Run: 2026-09-23-01M36R8CKK7Y8RGFB6EKPMMFVV

Run Details

Duration:
55.4s
Cost:
$0.002249
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened, and Lucien Moreau stood on the landing with rain on his shoulders and a dark smear across one cuff. Rory kept one hand on the latch. The other curled against the doorframe, crescent scar pale against her wrist. “You have ten seconds to tell me why you’re here.” His amber eye held hers. The black one slid past her, taking in the narrow hall, the unlit kitchen behind her, the cardigan thrown over a chair. “Someone asked Yu-Fei about your delivery routes.” “Eight seconds.” “Two men came to the Golden Empress this afternoon. They knew your name and the streets you cover.” “Six.” “They weren’t looking for takeaway.” She looked at the stain on his cuff. “Is that yours?” Lucien glanced down as if he’d forgotten it. “Some of it.” “Then you’ve got four seconds to explain why you brought it to my door.” “I didn’t know where else to go.” The answer landed harder than she wanted. Rory shifted her grip on the door. Behind him, the stairwell carried up a wash of bass from Silas’s bar, the same low pulse she heard through the floorboards every night. No footsteps followed Lucien. No voices climbed the stairs. “You had plenty of places to go,” she said. “You made sure I knew that.” “I know.” “Do you? Because last time you told me you couldn’t afford to be seen with me. Then you vanished before I could ask whether that meant the danger had passed or you’d decided I’d become inconvenient.” A muscle moved in his jaw. He’d shaved, but not since morning. Rain had loosened a strand of platinum hair near his temple. “I was wrong to leave you without an answer.” “That’s not an answer.” “No.” His fingers tightened around the ivory handle of his cane. “It isn’t.” Rory waited. He’d always been good at making silence feel like an offer. She’d once mistaken it for trust. The smear on his cuff had begun to darken. A drop slipped from the edge and struck the wooden landing between them. “Are you bleeding on my doorstep?” she asked. “I’m bleeding on your landing.” “Enjoy the distinction from downstairs.” His mouth almost changed. Almost. “Rory—” “Don’t.” He stopped. She had thought about that voice during the months he’d been gone. In the quiet after deliveries, on the bus, once in the middle of kissing someone else and finding herself watching the door instead. She had practised what she’d say if he came back. None of the rehearsed lines had survived his face. “You don’t get to use my name like we’re picking up a conversation,” she said. “I won’t.” “Good.” “May I come in?” “No.” Lucien looked past her again. His gaze caught on the open window in the kitchen, where the curtain shifted in the draught. “You should close that.” “You should stop giving me instructions.” “There was a man outside the restaurant who knew your name. I saw the photograph he carried.” “Your photograph?” “Yours.” A cold pinch drew tight beneath her ribs. Rory kept her hand on the latch. “What did it look like?” “Taken from the opposite pavement. You wore the red coat you left at Eva’s.” “Which means it was old.” “Not very.” She reached for the door, ready to shut it in his face. Lucien’s cane struck the landing before she could move. He flinched, his free hand closing over his side. The neat line of his charcoal jacket had split beneath the lapel. A dark patch spread through the shirt below it. Rory’s temper held. Her body, traitor that it was, took a step forward. “Sit down before you fall down.” “I can manage.” “You can bleed on the stairs, then. Silas will charge you for the cleaning.” “I’d rather not cause him trouble.” “You’ve never had that problem before.” She opened the door wide enough for him to pass, then stepped back at once. Lucien crossed the threshold without touching her. He carried the rain and the scent of cold stone into the flat. Rory shut the door and slid the bolt home. He stood in her narrow hall, shoulders drawn tight. The cane rested against his palm, its ivory handle worn smooth where his thumb had pressed. “Take off your jacket.” His eyes lifted to hers. “That wasn’t on my list of expected greetings.” “Neither was you turning up with a hole in your shirt.” “You used to be more welcoming.” “I used to have worse judgement.” “Your judgement has improved, then.” “Considerably.” He unbuttoned the jacket. His left hand moved with care, fingers held stiff. Rory saw a shallow cut across the knuckles, then the blood beneath his shirt. He laid the jacket over the chair without letting it brush the wall. “You brought a blade to my flat,” she said. “I brought a cane.” “Your cane has a blade.” “You remember.” “I remember everything that made my life harder.” She went to the kitchen cupboard for the first-aid tin. When she returned, he had stayed where she left him, one hand braced on the back of the chair. “Sit.” He lowered himself with measured care. The chair creaked. Rory set the tin on the table and dragged another chair close enough to reach him. She didn’t sit. “Shirt up.” “Rory—” “Would you like me to fetch Silas? He can hold you still.” Lucien unfastened two buttons and lifted the fabric. A narrow slice ran along his ribs, red at the edges, shallow enough to avoid the worst of it. His skin looked pale beneath the lamplight. Rory pressed gauze to the cut. His breath caught. “Still good at giving orders,” he said. “Still bad at following them.” Her fingers worked over the wound. The skin around it was warm. He held still, eyes fixed on her face, while she cleaned the blood away. She kept her gaze on the work. “Who did this?” “Someone who wanted the photograph back.” “You took it from him?” “I took it from the pavement.” “Lucien.” “He had a knife.” “And you brought the result here.” “I knew you’d ask questions.” “That’s not a reason to come to my flat.” “No.” He watched her wrap the bandage around his ribs. “It’s a reason to come to you.” Her hands paused. A strip of gauze stretched between them. “That sentence used to work.” “I know.” “You keep saying that as though it repairs anything.” “It doesn’t.” “Then stop.” She tied the bandage. His gaze dropped to her hands, to the scar crossing her left wrist. He didn’t touch it. His restraint stirred up a sharper ache than a careless hand would have. Rory closed the first-aid tin. “You could have sent a message.” “I didn’t know if you’d read it.” “You could have left one with Yu-Fei.” “That would have put her in the middle.” “You’ve never let that stop you before.” His face tightened. “You think I used her to get to you.” “I think you decided who deserved the truth. You told me to leave. You didn’t tell me what had happened, who was coming, or what you’d promised to make it stop.” “I thought if you knew, you’d stay.” “So you lied.” “Yes.” “And when I stayed anyway, you chose for me.” “Yes.” The bluntness took the next sentence from her. She stood, carrying the bloodied gauze to the sink. Water ran pink over her fingers. “You could have trusted me.” “I should have.” She turned off the tap. “You had months to say that.” “I spent them finding out who had taken the photograph.” “You knew where I lived.” “I knew you didn’t want me here.” “I still don’t.” He glanced at the bolted door. “Yet you let me in.” “Because I didn’t want blood on the stairs.” “Of course.” “Don’t make a story out of it.” “I wouldn’t dare.” She turned, and found him watching her with a patience she had once found tender. Now it felt like a hand held just short of her skin. “What do you want from me?” “To tell you what I should have told you before.” “Start with the men.” “One of them works for a broker who’s been buying names from the people who move between realms. The other carried your photograph. I don’t know who sent them.” “And you expect me to believe you came here for my safety?” “I came because you deserved to know.” “Those are different things.” “They are.” She leaned against the counter. “You can’t keep arriving with half a truth and call it honesty.” “I’m not asking you to.” “Then what are you asking?” Lucien’s fingers flexed against his knee. For once, he seemed to have misplaced the answer he’d polished for other people. “Stay in the room long enough for me to give you the whole account.” Rory glanced at the blood on the gauze, then at his face. She could still see the man who had kissed her in the back of a cab and pressed his forehead to hers when the driver missed their turn. She could also see the man who’d stood on her doorstep months later and told her to leave London without once saying he wanted her to stay. “You get one account,” she said. “No edits. No clever omissions.” “I understand.” “And if you try to manage me—” “I won’t.” “You don’t know what I was about to say.” “I know the shape of it.” She pulled out the chair opposite him and sat. “Prove you know the difference between listening and guessing.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"His fingers tightened around [around]"
dialogueSentences120
tagDensity0.067
leniency0.133
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.017
96.87% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1596
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1596
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"measured"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"footsteps"
2"silence"
3"measured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences94
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences206
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1596
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
85.22% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount849
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.3
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Lucien8
Moreau1
Silas1
Rory11
London1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.852
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a hand held just short of her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1596
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences206
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs144
mean11.08
std11.36
cv1.025
sampleLengths
022
119
210
327
47
52
618
71
85
911
1011
1114
127
1347
1415
152
1636
1723
189
194
2013
2119
2222
238
245
255
266
271
282
2954
3015
312
321
334
341
3522
364
376
3817
392
401
4115
425
4314
445
452
4630
4721
4813
496
97.80% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences94
matches
0"been gone"
1"was, took"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs152
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences206
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount851
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.03055229142185664
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences206
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences206
mean7.75
std5.79
cv0.747
sampleLengths
022
17
212
310
45
522
67
72
818
91
105
118
123
138
143
1514
167
177
187
1924
204
215
229
236
242
2536
266
276
2811
299
304
3111
322
332
3411
356
369
3713
388
395
405
414
421
431
441
452
4612
4723
4810
499
47.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3058252427184466
totalSentences206
uniqueOpeners63
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
17.65% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences85
matches
0"His amber eye held hers."
1"She looked at the stain"
2"He’d shaved, but not since"
3"His fingers tightened around the"
4"He’d always been good at"
5"She’d once mistaken it for"
6"His mouth almost changed."
7"She had thought about that"
8"She had practised what she’d"
9"His gaze caught on the"
10"She reached for the door,"
11"He flinched, his free hand"
12"Her body, traitor that it"
13"She opened the door wide"
14"He carried the rain and"
15"He stood in her narrow"
16"His eyes lifted to hers."
17"He unbuttoned the jacket."
18"His left hand moved with"
19"He laid the jacket over"
ratio0.506
1.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences85
matches
0"The door opened, and Lucien"
1"Rory kept one hand on"
2"The other curled against the"
3"His amber eye held hers."
4"The black one slid past"
5"She looked at the stain"
6"Lucien glanced down as if"
7"The answer landed harder than"
8"Rory shifted her grip on"
9"A muscle moved in his"
10"He’d shaved, but not since"
11"Rain had loosened a strand"
12"His fingers tightened around the"
13"He’d always been good at"
14"She’d once mistaken it for"
15"The smear on his cuff"
16"A drop slipped from the"
17"His mouth almost changed."
18"She had thought about that"
19"She had practised what she’d"
ratio0.918
58.82% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"Now it felt like a"
ratio0.012
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences120
tagDensity0.05
leniency0.1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.4190%