Run: 2026-09-23-01M36RCHH7MNGEQ27NWPCP3K5Z

Run Details

Duration:
45.3s
Cost:
$0.001681
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The tear in the Veil hung between two brick pillars in the cellar of a shuttered bathhouse. It looked like heat above a road, though the air smelled of wet stone and iron. Rory held the Heartstone against her palm. Its crimson face warmed beneath her fingers. “Does it always do that?” Nyx asked. Their violet eyes hovered in the black shape of their face. “Only near a Hel portal.” “Then the door has noticed us.” Isolde stood at the edge of the distortion, silver hair falling over one shoulder. The Fae blade in Rory’s belt gave off a pale glimmer, though no moonlight reached the cellar. “Once we cross, the ground will know our names,” Isolde said. “But it may choose the wrong ones.” Rory glanced at the gap. “That’s not an answer.” “It is the one the door permits.” Nyx’s shadow stretched across the floor, thin as spilled ink. It touched the rippling air and recoiled. “Cold,” they whispered. “And full of teeth.” Rory drew the moonsilver dagger. Its chill settled into her hand. “Then we keep close.” She stepped through. For one breath, the world vanished. Pressure closed over her ears. The Heartstone burned against her palm, and the cellar’s damp mineral stink gave way to crushed grapes, hot spice, and something sweet enough to turn her stomach. Her boots met a broad path of black glass. Amber light filled the sky. No sun hung above them, yet every ridge and leaf shone as if lit from within. Behind Rory, the tear narrowed to a silver seam between two standing stones. It trembled once, then held. Nyx crossed next, their body rippling as they passed through the boundary. Isolde followed without leaving a mark on the glass. Rory turned in a slow circle. “We’re in Hel.” “On its upper skin,” Isolde replied. She lifted her face to the amber sky. “The belly lies below.” A row of pale trees climbed the slope ahead. Their trunks twisted in spirals, bark patterned with tiny gold scales. Red fruit hung from the branches, each one split by a seam that opened and closed like a mouth. Rory kept her dagger low. “Those are breathing.” “Some things eat,” Nyx said. “Some things wait to be eaten.” A fruit dropped. It struck the path with a wet crack. The skin peeled back, revealing a cluster of white seeds arranged like teeth. A thin red juice ran across the black glass and stopped at Rory’s boot. She stepped away. The path led between terraced vineyards. Vines spread over stone walls carved with figures holding bowls, knives and goblets. Their faces had worn smooth, but the bowls remained sharp-edged. Silver leaves crowded the branches. Clusters of grapes hung beneath them, swollen and dark as bruises. Wind moved through the rows, but the vines did not stir. Instead, faint voices rose from the ground. Rory stopped. The voices came in scraps. A woman counting spoons. A man asking for water. Someone reciting a recipe, losing the words at the same point each time. Nyx leaned toward the stone wall. “There are people under this.” “Not buried,” Isolde said. “Bound.” Rory’s grip tightened around the dagger. “To the vines?” “To the harvest. A bargain can root deeper than bone.” The voices cut off. One grape split above them. A bead of dark juice fell onto the path. Rory walked on. At the crest of the terrace, the land opened into a valley. Orchards spread across it in geometric rows, their canopies bright with fruit. Beyond them stood a city of pale towers, copper domes and bridges. Smoke rose from its chimneys in fragrant ribbons. The amber sky caught on every roof and window until the distant buildings seemed carved from honey. Rory forgot to breathe for a moment. A river wound through the valley. Its surface shone red-gold, thick as syrup. Barges moved along it, piled with baskets, barrels and cages that rattled when the boats passed beneath the bridges. “Is that wine?” Rory asked. “Sometimes,” Isolde said. The river struck a wheel beneath the nearest bridge. The wheel turned. A chain of copper pots lifted from the water, emptied into a trough and vanished into a stone building. Steam billowed from its roof. The smell of cinnamon and smoke reached them. Nyx’s shape stretched toward the river, drawn by the scent or the sound. “The water has a pulse.” Rory felt one through the glass beneath her soles. A slow thud climbed her legs, paused, then came again. “Stay off the riverbank,” she said. “Wise,” Isolde replied. “The thirsty have no reflection there.” A bell rang from the city. Its note rolled across the valley, deep enough to stir the leaves. In answer, shutters opened along the nearest buildings. Figures appeared at their windows, pale faces framed by carved arches. A few raised their hands. One pressed both palms to the glass. Rory couldn’t tell whether they were greeting the newcomers or pleading with them. The bell rang again. “Those are the kitchens,” Isolde said. “The bell calls the hands to work.” “Who works there?” Rory asked. “Those who signed away the hours they had left.” Rory looked at the towers. “People from Earth?” “Some came from your world. Some were born beneath this sky. Hunger asks no birthplace.” A shrill whistle rose from the orchards. Workers moved between the trees, carrying hooked poles and woven baskets. They wore long aprons the colour of ash. One lifted a branch and gathered a cluster of fruit with gloved hands. Another kept watch over a row of iron cages set beneath the trees. Something inside a cage struck the bars. Rory lowered her gaze to the Heartstone. Its warmth pressed against her skin, steady now, like a small second heartbeat. “Does that mean the portal is still near?” she asked. “Near enough,” Nyx said. “Not close enough to run back.” “Useful distinction.” “Useful truths are rarely comforting.” They descended toward the orchards. The black-glass path changed beneath their feet, turning to pale stone veined with green. Each step released a smell: basil, scorched sugar, pepper. Rory’s mouth filled with saliva despite the bitter taste at the back of her tongue. At the valley floor, a narrow stream crossed the road. Clear water ran over smooth stones, but tiny bubbles rose from its bed and burst with soft pops. Rory crouched and held her hand above the current. Heat brushed her knuckles. A blossom floated past, yellow and perfect. As it reached the bank, its petals folded around themselves. The flower pulled itself beneath the surface and disappeared. Rory stood. “Not drinking.” “Nor washing,” Nyx added. Isolde stepped across the stream. No ripple touched her boots. On the far bank, an orchard tree leaned over the road. Its trunk had split down the middle, exposing a hollow lined with blue-white light. Inside, a small room had been built among the roots. Rory saw a table, a stool and a row of knives hung from a nail. A woman sat with her back to the opening, sharpening one blade against another. The scrape carried across the road. Rory raised a hand. “Hello?” The woman’s shoulders stiffened. Isolde moved closer to the tree. “We have no claim on your labour.” The woman set down the knives. “That’s what the last ones said.” Her voice rasped as if she had swallowed ash. She turned enough for Rory to see a narrow face, a dark apron, and a silver chain at her throat. A red stone hung from it, dull beneath the tree’s glow. Rory’s fingers closed around her own pendant. “Are you hurt?” she asked. The woman gave a brittle laugh. “Not in a way that counts here.” “Can we help?” “Can you cut a contract out of a tree?” Rory looked at the roots gathered around the room’s walls. Fine tendrils threaded through the woman’s chair and coiled around her ankles. The Fae blade chilled against Rory’s palm. Its edge could cut a ward. Could it cut those roots? She didn’t ask. The woman watched her hand, and the fear in her face sharpened. “Don’t,” she said. “It takes more than the one who bargains.” Rory let the dagger point toward the ground. “All right.” The woman’s gaze shifted to Isolde. “You’re not from the courts.” “No,” Isolde said. “The courts cast me out.” “Then you know what it costs to leave a place that owns you.” Isolde’s expression remained still, but her fingers curled against her skirt. “I do.” The woman reached for one of the knives. “Go before the bell calls again.” Rory backed away from the tree. Nyx moved with her, their shadow brushing hers across the pale road. “Why did you come here?” the woman called. “To look,” Rory answered. The woman’s smile showed no warmth. “The first look is free.” They left the orchard and came upon a plaza paved in red stone. At its centre, a fountain poured pale cream from the mouths of carved fish. The liquid fell into a broad basin, where it thickened into folds that resembled skin. Around the fountain, market stalls offered black pears, glass jars of amber honey, bundles of herbs that twitched when the breeze touched them. A vendor cut a loaf of bread with a wide knife. The crust cracked like ice. People crowded the stalls. Some wore fine coats and bright jewellery; others wore the same grey aprons as the orchard workers. Their voices overlapped in a dozen languages. Above them, a flock of white birds wheeled without flapping, their long beaks pointed down at the food. Rory stared at the nearest stall. A row of small cakes shone under glass. Each cake bore a delicate swirl of blue icing. “Those look normal,” she murmured. Nyx bent close to the case. “They’re humming.” The cakes gave off a soft, rising note. Rory felt it in her teeth. The vendor lifted the glass. “Fresh from the lower ovens. A taste for the road?” “No, thank you.” “Then something savoury.” The vendor pushed forward a tray of pastries, each sealed with a dark wax mark. “They hold their shape. Most days.” Rory stepped back. The Heartstone warmed again, and the wax marks on the pastries shivered. “Come along,” Isolde said. “The bell has not finished with the kitchens.” Across the plaza, beneath a canopy of carved antlers, a long table ran the width of the street. Silver plates covered its surface. The food on them steamed in the amber light, and every dish held a tiny blue flame. A group of diners sat in silence, their hands folded beside empty plates. Rory slowed. “Why aren’t they eating?” A server carried a platter toward them. The diners leaned forward in unison. Their eyes fixed on the food. The server set down the platter. The flames bent toward the diners, reaching across the plates like fingers. Nyx caught Rory’s sleeve. “Keep moving.” She did. The smell of roasted fruit and hot bread clung to her clothes as they crossed the plaza. Behind them, cutlery struck the plates in a single clean note. The sound followed them into the next street, where towers leaned over the road and copper gutters carried rivers of wine along their walls.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1877
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1877
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"trembled"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count2
5
word"comforting"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"chilled"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"stomach"
2"trembled"
3"pulse"
4"warmth"
5"comforting"
6"perfect"
7"chilled"
8"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences186
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences186
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences232
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1877
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions70
wordCount1559
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.25
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Veil1
Heartstone4
Fae2
Rory35
Isolde14
Nyx11
One3
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Rory"
2"Isolde"
3"Nyx"
4"One"
places(empty)
globalScore0.377
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences125
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like heat above a road, though the"
1"seemed carved from honey"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1877
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences232
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs108
mean17.38
std15.69
cv0.903
sampleLengths
033
114
218
35
46
531
618
79
87
917
107
1115
123
1338
149
1539
1621
179
1818
1939
208
2111
2238
233
2445
2518
262
2727
2811
295
309
3110
3218
333
3461
357
3632
375
383
3944
4018
4119
426
439
4449
4513
464
4713
485
499
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences186
matches
0"been built"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs270
matches
0"were greeting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences232
ratio0.004
matches
0"Some wore fine coats and bright jewellery; others wore the same grey aprons as the orchard workers."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1563
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.013435700575815739
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences232
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences232
mean8.09
std4.65
cv0.575
sampleLengths
017
116
27
37
47
511
65
76
814
917
1011
117
125
134
147
1510
167
173
184
195
206
214
223
236
245
2527
269
275
2816
2913
305
3112
329
336
343
356
368
374
389
3911
4019
415
423
435
446
453
468
4713
4814
493
55.46% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.35344827586206895
totalSentences232
uniqueOpeners82
20.70% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences161
matches
0"Instead, faint voices rose from"
ratio0.006
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences161
matches
0"It looked like heat above"
1"Its crimson face warmed beneath"
2"Their violet eyes hovered in"
3"It touched the rippling air"
4"Its chill settled into her"
5"She stepped through."
6"Her boots met a broad"
7"It trembled once, then held."
8"She lifted her face to"
9"Their trunks twisted in spirals,"
10"It struck the path with"
11"She stepped away."
12"Their faces had worn smooth,"
13"Its surface shone red-gold, thick"
14"Its note rolled across the"
15"They wore long aprons the"
16"Its warmth pressed against her"
17"They descended toward the orchards."
18"Its trunk had split down"
19"Her voice rasped as if"
ratio0.161
43.85% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount134
totalSentences161
matches
0"The tear in the Veil"
1"It looked like heat above"
2"Rory held the Heartstone against"
3"Its crimson face warmed beneath"
4"Their violet eyes hovered in"
5"Isolde stood at the edge"
6"The Fae blade in Rory’s"
7"Rory glanced at the gap."
8"Nyx’s shadow stretched across the"
9"It touched the rippling air"
10"Rory drew the moonsilver dagger."
11"Its chill settled into her"
12"She stepped through."
13"Pressure closed over her ears."
14"The Heartstone burned against her"
15"Her boots met a broad"
16"Amber light filled the sky."
17"It trembled once, then held."
18"Nyx crossed next, their body"
19"Isolde followed without leaving a"
ratio0.832
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences161
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences66
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Around the fountain, market stalls offered black pears, glass jars of amber honey, bundles of herbs that twitched when the breeze touched them."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
92.03% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags23
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"they whispered (whisper)"
1"Nyx added (add)"
2"she murmured (murmur)"
3"The vendor pushed (push)"
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.174
effectiveRatio0.116
87.2913%