Run: 2026-09-23-01M36SD20F5P4V8W3GBA8ERWCQ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 32s
Cost:
$0.002540
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The escalator had died years ago and the steps gave back nothing but the smell of wet iron and old dust. Harlow Quinn counted them out of habit, her watch strap creaking against her wrist where the leather had gone soft with sweat. Forty-one steps to the ruin of Camden's buried station. The SOCO lights had already turned the tunnel mouth a colour that belonged in an operating theatre. A constable held the line at the bottom. He looked nineteen and he looked sick. "Bone token, ma'am." Quinn turned her palm up. The chip of white sat in the crease of her hand, warm as a tooth pulled from a mouth. She'd been given it in a paper envelope through her car window an hour ago by a man who hadn't given his name. She held it out and the constable flinched before he took it, weighed it, handed it back. "Through the barriers. Don't touch the stalls." There were stalls. Nobody had warned her about the stalls. They lined the platform in a crooked arcade, tarps lashed to the ceiling struts, and they had frozen mid-business when the call went out — jars of something that moved against the glass, bolts of cloth that shifted pattern when she passed, a counter of brass instruments with needles that all swung to follow her. The traders had gone. The goods had stayed, watching. "Quinn." DS Ridley lifted the tent flap with the back of his wrist. His gloves were already on and already wrong—left over right, bunched at the fingers. "You'll want to see this before Forensics tidies it into a report." The body sat against a pillar of tiled brick, legs folded at angles a living man wouldn't choose. Male. Grey-skinned in the way that had nothing to do with death. A long coat soaked through at the chest in a black Rorschach spread, and above the collar the face of someone who had been old for a long time and finally looked it. "Name?" Quinn crouched. She kept her hands in her pockets. "Verrick. Runs the—ran the—brass stall at the north end. Compasses. Warding kit, that sort of thing." Ridley nudged a tray of needles with his toe. "Somebody opened him up and walked off with the stock. Look at the stall. Tarp slashed, trays on the floor." She looked. The tarp had a cut in it, a long clean parting from top hem to bottom, and the trays lay in a scatter that reached nearly to the pillar. Her eyes went back to the body and stayed there. "Robbery," Ridley said. He had his theory voice on, the one that closed a room. "Market deal gone sour. These people trade in substances that'd get you twenty years on their own. Verrick wouldn't sell to someone, the someone took exception. We'll find the blade in a bin within the week." "How long has he been dead?" "Doc says four to six hours. Market opened at moonrise, so sometime in the first hour. Busy. Plenty of noise to cover the scream." He pointed toward the stairs. "Everyone at the entrance claims they heard nothing, which is exactly what people say when they've got something to hide. Token count's thirty-two on the door. We've got thirty-one bodies breathing and one that isn't. The numbers don't lie." Quinn tilted her head. The movement of the body against the pillar: the coat had ridden up on one side and sat flat on the other, and the dust behind his shoulders was undisturbed for the width of a man's back, but the platform grit in front of his knees had been swept into a ridge, as though something heavy had been dragged across it and then arranged. "Ridley." "Ma'am." "Where's the blood pool?" He stopped. "What?" "Arterial wound, chest height, dead within a minute, your own pathologist's estimate. He's sitting up. Blood runs down." She nodded at the tiles between his folded legs. "There's spray there. Beautiful spray. Fine mist in a fan like somebody held him and cut him and then walked away. But he's sitting down and the mist is in front of him and behind his knees there's a clean patch of tile with a wet edge." She rocked back on her heels. "He didn't die here." Ridley's jaw worked. "Drag marks. Somebody moved him for—positioning. These people have rituals." "Do they? Or did somebody move him because the body was in the wrong place and this is where the story is supposed to happen?" She reached out without gloves and turned the coat cuff back with one finger. The sleeve was wet to the elbow. She looked at the pillar behind him, at the tiled brick, and found it dry. Not damp. Dry, to the height of a man's chest, in a tunnel where the ceiling wept. Eva Kowalski spoke from the tent flap. She had come down behind them without a sound and now stood with both hands on the strap of her satchel, curls escaping from a scarf she'd pulled over her head against the tunnel drip. Her round glasses had fogged and she'd pushed them up onto her forehead. A constable behind her tried to gesture her back and gave up. "That's a Veil Compass," she said. She didn't look at the body. She looked at the brass disc in the dead man's left hand, and she tucked her hair behind her left ear. "May I?" "Evie. It's evidence." "It's a compass that points at rifts and it's pointed at the ceiling. I can tell you in ten seconds whether that means anything." She crouched beside Quinn, her satchel knocking against her knee. Her finger hovered over the casing without touching. "Verdigris. This patina is days old, not years—the artisan seals them when they're sold. Broken seal. And the sigils on the face." "What about them?" "Scratched away. Four protective sigils, each one cut through with a pin. That's not damage. That's work. Someone took the warding off this compass on purpose." Eva pushed her glasses down over her eyes. "Which means it doesn't point at what it's supposed to point at anymore. It points at what was let through." Quinn looked at the needle. It held steady on the tiled ceiling, unwavering, and behind the tent flap the stall's other instruments still turned their faces toward her as she moved. "Ridley. The cut in the tarp." "Clean blade. What of it?" "It's cut from outside the stall, top hem to bottom. He was in there with his stock and his trays. Somebody cut their way in from the platform side and the trays went over in a line straight at the pillar—which is where the body is and where the body wasn't killed." She stood and the tunnel air moved against her face, cold, in a direction tunnels don't breathe. "The trays weren't knocked over in a scuffle. They were pushed. In a line. Like a hand sweeping a table. And the stock—name me one thing that's missing." Ridley pulled the inventory sheet from his pocket and read it twice. "Nothing's missing," he said. "Thirty-two tokens on the door," Quinn said. "Thirty-one breathing. Did you count the traders, Ridley, or did you count the people who were still here when your constable started feeling ill?" She watched the colour leave his face in stages. He turned to the tent flap and she let him go two steps before she spoke again. "The clean tile. The wet edge. The dry pillar." She looked at the compass needle again, at where it aimed—not at the ceiling but past it, up and back, on a line that would cross the stalls and the frozen arcade and come down at the mouth of the escalator where forty-one dead steps met a constable holding a paper envelope. "This was made somewhere else and dressed here. And whatever let through took his coat off him wet and put him down dry and left a needle pointing at the door it used." Eva had her notebook out. The pen hovered and the tip trembled and made a blue dot on the page without a word attached. "Where is that line?" Quinn said. "Where does the needle cross ground?" Eva stood on her toes and squinted along it, pushing her glasses up, letting them fall. Her mouth opened. She tucked the hair behind her ear again and did not finish the motion.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She rocked back [back]"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.05
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1415
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
92.93% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1415
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"unwavering"
count1
1
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"unwavering"
1"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences66
matches(empty)
99.57% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences66
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences91
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen70
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1408
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount853
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.94
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn8
Camden1
Ridley5
Rorschach1
Kowalski1
Eva4
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Camden"
2"Ridley"
3"Kowalski"
4"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.71
wordCount1408
matches
0"not at the ceiling but past it, up"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean34.34
std28.69
cv0.835
sampleLengths
069
115
23
364
47
574
639
763
810
945
1041
1151
126
1368
1468
151
161
174
183
1984
2013
2125
2253
2367
2435
253
2664
273
2854
2931
306
315
3297
3312
344
3531
3626
3794
3824
3912
4033
94.63% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences66
matches
0"been given"
1"was undisturbed"
2"been swept"
3"been dragged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs141
matches(empty)
48.67% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences91
ratio0.033
matches
0"They lined the platform in a crooked arcade, tarps lashed to the ceiling struts, and they had frozen mid-business when the call went out — jars of something that moved against the glass, bolts of cloth that shifted pattern when she passed, a counter of brass instruments with needles that all swung to follow her."
1"His gloves were already on and already wrong—left over right, bunched at the fingers."
2"\"The clean tile. The wet edge. The dry pillar.\" She looked at the compass needle again, at where it aimed—not at the ceiling but past it, up and back, on a line that would cross the stalls and the frozen arcade and come down at the mouth of the escalator where forty-one dead steps met a constable holding a paper envelope."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount858
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.013986013986013986
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002331002331002331
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences91
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences91
mean15.47
std14.68
cv0.949
sampleLengths
021
122
29
317
48
57
63
75
819
923
1017
117
123
137
1455
154
165
1713
1814
1912
2018
211
2211
2333
243
257
2625
2720
282
2929
3010
313
3212
3336
346
3529
3639
374
3864
391
401
414
422
431
4427
4553
464
473
4810
4925
78.75% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.5054945054945055
totalSentences91
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
34.29% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences56
matches
0"He looked nineteen and he"
1"She'd been given it in"
2"She held it out and"
3"They lined the platform in"
4"His gloves were already on"
5"She kept her hands in"
6"Her eyes went back to"
7"He had his theory voice"
8"He pointed toward the stairs"
9"She nodded at the tiles"
10"She rocked back on her"
11"She reached out without gloves"
12"She looked at the pillar"
13"She had come down behind"
14"Her round glasses had fogged"
15"She didn't look at the"
16"She looked at the brass"
17"She crouched beside Quinn, her"
18"Her finger hovered over the"
19"It held steady on the"
ratio0.464
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences56
matches
0"The escalator had died years"
1"Harlow Quinn counted them out"
2"The SOCO lights had already"
3"A constable held the line"
4"He looked nineteen and he"
5"Quinn turned her palm up."
6"The chip of white sat"
7"She'd been given it in"
8"She held it out and"
9"Nobody had warned her about"
10"They lined the platform in"
11"The traders had gone."
12"The goods had stayed, watching."
13"DS Ridley lifted the tent"
14"His gloves were already on"
15"The body sat against a"
16"A long coat soaked through"
17"She kept her hands in"
18"Ridley nudged a tray of"
19"The tarp had a cut"
ratio0.929
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
44.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She'd been given it in a paper envelope through her car window an hour ago by a man who hadn't given his name."
1"They lined the platform in a crooked arcade, tarps lashed to the ceiling struts, and they had frozen mid-business when the call went out — jars of something tha…"
2"A long coat soaked through at the chest in a black Rorschach spread, and above the collar the face of someone who had been old for a long time and finally looke…"
3"The movement of the body against the pillar: the coat had ridden up on one side and sat flat on the other, and the dust behind his shoulders was undisturbed for…"
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She crouched, her satchel knocking against her knee"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.8279%