Run: 2026-09-23-01M36R8AG362VVH8G98KWYVPTN

Run Details

Duration:
1m
Cost:
$0.002319
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened on Lucien Moreau, rain bright on the shoulders of his charcoal coat and blood darkening one cuff. Rory kept one hand on the chain. Behind her, Ptolemy wound between her ankles, his tail held high. “You have the wrong flat.” Lucien’s amber eye flicked to the chain, then to her face. His black eye stayed on the corridor. “Take it off.” “Try asking like a person who hasn’t vanished for six months.” Footsteps climbed the stairs below him. Lucien shifted his weight, ivory-handled cane angled across his body. A second set of steps followed the first. “Rory.” She hated how he could make her name sound like a hand at the small of her back. “Who’s downstairs?” “I don’t know.” “Then you’re not coming in.” “They watched me cross the street. One of them took a photograph of this door.” Rory glanced past him. The stairwell sat empty above his shoulder, its old plaster scored with scratches and pencil marks. The steps below continued, steady and unhurried. “Take off the chain,” Lucien murmured. “Or let them see you ask me questions.” For a beat, she held his gaze. Then she unhooked the chain and pulled him inside by his lapel. Lucien stumbled across the threshold. Rory shut the door and drove each deadbolt home. Ptolemy hissed at the cane. Lucien lifted it away from the cat, then pressed one gloved hand to his bleeding sleeve. “You brought trouble to Eva’s flat.” “I brought it away from your door.” “You don’t know where I live.” “I know where you sleep when you want to be near Eva.” “That isn’t the same thing.” “No.” His mouth tightened. “It isn’t.” A knock landed on the door. Ptolemy darted beneath the bookcase. Rory stepped between Lucien and the entrance, though he had a foot and several inches on her. He didn’t comment. His gaze followed the narrow line of her left wrist, where her sleeve had slipped back and shown the crescent scar. The knock came again. “Police,” a man called through the door. “We need a word.” Rory looked at Lucien. His expression had gone blank in the way she remembered: not calm, not unafraid. A shutter pulled down over a lit room. “Do you know him?” “No.” “Would he say the same?” “He’d say whatever got him inside.” “Great. I’ll ask him for a warrant.” Lucien’s fingers closed around the cane handle. “Don’t.” The silence between them filled with the damp smell of his coat and the sharp iron scent of blood. The man outside knocked a third time. “Miss Carter?” Rory’s stomach tightened. Lucien’s eyes moved to hers. “Stay behind me,” he said. “Not a chance.” She crossed to the tiny kitchen, where Eva kept a jar of brass keys, three chipped mugs and a bread knife on the counter. Rory took the knife and returned to the door. Lucien watched her pass. “I thought you hated being told what to do.” “I do. You’ll notice I’m still holding the knife.” The footsteps shifted outside. A pause. Then the man went down the stairs, one measured step at a time. Neither of them moved until the street door slammed below. Lucien lowered his cane. “We should wait.” “We should call Eva.” “She’ll come straight back.” “She lives here.” “And whoever’s downstairs knows that.” Rory’s thumb hovered over her phone. “You don’t get to make decisions for her.” “I’m not. I’m asking you not to put her in the middle before we know who’s watching.” “Funny. You used to be very good at putting people in the middle.” His jaw worked once. Rainwater slid from his hairline to his temple. The slicked-back platinum strands had fallen loose above one ear. He looked tired, and she resented the way that made her want to touch his face. “Your sleeve,” she said. “Sit down before you bleed on Eva’s research.” “I’m not sure she’d forgive the blood or the research.” “Sit.” He eased onto the edge of the chair by the table. His cane rested against his knee. Rory set the bread knife within reach and fetched the first-aid tin from the bathroom shelf. Eva had labelled it with a strip of tape: BANDAGES. NOT SCROLLS. Rory had added a question mark beside the word after finding a scroll in it last week. Lucien watched her peel off one glove. “Still keeping the kitchen knife close?” “Still arriving without warning?” “I deserved that.” “You deserved worse.” She cut the damp cuff away. A shallow gash ran along his forearm, the edges red and wet. Lucien held still as she pressed gauze to it. His fingers rested on the table, long and pale, one ring catching the light. “You could have gone to a hospital,” she said. “And told them what?” “That you fell on a very sharp door.” “Does that work?” “On people who want to believe you, yes.” His gaze lifted to hers. “Do you?” She tightened the gauze. He flinched, barely. “Believe that you fell?” “Believe me.” Rory wrapped the bandage around his arm. “You don’t get to ask that like we left things on equal terms.” “We didn’t.” “No. You kissed me in the rain outside Silas’s, then told me I was a distraction you’d mistaken for a person.” A small muscle jumped in his cheek. He didn’t look away. “I remember what I said.” “I remember what you did. You made sure I heard the worst version of it.” “I thought you’d leave.” “I did leave.” “Not far enough.” “Don’t.” The word came out low. She tucked the end of the bandage beneath itself, though her hands had started to shake. Lucien glanced down at them. She pulled away. “I didn’t come here to reopen that.” “You came here because you ran out of people who’d take your calls.” “I came because someone asked about you.” “Who?” “An intermediary. He knew your name, your work, and the flat above Silas’s. He asked whether I still had access to you.” “And you told him?” “That I didn’t.” “Could’ve fooled me.” “Rory—” “You don’t get to appear on my doorstep, bleed on my friend’s floor, and expect the old rules to come back.” “I never expected that.” “Then why are you here?” Lucien looked at the bandage she had tied around his arm. His thumb brushed the edge of the gauze, careful not to touch her hand. “Because I saw the man outside take your photograph.” “And you thought I’d believe you?” “No. I thought you’d verify it.” Rory’s mouth pressed shut. He had always known where to put a fact so she would have to pick it up, even when she didn’t want to touch him. She hated that she still understood his silences. Hated more that he had come to protect her after choosing, months ago, to hurt her enough that she would stop following. “Tell me what happened,” she said. “All of it. No polished version.” Lucien’s eyes shifted from her to the window, where the curtains hung across the glass. “I was asked to find a ledger.” “What ledger?” “One that holds names. People who have crossed into London without permission. Some human, most not.” “And my name’s in it?” “I don’t know.” “That wasn’t what I asked.” “No.” He placed both hands on the cane handle. “I don’t know whether your name is in it.” Rory took the chair opposite him. The table between them was crowded with Eva’s open books, a chipped mug and loose notes weighted by a brass paperknife. Lucien’s knee brushed hers beneath it. Neither moved away. “Why would they ask you about me?” “Because they know I helped you.” “You helped me once.” “I did.” “You also left me alone with the mess.” “I did.” The admission hung there without excuse. Rory studied his face: the neat line of his nose, the crease beside his mouth, the different colours of his eyes. In the first weeks after he’d cut her off, she had replayed that face until every detail turned sharp. Then she’d stopped. Mostly. “What did you want me to do?” he asked. “Nothing. I wanted you to tell the truth.” “I thought the truth would make you come after me.” “That was my choice.” “I know.” “No, you knew it then. You just didn’t care.” His hand moved across the table. He stopped before it reached hers, leaving a strip of wood between their fingers. “I cared so much I made a coward’s choice.” Rory looked at his hand. The ring on his little finger had a narrow black stone set in silver. “You don’t get to turn that into something noble.” “I’m not.” “Good.” “Good.” The word landed with the weight of an agreement neither of them trusted. Rory rested her palm on the table. Her scar caught against the rough grain. Lucien’s hand remained where it was, close enough that she felt warmth from his knuckles. “Did you mean it?” she asked. “Which part?” “The kiss.” His gaze fixed on hers. For once, he had no polished answer ready. “No.” The old hurt rose so fast she almost stood. Then he leaned forward, his voice dropping. “I didn’t mean what I said after. I meant the kiss.” Rory held still. Somewhere behind the bookcase, Ptolemy knocked a stack of papers to the floor. “You’re late,” she said. “I know.” “You’re very good at being late.” “I know that too.” She reached for the mug between them and found it empty. When she set it down, her fingers brushed his. Lucien didn’t close his hand around hers. He let her decide whether to pull away. She didn’t.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences114
tagDensity0.096
leniency0.193
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.69% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1611
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count3
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
72.07% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1611
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count2
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"measured"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"footsteps"
2"weight"
3"silence"
4"stomach"
5"measured"
6"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences112
filterMatches
0"decide"
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences215
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1611
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions31
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
46.48% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount966
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity2.07
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien20
Moreau1
Ptolemy4
Rory17
Eva3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Rory"
4"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.465
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1611
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences215
matches
0"hated that she"
1"enough that she"
2"replayed that face"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs148
mean10.89
std11.11
cv1.021
sampleLengths
020
118
25
318
43
511
624
71
818
92
103
115
1215
1327
1414
1519
1635
176
187
196
2012
215
226
236
2446
254
2611
274
2822
294
301
315
326
337
348
3519
369
378
385
393
4037
419
429
4319
4410
457
464
474
483
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs176
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences215
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount969
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.03199174406604747
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0020639834881320948
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences215
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences215
mean7.49
std5.22
cv0.697
sampleLengths
020
17
211
35
411
57
63
711
86
910
108
111
1218
132
143
155
1615
174
1816
197
206
218
227
2312
245
259
265
2716
286
297
306
3112
325
334
342
356
365
3717
383
3921
404
417
424
434
4414
458
464
471
485
496
44.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.27906976744186046
totalSentences215
uniqueOpeners60
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences100
matches
0"Then she unhooked the chain"
1"Then the man went down"
2"Then she’d stopped."
3"Then he leaned forward, his"
4"Somewhere behind the bookcase, Ptolemy"
ratio0.05
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences100
matches
0"His black eye stayed on"
1"She hated how he could"
2"His mouth tightened"
3"He didn’t comment."
4"His gaze followed the narrow"
5"His expression had gone blank"
6"She crossed to the tiny"
7"His jaw worked once."
8"He looked tired, and she"
9"He eased onto the edge"
10"His cane rested against his"
11"She cut the damp cuff"
12"His fingers rested on the"
13"His gaze lifted to hers."
14"She tightened the gauze."
15"He flinched, barely."
16"He didn’t look away."
17"She tucked the end of"
18"She pulled away."
19"His thumb brushed the edge"
ratio0.29
15.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences100
matches
0"The door opened on Lucien"
1"Rory kept one hand on"
2"Lucien’s amber eye flicked to"
3"His black eye stayed on"
4"Footsteps climbed the stairs below"
5"Lucien shifted his weight, ivory-handled"
6"A second set of steps"
7"She hated how he could"
8"Rory glanced past him."
9"The stairwell sat empty above"
10"The steps below continued, steady"
11"Lucien stumbled across the threshold."
12"Rory shut the door and"
13"Ptolemy hissed at the cane."
14"Lucien lifted it away from"
15"His mouth tightened"
16"A knock landed on the"
17"Ptolemy darted beneath the bookcase."
18"Rory stepped between Lucien and"
19"He didn’t comment."
ratio0.89
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences114
tagDensity0.079
leniency0.158
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.018
88.9707%