Run: 2026-09-23-01M36SAB8RZC288SMGAEDD4141

Run Details

Duration:
54.4s
Cost:
$0.000637
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The bus dropped her at Petersham Road just after eleven, and the driver didn't wait around to see whether she crossed the stile or not. Rory climbed it anyway, boots slipping on the wet timber, and pushed through the hawthorn gap where the guidebook said the path narrowed to nothing. Richmond Park at night had a smell to it — wet deer, crushed bracken, the mineral bite of the Thames somewhere off in the dark. She'd expected that. What she hadn't expected was the silence. No traffic beyond the wall. No fox screaming. No wind in the beeches above her head, though the branches moved, scraping one against another like knuckles. The standing stones came first. Eight of them, oak rather than granite, which was wrong in itself — oak didn't stand in columns, oak split and leaned and died upright. These held their line around the clearing with a patience that made her jaw ache. Moss furred their north faces. Between them, wildflowers stood in full bloom at midnight in the middle of November: bluebells, foxglove, something yellow she didn't name. The Heartstone sat warm against her collarbone. Not the faint pulse she'd felt near the tunnels under Euston, something steadier, like a second heartbeat pressed flat against her skin. "You're here," she said aloud, because the sound of her own voice gave the clearing edges. Nothing answered. She stepped between the third and fourth stones and the air changed temperature the way a doorway changes it — colder on the far side, and thicker, as if she'd walked into a room where someone had been breathing for a long time. The clearing opened up. Grass to her shins, silvered by a moon that hung too low and too fat and gave the sort of light you got from a streetlamp through frosted glass. Wildflowers pressed around her boots. At the far end, an oak bigger than any tree had a right to be, its trunk hollowed into a black mouth. Her phone buzzed. She almost dropped it. Eva's name glowed on the screen. Rory swiped up. "You're outside," Eva said. No hello. "Where are you outside?" "Richmond." "At one in the morning. Rory." "There's a grove. Isolde mentioned it — Fae-touched ground, pocket between realms, all that." She crouched, ran a thumb over a bluebell. The petals felt like cool silk, alive, not frostbitten. "The pendant's been warm since I crossed the stile." "Warm-warm, or portal-warm?" She looked down. The crimson stone sat in the hollow of her throat with that small interior glow, the light moving like something liquid inside it. "Portal-warm. Steadier than Euston." Eva breathed out. "Come home." "I've been two minutes in." "You're alone?" Rory scanned the tree line. Nothing moved between the trunks. Nothing moved at all, which was the trouble — even at night, something always moved: a squirrel, a owl, a leaf falling. Here, every blade of grass held its pose. "Alone," she said. The line crackled. A sound came through underneath Eva's voice, low and dry, like someone dragging a stone slab a few inches across a floor. "Eva. What was that?" "Ears. I'm on my laptop, I've got—" The line died. Not a drop to no-signal; a click, then a tone she hadn't heard in years, the flat triple burr of a disconnected number. She held the phone at arm's length. One bar. Then none. The dark between the standing stones thickened. Rory stood. She'd come for the well — Isolde had drawn her a map on the back of a takeaway menu, an X at the base of the hollow oak, and said the water there remembered things the grove had swallowed. Memory was what she needed. Evan's name on a lease, on a police report, on anything at all, because three years of a life with him had evaporated the way the number on her screen just had. She crossed the clearing. Grass dragged at her shins with a sound like whispered conversation, and she told herself it was grass. Ten paces from the oak, the Heartstone jerked against her sternum. Not a pulse — a pull, directionless, as if the stone wanted to lean toward the hollow and her body was the thing holding it back. The mouth of the trunk breathed out air that smelled of wet iron and old candles. "Isolde?" she called. The clearing received the word and kept it. She knelt at the base. Roots knuckled up through the soil, pale as knuckles, and between them sat a stone lip — the well, though "well" was generous. A shaft maybe a metre across, dropping into black water so still it read as polished floor until she leaned and the reflection wobbled: her own face, bright blue eyes, black hair plastered to her forehead by a sweat she didn't remember producing. Something behind her shifted weight from one foot to the other. Rory didn't turn. Turning was a decision, and decisions gave the thing permission. She kept her eyes on the water and counted her breathing the way she'd counted during the nights she slept on Eva's sofa with the chain on the door. The weight shifted again. Closer. The grass didn't part for it; the grass simply stopped existing where it stood, blades folding flat without a hand to fold them. "I know you're there." Her voice didn't echo. It went out and the dark swallowed it whole, no bounce off the oak, no return from the stones. Sound didn't travel here. Sound was eaten. The Heartstone burned a line of heat across her chest, then went cold, then burned again — a rhythm matching nothing in her body. Behind her, something exhaled through a throat too wide to be human, and the breath carried her own name in it, mispronounced the way only one person had ever mispronounced it: *Laila*, the name on the flat's buzzer she'd taken from the estate agent's typo and kept. She'd told no one in London. Rory pressed both palms flat on the stone lip and leaned over the shaft. The water showed her the clearing behind her shoulder — showed her the space between the oak and the fourth stone where nothing should have been standing — showed her a shape built out of the absence of light, tall as the trunk, patient as the columns, wearing the outline of a woman with hair that moved underwater. The reflection blinked. Her own eyes stayed open. She jerked back so hard her heel caught a root and she sat down hard in the wet grass, dirt cold through her jeans. The pendant scraped her jaw. Above her, the fat moon had drifted behind the oak, and the clearing lost its silver, went the colour of a bruise. From the far side of the standing stones, something began to walk. Not toward her. Along the boundary. One slow step, then a pause, then another, the rhythm of something that had all the time a place like this could give it. Rory got to her feet. The map crumpled in her fist. The hollow oak's mouth stood open and empty, and from inside it came a sound like a spoon stirring the bottom of a cup — small, patient, unfinished.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said aloud [aloud]"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.389
leniency0.778
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.111
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1200
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1200
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"silk"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"pulse"
2"silk"
3"scanned"
4"weight"
5"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1212
ratio0.001
matches
0"Laila"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1140
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.61
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Petersham1
Road1
Park1
Thames1
November1
Heartstone3
Euston1
Eva5
Isolde1
London1
Rory7
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Eva"
2"Isolde"
3"Rory"
places
0"Petersham"
1"Road"
2"Park"
3"Thames"
4"Euston"
5"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
98.98% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like cool silk, alive, not frostbi"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1212
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean26.93
std23.71
cv0.88
sampleLengths
050
161
271
329
416
52
643
760
87
99
1010
111
126
1340
143
1530
165
175
182
1940
203
2125
224
2344
247
2578
2622
2737
2816
293
308
3171
3211
3342
3428
354
3630
3771
386
3972
403
415
4251
4342
4439
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"was eaten"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs176
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences99
ratio0.121
matches
0"Richmond Park at night had a smell to it — wet deer, crushed bracken, the mineral bite of the Thames somewhere off in the dark."
1"Eight of them, oak rather than granite, which was wrong in itself — oak didn't stand in columns, oak split and leaned and died upright."
2"She stepped between the third and fourth stones and the air changed temperature the way a doorway changes it — colder on the far side, and thicker, as if she'd walked into a room where someone had been breathing for a long time."
3"Nothing moved at all, which was the trouble — even at night, something always moved: a squirrel, a owl, a leaf falling."
4"Not a drop to no-signal; a click, then a tone she hadn't heard in years, the flat triple burr of a disconnected number."
5"She'd come for the well — Isolde had drawn her a map on the back of a takeaway menu, an X at the base of the hollow oak, and said the water there remembered things the grove had swallowed."
6"Not a pulse — a pull, directionless, as if the stone wanted to lean toward the hollow and her body was the thing holding it back."
7"Roots knuckled up through the soil, pale as knuckles, and between them sat a stone lip — the well, though \"well\" was generous."
8"The grass didn't part for it; the grass simply stopped existing where it stood, blades folding flat without a hand to fold them."
9"The Heartstone burned a line of heat across her chest, then went cold, then burned again — a rhythm matching nothing in her body."
10"The water showed her the clearing behind her shoulder — showed her the space between the oak and the fourth stone where nothing should have been standing — showed her a shape built out of the absence of light, tall as the trunk, patient as the columns, wearing the outline of a woman with hair that moved underwater."
11"The hollow oak's mouth stood open and empty, and from inside it came a sound like a spoon stirring the bottom of a cup — small, patient, unfinished."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1130
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.03185840707964602
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0017699115044247787
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean12.24
std11.72
cv0.958
sampleLengths
025
125
225
33
47
55
63
718
85
925
1015
115
1221
137
1422
1516
162
1743
184
1929
205
2122
223
234
246
253
264
272
284
291
306
3122
329
339
343
353
3623
374
383
392
405
412
425
435
4422
458
463
473
4822
494
67.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4444444444444444
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners44
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences79
matches
0"She'd expected that."
1"she said aloud, because the"
2"She stepped between the third"
3"Her phone buzzed."
4"She almost dropped it."
5"She crouched, ran a thumb"
6"She looked down."
7"She held the phone at"
8"She'd come for the well"
9"She crossed the clearing."
10"She knelt at the base."
11"She kept her eyes on"
12"Her voice didn't echo."
13"It went out and the"
14"She'd told no one in"
15"Her own eyes stayed open."
16"She jerked back so hard"
ratio0.215
67.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences79
matches
0"The bus dropped her at"
1"Rory climbed it anyway, boots"
2"Richmond Park at night had"
3"She'd expected that."
4"The standing stones came first."
5"These held their line around"
6"Moss furred their north faces."
7"The Heartstone sat warm against"
8"she said aloud, because the"
9"She stepped between the third"
10"The clearing opened up."
11"Grass to her shins, silvered"
12"Wildflowers pressed around her boots."
13"Her phone buzzed."
14"She almost dropped it."
15"Eva's name glowed on the"
16"Rory swiped up."
17"She crouched, ran a thumb"
18"The petals felt like cool"
19"She looked down."
ratio0.785
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"These held their line around the clearing with a patience that made her jaw ache."
1"She stepped between the third and fourth stones and the air changed temperature the way a doorway changes it — colder on the far side, and thicker, as if she'd …"
2"Not a pulse — a pull, directionless, as if the stone wanted to lean toward the hollow and her body was the thing holding it back."
3"The water showed her the clearing behind her shoulder — showed her the space between the oak and the fourth stone where nothing should have been standing — show…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.0875%