| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.82% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1572 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 55.47% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1572 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "footsteps" | | 8 | "chill" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 113 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 113 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 134 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 12 | | totalWords | 1603 | | ratio | 0.007 | | matches | | 0 | "everywhere" | | 1 | "is" | | 2 | "present" | | 3 | "What waits between what was and what is." | | 4 | "grown" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.38% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 1405 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.35 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 13 | | London | 1 | | Rory | 19 | | Shade | 1 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Fae | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Heartstone" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.824 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 61.76% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "something like rain on hot stone, something" | | 1 | "something like the inside of a bakery at fou" | | 2 | "as if listening to something at a frequency she couldn't access" | | 3 | "as if listening" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 3.119 | | wordCount | 1603 | | matches | | 0 | "not painfully, but the way staring into bright water did" | | 1 | "not the muted greens and purples of a London park but saturated, impossible colors" | | 2 | "not uniformly but in sequence, a ripple passing through the grove in waves, li" | | 3 | "Not music exactly, but music's older cousin: a deep tone" | | 4 | "not silence but a layered stillness, full of small sounds: the brush of gras" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 60 | | mean | 26.72 | | std | 19.89 | | cv | 0.744 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 59 | | 1 | 1 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 58 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 70 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 55 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 39 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 58 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 64 | | 24 | 30 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 57 | | 30 | 40 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 36 | | 33 | 58 | | 34 | 45 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 56 | | 40 | 48 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 48 | | 45 | 53 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 36 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 37 |
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| 99.05% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "was carved" | | 1 | "being told" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 221 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 30 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 25 | | totalSentences | 134 | | ratio | 0.187 | | matches | | 0 | "It thickened, sweetened, carried scents she had no names for — something like rain on hot stone, something like the inside of a bakery at four in the morning." | | 1 | "Ahead, seven standing stones rose from the earth in a broken circle, each one carved with symbols that hurt to look at directly — not painfully, but the way staring into bright water did." | | 2 | "Someone — something — kept them that way." | | 3 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in every direction — not the muted greens and purples of a London park but saturated, impossible colors." | | 4 | "Above them, the canopy had closed overhead in a vault of interlocking branches, but light came through anyway — not from above." | | 5 | "Not sun-warm — internally warm, like holding a sleeping animal." | | 6 | "Then they laughed — a sound like paper tearing." | | 7 | "Each cap pulsed — not uniformly but in sequence, a ripple passing through the grove in waves, like something breathing." | | 8 | "At its center, a pool of water sat perfectly still, dark as ink, reflecting nothing — no sky, no trees, no faces." | | 9 | "Her reflection rose from the water — but not in sync." | | 10 | "A sound rolled across the hollow — low, rhythmic, resonant." | | 11 | "She pressed her palm to it and felt the pulse sync with the sound — two heartbeats, one hers, one not." | | 12 | "The figure in the surface watched her with her own face — bright blue eyes, straight black hair, the scar on her wrist reflected in wrong places." | | 13 | "Words rose from it, written in silver — not spoken, just *present*, curling up like smoke." | | 14 | "Nyx's hand — solid now, cold and real — settled on Rory's shoulder." | | 15 | "The deep tone faded, and the grove settled into something quieter — not silence but a layered stillness, full of small sounds: the brush of grass against stone, the distant hum of the gold flowers, a wet ticking from somewhere in the ferns." | | 16 | "From here, standing in the hollow, the standing stones at the boundary were visible above the tree line — seven dark shapes against a sky that didn't exist." | | 17 | "The pervasive glow hadn't changed — no angle, no shadow shift to mark hours." | | 18 | "Something moved beneath the blue-black grass — not the wind, because the grass didn't move in wind." | | 19 | "Their bark was carved with the same symbols as the standing stones, and around the largest oak, wildflowers grew in a perfect ring — white, the only white in the grove, blazing like a signal." | | 20 | "Between the oak's roots, a doorway had been cut — not built, *grown* — the wood curving inward into a dark passage that breathed warm air scented with candle wax and dried herbs." | | 21 | "Behind her, Nyx's footsteps — or their absence of footsteps — stopped at the flowers' edge." | | 22 | "Somewhere deep inside, a voice spoke — not clearly, not yet — a cadence like someone reading aloud to themselves." | | 23 | "The air shifted again — warmer, closer, the grove's light dimming as the passage swallowed her." | | 24 | "And the Heartstone at her throat pulsed in rhythm with her own heartbeat — matching it, learning it, one after the other." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1200 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.029166666666666667 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 134 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 134 | | mean | 11.96 | | std | 8.41 | | cv | 0.703 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 29 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 59.45% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.3880597014925373 | | totalSentences | 134 | | uniqueOpeners | 52 | |
| 64.10% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "Then they laughed — a" | | 1 | "Somewhere deep inside, a voice" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "It thickened, sweetened, carried scents" | | 1 | "They tilted their head, the" | | 2 | "She stepped between two of" | | 3 | "Their shadow pooled at their" | | 4 | "She pulled her hand back" | | 5 | "They had stopped at the" | | 6 | "They pushed through the ferns," | | 7 | "They crested the rise and" | | 8 | "She leaned closer." | | 9 | "Her reflection rose from the" | | 10 | "Their violet eyes had gone" | | 11 | "She pressed her palm to" | | 12 | "They descended into the hollow" | | 13 | "It was a surface of" | | 14 | "She held up her right" | | 15 | "She turned and looked back" | | 16 | "They looked smaller than they" | | 17 | "It moved in slow spirals," | | 18 | "Their bark was carved with" | | 19 | "Their form flickered." |
| | ratio | 0.25 | |
| 46.54% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 86 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "The path through Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Rory pushed through a curtain" | | 2 | "The air changed." | | 3 | "It thickened, sweetened, carried scents" | | 4 | "Nyx stepped from the shadow" | | 5 | "They tilted their head, the" | | 6 | "Rory ducked under a low" | | 7 | "Moss covered their bases, but" | | 8 | "Someone — something — kept" | | 9 | "She stepped between two of" | | 10 | "The crescent scar on her" | | 11 | "Their shadow pooled at their" | | 12 | "The world opened." | | 13 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 14 | "Cobalt blooms the size of" | | 15 | "Clusters of pale gold flowers" | | 16 | "The grass between them was" | | 17 | "Nyx drifted forward, their form" | | 18 | "The light came from *everywhere*," | | 19 | "Shadows existed only where something" |
| | ratio | 0.827 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 30.08% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Ahead, seven standing stones rose from the earth in a broken circle, each one carved with symbols that hurt to look at directly — not painfully, but the way sta…" | | 1 | "Cobalt blooms the size of dinner plates nodded on stalks that glowed faintly at the joints." | | 2 | "They had stopped at the edge of a thicket of ferns that reached Rory's shoulder, their head cocked as if listening to something at a frequency she couldn't acce…" | | 3 | "Around its rim, stones arranged themselves in patterns that shifted when Rory looked at them from the corner of her eye." | | 4 | "The mushrooms on the far slope flared in time with each pulse, and the wildflowers in the distance bent toward the hollow as if listening." | | 5 | "They descended into the hollow together, Nyx floating the last few feet, their shadow pooling on the stone before they settled into a solid stance beside her." | | 6 | "It was a surface of slow-moving darkness, viscous, threaded with filaments of silver that swam in lazy spirals." | | 7 | "From here, standing in the hollow, the standing stones at the boundary were visible above the tree line — seven dark shapes against a sky that didn't exist." | | 8 | "Between the oak's roots, a doorway had been cut — not built, *grown* — the wood curving inward into a dark passage that breathed warm air scented with candle wa…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.133 | | leniency | 0.267 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |