on the other"
ratio0.018
25.50% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount53
totalSentences109
matches
0"His fingers closed over the"
1"He released me."
2"I kept the knife between"
3"His amber eye held mine."
4"He wore a charcoal suit"
5"I almost laughed."
6"I stepped back and let"
7"He hissed at Lucien’s cane."
8"I kept the knife raised."
9"His gaze dropped to the"
10"I lowered the knife by"
11"He rested both hands on"
12"My throat tightened."
13"I hated that he saw"
14"I moved around him towards"
15"His gaze flicked to the"
16"His jaw set."
17"I pressed the blade to"
18"His mouth tightened."
19"It had been a blade"
ratio0.486
10.46% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences109
matches
0"The door opened, and Lucien"
1"His fingers closed over the"
2"The blade hovered beneath his"
3"He released me."
4"I kept the knife between"
5"His amber eye held mine."
6"The black one seemed to"
7"He wore a charcoal suit"
8"I almost laughed."
9"The stairwell behind him creaked."
10"Lucien glanced over his shoulder."
11"That small turn of his"
12"I stepped back and let"
13"Ptolemy shot out from beneath"
14"He hissed at Lucien’s cane."
15"I kept the knife raised."
16"Eva’s flat offered little room"
17"Books covered the floor in"
18"Scrolls and research notes spilled"
19"A chipped mug held three"
ratio0.899
45.87% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences109
matches
0"Now it sounded like a"
ratio0.009
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences109
tagDensity0.11
leniency0.22
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.018
88.3192%