Run: 2026-09-23-01M36S8XETAP182MP5BCVXF6WX

Run Details

Duration:
55.4s
Cost:
$0.001949
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oak standing stones caught Rory's torchlight like bone. She ducked between two of them, backpack snagging on bark, and stepped into the Fae Grove. Wildflowers covered the clearing in a carpet that didn't belong to any season — foxglove and cornflower and something with petals the colour of a bruise, all of them open, all of them facing her. "Right," she said. Her voice came out thin. "Here." She'd come for the pendant. Three nights it had sat on her windowsill above Silas' bar, pulsing that soft red heat against the glass, and every pulse had pulled the same direction — south-west, toward Richmond. Toward the grove where Isolde held court and time folded like wet paper. Rory needed answers about the stone, about who had slipped it into her delivery bag between the chow mein and the egg-fried rice, and Isolde traded in answers. That was the arrangement. Midnight, the grove, and Rory would come alone. She checked her phone. 23:58. No signal, which she'd expected. What she hadn't expected was the battery — full when she'd left the tube station at Putney, now showing nineteen percent and dropping in chunks. The grove held its breath around her. She found the flat stone near the centre that Isolde used as a table and set her torch on it, beam pointing at the canopy. Waiting felt worse than walking, so she paced the boundary inside the stones. Twenty-two pches across. Twenty-three. Twenty-two again. The flowers under her boots never crunched. They bent and rose behind her like water closing over a stone. "You said midnight," she told the dark between the oaks. "It's midnight." Somewhere past the stones, a bird called — two notes, then a third that dragged flat, like a cassette tape warping. Rory stopped pacing. Richmond Park had its share of birds. None of them sounded like a machine breaking. She held still and counted her breaths and told herself it was a corvid, corvids did strange things with sound, corvids could — The call came again. Closer. The second note shorter, the third note flatter, and underneath it a wet click she felt in her back teeth. She picked up the torch. Swept the beam along the standing stones. Between two of the outer oaks, something stood at the height of a man's chest and did not have a face, only a suggestion of one, a smudge where features might pool. When the light touched it, the shape resolved into hanging moss and the gap behind a trunk. Moss that hung in a curtain the exact width of her shoulders. "Don't," she whispered, and didn't know who she meant. The pendant warmed against her sternum. Not its usual faint sunlit trickle — a slow throb, patient as a second heartbeat. It only did that near a Hel portal. She pressed her fingers to the stone through her jacket and found it hot enough to sting. "Okay," she breathed. "Okay." She'd wanted answers. She hadn't wanted a portal. Time did things here. She checked her phone again: 00:01. Except the clock now read 3:41 and the battery had dropped to four percent, and the screen's glow had gone the colour of weak tea before the display died in her palm. The torch flickered. Not a battery flicker. A slow dim and swell, dim and swell, as if the beam breathed. The wildflowers in the light's reach had turned. She could swear it. Foxgloves and cornflowers and those bruise-coloured petals, all tilted now toward the outer dark instead of toward her, every stem bent at the same angle like a crowd leaning to watch something arrive. Something arrived. Sound first. A dragging weight through leaf-litter, unhurried, circling the stones at a distance of maybe thirty paces. Then a second weight to her left, keeping pace with the first, and the rhythm between them matched — drag, pause, drag, pause — the way two people walk when they carry something heavy between them. Rory turned in a slow circle, torch held at her collarbone. The beams caught trunks, ferns, the pale backs of the standing stones. Each time the light swung past the northern gap between two oaks, the moss curtain hung a little lower. "I'm expected," she said to the grove. Her voice steadied on the words and she leaned into that. "Isolde knows me. I've got business here. Whatever you are, I'm expected and I'm expected back." The dragging stopped. Both of them. Both whatever-they-were. Stopped on the same footfall. Then a sound came from the moss curtain. Not the bird-call. Something shaped like her own voice, worn thin and stretched, catching on a sound in the middle of her own name. "Rrrr-" It got the first syllable and buckled on the rest. Rory's hand went to the pendant. The gem burned and she held it anyway, thumb across the crimson face, and the warmth answered her palm in pulses she could count. Four beats. Stop. Four beats. Stop. The same rhythm as the dragging had been. The torch died. She thumbed the switch. Nothing. She thumbed it again and the beam burst back at half strength, and in that stutter the clearing looked wrong — the flat stone where she'd left her bag stood ten paces further from the stones than she remembered, or she stood further from the flat stone, and the wildflowers had closed their petals and turned pale stems toward the ground like fingers curling. "You said midnight." She said it to the empty air where Isolde should have been. "You said come alone. I came alone. That was the deal." Under her boots, the flowers breathed out. The scent hit like a room that hadn't been opened in years — sweet things gone over, sugar gone to vinegar, the ghost of something green underneath it. The dragging resumed. Closer. She could hear individual leaves now, the papery complaint of them under weight, and the thing on her left had drifted inside the ring of stones. She knew this the way she knew a room had changed around her — no sound of it crossing the boundary, just the acoustic difference, the way a voice sounds smaller in a full room. Something touched the wildflowers at the far edge of the torch beam and the blooms there folded flat, one by one, in a line travelling toward her. Rory stepped back until her shoulders met oak. "Isolde." She put the name out like a wall. "Isolde, this is your ground. You said midnight. Say something." The moss curtain between the northern oaks parted. Not by wind. It parted the way a curtain parts when a hand draws it aside, and what stood in the gap had the height of a man and the proportions of something assembled from a description of a man by someone working from memory. It did not move toward her. It simply occupied the gap where the light ended. Her pendant throbbed once and went cold. Rory held the stone and found it dead weight against her chest, the warmth gone out of it like a coal in water, and behind her the bark of the oak pressed shapes into her shoulders that felt less like ridges and more like letters. From the far side of the clearing, from the dark past the southern stones, something exhaled. Long, slow, satisfied. Then it said her name in her mother's voice, clear as a telephone call, and got every syllable right.
created_at"2026-09-23T09:24:13.921Z" 9/23/2026, 9:24:13 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1240
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1240
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"resolved"
count1
2
word"throb"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"weight"
count4
6
word"footfall"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count2
8
word"throbbed"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"resolved"
2"throb"
3"flickered"
4"flicker"
5"weight"
6"footfall"
7"warmth"
8"throbbed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences102
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen63
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1251
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount1175
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.68
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory8
Fae1
Grove1
Isolde4
Putney1
Park1
Hel1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Isolde"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Putney"
3"Park"
4"Hel"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like a machine breaking"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1251
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences109
matches
0"did that near"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean29.09
std23.21
cv0.798
sampleLengths
09
151
29
389
435
57
663
712
821
93
1038
1125
1261
1312
149
1546
164
178
1842
193
2062
212
2254
2342
2434
253
2610
2732
281
2910
3044
313
3269
3326
3435
3565
3627
378
3819
3968
407
4145
4238
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences102
matches
0"been opened"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs180
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences109
ratio0.083
matches
0"Wildflowers covered the clearing in a carpet that didn't belong to any season — foxglove and cornflower and something with petals the colour of a bruise, all of them open, all of them facing her."
1"What she hadn't expected was the battery — full when she'd left the tube station at Putney, now showing nineteen percent and dropping in chunks."
2"Somewhere past the stones, a bird called — two notes, then a third that dragged flat, like a cassette tape warping."
3"She held still and counted her breaths and told herself it was a corvid, corvids did strange things with sound, corvids could —"
4"Not its usual faint sunlit trickle — a slow throb, patient as a second heartbeat."
5"Then a second weight to her left, keeping pace with the first, and the rhythm between them matched — drag, pause, drag, pause — the way two people walk when they carry something heavy between them."
6"She thumbed it again and the beam burst back at half strength, and in that stutter the clearing looked wrong — the flat stone where she'd left her bag stood ten paces further from the stones than she remembered, or she stood further from the flat stone, and the wildflowers had closed their petals and turned pale stems toward the ground like fingers curling."
7"The scent hit like a room that hadn't been opened in years — sweet things gone over, sugar gone to vinegar, the ghost of something green underneath it."
8"She knew this the way she knew a room had changed around her — no sound of it crossing the boundary, just the acoustic difference, the way a voice sounds smaller in a full room."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount113
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount0
adverbRatio0
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean11.48
std11.37
cv0.991
sampleLengths
09
116
235
33
45
51
65
731
813
928
104
118
124
131
145
1525
167
1725
1813
193
201
212
227
2312
2410
252
2621
273
287
298
3023
314
321
3320
345
357
3632
3717
3812
399
406
4115
428
4317
443
451
463
475
484
496
62.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.4444444444444444
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners48
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences87
matches
0"Somewhere past the stones, a"
1"Then a second weight to"
2"Then a sound came from"
3"Then it said her name"
ratio0.046
86.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences87
matches
0"She ducked between two of"
1"Her voice came out thin."
2"She'd come for the pendant."
3"She checked her phone."
4"She found the flat stone"
5"They bent and rose behind"
6"she told the dark between"
7"She held still and counted"
8"She picked up the torch."
9"she whispered, and didn't know"
10"It only did that near"
11"She pressed her fingers to"
12"She'd wanted answers."
13"She hadn't wanted a portal."
14"She checked her phone again:"
15"She could swear it."
16"she said to the grove"
17"Her voice steadied on the"
18"It got the first syllable"
19"She thumbed the switch."
ratio0.333
80.69% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences87
matches
0"The oak standing stones caught"
1"She ducked between two of"
2"Wildflowers covered the clearing in"
3"Her voice came out thin."
4"She'd come for the pendant."
5"Rory needed answers about the"
6"That was the arrangement."
7"Midnight, the grove, and Rory"
8"She checked her phone."
9"The grove held its breath"
10"She found the flat stone"
11"Waiting felt worse than walking,"
12"The flowers under her boots"
13"They bent and rose behind"
14"she told the dark between"
15"Rory stopped pacing."
16"Richmond Park had its share"
17"None of them sounded like"
18"She held still and counted"
19"The call came again."
ratio0.759
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
65.64% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Wildflowers covered the clearing in a carpet that didn't belong to any season — foxglove and cornflower and something with petals the colour of a bruise, all of…"
1"A slow dim and swell, dim and swell, as if the beam breathed."
2"The scent hit like a room that hadn't been opened in years — sweet things gone over, sugar gone to vinegar, the ghost of something green underneath it."
3"Rory held the stone and found it dead weight against her chest, the warmth gone out of it like a coal in water, and behind her the bark of the oak pressed shape…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.286
85.0227%