Run: 2026-09-23-01M36SE19W1KCCK83Q0Z5JQC0W

Run Details

Duration:
1m 27s
Cost:
$0.002730
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain came sideways off the Euston Road and slapped Detective Harlow Quinn across the face as she rounded the corner into Camden High Street, doing thirty miles an hour on foot in shoes that were not made for it. Two hundred yards ahead, the suspect in the grey hood burned through a knot of Friday-night drinkers and never broke stride. Quinn had been a police officer for eighteen years and she had learned to read a runner the way a sailor reads weather. This one was not running blind. He was running with a destination. That was worse. It meant she was being led somewhere, and she knew it, and she was going anyway. She keyed her radio as she ran. "Control, this is DI Quinn. Suspect is heading north on Camden High Street, crossing toward the market. I need units at the Lock, the tube station exit, and the bridge. Confirm." Static. Then a voice, thin and far away: "Copy, DI Quinn. Nearest unit is eleven minutes out. Weather's causing us problems tonight." Eleven minutes. She thumbed the radio off and put her head down. The suspect cut left through the market stalls, scattering a rota of hooded kids who shouted things she didn't catch. A pallet of knockoff trainers went over with a sound like applause. Quinn hurdled it — she was forty-one and she paid for every jump now, and she paid afterwards, in the mornings — and kept him fixed in her sights. Grey hood. Lean. He ran with the loose, floating economy of someone who had been running from something his entire life and had finally got good at it. He ducked into the alley behind the fishmongers and she followed, and the noise of the High Street collapsed behind her like a door closing. Here it was just the rain, the brick, the smell of wet cardboard and old grease, and the slap of two sets of feet. Water sheeted down the alley and lifted the smell of the city out of the ground. Her watch, the worn leather one that had been Morris's, had ridden up under her cuff and was cold against her wrist. At the far end of the alley he dropped — not slipped, dropped — through a service hatch in the pavement. Quinn reached the hatch and stood over it and looked down into a square of black, and the rain filled her collar and ran down her spine. She had seen the file. Everyone at the Met had seen the file, if only the edges of it, the edges people talked about in the canteen with too much care in their voices. There were things in the ground beneath this city that did not appear on the utilities map. She had spent three years believing that the thing that had happened to Morris had a rational shape, that if she turned it slowly enough in the light she would find the mechanism, the bribe, the corrupted officer, the ordinary human sin that explained how a good detective walked into a warehouse in Rotherhithe and did not walk out. Three years of turning it. Three years of nothing. She unclipped the torch from her belt and shone it down. Iron rungs, set into brick. The brick was old — Victorian, older — and the rungs were newer and had been worn smooth and bright on their upper surfaces by hands. Many hands. Recently. From below, distantly, she heard voices, and beneath the voices a hum she felt in her teeth. A crowd. "Control, suspect has gone to ground. Service entrance, rear of the High Street, north of the Lock. I'm going in. If I'm not out in twenty, I want the whole borough down here." The radio gave her nothing back but the shush of the rain. She held it a moment longer, waiting, then clipped it to her belt beside the torch. Quinn went down the ladder. The air changed at once — warmer, damp in a different way, mineral, close. The rain sound fell away to nothing as though someone had switched it off. She counted the rungs out of habit. Fourteen. Her shoes found brick, and the brick was slick underfoot with a black wet sheen. The torch beam showed her a low tunnel with a gully of runoff down its centre and the ghosts of painted signs on the walls, flaking away. She read one as she passed: NO SMOKING BEYOND THIS POINT. Another: MIND THE GAP. The tunnel bent, and at the bend it opened. Quinn switched off the torch and stood in the dark and breathed and let her eyes do their work. Ahead, maybe sixty yards, a glow. Not daylight. Not lamplight either. It pulsed faintly, green and gold, like something with a slow heartbeat, and it fell across the mouth of a wider chamber, and silhouetted against it she saw the figure of the man in the grey hood hand something to another figure and receive something back, and then he was gone, swallowed. She moved forward along the wall with one hand on the wet brick and the other resting on the butt of her extendable baton. Eighteen years. She had done armed response, she had done undercover, she had kicked doors in Peckham and walked into rooms where men were already dead and smelled like copper and open meat. None of it had prepared her in any specific way for this. The tunnel opened onto the concourse of an abandoned Tube station. She knew it from the tiling — the roundels still on the walls, the same pattern of glazed white she had seen in a hundred stations, except these were streaked with mineral bloom and water had pulled a black tide-line across them at chest height. Old tracks ran below in a cutting to her left, and the platform edge was crumbled away in places. But the station was not dead. The station was very much alive. It was enormous. It ran away into the dark in both directions, strung with lanterns and bare bulbs on drooping cables, and it was full of people. Quinn stopped at the edge of it and stood in shadow and felt her breath come carefully in and out and knew, with the calm certainty of an experienced officer, that she was somewhere she was not supposed to be and that every instinct she had was asking her to leave. They were not all people. That was the thing her eye kept snagging on and her mind kept refusing. A stall in front of her sold jars of something that moved. Three stalls down a woman with too many knuckles on each finger was haggling in a language that had too many vowels and sounded like water going down a drain. A man at a trestle table had a face that came apart at the edges when the lantern light hit it, as though it were a thing assembled and held together by effort. Under it all ran the hum, and now she understood it: it was not one sound, it was a thousand sounds at a pitch just below hearing, and the air tasted of electricity and crushed herbs and something else, something sweet and gone-off, like flowers at a funeral. She should call it in. She knew exactly how that would go. Eleven minutes out, and when they came they would find a disused station with a locked gate and no crowd, and the report would say the officer was suffering stress and exposure, and it would be filed alongside the Morris file, and nothing would turn. The man in the grey hood was forty yards away, moving down the platform, talking to no one. Quinn unclipped her radio and held it and then clipped it back. Her hand went instead to her inside pocket and came out with her warrant card. She looked at her own name on it and put it away again. Warrant cards meant something up there. Down here, she suspected, they meant a different thing entirely — possibly something worse. A woman's voice at her elbow said, "You'll want a token, love. They won't let you past the second arch without one." Quinn turned fast and had the baton out before she finished turning, and the woman didn't so much as blink. She was small and grey-haired and wearing an apron, and she was holding out a shallow basket. In the basket were pale discs, and Quinn's stomach understood what they were before her mind did. "Bone?" Quinn said. "Good bone, clean bone, properly asked," the woman said. "Two pounds." "Nothing's two pounds." "It is tonight." The woman smiled, and her teeth were the wrong number. "You're the copper. You might as well be wearing a sign." Quinn looked at her. Then she looked past her, down the platform, at the grey hood forty yards away and shrinking. She had one suspect. One thread out of three years of a locked box. If she lost him tonight she would lose the thread, and the thread was the only thing she had been given since Morris's funeral that was not made of nothing. She reached into her pocket and found coins. She put them in the basket and took a token. It was warm. It should not have been warm. It was small and smooth and pale and it sat against her palm with a weight that had nothing to do with physics. "What's this place called?" Quinn asked. "Market," said the woman. "It moves. Full moon, it moves. You're at the Camden one tonight, and by the time you've found what you're after, it'll have been three others and this all will be a rumour. You'll be wanting to hurry." Quinn closed her hand around the token and felt its warmth bleed into her skin and thought of Morris, and the warehouse, and the ordinary human sin she had never found. She walked forward into the market. Stalls closed around her and the crowd folded in behind her and the air thickened with that impossible, complicated smell. Nobody stopped her. Nobody touched her. She felt eyes land on her and slide off and land again, and she held her spine straight and kept her stride at the same pace she used in the corridors of the nick, because she had learned a long time ago that the fastest way to be prey was to look like you expected to be. The second arch came up, and behind it a figure in black with no face to speak of held out a hand. Quinn opened her fist and showed the token. The figure looked at it. Looked at her. Took it with a grip that was several degrees colder than a hand should be, and stepped aside. Beyond the arch the station opened into a junction chamber where four tunnels met under a ceiling of soot-blackened brick, and here the noise was a solid thing. The stalls were denser, the goods worse. She passed a rack of things in stoppered bottles that knocked softly against each other like a windchime. She passed a table of watches that were all running at different speeds. She passed an old man selling whispers from a wooden box, and the whispers were in her mother's voice, and she did not stop. The grey hood stopped at the far side of the junction, at the mouth of a tunnel that was dark and narrow and went down at a steep grade. He stopped and he turned and he looked directly at Harlow Quinn across eighty yards of impossible crowd. He knew. He had always known. The whole run had been a leash and she had walked at the end of it from Camden High Street to here. Quinn stopped too. Around her the market went on buying and selling and the hum went on pressing at her teeth. The man in the grey hood raised one hand, not in surrender, not in threat. In invitation. Then he turned and went down the dark tunnel and was gone. She stood at the mouth of it and looked down into it and saw nothing at all. Her hand went to her wrist. The worn leather strap. Morris's watch, still keeping London time, still ticking, indifferent to wherever the hell this was. Twenty minutes since she'd gone down the hatch and it felt like a year and it felt like four minutes. Her units would be overhead now, walking the alley, finding the hatch, finding it closed, finding nothing. Quinn took the baton off her belt and extended it and listened to it click into its full length. It was a plain steel thing with a foam grip. She had never felt more ridiculous or more certain in her life. "Control," she said into the radio, quiet, one last time. "DI Quinn. I am proceeding underground. Camden. Below street level. Following suspect. If you read me, get me backup, and tell them to bring more than a warrant." The radio gave her a burst of static so sharp and bright it sounded, for half a second, like a voice answering. Quinn put it away. She went down into the dark after him.
created_at"2026-09-23T09:27:01.698Z" 9/23/2026, 9:27:01 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.95% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2209
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
2"carefully"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
88.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2209
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"down her spine"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"down her spine"
1"pulsed"
2"stomach"
3"weight"
4"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences139
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences139
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"happened to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences146
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen59
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2218
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount2027
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity0.94
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Euston1
Road1
Detective1
Harlow2
Quinn19
Camden2
High3
Street3
Friday-night1
Eleven2
Morris6
Met1
Rotherhithe1
Victorian1
Peckham1
Tube1
London1
Three3
persons
0"Detective"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Morris"
places
0"Euston"
1"Road"
2"Camden"
3"High"
4"Street"
5"Rotherhithe"
6"Peckham"
7"London"
globalScore1
windowScore0.667
75.74% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences101
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"smelled like copper and open meat"
1"sounded like water going down a drain"
2"felt like a year and it felt like four"
3"felt like four minutes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2218
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences146
matches
0"believing that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean43.49
std31.14
cv0.716
sampleLengths
040
175
238
322
412
589
687
721
827
9119
1045
1119
1233
1328
145
15102
1619
1763
1869
1987
2027
2151
225
23137
2457
2518
2660
2722
2854
293
3011
313
3224
3365
3450
356
3642
3731
386
3983
4056
4190
4247
4328
4450
4517
4662
4741
4838
4922
87.59% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences139
matches
0"being led"
1"been worn"
2"was gone"
3"were streaked"
4"was crumbled"
5"been given"
6"was gone"
56.41% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs325
matches
0"was not running"
1"was running"
2"was going"
3"was asking"
4"was haggling"
5"was suffering"
6"was holding"
25.44% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences146
ratio0.041
matches
0"Quinn hurdled it — she was forty-one and she paid for every jump now, and she paid afterwards, in the mornings — and kept him fixed in her sights."
1"At the far end of the alley he dropped — not slipped, dropped — through a service hatch in the pavement."
2"The brick was old — Victorian, older — and the rungs were newer and had been worn smooth and bright on their upper surfaces by hands."
3"The air changed at once — warmer, damp in a different way, mineral, close."
4"She knew it from the tiling — the roundels still on the walls, the same pattern of glazed white she had seen in a hundred stations, except these were streaked with mineral bloom and water had pulled a black tide-line across them at chest height."
5"Down here, she suspected, they meant a different thing entirely — possibly something worse."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2024
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount62
adverbRatio0.030632411067193676
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.00691699604743083
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences146
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences146
mean15.19
std12.22
cv0.804
sampleLengths
040
121
223
36
46
53
616
77
831
91
1021
112
1210
1320
1412
1529
162
171
1825
1925
2024
2116
2222
2321
2427
255
2629
2717
2859
295
304
3111
325
3326
342
351
3617
372
3833
3912
4016
415
4214
4314
447
451
4615
4727
4811
494
54.34% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.3835616438356164
totalSentences146
uniqueOpeners56
80.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences125
matches
0"Then a voice, thin and"
1"Then she looked past her,"
2"Then he turned and went"
ratio0.024
72.80% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences125
matches
0"He was running with a"
1"It meant she was being"
2"She keyed her radio as"
3"She thumbed the radio off"
4"He ran with the loose,"
5"He ducked into the alley"
6"Her watch, the worn leather"
7"She had seen the file."
8"She had spent three years"
9"She unclipped the torch from"
10"She held it a moment"
11"She counted the rungs out"
12"Her shoes found brick, and"
13"She read one as she"
14"It pulsed faintly, green and"
15"She moved forward along the"
16"She had done armed response,"
17"She knew it from the"
18"It was enormous."
19"It ran away into the"
ratio0.368
68.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences125
matches
0"The rain came sideways off"
1"Quinn had been a police"
2"This one was not running"
3"He was running with a"
4"That was worse."
5"It meant she was being"
6"She keyed her radio as"
7"She thumbed the radio off"
8"The suspect cut left through"
9"A pallet of knockoff trainers"
10"Quinn hurdled it — she"
11"He ran with the loose,"
12"He ducked into the alley"
13"Here it was just the"
14"Water sheeted down the alley"
15"Her watch, the worn leather"
16"Quinn reached the hatch and"
17"She had seen the file."
18"Everyone at the Met had"
19"She had spent three years"
ratio0.784
40.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences125
matches
0"If she lost him tonight"
ratio0.008
62.50% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences80
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The rain came sideways off the Euston Road and slapped Detective Harlow Quinn across the face as she rounded the corner into Camden High Street, doing thirty mi…"
1"He ran with the loose, floating economy of someone who had been running from something his entire life and had finally got good at it."
2"She had spent three years believing that the thing that had happened to Morris had a rational shape, that if she turned it slowly enough in the light she would …"
3"A stall in front of her sold jars of something that moved."
4"Three stalls down a woman with too many knuckles on each finger was haggling in a language that had too many vowels and sounded like water going down a drain."
5"It was small and smooth and pale and it sat against her palm with a weight that had nothing to do with physics."
6"She passed a rack of things in stoppered bottles that knocked softly against each other like a windchime."
7"She passed a table of watches that were all running at different speeds."
8"The grey hood stopped at the far side of the junction, at the mouth of a tunnel that was dark and narrow and went down at a steep grade."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"The woman smiled, and her teeth were the wrong number"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.6929%