Run: 2026-09-23-01M36S9GX171T7GQ1ZC4C0W3K9

Run Details

Duration:
1m 14s
Cost:
$0.000867
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt stuck. Rory put her shoulder into it, felt the bolt grind against a swollen frame, and wrenched. The door swung inward six inches on its chain and stopped. Beyond it: the stairwell, the yellow bulb, and a man standing in the rain he'd brought up with him. Lucien Moreau did not look like someone who had walked from a car. He looked like weather had simply failed to affect him. Rain jewelled the shoulders of his charcoal suit and gathered along the creases of his sleeves, and his platinum hair — slicked back as always, not a strand out of place — shone wet as foil. He held his cane in front of him with both hands, ivory head resting against his gloved palms, the way a man might hold a prayer book. He had not rung the bell. He had knocked, once, and stood there, which meant he had known she would be the one to answer. "Cardiff," he said. It was not a greeting. It was the old shorthand — the way he'd used to say her name when he wanted to see whether she was armed, or lying, or still angry. She had answered to it for four months, and then she had stopped. "Three deadbolts," she said, "and you still made it up two flights without me hearing you." "The third one complains. I heard it from the landing." His gaze moved over her — quickly, professionally, the way he read a room — and she watched it catch on the scar at her wrist, a pale crescent where her sleeve had ridden up. His eyes did not linger. That was the infuriating thing about Lucien Moreau; he noticed everything and gave nothing away. One eye was amber, catching the stairwell bulb like a coin; the other was black, unlit, a hole punched in the shape of a man. "You're not going to invite me in." "I'm not going to invite you in." "Then I will state my business from here, and you can decide how much of it you wish to hear while Eva's neighbours learn your secrets." He tilted his head. "There's a ley bruise running under Bethnal Green. Something woke up under the overground line on Tuesday. Whatever it is, it has been eating ward-stones, and by Thursday it had eaten two of Silas' front-door protections." Behind her, in the cramped front room of Eva's flat, Ptolemy made a low, disapproving sound from atop a stack of research notes and began to wash an unbothered paw. Rory did not unbolt the chain. "Silas called you." "Silas called everyone who would take his call. Most of them are dead or unavailable." Lucien's mouth moved, not quite a smile. "I am neither, at present." "The ley line is Eva's area. Eva's books, Eva's ward-work. She's in Aberystwyth until Sunday." "I know she's in Aberystwyth." He said it mildly, and something in her chest went tight, because of course he knew; Lucien knew where everyone was, that was the entire architecture of him. "Which is why I came to the flat on Brick Lane rather than the flat in Silas' basement." "My flat." "Your flat." He let the words sit. "Rory." She stood there a moment with the chain between them, listening to the curry house below send up its evening smell of cardamom and hot oil, and to the rain finding its way down the gutters of Brick Lane. She was aware of how she must look to him — t-shirt, hair damp from the shower, a pencil behind her ear, her bare feet on Eva's floorboards among the scrolls — and she was aware that she minded, which was worse. She undid the chain and stepped back. He came in the way he came everywhere: unhurried, weight on the cane, one hand trailing the door shut behind him. Up close he smelled of rain and something colder, iron-deep, the way half-breeds always smelled if you stood near them long enough — not unpleasant, exactly, but ancient, like a coin in your palm. He turned in the narrow hall, and the flat swallowed him. Everything of Eva's swallowed people: the books packed spine to spine along every wall, the scrolls fanned across the table like a card hand gone wrong, Ptolemy now sitting upright on her research with an expression of judicial contempt. "You've rearranged," Lucien said. "I moved one box." "You moved three, and you alphabetised the left-hand shelf, and you've put her Agrippa in the wrong place on purpose so she'll notice." He crossed to the window and looked down at the street, parting the curtain with one gloved finger. He stayed like that a beat too long for a man checking exits. "You always did have a talent for making yourself at home in other people's disasters." "And you always did have a talent for showing up without warning and calling it a professional courtesy." She leaned against the table, crossing her arms, and the crescent scar pulled at her wrist. "So. Ley bruise under Bethnal Green. What do you want from me?" "Nothing." He turned. The amber eye caught the light; the black one did not. "Eva wants something. You want something. I am told you've been running deliveries for Yu-Fei Cheung, which means you know every back street between here and Limehouse, which means you've walked over the bruise at least six times without knowing it." "Yu-Fei's noodles are not a reconnaissance operation." "No. But you are." He said it without flattery, as fact, and she felt the compliment the way she always did from him — as a small, dangerous heat somewhere beneath her ribs. "It takes a thing four days to eat through ward-stone. By Sunday it will have eaten whatever is under Silas' bar. Silas is not a sentimental man, but he is a landlord, and you are upstairs from his cellar." "So you came to warn me." "I came to be near you while I warned you." The sentence landed in the middle of the room and neither of them moved. Ptolemy, judging the silence, hopped down from the table and wound once around Lucien's ankles — Ptolemy, who hissed at the postman, who had hidden for eleven days after the boiler was bled — and Lucien looked down at the cat with an expression that broke something open in his face, briefly, before he closed it again. "He likes you," Rory said, because someone had to say something ordinary. "He has standards and no discretion." Lucien crouched, resting the cane across his knees, and scratched behind the tabby's ear with a gloved hand. The gesture was so uncharacteristically gentle that she had to look away, so she looked at the rain on the window instead, at the neon sign of the curry house bleeding red through the drops. "You could have called," she said. "I called in March." "It rang out." "I know." He straightened, and the tenderness went out of his posture like a lamp being shuttered. "You were not ready to be found in March. I have a good deal of patience for a man who is largely out of it." Rory rubbed her thumb across the crescent at her wrist — an old habit, from before London, from before him — and felt the shape of all the sentences they had never finished. *You kept things from me. You always keep things. You looked at my arm and never once asked.* And under those, the other one, the one she had refused to say aloud in the six weeks after she'd walked out of his office with her coat over her arm: *I have been cold in places that were not your fault, and I did not let anyone near me, and I do not know if that was strength or just cowardice with better posture.* "The ward-stones," she said. "Tell me what they're made of." Something moved behind his eyes — the amber one, because the black one never moved at all. He recognised the opening for what it was: not forgiveness, not yet, but a door left ajar, and Lucien Moreau had never in his life refused a door. He came to the table, set his cane against its edge, and pulled Eva's notes toward him with two fingers, careful not to disturb the ink. "Consecrated slate, ground glass, and something out of York that Silas will not name." His shoulder was close to hers. Close enough that she could see the rain still drying on his collar, could count the faint silver at his temple that had not been there in March. "If you can get me inside his cellar before dawn, we can rebuild them in a pattern that won't dissolve." "And if I can't?" He glanced at her, and the corner of his mouth did something that was almost warmth. "Then I will be very patient, and very cold, and you will invite me to sit down, and I will stay until you do." "You're already in the flat." "I am already in the flat," Lucien agreed softly. Below them, the curry house door opened and a bell chimed, and Ptolemy jumped onto the table and lay down across the Agrippa, and Rory reached past him for a pencil and let her arm stay there — not touching Lucien's, but close enough to feel the heat of him through the damp wool of his sleeve — and did not move it away.
created_at"2026-09-23T09:24:33.831Z" 9/23/2026, 9:24:33 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Lucien agreed softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.409
leniency0.818
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.045
87.28% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1572
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"very"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1572
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"tenderness"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"silence"
2"tenderness"
3"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences59
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen74
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords52
totalWords1588
ratio0.033
matches
0"You kept things from me. You always keep things. You looked at my arm and never once asked."
1"I have been cold in places that were not your fault, and I did not let anyone near me, and I do not know if that was strength or just cowardice with better posture."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount1111
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.99
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau3
Lucien11
Eva4
Ptolemy5
Brick1
Lane1
Rory5
London1
Close1
March1
Agrippa1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Eva"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Rory"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
3"March"
4"Agrippa"
globalScore1
windowScore1
38.89% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like weather had simply failed to"
1"not quite a smile"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches5
per1kWords3.149
wordCount1588
matches
0"not unpleasant, exactly, but ancient, like a coin in your palm"
1"not a sentimental man, but he is a landlord"
2"not forgiveness, not yet, but a door left ajar"
3"not yet, but a door left ajar"
4"not touching Lucien's, but close enough to feel the heat of him through the damp wool o"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean35.29
std32.86
cv0.931
sampleLengths
04
146
286
325
43
546
616
797
87
966
1030
119
1227
1315
1451
152
168
1781
187
19105
204
214
2269
2346
2455
257
2672
276
2810
2971
3012
3159
326
334
343
3542
36116
3710
3845
3994
404
4140
425
439
4464
93.37% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences59
matches
0"was bled "
1"being shuttered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs184
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences84
ratio0.167
matches
0"Rain jewelled the shoulders of his charcoal suit and gathered along the creases of his sleeves, and his platinum hair — slicked back as always, not a strand out of place — shone wet as foil."
1"It was the old shorthand — the way he'd used to say her name when he wanted to see whether she was armed, or lying, or still angry."
2"\"The third one complains. I heard it from the landing.\" His gaze moved over her — quickly, professionally, the way he read a room — and she watched it catch on the scar at her wrist, a pale crescent where her sleeve had ridden up."
3"That was the infuriating thing about Lucien Moreau; he noticed everything and gave nothing away."
4"One eye was amber, catching the stairwell bulb like a coin; the other was black, unlit, a hole punched in the shape of a man."
5"\"I know she's in Aberystwyth.\" He said it mildly, and something in her chest went tight, because of course he knew; Lucien knew where everyone was, that was the entire architecture of him."
6"She was aware of how she must look to him — t-shirt, hair damp from the shower, a pencil behind her ear, her bare feet on Eva's floorboards among the scrolls — and she was aware that she minded, which was worse."
7"Up close he smelled of rain and something colder, iron-deep, the way half-breeds always smelled if you stood near them long enough — not unpleasant, exactly, but ancient, like a coin in your palm."
8"The amber eye caught the light; the black one did not."
9"\"No. But you are.\" He said it without flattery, as fact, and she felt the compliment the way she always did from him — as a small, dangerous heat somewhere beneath her ribs."
10"Ptolemy, judging the silence, hopped down from the table and wound once around Lucien's ankles — Ptolemy, who hissed at the postman, who had hidden for eleven days after the boiler was bled — and Lucien looked down at the cat with an expression that broke something open in his face, briefly, before he closed it again."
11"Rory rubbed her thumb across the crescent at her wrist — an old habit, from before London, from before him — and felt the shape of all the sentences they had never finished."
12"Something moved behind his eyes — the amber one, because the black one never moved at all."
13"Below them, the curry house door opened and a bell chimed, and Ptolemy jumped onto the table and lay down across the Agrippa, and Rory reached past him for a pencil and let her arm stay there — not touching Lucien's, but close enough to feel the heat of him through the damp wool of his sleeve — and did not move it away."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1097
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.037374658158614404
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007292616226071103
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean18.9
std15.04
cv0.796
sampleLengths
04
116
211
319
413
510
636
727
86
919
103
115
1228
1313
1416
1545
165
1715
1825
197
207
2130
2236
2330
246
253
2622
275
2815
2933
3018
312
327
331
3439
3542
367
3721
3834
3911
4039
414
424
4341
4413
4515
4634
4712
483
4911
61.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.44047619047619047
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners37
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
1.13% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences53
matches
0"He looked like weather had"
1"He held his cane in"
2"He had not rung the"
3"He had knocked, once, and"
4"It was not a greeting."
5"It was the old shorthand"
6"She had answered to it"
7"His gaze moved over her"
8"His eyes did not linger."
9"He tilted his head"
10"He said it mildly, and"
11"He let the words sit"
12"She stood there a moment"
13"She was aware of how"
14"She undid the chain and"
15"He came in the way"
16"He turned in the narrow"
17"He crossed to the window"
18"He stayed like that a"
19"She leaned against the table,"
ratio0.547
16.60% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences53
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck."
1"Rory put her shoulder into"
2"The door swung inward six"
3"Lucien Moreau did not look"
4"He looked like weather had"
5"Rain jewelled the shoulders of"
6"He held his cane in"
7"He had not rung the"
8"He had knocked, once, and"
9"It was not a greeting."
10"It was the old shorthand"
11"She had answered to it"
12"His gaze moved over her"
13"His eyes did not linger."
14"That was the infuriating thing"
15"He tilted his head"
16"Rory did not unbolt the"
17"Lucien's mouth moved, not quite"
18"He said it mildly, and"
19"He let the words sit"
ratio0.887
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
98.21% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Ptolemy, judging the silence, hopped down from the table and wound once around Lucien's ankles — Ptolemy, who hissed at the postman, who had hidden for eleven d…"
1"He glanced at her, and the corner of his mouth did something that was almost warmth."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Lucien's mouth moved, not quite a smile"
1"He straightened, and the tenderness went out of his posture like a lamp being shuttered"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Lucien agreed softly (agree)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.205
leniency0.409
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.045
75.1238%