Run: 2026-09-23-01M36S9SZNV4TS9Y8QGRBF74KN

Run Details

Duration:
1m 39s
Cost:
$0.003092
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The tape across the mouth of the tunnel read CRIME SCENE DO NOT CROSS in letters already going brown with damp. Harlow Quinn ducked under it and took the maintenance stairs two at a time, her shoes finding the grooves worn into the concrete by a century of feet. Air rose to meet her — stale, mineral, threaded with something burnt and sweet like sugar left too long in a pan. A constable guarded the bottom landing with a clipboard and the glazed look of a man who had seen something he would spend the weekend forgetting. "Name for the log, ma'am." "Detective Quinn. Where's the body?" "Platform two. End of the stalls." He swallowed. "It's not like the ones on the street, ma'am." "They never are." She passed through the old ticket hall and the Market opened around her. Camden's dead Tube station had been colonised: tarpaulins strung between iron pillars, crates stacked into counters, candles jammed into bottles and burning with flames the colour of pondweed. A sign over one stall read TEETH, FAIR PRICED. Another offered MEMORY, PINTED. Uniformed officers moved through it with the stiff caution of soldiers in a bazaar where nothing had a price tag they recognised. Detective Sergeant Boyd waited beside the platform edge, hands in his pockets, tie already loosened. "You took your time," he said. "Talk me through it." "Vendor. Male, fifties, name on the stall's paperwork says Albert Fenn. Found by a customer wanting a refill of something blue." He jerked his chin towards the body. "Stall's been turned over. Fenn's got a knife in his chest and a cut across his left palm, and there's a brass compass clutched in the same hand. Customers are screaming robbery. Half these stalls deal in banned alchemicals, so my read is a rival took exception to Fenn's prices and helped himself to the stock on the way out. Case closed by supper." Quinn crouched beside the body without touching it. Fenn lay slumped against the counter of his stall, head turned to one side, mouth open against the wood. The knife had gone in high on the left of the sternum and stayed there, its black handle jutting like a signpost. Blood sheeted down his shirt and pooled in the folds of his apron. She looked at his hand first. The palm wound gaped, deep enough to see the yellow of fat beneath, but the edges were smooth and ringed with a grey-black crust. "Robbery," she said. "Robbery," Boyd agreed. "Took him from behind, panicked when he turned, got him with his own knife." "His own knife?" "Blade matches the set on the counter there. Six-piece, one missing." "And the one in his chest is the missing one." "Clean work." Boyd almost smiled. "Even the lab will manage this one." Quinn stood and turned to the stall itself. Shelves sagged, emptied of jars. Vials lay smashed across the boards, their contents seeped into the grain in iridescent puddles. Crates had been hauled out and dumped on their sides, packing straw strewn across the platform edge. The wreckage looked violent, urgent, the work of grabbing hands in a hurry. She moved to the nearest crate and tilted it with two fingers. Dust clung to the wood in an unbroken film along its lower lip, but the rim where a lid would sit had been scuffed. "Boyd. How long has Fenn traded here?" "Twelve years, per the Market's ledger. Why?" "These crates have been empty for weeks. The straw's flat. Look at the dust on the underside — nobody upended these tonight." Boyd shrugged. "He's a stall holder. Crates get moved." "They get filled first." She crossed to the shelves. Empty sockets sat in the wood where jars had rested long enough to leave rings in the grime, but each ring was cut clean through, as if a hand had wiped the shelf before setting the jar down and lifting it again. No smear of hurried theft. The pattern repeated: wiped, placed, taken. Staged, one piece at a time. "Humour me." She looked up at the platform's vaulted ceiling. "The customer who found him. What did he say exactly?" "That he came for a refill and found Fenn gone in the head. Came in at half eleven." Quinn checked her watch. The worn leather strap had gone dark with age and the second hand swept without complaint. One-fifteen. "SOCO got here at midnight?" "Twenty to." "So forty minutes of a busy market passing a dead man before anyone raised the alarm. Nobody heard a robbery. Nobody heard a man get stabbed in a room full of people selling enchantments at arm's length." Boyd's jaw worked. "They're not a chatty crowd, Quinn." "They're a terrified crowd. There's a difference." She knelt again by the body, closer this time, and studied the hand closed around the compass. Brass, small enough to sit in a palm, its casing furred green with verdigris — except the face, which shone. Someone had rubbed the etched sigils clean. Her torch beam slid over the incised marks: warding patterns she had no name for, cut with the patience of a jeweller. The needle trembled and pointed past Fenn's shoulder, at the black mouth of the disused tunnel beyond the platform's end. "That thing's evidence," Boyd said. "Bag it and let's have done." "What do you think it is?" "Weight. Something to hold while the blood ran out." "It's a compass. From this Market, made by someone with skill and money, and it's worth more than everything on these shelves. A thief takes it. A thief doesn't polish the face and press it back into a dying man's grip." "You don't know that he didn't just—" "The verdigris is untouched everywhere else. The handle of the knife is clean of it. Fenn's own hands are clean of it." She shifted her torch to his wrist. "But the sigil face is spotless and there's a burn on his palm the same shape as the largest ward on that face. Hot brass, pressed hard. Someone held this compass to his hand after the blade went in, and made him hold it after that." Silence settled between them. Somewhere behind the tarpaulins a stall holder coughed and did not look their way. Boyd crouched at last, scepticism pulling at his mouth. "So he was robbed, and the thief had a flourish. These people love a bit of theatre." "These people bury their dead at crossroads and pay for entry with bone." She tipped her chin at the platform entrance, where a pale token sat on the upturned crate, split clean in two halves. "His entry token. Broken at the door and left on display. Whoever came in tonight announced themselves the way the Market demands. That's not a thief sneaking through in the dark." "Or he broke it when he fled." "Both halves together, on a crate wiped the same way as the shelves. Arranged." Quinn stood and walked the length of the stall, counting paces. Six from the shelves to the body. Three from the body to the platform edge. Her beam found the blood again and followed it away from the apron, off the boards where it had seeped in dark stars between the planks. She stopped and crouched at the platform lip, where a smear dragged across the grit toward the tunnel mouth and died out against a sleeper. "There's your hurry," she said. "The drag marks start at the shelves and end here. Nobody ran. Someone dragged him across six feet of floor and leaned him against his own counter." Boyd came to stand over her, and his shadow fell into the tunnel's black. "You're telling me he was killed somewhere else in this station and carried to his stall." "I'm telling you he was placed." Her beam found the knife again and she held it there. "And the blade is wrong. Look at the blood. It ran down the shirt and pooled under him on the left. If he'd gone down here on the floor where you can see the grit's undisturbed, we'd have spray across the crates and a cast-off arc on the wall behind him. There's one drop on the shelves. One. He bled somewhere soft, somewhere private, and he bled out before anyone moved him." "Then where's the scene?" "That's the right question." Her torch found the drag smear again and travelled it to the tunnel mouth, where the old track ran into blackness under a gate rusted open. The compass needle held steady on that darkness. Quinn looked at it a long moment, at the bright sigils and the trembling hand of it pointing where no magnetic north lay. "This tunnel runs under the High Street," she said. "It connects to the rift Eva Kowalski wrote up in her report last month — the one in the old ventilation shaft that the Museum sealed in nineteen-seventy-four and then quietly unsealed." "Kowalski. Your pet researcher." "A researcher with a master's from Oxford and access to restricted archives. She maps these crossings. The compass agrees with her maps." Quinn lowered the torch. "That needle doesn't point at north, Boyd. It points at the rift."
created_at"2026-09-23T09:24:43.131Z" 9/23/2026, 9:24:43 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.236
leniency0.473
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1532
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
83.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1532
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"etched"
count1
1
word"trembled"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"magnetic"
count1
highlights
0"etched"
1"trembled"
2"weight"
3"silence"
4"magnetic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences64
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen73
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1536
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount801
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1
worstName"Boyd"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Boyd"
discoveredNames
Quinn7
Market1
Tube1
Sergeant1
Boyd8
Fenn2
Silence1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Market"
2"Sergeant"
3"Boyd"
4"Fenn"
5"Silence"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1536
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean26.95
std26.25
cv0.974
sampleLengths
071
126
25
35
417
53
676
715
86
94
1092
1162
1230
133
1417
153
1611
1710
1812
1958
2036
217
227
2322
249
254
2664
2720
2818
2926
302
3137
329
337
3486
3511
366
379
3841
397
4075
4118
4226
4366
447
4514
4677
4732
4814
4916
88.82% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences64
matches
0"been colonised"
1"been hauled"
2"been scuffed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs146
matches(empty)
88.44% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences105
ratio0.019
matches
0"Air rose to meet her — stale, mineral, threaded with something burnt and sweet like sugar left too long in a pan."
1"Brass, small enough to sit in a palm, its casing furred green with verdigris — except the face, which shone."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount801
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.02247191011235955
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean14.63
std12.46
cv0.852
sampleLengths
021
128
222
326
45
55
68
79
83
913
1028
119
124
1322
1415
156
164
1728
1864
198
2019
2122
2213
236
2424
253
263
2714
283
2911
3010
315
327
338
345
3515
3617
3713
3812
3924
407
417
4222
432
447
454
465
4742
485
496
96.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5904761904761905
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners62
60.61% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences55
matches
0"Somewhere behind the tarpaulins a"
ratio0.018
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences55
matches
0"She passed through the old"
1"He jerked his chin towards"
2"She looked at his hand"
3"She moved to the nearest"
4"She crossed to the shelves."
5"She looked up at the"
6"She knelt again by the"
7"Her torch beam slid over"
8"She shifted her torch to"
9"She tipped her chin at"
10"Her beam found the blood"
11"She stopped and crouched at"
12"Her beam found the knife"
13"Her torch found the drag"
ratio0.255
41.82% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences55
matches
0"The tape across the mouth"
1"Harlow Quinn ducked under it"
2"Air rose to meet her"
3"A constable guarded the bottom"
4"She passed through the old"
5"Camden's dead Tube station had"
6"A sign over one stall"
7"Another offered MEMORY, PINTED."
8"Detective Sergeant Boyd waited beside"
9"He jerked his chin towards"
10"Quinn crouched beside the body"
11"Fenn lay slumped against the"
12"The knife had gone in"
13"Blood sheeted down his shirt"
14"She looked at his hand"
15"The palm wound gaped, deep"
16"Boyd almost smiled"
17"Quinn stood and turned to"
18"Shelves sagged, emptied of jars."
19"Vials lay smashed across the"
ratio0.836
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"A constable guarded the bottom landing with a clipboard and the glazed look of a man who had seen something he would spend the weekend forgetting."
1"Empty sockets sat in the wood where jars had rested long enough to leave rings in the grime, but each ring was cut clean through, as if a hand had wiped the she…"
2"Brass, small enough to sit in a palm, its casing furred green with verdigris — except the face, which shone."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Boyd agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.109
leniency0.218
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.036
91.0431%