| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "said Isolde from further down the path [further]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.536 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.067 | | effectiveRatio | 0.067 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1275 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 52.94% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1275 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "electric" | | 8 | "clenching" | | 9 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 103 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 65 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1280 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 1124 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.25 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Serpentine | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Rory | 14 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Isolde | 10 | | Nyx | 7 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Sunday | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.877 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1280 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 29.77 | | std | 28.01 | | cv | 0.941 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 73 | | 2 | 38 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 54 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 87 | | 11 | 72 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 74 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 38 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 80 | | 26 | 74 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 61 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 76 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 46 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 29 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 104 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 37 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 3 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 164 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 4.16% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 103 | | ratio | 0.049 | | matches | | 0 | "The traffic, the damp drift off the Serpentine, the sodium haze over Richmond — cut out in one motion, and the silence that replaced it pressed against Rory's eardrums the way deep water does." | | 1 | "Bulbs the size of a fist, glossy to the point of wetness, in colours that sat wrong in a brain trained on apples and pears — a deep oil-slick blue, a yellow that flickered at the edge of the eye like heat off tarmac, one pale blush-pink skin that thinned as Rory watched and showed, beneath, a second skin, and beneath that a third." | | 2 | "Close now, she caught the smell — honey, and under it something green and electric, the smell of ozone off a struck match, and under that, warm bread, and under that, her grandmother's kitchen in Cardiff on a Sunday when the roast potatoes came up brown and crackling." | | 3 | "The ground firmed beneath them as the pale grit gave way to something dark and loamy, and the noise came up out of the earth — a low hum, thick, felt in the molars and the sockets of the eyes." | | 4 | "They chimed as they stirred — a sound like fingernails on a teacup rim." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1124 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.017793594306049824 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004448398576512456 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 103 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 103 | | mean | 12.43 | | std | 11.98 | | cv | 0.964 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 34 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 64 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 48 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 74.76% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.49514563106796117 | | totalSentences | 103 | | uniqueOpeners | 51 | |
| 46.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, a canopy of fine" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "She set two fingers to" | | 1 | "Her trainers had sunk a" | | 2 | "Her jaw ached." | | 3 | "She noticed that she had" | | 4 | "Her hand was up, fingers" | | 5 | "She pulled it back and" | | 6 | "They followed the rise of" | | 7 | "She did not touch it." | | 8 | "They chimed as they stirred" | | 9 | "Her tracks filled themselves in" | | 10 | "They climbed it." | | 11 | "It pulsed against her palm" |
| | ratio | 0.167 | |
| 78.06% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "The rift stitched itself shut" | | 1 | "London fell away." | | 2 | "The traffic, the damp drift" | | 3 | "She set two fingers to" | | 4 | "The Heartstone answered her palm" | | 5 | "Her trainers had sunk a" | | 6 | "Rory glanced at her." | | 7 | "The seer stood a few" | | 8 | "Rory looked at her own" | | 9 | "Nyx drew up between them," | | 10 | "The violet of their eyes" | | 11 | "A whisper that came from" | | 12 | "Nyx drifted forward" | | 13 | "The trees grew out of" | | 14 | "A bruised and lovely red." | | 15 | "The fruit hung low and" | | 16 | "Bulbs the size of a" | | 17 | "Rory looked at her." | | 18 | "The seer stood with her" | | 19 | "Isolde's mouth moved in something" |
| | ratio | 0.764 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 27.03% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Light without a source, thick and grainy, hanging in shafts through nothing at all and pooling in the hollows of the ground as though it carried weight." | | 1 | "Instead, a canopy of fine hanging filaments, translucent, stirring though the air held still, each one tipped with a bead of something that caught the amber lig…" | | 2 | "Bulbs the size of a fist, glossy to the point of wetness, in colours that sat wrong in a brain trained on apples and pears — a deep oil-slick blue, a yellow tha…" | | 3 | "The vines stood waist-high and black and gnarled, gripping trellises of some pale metal that sang faintly when the air moved, and the grapes hung in tight dark …" | | 4 | "Vineyards in their thousands, fanning out to a horizon that curved wrong." | | 5 | "And at the centre of it all, a plain of white tables standing in the open air beneath that sourceless light, each one set and heaped and steaming, and the steam…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.071 | |