| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Lucien agreed softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.409 | | leniency | 0.818 | | rawRatio | 0.056 | | effectiveRatio | 0.045 | |
| 87.28% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1572 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 87.28% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1572 | | totalAiIsms | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "tenderness" | | 3 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 74 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 52 | | totalWords | 1588 | | ratio | 0.033 | | matches | | 0 | "You kept things from me. You always keep things. You looked at my arm and never once asked." | | 1 | "I have been cold in places that were not your fault, and I did not let anyone near me, and I do not know if that was strength or just cowardice with better posture." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 22 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 1111 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.99 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Moreau | 3 | | Lucien | 11 | | Eva | 4 | | Ptolemy | 5 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Rory | 5 | | London | 1 | | Close | 1 | | March | 1 | | Agrippa | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Ptolemy" | | 4 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "March" | | 4 | "Agrippa" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 38.89% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like weather had simply failed to" | | 1 | "not quite a smile" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 3.149 | | wordCount | 1588 | | matches | | 0 | "not unpleasant, exactly, but ancient, like a coin in your palm" | | 1 | "not a sentimental man, but he is a landlord" | | 2 | "not forgiveness, not yet, but a door left ajar" | | 3 | "not yet, but a door left ajar" | | 4 | "not touching Lucien's, but close enough to feel the heat of him through the damp wool o" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 35.29 | | std | 32.86 | | cv | 0.931 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 46 | | 2 | 86 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 46 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 97 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 66 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 51 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 81 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 105 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 69 | | 23 | 46 | | 24 | 55 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 72 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 71 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 59 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 42 | | 36 | 116 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 45 | | 39 | 94 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 40 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 64 |
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| 93.37% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "was bled " | | 1 | "being shuttered" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 184 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 84 | | ratio | 0.167 | | matches | | 0 | "Rain jewelled the shoulders of his charcoal suit and gathered along the creases of his sleeves, and his platinum hair — slicked back as always, not a strand out of place — shone wet as foil." | | 1 | "It was the old shorthand — the way he'd used to say her name when he wanted to see whether she was armed, or lying, or still angry." | | 2 | "\"The third one complains. I heard it from the landing.\" His gaze moved over her — quickly, professionally, the way he read a room — and she watched it catch on the scar at her wrist, a pale crescent where her sleeve had ridden up." | | 3 | "That was the infuriating thing about Lucien Moreau; he noticed everything and gave nothing away." | | 4 | "One eye was amber, catching the stairwell bulb like a coin; the other was black, unlit, a hole punched in the shape of a man." | | 5 | "\"I know she's in Aberystwyth.\" He said it mildly, and something in her chest went tight, because of course he knew; Lucien knew where everyone was, that was the entire architecture of him." | | 6 | "She was aware of how she must look to him — t-shirt, hair damp from the shower, a pencil behind her ear, her bare feet on Eva's floorboards among the scrolls — and she was aware that she minded, which was worse." | | 7 | "Up close he smelled of rain and something colder, iron-deep, the way half-breeds always smelled if you stood near them long enough — not unpleasant, exactly, but ancient, like a coin in your palm." | | 8 | "The amber eye caught the light; the black one did not." | | 9 | "\"No. But you are.\" He said it without flattery, as fact, and she felt the compliment the way she always did from him — as a small, dangerous heat somewhere beneath her ribs." | | 10 | "Ptolemy, judging the silence, hopped down from the table and wound once around Lucien's ankles — Ptolemy, who hissed at the postman, who had hidden for eleven days after the boiler was bled — and Lucien looked down at the cat with an expression that broke something open in his face, briefly, before he closed it again." | | 11 | "Rory rubbed her thumb across the crescent at her wrist — an old habit, from before London, from before him — and felt the shape of all the sentences they had never finished." | | 12 | "Something moved behind his eyes — the amber one, because the black one never moved at all." | | 13 | "Below them, the curry house door opened and a bell chimed, and Ptolemy jumped onto the table and lay down across the Agrippa, and Rory reached past him for a pencil and let her arm stay there — not touching Lucien's, but close enough to feel the heat of him through the damp wool of his sleeve — and did not move it away." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1097 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.037374658158614404 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007292616226071103 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 84 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 84 | | mean | 18.9 | | std | 15.04 | | cv | 0.796 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 36 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 45 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 25 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 30 | | 22 | 36 | | 23 | 30 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 39 | | 35 | 42 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 34 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 39 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 41 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 34 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 61.51% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.44047619047619047 | | totalSentences | 84 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 1.13% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "He looked like weather had" | | 1 | "He held his cane in" | | 2 | "He had not rung the" | | 3 | "He had knocked, once, and" | | 4 | "It was not a greeting." | | 5 | "It was the old shorthand" | | 6 | "She had answered to it" | | 7 | "His gaze moved over her" | | 8 | "His eyes did not linger." | | 9 | "He tilted his head" | | 10 | "He said it mildly, and" | | 11 | "He let the words sit" | | 12 | "She stood there a moment" | | 13 | "She was aware of how" | | 14 | "She undid the chain and" | | 15 | "He came in the way" | | 16 | "He turned in the narrow" | | 17 | "He crossed to the window" | | 18 | "He stayed like that a" | | 19 | "She leaned against the table," |
| | ratio | 0.547 | |
| 16.60% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt stuck." | | 1 | "Rory put her shoulder into" | | 2 | "The door swung inward six" | | 3 | "Lucien Moreau did not look" | | 4 | "He looked like weather had" | | 5 | "Rain jewelled the shoulders of" | | 6 | "He held his cane in" | | 7 | "He had not rung the" | | 8 | "He had knocked, once, and" | | 9 | "It was not a greeting." | | 10 | "It was the old shorthand" | | 11 | "She had answered to it" | | 12 | "His gaze moved over her" | | 13 | "His eyes did not linger." | | 14 | "That was the infuriating thing" | | 15 | "He tilted his head" | | 16 | "Rory did not unbolt the" | | 17 | "Lucien's mouth moved, not quite" | | 18 | "He said it mildly, and" | | 19 | "He let the words sit" |
| | ratio | 0.887 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 98.21% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Ptolemy, judging the silence, hopped down from the table and wound once around Lucien's ankles — Ptolemy, who hissed at the postman, who had hidden for eleven d…" | | 1 | "He glanced at her, and the corner of his mouth did something that was almost warmth." |
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| 69.44% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien's mouth moved, not quite a smile" | | 1 | "He straightened, and the tenderness went out of his posture like a lamp being shuttered" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Lucien agreed softly (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.205 | | leniency | 0.409 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.045 | |