Run: 2026-09-23-01M36SPPEKJ9F3GGQ8H2CEP4M3

Run Details

Duration:
59.8s
Cost:
$0.000702
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The lock gave before her knuckles touched the door a second time. The sound of a chain being drawn back arrived a heartbeat ahead of the light, and Lucien Moreau filled the frame of his own doorway the way he filled most rooms: like the space had been tailored around him. Charcoal suit, no tie, top button loose. His platinum hair was slicked back but less precise than usual, one side pushed off his forehead as though he'd run his hand through it once and stopped caring about the result. The ivory head of his cane rested against the jamb behind him. He looked at her. Not the quick, assessing glance he gave strangers — a full, slow inventory, starting at her eyes and working down to the courier bag still slung across her chest. "Carter." "Lucien." "You're standing in my hallway." He leaned against the frame and folded his arms. "Which, unless you've developed a talent for teleportation, means you came here." "Astute." Rory shifted her weight. The carpet beneath her boots was worn to the weave, and the light from his flat behind him caught the crescent scar on her wrist when she pulled the strap of her bag higher on her shoulder. "Are you going to invite me in, or do you want to keep the neighbors listening?" "There are no neighbors. I keep this floor." He stepped aside anyway, one hand on the door, the other gesturing into the room with a sweep that could have ushered in a jury. The flat was spare to the point of suspicion. A single armchair, a bookshelf that held more bottle than book, a window left open to the sounds of the street four stories below. Papers were stacked on the small table by the door — bills, by the look of them, and a newspaper with a section circled in red. Everything else was surface and shadow. Rory walked in. She didn't take off her coat. Lucien closed the door and the chain went home. Three turns of the lock. She counted them without meaning to. "You could have called," he said from behind her. "Your number changed." "Did it." Not a question. He moved past her toward the armchair, then stopped short of it and turned back. "I gave it to you twice." "You gave it to me once. The second time I deleted it on purpose." She met his amber eye, then his black one — the mismatch had always thrown her for a half-second before her brain caught up. "Sue me." "I could." He almost smiled. It didn't reach either eye. "I know a very good one." "So do I. She was my mum's colleague at the school." Rory unzipped the courier bag and pulled out a folder — Yu-Fei's takeout receipts, she'd grabbed them off the passenger seat without thinking — and set it on the table on top of his papers. Then she took the bag off entirely and draped it over the back of a chair she hadn't noticed was there. "I need information. That's why I'm here." "That's why you're here at eleven at night. On foot. Without calling ahead." He lowered himself into the armchair and crossed one leg over the other, ankle resting on knee. The blade concealed in his cane caught the lamplight where it leaned against the wall. "Tell me." She stayed standing. Standing kept her hands from doing something she'd regret. "Evan got out of Broadmoor last Thursday." The silence that followed had weight. Lucien uncrossed his legs, then crossed them the other way. "Thursday," he repeated. "Thursday." "You're certain." "His mother called my mother's house. Mum forwarded me the voicemail this afternoon." Rory pulled her phone from her coat pocket and held it out. The screen glowed with a waveform — a woman's voice, clipped and frightened, the kind of fear that had been rehearsed so many times it had gone smooth. "He's staying with a cousin in Ealing. Has been since Wednesday night." Lucien took the phone. He held it the way he held everything — like it was evidence and he was already building the case. He listened to the whole message, watched the waveform finish, then handed it back without a word. "Why me?" He said it flatly, without performance. "Because you have people who watch things. Because you owe me after Marseille." She'd meant to say it evenly. It came out sharper than that. "And because I can't go to the police with a voicemail and a feeling." "You could. They'd file it and you'd wait." He rose from the chair. He didn't cross to her — he moved to the window and looked down at the street, both hands in his pockets. "Ealing. That's not far from here. Not far from Brick Lane, either." "He won't come near me. He doesn't know where I live." The words were out before she decided to say them. Rory watched his shoulders — the line of them, the way the jacket sat — and understood he'd heard the crack in the sentence as clearly as she had. He turned his head. Not all the way. Enough for the amber eye to find her. "He knew where you lived before." "Before was different." "Was it." He faced her fully now. The lamplight picked out the sharp architecture of his cheekbones, the shadow under his jaw where he'd skipped a shave. "Before, you had me." The sentence landed in the middle of the room and neither of them moved to pick it up. Rory felt the heat climb the back of her neck. She set her jaw. "You had conditions." "I had expectations. There's a difference." He took a step toward her. "You ran because I wouldn't pretend the world you wanted was the world you were in." "I ran because the last person who told me what was real turned out to be wrong about everything." Her voice held. Barely. She flexed her left hand and the crescent scar pulled tight. "I'm not having that conversation again." "You're standing in my flat at eleven at night having every conversation we skipped." Another step. He stopped an arm's length away, close enough that she could smell the trace of cedar on his collar. "Sue me." A laugh escaped before she could catch it — short, involuntary, startled out of her. He heard it. Something in his face shifted, a muscle near the mouth releasing, and for a second he looked the way he'd looked the first time they'd spoken in Marseille, when she'd insulted his wine and he'd decided, visibly, to find her interesting. "Ealing," she said, pulling them back. "I need a name. The cousin's name, an address, anyone who moves in that circle." "You'll have it by tomorrow." He moved past her to the table and pulled a business card from the stack — blank except for a phone number. He wrote a name on the back, tore the corner off the newspaper, and handed both to her. "Rory." She took the card. Her fingers brushed his. The contact lasted the length of a held breath. "Don't come here again unannounced," he said. "Next time, call." "You'll answer?" "I'll consider it." The corner of his mouth turned. Not quite a smile. Close enough to make her chest tight. "Lock your door on the way out. Three deadbolts, all of them, even the one with the sticky bolt." "I know how doors work." "You know how one door works. You've been in one place too long." He picked up his cane and balanced it across his palm, a habit she remembered — a tell for when he was thinking. "I'll walk you to the car." "I walked." A beat. He looked at her — really looked, from her boots to her eyes, the whole of her, the way he had when the door opened and he'd decided to catalogue instead of ask. "At midnight, on foot, from here to Brick Lane," he said. "You'll take a cab, and I'll pay for it." "I don't need your money." "You need the cab." He was already reaching for his coat. "Take the argument with you — there won't be one at the door."
created_at"2026-09-23T09:31:45.497Z" 9/23/2026, 9:31:45 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He stepped aside [aside]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.35
leniency0.7
rawRatio0.048
effectiveRatio0.033
92.66% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1362
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
88.99% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1362
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences79
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences113
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1377
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount964
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.62
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien4
Moreau1
Rory6
Yu-Fei1
Barely1
Marseille1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Yu-Fei"
places
0"Marseille"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"he'd decided, visibly, to find her intere"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1377
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean26.48
std22.3
cv0.842
sampleLengths
0102
133
21
31
426
558
633
765
89
920
109
113
1226
1340
1416
1574
1647
1712
187
1916
203
211
222
2365
2441
258
2639
2747
2850
2916
306
313
3231
3332
343
3528
3640
3737
3859
3921
4046
4117
4210
432
4439
455
4642
472
4835
4920
83.06% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences79
matches
0"being drawn"
1"been tailored"
2"was slicked"
3"was worn"
4"were stacked"
5"been rehearsed"
72.61% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs157
matches
0"was already building"
1"was thinking"
2"was already reaching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences113
ratio0.106
matches
0"Not the quick, assessing glance he gave strangers — a full, slow inventory, starting at her eyes and working down to the courier bag still slung across her chest."
1"Papers were stacked on the small table by the door — bills, by the look of them, and a newspaper with a section circled in red."
2"\"You gave it to me once. The second time I deleted it on purpose.\" She met his amber eye, then his black one — the mismatch had always thrown her for a half-second before her brain caught up."
3"\"So do I. She was my mum's colleague at the school.\" Rory unzipped the courier bag and pulled out a folder — Yu-Fei's takeout receipts, she'd grabbed them off the passenger seat without thinking — and set it on the table on top of his papers."
4"The screen glowed with a waveform — a woman's voice, clipped and frightened, the kind of fear that had been rehearsed so many times it had gone smooth."
5"He held it the way he held everything — like it was evidence and he was already building the case."
6"He didn't cross to her — he moved to the window and looked down at the street, both hands in his pockets."
7"Rory watched his shoulders — the line of them, the way the jacket sat — and understood he'd heard the crack in the sentence as clearly as she had."
8"A laugh escaped before she could catch it — short, involuntary, startled out of her."
9"\"You'll have it by tomorrow.\" He moved past her to the table and pulled a business card from the stack — blank except for a phone number."
10"\"You know how one door works. You've been in one place too long.\" He picked up his cane and balanced it across his palm, a habit she remembered — a tell for when he was thinking."
11"He looked at her — really looked, from her boots to her eyes, the whole of her, the way he had when the door opened and he'd decided to catalogue instead of ask."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount952
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.03361344537815126
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.008403361344537815
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences113
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences113
mean12.19
std10.36
cv0.85
sampleLengths
012
139
27
332
412
54
629
71
81
914
1012
115
1237
1316
1433
159
1624
1726
186
193
206
219
225
236
249
253
265
2715
286
2938
302
315
325
336
3446
3521
367
3730
3815
392
403
419
427
436
4410
453
461
472
4825
4928
64.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.40707964601769914
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners46
45.66% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"Then she took the bag"
ratio0.014
22.74% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences73
matches
0"His platinum hair was slicked"
1"He looked at her."
2"He leaned against the frame"
3"He stepped aside anyway, one"
4"She didn't take off her"
5"She counted them without meaning"
6"he said from behind her"
7"He moved past her toward"
8"She met his amber eye,"
9"He almost smiled"
10"It didn't reach either eye."
11"He lowered himself into the"
12"She stayed standing."
13"He held it the way"
14"He listened to the whole"
15"He said it flatly, without"
16"She'd meant to say it"
17"It came out sharper than"
18"He rose from the chair"
19"He didn't cross to her"
ratio0.493
21.64% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences73
matches
0"The lock gave before her"
1"The sound of a chain"
2"Charcoal suit, no tie, top"
3"His platinum hair was slicked"
4"The ivory head of his"
5"He looked at her."
6"He leaned against the frame"
7"Rory shifted her weight"
8"The carpet beneath her boots"
9"He stepped aside anyway, one"
10"The flat was spare to"
11"A single armchair, a bookshelf"
12"Papers were stacked on the"
13"Everything else was surface and"
14"Rory walked in."
15"She didn't take off her"
16"Lucien closed the door and"
17"She counted them without meaning"
18"he said from behind her"
19"He moved past her toward"
ratio0.877
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"A single armchair, a bookshelf that held more bottle than book, a window left open to the sounds of the street four stories below."
1"The screen glowed with a waveform — a woman's voice, clipped and frightened, the kind of fear that had been rehearsed so many times it had gone smooth."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He lowered, ankle resting on knee"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.033
82.6525%