Run: 2026-09-23-01M36SH3R4XZ1HEYJM48J2ZES5

Run Details

Duration:
1m 11s
Cost:
$0.002522
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The lock clicked and the door swung open and Lucien Moreau stood in the hallway with rain dripping off the shoulders of his charcoal coat and his platinum hair flattened against his forehead. His cane tapped once against the doorframe. Amber and black eyes fixed on Rory's face and something behind them shifted like a card being turned over. "You changed the locks." Rory gripped the edge of the door. Three deadbolts and a chain — wrong flat, that was Eva's security, not hers — but her fingers still dug into the wood the way they did when adrenaline hit her jaw first and her thoughts second. She'd expected a delivery. Maybe Silas from downstairs wanting the rent. Not this. Not him standing in the corridor of the building above the Golden Empress with wet shoes and that voice like gravel rolled in silk. "You shouldn't be here." "Probably not." Lucien wiped water from his cheek with one knuckle. His gaze moved past her shoulder into the flat — the narrow kitchen, the single lamp throwing orange across the counter, the stack of takeout bags from the restaurant where she worked. He catalogued it all in half a second. She remembered that about him. The way he read rooms like pages. "How did you find this address?" "You told me. Brussels. That night you drank half a bottle of Sancerre and recited every flat you'd ever lived in like a confession." Her chest tightened. She hadn't remembered telling him. She remembered the wine and the rain against the hotel window and his hand on the small of her back when they'd walked through the lobby. She remembered the argument after. She remembered walking out at four in the morning with her coat inside out and no goodbye. "That was a long time ago." "Eleven months." He said it like a fact he'd counted. His jaw worked. The cane shifted in his grip — that ivory handle she knew hid a blade, though she'd never seen him draw it. "May I come in, Rory? Or do you prefer I deliver this in the corridor where your landlord can hear?" She stepped back without deciding to. The flat swallowed the space between them. Lucien crossed the threshold and the room shrank. He'd always done that — filled every place he entered, not with noise but with the sheer weight of his attention. He shrugged off his coat and folded it over the back of her one chair and she caught the smell of him: bergamot and wet wool and something underneath that wasn't quite human, something warm and dark and old. She closed the door and threw all three deadbolts — Eva's habit rubbing off on her — and turned to find him standing by the window, looking down at Brick Lane below. "Talk." Lucien's reflection watched her in the glass. Rain crawled down the pane in fat trails. "I need your help." "Try again." His shoulders moved — not quite a laugh, not quite anything else. He turned. Up close, the mismatch of his eyes caught her off guard the way it always had. One amber, one black. One warm, one void. She'd traced the line between them once with her fingertip while he slept and he'd caught her wrist before she'd finished and pressed his lips to her palm and she'd felt the hum of him against her mouth like a tuning fork. "There's a situation in Marseille. My father's estate. Someone is selling relics that don't belong to them and the buyer is dangerous and I need someone who doesn't flinch." "And you thought of me." "I always think of you." The words landed before he could catch them. His hand tightened on the cane. A muscle jumped in his cheek. "That is — you're the only person in this city I trust to keep their head." Rory leaned against the counter and crossed her arms. The crescent scar on her left wrist pressed against her elbow. She watched him struggle to shove the moment back behind his composure and fail, and something in her chest broke open on old ground. "Eleven months, Luc. Eleven months and not a word. And now you need a favour and you show up at my door soaking wet and charming." "I am not charming you." "You're standing in my kitchen dripping on the floor and looking at me like —" "Like what?" His voice dropped. The air between them changed texture. He took a step closer and she didn't step back and both of them noticed. "Like Brussels was yesterday." He went quiet. Rain hit the window in sharp bursts. Somewhere below, a car horn blared on Brick Lane and the curry house downstairs exhaled garlic and cumin through the floorboards. Lucien set his cane against the counter. Both his hands came up and hovered near her face and then fell back to his sides like he'd forgotten what they were allowed to do. "I should have called." "Yes." "I wrote eleven drafts. Deleted every one. My mother used to say that pride is the one demon trait I inherited in full." His mouth twisted. "She wasn't wrong." Rory studied him. The hollow under his cheekbones. The way his collar sat loose at the throat where she'd once unbuttoned it with shaking fingers. He looked thinner. He looked like he hadn't slept and she wanted to press her thumb against the dark crescents under his eyes and she wanted to slam the door in his face and both urges sat in her throat like stones. "What happened in Marseille?" "My father left certain objects in my care when he returned to Avaros. A collection. Most of it harmless — maps, correspondence, things a human antiquarian would sell at auction and think nothing of. But two pieces are bound to my bloodline. If they fall into the wrong hands —" "How wrong?" "Wrong enough that I came to you instead of anyone else." He held her gaze. "Wrong enough that I crossed the channel in a storm and stood outside this building for twenty minutes before I knocked." She almost smiled. Caught it. "Twenty minutes." "The last time I saw you, you told me to go to hell in three languages. I needed to prepare." "Three?" "English, French, and what I believe was a very creative approximation of Welsh." Her mouth twitched and she looked away. The lamp hummed. Ptolemy — Eva's cat, on loan for the week while Eva researched in Edinburgh — wound between Lucien's ankles and he looked down at it with an expression Rory hadn't seen on him before. Soft. Unguarded. The cat butted his shin and he crouched and scratched behind one ear with those long fingers that knew four languages and how to hold a blade and how to cup her jaw like she was something breakable. "You named a cat after a dead astronomer." "Eva named him." She watched Lucien's hand move through the tabby's fur. "Don't change the subject." "There is no subject. Only the fact that I need you and I have no right to ask." "Then why are you asking?" He looked up from the cat. The amber eye caught the lamplight. "Because when everything goes wrong, the only face I see is yours." The words sat in the room. Rory unfolded her arms. She pressed her palms flat against the counter behind her and the edge bit into the crescent scar and she breathed through the ache the way she'd learned to breathe through all the aches he'd left. "You don't get to say things like that and then disappear." "No." He rose to his feet. Ptolemy slunk away toward the bedroom. Lucien stood before her and the space between their bodies hummed with everything neither of them had said in Brussels or after. "I don't." "Then what are you doing right now?" His hand lifted. Slow. Giving her every chance to move. His fingers touched her jaw — barely, just the tips — and her skin lit up like a struck match. "Standing still." His voice roughened. "For once in my miserable life, standing still." Rory covered his hand with hers and pressed his palm harder against her cheek and watched the black eye go wide and the amber one burn. She felt his pulse jump where her thumb crossed his wrist. "Tell me about Marseille." "Marseille can wait." His thumb traced the line of her cheekbone. His breath came short and he didn't hide it. "Tell me you didn't think about Brussels." "I'm not doing this with you." "Rory." "Every day." The word tore out of her before the wall went back up. She watched it land. He closed his eyes and his forehead dropped toward hers and hovered there, close enough that she felt the heat radiating off his skin. "I booked the channel crossing the morning after you left," he said against her mouth. "I got as far as the terminal and turned around. My hands wouldn't stop shaking and I told myself it was the cold." "You're an idiot." "Undisputed." She kissed him. Or he kissed her. The distance collapsed and his hand slid from her jaw into her wet hair and hers fisted in the front of his shirt and the kiss tasted like rain and regret and eleven months of drafts he'd deleted. He made a sound against her lips — low, wrecked, nothing like the composed fixer who walked into rooms and owned them — and she pulled back just enough to see his face. "This doesn't fix anything." "No." "You're still explaining Marseille. You're still explaining every single one of those eleven months." His thumb traced her lower lip. His mismatched eyes held hers and beneath the composure something raw moved like a current under ice. "Ask me anything. I'll stay as long as it takes." The rain kept falling against the window and the lamp threw their shadows long across the kitchen floor and Rory held the front of his shirt in both fists and didn't let go.
created_at"2026-09-23T09:28:42.505Z" 9/23/2026, 9:28:42 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.186
leniency0.373
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.01% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1670
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1670
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"silk"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"traced"
count3
3
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"silk"
1"weight"
2"traced"
3"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences94
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences141
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1686
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount1179
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.68
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien8
Moreau1
Rory8
Eva4
Silas1
Golden1
Empress1
Brick2
Lane2
Edinburgh1
Ptolemy2
Brussels1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Silas"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Edinburgh"
3"Brussels"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"quite human, something warm and dark and old"
1"not quite a laugh, not quite anything else"
2"not quite anything else"
3"looked like he hadn't slept and she wante"
4"tasted like rain and regret and eleven mo"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.593
wordCount1686
matches
0"not with noise but with the sheer weight of his attention"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences141
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs70
mean24.09
std23.43
cv0.973
sampleLengths
059
14
281
34
463
56
624
756
86
955
1081
1132
121
1315
144
152
1680
1729
185
1941
2044
2126
225
2315
2426
254
2631
2733
284
291
3029
3167
324
3350
342
3536
365
372
3820
391
4013
4184
428
4316
4418
455
4612
4712
4846
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"were allowed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs192
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences141
ratio0.064
matches
0"Three deadbolts and a chain — wrong flat, that was Eva's security, not hers — but her fingers still dug into the wood the way they did when adrenaline hit her jaw first and her thoughts second."
1"His gaze moved past her shoulder into the flat — the narrow kitchen, the single lamp throwing orange across the counter, the stack of takeout bags from the restaurant where she worked."
2"The cane shifted in his grip — that ivory handle she knew hid a blade, though she'd never seen him draw it."
3"He'd always done that — filled every place he entered, not with noise but with the sheer weight of his attention."
4"She closed the door and threw all three deadbolts — Eva's habit rubbing off on her — and turned to find him standing by the window, looking down at Brick Lane below."
5"His shoulders moved — not quite a laugh, not quite anything else."
6"Ptolemy — Eva's cat, on loan for the week while Eva researched in Edinburgh — wound between Lucien's ankles and he looked down at it with an expression Rory hadn't seen on him before."
7"His fingers touched her jaw — barely, just the tips — and her skin lit up like a struck match."
8"He made a sound against her lips — low, wrecked, nothing like the composed fixer who walked into rooms and owned them — and she pulled back just enough to see his face."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1083
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.020313942751615882
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0009233610341643582
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences141
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences141
mean11.96
std10.91
cv0.912
sampleLengths
033
17
219
34
47
537
64
77
82
924
104
1111
1232
138
145
157
166
1724
183
195
2026
215
2217
236
2410
253
2622
2720
286
297
308
3121
3239
3332
341
357
368
374
382
3912
402
4116
424
434
4442
4529
465
4713
486
496
57.21% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3900709219858156
totalSentences141
uniqueOpeners55
75.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences88
matches
0"Maybe Silas from downstairs wanting"
1"Somewhere below, a car horn"
ratio0.023
10.91% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences88
matches
0"His cane tapped once against"
1"She'd expected a delivery."
2"His gaze moved past her"
3"He catalogued it all in"
4"She remembered that about him."
5"Her chest tightened."
6"She hadn't remembered telling him."
7"She remembered the wine and"
8"She remembered the argument after."
9"She remembered walking out at"
10"He said it like a"
11"His jaw worked."
12"She stepped back without deciding"
13"He'd always done that —"
14"He shrugged off his coat"
15"She closed the door and"
16"His shoulders moved — not"
17"She'd traced the line between"
18"His hand tightened on the"
19"She watched him struggle to"
ratio0.523
16.82% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences88
matches
0"The lock clicked and the"
1"His cane tapped once against"
2"Amber and black eyes fixed"
3"Rory gripped the edge of"
4"She'd expected a delivery."
5"Lucien wiped water from his"
6"His gaze moved past her"
7"He catalogued it all in"
8"She remembered that about him."
9"The way he read rooms"
10"Her chest tightened."
11"She hadn't remembered telling him."
12"She remembered the wine and"
13"She remembered the argument after."
14"She remembered walking out at"
15"He said it like a"
16"His jaw worked."
17"The cane shifted in his"
18"She stepped back without deciding"
19"The flat swallowed the space"
ratio0.886
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She closed the door and threw all three deadbolts — Eva's habit rubbing off on her — and turned to find him standing by the window, looking down at Brick Lane b…"
1"The cat butted his shin and he crouched and scratched behind one ear with those long fingers that knew four languages and how to hold a blade and how to cup her…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.034
leniency0.068
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.3101%