Run: 2026-09-23-01M36SC8JTPG2EN4782NRFM4X6

Run Details

Duration:
1m 1s
Cost:
$0.000673
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon above the door threw sickly light across the wet pavement, and Eva nearly walked past it. She'd changed the name of the place in her head — called it something else, a wine bar maybe, some place with exposed brick and a chalkboard menu — until she stopped, squinted at the buzzing sign, and read it again. The Raven's Nest. The door stuck on the third pull, and then she was inside, blinking against the dark. She hadn't come for Silas. She'd come because she'd heard someone mention Soho over lunch, and the word had slid through her like a blade between ribs, and before she knew what she was doing she'd taken the District line and then the Northern, and here she was, standing on a floor that smelled of beer and old varnish, looking at walls papered with maps so faded the coastlines had gone to grey water. The bar was half-full. A couple leaned into each other near the window. Two men in shirtsleeves played cards at a corner table, stacking coins with the quiet seriousness of people who'd done this many times before. Behind the bar, a broad-shouldered man with grey-streaked auburn hair and a neatly trimmed beard dried a glass with a cloth, moving slow, the way people move when the night is long and there's no hurry to fill it. He had a silver ring on his right hand that caught the lamplight when he turned the glass. Eva took a stool. She set her bag on her lap, ran her thumb along the strap. "What can I get you?" Silas didn't look up. The cloth moved in slow arcs over the glass. "Red wine. Whatever's open." "House is a Shiraz. Decent enough." He set the glass down, reached beneath the counter, and poured. The bottle left a dark ring on the wood. He pushed the glass toward her without ceremony. "Card game's free tonight. You're welcome to join." "I don't play." He shrugged one shoulder and went back to his glasses. Eva drank. The wine was thin and cold, and she was halfway through it before she heard the voice — low, even, punctuated by a laugh that arrived without warning, a bark of something bright — and she turned on the stool so fast the wine sloshed against the rim. A woman sat at a small table near the back, one leg crossed over the other, a shoulder bag slung over the chair beside her. She had straight black hair falling to her shoulders, and she was talking to someone Eva couldn't see — gesturing with both hands, fingers spread, the way she always talked when she'd decided she was right and you were about to find out. Bright blue eyes. A small scar on her left wrist, crescent-shaped, visible when she lifted her hand to push hair from her face. Eva's glass stopped halfway to her mouth. The woman looked up. The words died on her tongue. Her hands came down to the table and lay flat, palms down, the way people steady themselves. "Rory?" The name left Eva's mouth before she could shape it into something safer. Rory Carter, who she hadn't seen in four years — four years since the phone call, since the texts that had stopped, since the forwarding address in London that Eva had written down and then lost or thrown away, she could never decide which. Rory stared at her. The bright blue eyes moved over Eva's face, reading it the way Rory read everything — fast, thorough, cataloguing. "Eva." She said it like a door opening. "What are you doing here?" "I could ask you the same." Eva crossed the room, bag still clutched in one hand. She stopped at the edge of the small table. Up close, Rory looked different. The jaw was sharper. There was a stillness in her that hadn't been there before, a coiled quality, as if she'd learned to hold very still while the world moved around her. "I was passing through." "Passing through Soho." "I live two streets over. You?" "Delivery driver." Rory nodded at a jacket hung over the chair — a plain black thing with a logo Eva didn't recognize. "Yu-Fei Cheung's. Golden Empress, on Lisle Street. I ride the back routes when it's quiet." "You deliver Chinese food." "Thai and Chinese, technically. Yu-Fei does both." Rory tilted her head, studying Eva the way she'd studied textbooks at sixteen, pulling threads. "You look different." "So do you." "Yeah." Rory's mouth twitched. "I suppose I do." Eva pulled out the chair opposite and sat. She set her bag on the floor. The table between them was scratched and ringed with the ghosts of a hundred drinks. "Four years," Eva said. "Four years." Rory picked up a paper napkin, folded it in half, then in quarters. "I know. I owe you more than a number." "You don't owe me anything." "I owe you a phone call. I owe you at least one phone call." The napkin went into eighths. Rory set the tiny square down and pressed it flat with one finger. "I left and I didn't look back. That's the honest version." "I looked back." Eva's voice came out harder than she meant it to. She softened it, tried. "I looked back a lot. I kept expecting you to show up at my door with some story about why you'd disappeared." "I almost did. Twice." Rory's finger stayed on the napkin. "First time I was on the bus to Hammersmith and I got off at the wrong stop and walked around for an hour instead. Second time I was outside your flat in Camden and you had a bloke in the window and I thought —" She stopped. Folded her hands. "I thought you'd moved on. Built something. And I didn't want to drag my mess into it." "That's generous of you." "It's cowardly of me. Let's call it what it is." Rory's eyes held steady. "You deserved better than a friend who vanishes." Eva looked at the scar on Rory's wrist — the old one, the crescent, from when they were children and Rory had put her hand through a greenhouse pane reaching for a cat. It was paler now, the skin around it smooth and unbothered. "What happened to you, Rory?" Rory glanced down at her own wrist as if she'd forgotten it was there. "I left Cardiff. I left Pre-Law. I left a lot of things." She paused. "I left Evan." "I know. I know about that." Eva leaned forward. "I meant after. What happened after you left." "London happened." Rory spread her hands. "I found a flat above a bar —" She gestured at the room around them. Silas, still drying glasses, glanced over with the calm attention of a man who listened to everything and offered opinions rarely. "— got a job with Yu-Fei. Learned the city. Learned which routes flood in October. It's not much of a story." "It's a whole story. You just don't want to tell it." A silence opened between them. The card players at the corner table laughed at something, and the sound seemed to belong to another room entirely. Outside, a bus groaned past, its lights smearing across the black window. "I'm sorry," Rory said. "You said that." "Then I'll say it again. I'm sorry." She leaned back, let her hands fall to her sides. "I was afraid you'd ask me what I told you just now, and I'd have to hear myself say it out loud, and then it would be real. And I wasn't ready for it to be real." Eva studied her — the straight black hair, the bright blue eyes that carried something new, some weight that hadn't been there at sixteen, at eighteen, at twenty-one when they'd still been taking the same bus to the same lectures. The woman in front of her had spent four years in a city alone, riding a bike through rain-soaked back streets with hot food balanced behind her, sleeping above a bar owned by a man with a limp and a signet ring and a door that led somewhere she hadn't been invited to see. This Rory held her spine differently. This Rory waited for the other person to speak first. "We're not those girls anymore," Eva said. "No." "No." Eva nodded, once, as if confirming something she'd already known. "But we could be friends again. If you'd let me." Rory's jaw worked. She picked up the folded napkin, turned it over in her fingers, set it down. "I'd like that." "Then give me your number." Eva reached for her phone. "And this time, don't let it go dark." Rory pulled a pen from her bag — a cheap biro, chewed at the cap — and wrote on the back of a receipt. She slid it across the table. Eva looked at the numbers, memorized them, put the paper in her pocket. "One more thing." Eva held her gaze. "Where's Evan now?" Rory's face didn't change. The stillness returned, settling over her features like a mask that fit too well. "Somewhere I don't go looking." She reached for her wine. "Let's keep it that way."
created_at"2026-09-23T09:26:03.621Z" 9/23/2026, 9:26:03 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She leaned back [back]"
1"Eva nodded once [once]"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.414
leniency0.828
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.069
96.73% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1531
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
93.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1531
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences83
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences117
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen69
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1543
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions56
wordCount1133
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.94
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva22
Raven1
Nest1
Silas3
Soho1
District1
Northern1
Carter1
London1
Rory21
Folded1
Yu-Fei1
October1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Raven"
2"Silas"
3"Carter"
4"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"October"
globalScore0.529
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if confirming something she'd already known"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1543
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean28.57
std27.13
cv0.949
sampleLengths
079
174
294
317
418
54
642
73
810
950
1091
117
1227
131
1457
1523
1613
1766
183
196
2037
214
2225
233
248
2530
264
2724
285
2943
3039
3177
324
3322
3444
355
3631
3717
3863
3911
4037
414
423
4354
44110
457
461
4721
4821
4918
96.81% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences83
matches
0"was scratched"
1"been invited"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs200
matches
0"was doing"
1"was, standing"
2"was talking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences117
ratio0.085
matches
0"She'd changed the name of the place in her head — called it something else, a wine bar maybe, some place with exposed brick and a chalkboard menu — until she stopped, squinted at the buzzing sign, and read it again."
1"The wine was thin and cold, and she was halfway through it before she heard the voice — low, even, punctuated by a laugh that arrived without warning, a bark of something bright — and she turned on the stool so fast the wine sloshed against the rim."
2"She had straight black hair falling to her shoulders, and she was talking to someone Eva couldn't see — gesturing with both hands, fingers spread, the way she always talked when she'd decided she was right and you were about to find out."
3"Rory Carter, who she hadn't seen in four years — four years since the phone call, since the texts that had stopped, since the forwarding address in London that Eva had written down and then lost or thrown away, she could never decide which."
4"The bright blue eyes moved over Eva's face, reading it the way Rory read everything — fast, thorough, cataloguing."
5"\"Delivery driver.\" Rory nodded at a jacket hung over the chair — a plain black thing with a logo Eva didn't recognize."
6"Eva looked at the scar on Rory's wrist — the old one, the crescent, from when they were children and Rory had put her hand through a greenhouse pane reaching for a cat."
7"\"— got a job with Yu-Fei. Learned the city. Learned which routes flood in October. It's not much of a story.\""
8"Eva studied her — the straight black hair, the bright blue eyes that carried something new, some weight that hadn't been there at sixteen, at eighteen, at twenty-one when they'd still been taking the same bus to the same lectures."
9"Rory pulled a pen from her bag — a cheap biro, chewed at the cap — and wrote on the back of a receipt."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount941
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.028692879914984058
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005313496280552604
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences117
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences117
mean13.19
std12.25
cv0.929
sampleLengths
019
141
23
316
45
569
64
79
824
939
1018
114
1213
139
149
154
1617
179
188
198
203
2110
222
2348
2425
2543
263
2720
287
294
306
3117
321
3313
3444
354
3619
378
385
3916
409
415
424
4328
444
453
466
4722
4815
494
51.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.36752136752136755
totalSentences117
uniqueOpeners43
42.74% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"Bright blue eyes."
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences78
matches
0"She'd changed the name of"
1"She hadn't come for Silas."
2"She'd come because she'd heard"
3"He had a silver ring"
4"She set her bag on"
5"He set the glass down,"
6"He pushed the glass toward"
7"He shrugged one shoulder and"
8"She had straight black hair"
9"Her hands came down to"
10"She said it like a"
11"She stopped at the edge"
12"She set her bag on"
13"She softened it, tried."
14"It was paler now, the"
15"She leaned back, let her"
16"She picked up the folded"
17"She slid it across the"
18"She reached for her wine"
ratio0.244
4.87% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences78
matches
0"The green neon above the"
1"She'd changed the name of"
2"The Raven's Nest."
3"The door stuck on the"
4"She hadn't come for Silas."
5"She'd come because she'd heard"
6"The bar was half-full."
7"A couple leaned into each"
8"He had a silver ring"
9"Eva took a stool."
10"She set her bag on"
11"Silas didn't look up"
12"The cloth moved in slow"
13"He set the glass down,"
14"The bottle left a dark"
15"He pushed the glass toward"
16"He shrugged one shoulder and"
17"The wine was thin and"
18"A woman sat at a"
19"She had straight black hair"
ratio0.91
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"She'd come because she'd heard someone mention Soho over lunch, and the word had slid through her like a blade between ribs, and before she knew what she was do…"
1"Two men in shirtsleeves played cards at a corner table, stacking coins with the quiet seriousness of people who'd done this many times before."
2"The wine was thin and cold, and she was halfway through it before she heard the voice — low, even, punctuated by a laugh that arrived without warning, a bark of…"
3"Rory glanced down at her own wrist as if she'd forgotten it was there."
4"Silas, still drying glasses, glanced over with the calm attention of a man who listened to everything and offered opinions rarely."
5"Eva studied her — the straight black hair, the bright blue eyes that carried something new, some weight that hadn't been there at sixteen, at eighteen, at twent…"
6"The woman in front of her had spent four years in a city alone, riding a bike through rain-soaked back streets with hot food balanced behind her, sleeping above…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.069
leniency0.138
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.5205%