Run: 2026-09-23-01M36RE670BHSXYQ0MBQAR37N3

Run Details

Duration:
38.7s
Cost:
$0.001407
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone warmed against Aurora’s collarbone before the stone arch came into view. She stopped between two yew trees. Beyond them, Richmond Park’s winter grass ran grey beneath a low sky. Frost silvered the roots. A pair of distant deer lifted their heads, then lowered them to graze. Nyx drifted at her left, their outline gathered into a tall, dark figure. Violet light glimmered where eyes should have been. “Your necklace has opinions,” they whispered. Aurora pressed a hand to the crimson stone. Heat seeped through her glove. “It has a clear one. The rift’s close.” Isolde stood ahead, silver hair loose over her cloak. She had left no prints in the thin frost. Her pale eyes rested on a gap between the yews where Aurora saw only branches. “The door is where the winter takes root,” Isolde murmured. “The wall is thin when the year has spent its strength.” “You mean the solstice,” Aurora replied. “I mean what I said.” Nyx tilted their head towards the trees. “And beyond it?” “Fields that swallow hunger,” Isolde answered. “And hunger that swallows fields.” Aurora drew the Fae-Forged Blade from its sheath. Cold climbed through her fingers. The moonsilver edge caught no daylight, but a faint glow moved along its leaf-shaped blade. “Right. We go in, look around, find out what the pendant’s doing, then come back out.” “Those are four tasks,” Nyx whispered. “You named three.” “Coming back out counts as a task.” The shadow’s mouth curled. “A sensible distinction.” Isolde raised one hand. Her fingers passed between the yew branches without bending them. The space beyond rippled, like heat over pavement, though the air bit Aurora’s cheeks. The trees seemed to draw apart. An arch emerged between their trunks, built from blocks of black stone worn smooth at the edges. Fine marks covered its face—spirals, hooked strokes, tiny carved mouths. Frost clung to the grooves, but it did not melt beneath Isolde’s palm. Aurora stepped closer. Her pendant beat once, warm against her skin. “Does it open from this side?” she asked. “It opens to those who have already arrived,” Isolde said. Nyx flowed through the arch first. Their shadow stretched thin over the stones, then slipped away. Aurora glanced at Isolde. “Was that the safe answer?” “It was the answer I had.” Aurora tightened her grip on the blade and crossed the threshold. The air changed. It pressed against her ears, then loosened. A smell rushed in—fermented fruit, damp earth, hot sugar. Her boots landed on pale stone. The arch stood behind her, though the yew trees and the winter park had vanished. Amber light filled the sky. Aurora stared upwards. No sun hung there. A vast, glowing haze spread from horizon to horizon, deepening near the edges into russet and red. It lit rows of vineyards that rolled across low hills. The vines bore heavy bunches of purple fruit, but the fruit shimmered with a metallic sheen. Beyond them, orchards stretched beneath trees whose white trunks forked like antlers. Farther off, small towers rose from a valley, their roofs bright as copper. Nyx gathered beside her, solid enough to cast a narrow shadow. Isolde emerged last, her cloak still dusted with frost. The flakes vanished from the fabric as soon as they crossed. Aurora looked back. The black-stone arch stood alone on a slope. Its opening showed the same amber sky as the rest of the world. “Where’s Earth?” she asked. “Behind a door,” Nyx replied. “That’s not the same as an answer.” “It is the same as a direction.” Isolde’s gaze moved over the fields. “Here, the ground keeps what the mouth forgets.” Aurora gave her a look. “You can warn us without riddles.” “I have.” A breeze passed through the vines. Each leaf turned at once, showing its pale underside. The rows shivered with a whisper like paper being folded. Aurora felt the sound in her teeth. She crouched near a vine. The soil looked dark and rich, split by small pale roots that curled on its surface. One tendril had grown through a metal buckle lying in the dirt. The buckle had warped around the stem. “Don’t touch the crop,” Isolde said. Aurora drew her hand back. “I wasn’t going to eat it.” “Good. It has eaten better things.” Nyx’s violet eyes fixed on a cluster of fruit. “There are voices in the vines.” Aurora listened. At first, she heard only leaves. Then a thin sound threaded through them, low and rhythmic. A woman’s voice counted in a language Aurora didn’t know. The count stopped. A man began again from another row. “What are they saying?” Aurora asked. “Nothing I recognise.” The voices overlapped, each keeping its own pace. One sounded close enough to have spoken beside Aurora’s ear. She turned. Nothing stood behind her but the arch and the empty slope. A road ran downhill between the vineyards. Pale stones marked its edges, their surfaces carved with shallow bowls. A sweet, smoky scent drifted up from the valley. Isolde pointed with two fingers. “A feast lies where the road descends.” “Is that a warning?” Aurora asked. “It is a fact.” “Convenient.” They followed the road. The stones held warmth beneath Aurora’s soles. As they went, the vines gave way to terraces crowded with herbs and fruit trees. Some bore glossy red pods split open to reveal clusters of white seeds. Others held glassy pears that chimed whenever the breeze touched them. Aurora kept the blade between herself and the nearest branches. A narrow stream crossed the path. Its water ran uphill, clear and bright, carrying whole grapes against the current. Nyx crouched at its edge. Their reflection in the stream showed a pale-faced man with dark curls and an old-fashioned collar. The image reached up from the water and pressed one palm against the surface. Nyx rose. Their reflection remained crouched. Aurora’s hand tightened on the dagger. The stream’s surface shivered. The man’s face stretched, broke into ripples, then vanished. “Was that you?” she asked. “Once,” Nyx replied. Their voice lost its airy edge for a moment. “Not here.” Isolde stepped over the water. It flowed around her shadowless feet. “Names have a long life in this soil,” she said. “Do not give it yours.” Aurora crossed without looking down. Beyond the stream, the road opened onto a kitchen garden. Beds of dark earth spread between waist-high hedges. Squash grew in the shape of folded hands. Long stalks bore blue flowers with black centres. Near the far wall, a pair of gardeners moved along a row, cutting herbs into wicker baskets. Aurora stopped. The gardeners wore white jackets stained at the cuffs. One was a broad-shouldered older man; the other, a young woman with close-cropped hair. Neither looked like a creature from a story. They might have stepped out of a London restaurant kitchen, had their clothes not been stitched with copper thread. The man’s cleaver flashed in his hand. He cut a bundle of herbs, laid it in the basket, and turned towards them. “Visitors,” he called. His accent bent the word into a musical shape. “You’ve come at a bad hour.” “Which hour is good?” Aurora asked. “When the knives are put down.” The woman’s smile showed a gold cap on one tooth. “That’s not an hour here.” The man set his cleaver on the soil. The herbs in his basket stirred, though no wind reached them. “You came through the boundary?” he asked, looking at Aurora’s pendant. The Heartstone gave a faint pulse. Aurora covered it with her palm. “We did.” “Then you’ll want the lower road. The prince’s stewards don’t like strangers wandering the terraces.” Nyx’s shape darkened at the edges. “You know us?” “No,” the man replied. “I know what a stranger looks like.” Aurora glanced from his knife to the baskets. “Who do you work for?” The woman cut a stalk with a small pair of shears. “Whoever owns the contract.” “Your contract?” The shears clicked shut. “Our hands, our hours, our names. The food goes to the tables. That’s the bargain.” The older man reached for his cleaver. “That’s enough talk for the garden.” Aurora met his eyes. She saw a faint line of red beneath the skin of his wrist, circling it like a thread drawn tight. “Did you choose it?” she asked. His grip closed around the cleaver’s handle. “Some choices keep you fed,” he said. “Some keep your family fed. You can decide which sounds more honest.” The woman’s shears clipped another stalk. “Take the lower road. Before someone less patient comes to ask why you’re here.” Isolde bowed her head, a small, formal motion. “May the harvest spare your hands.” “Harvest doesn’t spare anyone,” the woman replied. “It only changes what it takes.” Aurora held the gardeners’ gaze another moment, then turned towards the road. The pendant lay hot beneath her palm. Its crimson stone had begun to glow through her fingers. “Stewards?” she asked as they walked. “Those who watch the prince’s stores,” Isolde said. “Those who decide what may be eaten, and by whom.” “That sounds like a job title designed to make people nervous.” “It does its work.” At the top of the lower road, the valley came into view. A broad city filled its centre, enclosed by a wall of pale stone. Smoke rose from chimneys in straight, unbroken columns. The towers they had seen from the arch belonged to a palace set above the city, its terraces crowded with trees and open halls. Even at this distance, Aurora heard music: drums, strings, and a deep chorus that beat against the hills. Between the road and the city stood long tables beneath striped canopies. Servants carried platters piled with fruit, whole roasted birds, and loaves scored with symbols. At the far end of the nearest table, an empty silver bowl sat large enough to hold a person. Nyx paused beside Aurora. “The feast has noticed us.” A line of masked figures had turned from the tables. Their masks showed smiling mouths carved from dark wood. One lifted a hand and beckoned. Aurora raised the blade. Its edge brightened beneath the amber sky. “Which road?” she asked. Isolde’s lavender eyes rested on the city gates. “The one that does not ask you to taste.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences71
tagDensity0.366
leniency0.732
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1716
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
85.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1716
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"shimmered"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count1
2
word"rhythmic"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"whisper"
2"rhythmic"
3"warmth"
4"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences166
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences166
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences212
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1714
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
24.05% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions71
wordCount1310
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.52
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone2
Aurora33
Richmond1
Park1
Nyx12
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Isolde15
London1
One4
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Aurora"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
4"One"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore0.24
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences110
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a creature from a story"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1714
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences212
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs101
mean16.97
std15.9
cv0.937
sampleLengths
013
135
221
36
421
533
621
76
85
910
1011
1128
1216
139
147
157
1674
1711
188
1910
2016
214
225
236
2411
2540
265
2775
2831
2924
304
315
327
337
3414
3511
362
3732
3840
396
4011
416
4215
4338
446
453
4631
4727
4812
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences166
matches
0"being folded"
1"been stitched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs227
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences212
ratio0.014
matches
0"Fine marks covered its face—spirals, hooked strokes, tiny carved mouths."
1"A smell rushed in—fermented fruit, damp earth, hot sugar."
2"One was a broad-shouldered older man; the other, a young woman with close-cropped hair."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1159
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.01984469370146678
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.001725625539257981
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences212
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences212
mean8.08
std4.08
cv0.505
sampleLengths
013
16
212
34
413
513
68
76
88
95
108
119
129
1315
1410
1511
166
175
187
193
206
215
228
235
2415
2516
266
273
287
294
303
314
3210
3314
346
3517
3610
3713
383
398
408
4110
426
4310
444
455
466
4711
483
497
57.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3632075471698113
totalSentences212
uniqueOpeners77
23.64% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences141
matches
0"Then a thin sound threaded"
ratio0.007
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences141
matches
0"She stopped between two yew"
1"She had left no prints"
2"Her pale eyes rested on"
3"Her fingers passed between the"
4"Her pendant beat once, warm"
5"Their shadow stretched thin over"
6"It pressed against her ears,"
7"Her boots landed on pale"
8"It lit rows of vineyards"
9"Its opening showed the same"
10"She crouched near a vine."
11"They followed the road."
12"Its water ran uphill, clear"
13"Their reflection in the stream"
14"Their reflection remained crouched."
15"Their voice lost its airy"
16"It flowed around her shadowless"
17"They might have stepped out"
18"He cut a bundle of"
19"His accent bent the word"
ratio0.191
30.92% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount121
totalSentences141
matches
0"The Heartstone warmed against Aurora’s"
1"She stopped between two yew"
2"Frost silvered the roots."
3"A pair of distant deer"
4"Nyx drifted at her left,"
5"Violet light glimmered where eyes"
6"Aurora pressed a hand to"
7"Heat seeped through her glove."
8"Isolde stood ahead, silver hair"
9"She had left no prints"
10"Her pale eyes rested on"
11"Nyx tilted their head towards"
12"Aurora drew the Fae-Forged Blade"
13"The moonsilver edge caught no"
14"The shadow’s mouth curled."
15"Isolde raised one hand."
16"Her fingers passed between the"
17"The space beyond rippled, like"
18"The trees seemed to draw"
19"An arch emerged between their"
ratio0.858
35.46% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences141
matches
0"Even at this distance, Aurora"
ratio0.007
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The soil looked dark and rich, split by small pale roots that curled on its surface."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags25
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"they whispered (whisper)"
1"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
2"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences71
tagDensity0.352
leniency0.704
rawRatio0.12
effectiveRatio0.085
88.5735%