Run: 2026-09-23-01M36RCKWJ67CGYR23HFA9Z9KT

Run Details

Duration:
53.6s
Cost:
$0.002107
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened on Lucien Moreau, rain darkening the shoulders of his charcoal coat. Rory kept one hand on the brass knob and the other braced against the door. Three deadbolts had clicked behind her. She had not opened them for anyone. Lucien’s amber eye caught the hall light. The black one fixed on her face. “You’re not welcome here.” “I know.” He held up an ivory-handled cane, not as a threat but to show its polished grip. A thin line of blood ran over one knuckle. Rory glanced at it. Then back at him. “Did you come all this way to bleed on Eva’s floor?” “I came because someone was watching the flat.” The tabby cat pushed between Rory’s ankles, tail upright. Ptolemy sniffed at Lucien’s shoes and sneezed. Rory did not move from the doorway. “Who?” “I didn’t recognise them. One across the street, one at the mouth of the lane. They followed me from the restaurant.” “Your admirers have dreadful timing.” “They weren’t looking at me.” Rain tapped the glass in the stairwell window. Behind Lucien, the hall stood empty, its wallpaper bubbled from damp. Rory’s fingers tightened on the knob. “What did they want?” “To see whether I came here.” The words struck harder than she let them. Her gaze dropped to his hand again. The blood had gathered at the crease of his thumb, bright against his pale skin. “You came unannounced, followed by strangers, and expect me to believe this was a favour?” “No.” His jaw set. “I expect you to shut the door before one of them sees you.” Rory studied his face for a lie. Lucien had a talent for dressing lies in clean lines and leaving the seams where only she could find them. Tonight, his collar sat crooked. A rain-soaked strand of platinum hair had fallen against his temple. He looked less like the polished fixer who used to meet her at candlelit bars and more like a man who had run up three flights of stairs. That didn’t make him safe. “Give me a reason.” His eyes flicked past her, toward the book-choked living room. A curl of old paper showed beneath the sofa. Eva’s research covered every surface. “Because you’re standing in the light.” Rory pulled him over the threshold by his lapel. He stumbled one step inside. She shut the door and worked the deadbolts, each turn loud in the cramped hall. Lucien waited until she had set the last one. “Now explain.” He lowered his cane against the wall. Water beaded on its silver collar. “A listening charm was fixed beneath the brass plate outside.” Rory looked at the door. “Was?” “I removed it.” “With your bare hand?” “With a knife.” “Of course.” She walked past him into Eva’s living room. The flat smelled of curry spices, old books, and the tea she had forgotten on the table. Ptolemy followed, then hopped onto an open volume with a thump that shook loose a paper slip. Lucien came in after her. The cane’s ferrule clicked against the floorboards. “You could have called.” “Your phone was off.” “So you decided my front door was the next best option.” “I decided the people outside were.” Rory picked up her cold mug and set it down again without drinking. “You don’t get to decide what’s best for me.” “I’m aware.” “Are you? Because the last time you made that choice, I spent two days thinking you’d sold me to the first demon with a good offer.” His gaze held hers. Nothing moved in his face, but his hand closed around the cane’s handle. “I never sold you.” “You let me think you had.” “I thought distance would keep you out of it.” “You told me that after I found your notes with my name in them.” “I didn’t know you’d read them.” “You left them in your coat.” “I’d been shot.” “And I was supposed to guess that from the blood on your cuff?” A scrape sounded outside the flat. Both of them turned toward the hall. Ptolemy’s ears flattened. He sprang from the book and vanished beneath the sofa. Lucien crossed the room without a sound and leaned near the window, keeping clear of the curtain. He lifted one edge with the tip of his cane. “Don’t.” “I’m not exposing myself.” “You’ve never had much sense of what counts as exposure.” He let the curtain drop. “They’re still outside.” Rory came to stand beside him. The glass reflected her black hair, blunt at her shoulders, and the bright blue of her eyes. Lucien’s reflection stood close enough that the seam of his sleeve brushed hers. “Which one?” “The one in the grey scarf. He’s by the bookshop.” “You could have started with that.” “I could have started with a lot of things.” The small admission loosened something in her chest. She resented him for it. She stepped away from the window. “What did the charm do?” “Listened. Whoever placed it wanted to hear who came through this door.” “Then they know you’re here.” “They know someone came in. They may not know who.” “And if they did?” Lucien turned the cane in his hand. A hidden catch clicked beneath his thumb. The handle shifted, revealing the dark line of a narrow blade. “Then they’ll wait.” Rory looked at the weapon. “You brought that to Eva’s flat?” “I bring it everywhere.” “Comforting.” “It wasn’t intended to be.” He slid the blade back into the cane. Rory watched his hands. She remembered those fingers at her waist, steadying her on a wet pavement after a late shift at the restaurant. His mouth near her ear, asking whether she trusted him. Her answer had been a kiss. His answer, two days later, had been silence. She turned to the table before the memory could settle. “Could the charm have been aimed at me?” “Not likely. It was fixed to the plate, not your coat or your bag.” “Not the same as no.” “No.” “Why were you at the restaurant?” “I wasn’t.” “Then how did you know about the charm?” His eyes sharpened, amber catching the lamplight. “I followed the men who were following you.” “You just told me they followed you from the restaurant.” “I said they followed me from there. I didn’t say I’d been working.” “You watched me?” “I watched the delivery entrance.” “That’s not better.” “I know.” Rory drew a breath through her nose. She wanted him to argue. It was easier when he did. “How long?” “Since yesterday.” Her chair scraped back. “You watched me for a day and only decided to show up now?” “Yesterday, they were checking your route. Tonight, one of them came to this building.” “You could have told me.” “I came to tell you.” “After you’d made the decision for both of us again.” Lucien looked down at his bloody knuckle. He took a handkerchief from his inner pocket, folded it over the cut, and pressed. The cloth came away red. “I have no defence that won’t sound like another decision.” “Good. Don’t make one.” Silence filled the room. Outside, a vehicle hissed through the wet street. Ptolemy’s tail appeared under the sofa, twitching once. Rory went to the kitchen alcove and found the first-aid tin behind a stack of Eva’s dictionaries. When she returned, Lucien had taken off his coat. His suit jacket lay over the back of a chair, neat even with rainwater darkening its cuffs. “Sit down.” “I can manage a cut.” “I didn’t ask what you could manage.” He studied her, then sat. His knee nearly touched hers as she pulled a chair opposite him. She opened the tin and set it between them. “Hand.” He offered it palm down. Rory turned it over. The split crossed the knuckle, shallow but ragged. She cleaned it with antiseptic. Lucien’s fingers flexed once under her grip. “Still hate that stuff?” he asked. “I never liked it.” “You used to pretend it didn’t hurt.” “I used to think you admired that.” “I did.” She kept her eyes on the cut. “That was the problem.” He went still. The antiseptic stung; she felt his hand tense against her palm. “Do you want me to leave?” The question landed without its old polish. Rory wrapped gauze around his knuckle and tied it snug. “If you leave, they’ll follow you. If you stay, they may be watching the door.” “That wasn’t what I asked.” “No. It wasn’t.” She released his hand. The warmth of his skin lingered in her fingers, a small betrayal. Lucien studied the bandage. “There’s another problem. The charm may have left residue.” “Where?” “On the doorframe. I couldn’t tell in the hall.” “And you didn’t mention that?” “I wanted to make sure you were inside before I explained.” “That sounds suspiciously like a decision.” “It was.” Rory reached for Eva’s notes, spreading a bundle of scrolls across the table. “Then you can help me find the section on residue charms.” “I can identify it without the book.” “Then why did you bring the book’s owner’s flat into this?” “Because the charm was built with a language I don’t recognise.” She stopped unrolling a page. “You speak four languages.” “Not every language.” “I thought you liked being impressive.” “Only when it works.” Their eyes met across the cluttered table. His expression had softened around the edges, which she found more dangerous than any weapon. Rory placed the scroll between them. “Show me what you saw.” Lucien leaned forward. His sleeve brushed her wrist, just above the crescent scar. Neither of them moved away.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences108
tagDensity0.009
leniency0.019
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1601
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.52% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1601
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"charm"
count6
2
word"sense of"
count1
3
word"comforting"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"charm"
2"sense of"
3"comforting"
4"silence"
5"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences107
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences213
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1601
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
51.85% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount917
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.96
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Lucien15
Moreau1
Rory18
Eva4
Ptolemy4
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore0.519
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"appeared under the sofa, twitching once"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.625
wordCount1601
matches
0"not as a threat but to show its polished grip"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences213
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs145
mean11.04
std10.52
cv0.953
sampleLengths
014
128
214
34
42
525
68
711
88
916
107
111
1221
135
145
1525
164
176
1830
1915
2017
2171
225
234
2424
256
269
2729
282
2923
305
311
323
334
343
352
3642
3712
384
394
4011
416
4222
432
4426
4517
464
476
489
4914
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs159
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences213
ratio0.005
matches
0"The antiseptic stung; she felt his hand tense against her palm."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount921
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.02280130293159609
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002171552660152009
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences213
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences213
mean7.52
std4.56
cv0.606
sampleLengths
014
115
26
37
47
57
64
72
816
99
104
114
1211
138
149
157
167
171
1821
195
205
218
2211
236
244
256
268
277
2815
2915
304
3113
327
3320
345
3511
3628
375
384
3910
409
415
426
439
445
4515
469
472
487
496
48.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3051643192488263
totalSentences213
uniqueOpeners65
31.45% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences106
matches
0"Then back at him."
ratio0.009
69.06% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences106
matches
0"She had not opened them"
1"He held up an ivory-handled"
2"Her gaze dropped to his"
3"His jaw set"
4"He looked less like the"
5"His eyes flicked past her,"
6"He stumbled one step inside."
7"She shut the door and"
8"He lowered his cane against"
9"She walked past him into"
10"His gaze held hers."
11"He sprang from the book"
12"He lifted one edge with"
13"He let the curtain drop."
14"She resented him for it."
15"She stepped away from the"
16"He slid the blade back"
17"She remembered those fingers at"
18"His mouth near her ear,"
19"Her answer had been a"
ratio0.377
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount101
totalSentences106
matches
0"The door opened on Lucien"
1"Rory kept one hand on"
2"She had not opened them"
3"Lucien’s amber eye caught the"
4"The black one fixed on"
5"He held up an ivory-handled"
6"A thin line of blood"
7"Rory glanced at it."
8"The tabby cat pushed between"
9"Ptolemy sniffed at Lucien’s shoes"
10"Rory did not move from"
11"Rain tapped the glass in"
12"Rory’s fingers tightened on the"
13"The words struck harder than"
14"Her gaze dropped to his"
15"The blood had gathered at"
16"His jaw set"
17"Rory studied his face for"
18"Lucien had a talent for"
19"Tonight, his collar sat crooked."
ratio0.953
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences108
tagDensity0.009
leniency0.019
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.4465%