| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 80.83% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1565 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "completely" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "very" | | 4 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 74.44% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1565 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "treacherous" | | 1 | "footsteps" | | 2 | "echoed" | | 3 | "resonance" | | 4 | "could feel" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 63 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 5 | | totalWords | 1583 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | 0 | "taken" | | 1 | "go down" | | 2 | "verify" | | 3 | "unexplained" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 1541 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 0.45 | | worstName | "Morris" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Morris" | | discoveredNames | | Camden | 3 | | Quinn | 1 | | Static | 1 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 5 | | Soho | 1 | | Morris | 7 | | High | 2 | | Street | 2 | | Harlow | 7 | | Tube | 2 | | Victorian | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 | | Silas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Static" | | 2 | "Morris" | | 3 | "Harlow" | | 4 | "Victorian" | | 5 | "Silas" |
| | places | | 0 | "Camden" | | 1 | "Raven" | | 2 | "Nest" | | 3 | "Soho" | | 4 | "High" | | 5 | "Street" | | 6 | "Market" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.66% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.263 | | wordCount | 1583 | | matches | | 0 | "not the modern concrete of the municipal network, but old brick, Victorian, slick with seepage" | | 1 | "not dead, exactly, but *taken*, the way a coat is taken at a door, politely" |
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| 60.28% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "left — that something" | | 1 | "mattered, that she" | | 2 | "understood that here" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 41.66 | | std | 30.58 | | cv | 0.734 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 109 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 51 | | 4 | 143 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 72 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 70 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 55 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 43 | | 13 | 64 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 29 | | 16 | 43 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 32 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 74 | | 21 | 39 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 72 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 66 | | 27 | 43 | | 28 | 52 | | 29 | 45 | | 30 | 66 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 53 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 85 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 6 |
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| 90.01% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "was swallowed" | | 1 | "was gone " | | 2 | "is taken" | | 3 | "been picked" | | 4 | "being asked" |
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| 16.27% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 254 | | matches | | 0 | "was going" | | 1 | "was heading" | | 2 | "was telling" | | 3 | "was singing" | | 4 | "was talking" | | 5 | "was only standing" | | 6 | "wasn't watching" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 18 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 94 | | ratio | 0.138 | | matches | | 0 | "Ahead, forty yards and closing, the figure in the grey hood cut left down an alley she knew — she'd walked it a hundred times, knew every overflowing bin and every treacherous run of slick stone — and she took it after him without breaking stride." | | 1 | "Faster than the wiry, hungry kind of fast she'd expected when she'd picked him out loitering outside the Raven's Nest an hour ago — that grimy Soho bar with its distinctive green neon sign burning above the door like a green wound, its walls papered with old maps and black-and-white photographs of a city that no longer existed." | | 2 | "She'd been watching the Nest for three weeks now, building her case file on the clique that used it as a bolt-hole, certain — with the bone-deep certainty of a woman who had lost DS Morris three years ago and had never once let go of the unexplained hole he'd left — that something was going on behind those maps and those photographs." | | 3 | "Not the entrance — the service yard beside it, where a rusted gate stood propped open on a chain that had long since given up being a lock." | | 4 | "His footsteps echoed ahead — wet, slapping, receding — and then she heard them change." | | 5 | "The corridor split: left, toward the substation she knew; right, toward a brick arch she had never in eleven years of patrolling Camden seen open." | | 6 | "Beyond the arch lay a stairway descending — not the modern concrete of the municipal network, but old brick, Victorian, slick with seepage, and from below came a low steady hum that was not electricity." | | 7 | "She heard her own voice ghosted in it, half a second behind, and then the channel was gone — not dead, exactly, but *taken*, the way a coat is taken at a door, politely and completely." | | 8 | "She put her thumb on the watch — the leather worn soft as skin, a gift from Morris's widow — and felt the second hand tick like a small patient heart." | | 9 | "Stalls of scavenged timber and oilcloth lined the platform, hung with things she did not want to look at directly — glass jars where something moved, folded leather that shimmered when it shouldn't, bottles of liquid the colour of bruises." | | 10 | "She saw, under the hood, a face gone pale with exertion and something else — not fear." | | 11 | "A guard — enormous, hooded, holding something that was not a baton — stepped aside for him without being asked, and the beads swung shut, and beyond them a light went out." | | 12 | "She took the worn leather watch off her left wrist, folded it into her palm — he'd have wanted it kept dry, Morris would, he'd been absurd about that — and pushed it into her inside pocket." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1528 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 47 | | adverbRatio | 0.030759162303664923 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007198952879581152 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 94 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 94 | | mean | 16.84 | | std | 14.6 | | cv | 0.867 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 36 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 58 | | 14 | 63 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 35 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 29 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 24 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 36 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 30 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 75.89% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.5 | | totalSentences | 94 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere behind her a woman" | | 1 | "Somewhere a woman was singing" | | 2 | "Then she squared her shoulders" |
| | ratio | 0.035 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "she said into the radio," | | 1 | "She cursed and let the" | | 2 | "She'd been watching the Nest" | | 3 | "she shouted, and the word" | | 4 | "He was heading for the" | | 5 | "She'd seen it a hundred" | | 6 | "It led down to the" | | 7 | "His footsteps echoed ahead —" | | 8 | "It was open now." | | 9 | "It was voices." | | 10 | "She keyed the radio again." | | 11 | "She heard her own voice" | | 12 | "She thought of her case" | | 13 | "She thought of the fact" | | 14 | "She put her thumb on" | | 15 | "It never had been." | | 16 | "She'd heard the name once," | | 17 | "He glanced back once." | | 18 | "She saw, under the hood," | | 19 | "He'd known she'd follow." |
| | ratio | 0.267 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain came down in" | | 1 | "Harlow Quinn hit the corner" | | 2 | "she said into the radio," | | 3 | "Static answered her." | | 4 | "She cursed and let the" | | 5 | "The alley narrowed." | | 6 | "The suspect was fast." | | 7 | "She'd been watching the Nest" | | 8 | "Something she couldn't yet name." | | 9 | "Something that had taken Morris" | | 10 | "The hooded figure reached the" | | 11 | "Harlow put her shoulder down" | | 12 | "Camden High Street was a" | | 13 | "The suspect plunged straight through" | | 14 | "she shouted, and the word" | | 15 | "He was heading for the" | | 16 | "She'd seen it a hundred" | | 17 | "It led down to the" | | 18 | "The thought snagged as she" | | 19 | "His footsteps echoed ahead —" |
| | ratio | 0.663 | |
| 58.14% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd been watching the Nest for three weeks now, building her case file on the clique that used it as a bolt-hole, certain — with the bone-deep certainty of a …" | | 1 | "It led down to the maintenance corridors that ran beneath the High Street, dead ends and flooded stairwells and no working lights past the first landing." | | 2 | "Beyond the arch lay a stairway descending — not the modern concrete of the municipal network, but old brick, Victorian, slick with seepage, and from below came …" | | 3 | "Harlow stood at the lip of it and understood, with the particular cold clarity she reserved for the moments that mattered, that she was at the edge of something…" | | 4 | "At the bottom, the dark opened out into a vastness that the geography above did not permit: an abandoned Tube station, but wronged somehow, widened, its platfor…" | | 5 | "Stalls of scavenged timber and oilcloth lined the platform, hung with things she did not want to look at directly — glass jars where something moved, folded lea…" | | 6 | "She'd heard the name once, from a drunk in the Nest who hadn't known who he was talking to, and she'd put it in her file with a question mark beside it and a no…" | | 7 | "There was only standing in it, rainwater running off her coat onto the tiled floor of a station that shouldn't exist, with a gun in her fist and her pulse going…" | | 8 | "Come back up with a file that had suddenly become very interesting to very dangerous people." | | 9 | "A guard — enormous, hooded, holding something that was not a baton — stepped aside for him without being asked, and the beads swung shut, and beyond them a ligh…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, breath punching out of her in white bursts" | | 1 | "she shouted, and the word was swallowed by the rain and the traffic and nobody turned around" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |