Run: 2026-09-23-01M36STR9A7PHVW6V7D05VB9YY

Run Details

Duration:
1m 14s
Cost:
$0.000656
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oak stones stood where the map said they shouldn't. Rory checked her phone again — no signal, no time, the clock frozen at 11:47 — and slipped it into her jacket pocket. The pendant sat against her collarbone, its chain cool against skin that had gone damp from the walk through Richmond Park after dark. She'd told herself she had a reason to be here. The note in her locker at Golden Empress had been specific: *come alone, come at night, bring nothing you can't afford to lose.* Yu-Fei had her keys and the restaurant had closed hours ago. No one knew where she'd gone. The stones themselves were nothing remarkable at first glance — grey, lichen-covered, waist-high, arranged in a loose circle that the borough council probably hadn't sanctioned. But the wildflowers caught her eye. Bulbs of foxglove and clusters of white campion pushed up through frozen ground that should have been dead in November. Their petals held dew in the wrong direction, curving inward instead of cupping outward, and the dew did not fall when she brushed past. She stepped over the boundary between two stones and the air changed. Not temperature — pressure, like the moment before a vacuum seal broke. Her ears popped. The London soundscape she'd grown up ignoring — distant sirens, the hum of the A3, aircraft lighting up the clouds — cut clean, as though someone had struck a record needle across the needle groove. Rory stopped walking. Silence this total felt wrong in her chest. Her own heartbeat came back at her, too loud, thudding in her jaw. The Heartstone Pendant warmed by a single degree. She pressed two fingers to it and felt the pulse — faint, regular, almost like breath. The clearing opened ahead of her. Grass stood green and close-mown despite the hour and the season, and between the blades, wildflowers formed patterns that looked deliberate if she stared long enough. Shapes. Spirals. A fractal that resolved into something like a face when she tilted her head, then dissolved into petals the moment she focused. She kept walking. The reason for being here — the note, the coordinates, the promise of an answer about the pendant and its unknown benefactor — pulled her forward like a hook. The trees pressed in closer than they had before she crossed the stones. Oak, mostly, though some trunks had a bark texture she didn't recognise: smoother than oak, veined like something breathing. A sound reached her from the left. Soft. Rhythmic. Rory turned. Nothing in the trees. The canopy moved without wind, branches rocking in a pattern that synced with the sound. She crouched and put her palm flat on the grass. The vibration came through the ground too — steady, wet, a sound like someone chewing with their mouth closed, amplified through soil. She straightened and took another step. The chewing stopped. The pendant pulsed twice against her skin. She unhooked it from beneath her collar and held it up. The deep crimson gem caught nothing — there was no light source in the grove, and yet the stone showed a faint inner glow, a warmth that didn't illuminate anything but made the darkness around it seem thicker. The pendant's glow swelled and shrank in rhythm, matching the heartbeat she'd felt against her sternum moments before, but slower now. Deliberately slower. Movement at the edge of her vision — low, near the base of the largest oak. Something that might have been a deer. Something that might not. She tracked it with her eyes, but it existed only in the periphery. When she turned her head directly toward the spot, the trunk and its roots stood empty. The grass there was pressed flat in a pattern that radiated outward from the tree, as if something heavy had crouched and then moved away. "Hello?" Her voice came out flat. It didn't carry. In open air like this, it should have bounced off the stone circle and come back to her. It went out and did not return. She called again, louder. "I got your note." The response came from behind her. Not words — a breath, drawn in through what sounded like teeth. Close enough that the back of her neck prickled, close enough that she could smell something under the wildflower scent: wet stone, iron, the smell that rose from the Thames at low tide when the mud beds were exposed. Rory didn't turn around immediately. She held her ground and counted to three — a habit she'd built after leaving Evan, after learning that flinching gave someone else the advantage. The crescent scar on her left wrist tingled, the way it did in cold air, though the grove felt no colder than the park had. She turned. The clearing behind her had changed. The gap between the oak stones where she'd entered — gone. Not hidden. Not overgrown. The grass ran unbroken from her boots to the tree line, and the stones themselves stood in a ring around her at a distance that hadn't existed a moment ago, each one taller now, shoulder-height instead of waist-high, each one bearing a carved symbol she didn't recognise. The symbols looked fresh. The lichen had retreated from their grooves. Her phone, back in her pocket, vibrated once and went still. She pulled it out. The screen showed 11:47 — still frozen — but beneath the time, a single line of text glowed in an interface she didn't recognise: YOU'RE LATE. She locked the screen and put it away. The pendant was hot now — not uncomfortable, but the kind of heat that spoke of proximity. Of something nearby that carried the same energy as the gem in her hand. She'd read about the portal behaviour. The stone pulsed near a Hel portal. She was near something, and it wasn't answering when she spoke. The chewing sound returned, closer this time, to her right. And beneath it, another sound layered underneath — a child's voice, counting backwards. Ten. She walked toward the sound, boots pressing into the dew that still curved the wrong way on the grass. The wildflowers parted around her feet without breaking, stems bending sideways like curtains being drawn aside. Nine. The largest oak occupied the far end of the clearing. Its trunk was wider than her arm span, and its roots broke the surface in a tangle that looked like knuckles. At the base, the grass had been worn away to exposed soil — dark, wet, churned. Eight. Rory knelt at the edge of the churned earth. The soil gave off a faint warmth that had nothing to do with the pendant. She touched it with her fingertips. It pulsed. Seven. She pulled her hand back. The fingerprints she'd left in the soil glowed — crimson, the same colour as the Heartstone — and then the glow bled out of them as though the earth had swallowed it. Six. The tree moved. Not the branches this time. The trunk shifted a fraction of a degree to the left, slow as a closing door, and the roots lifted. Beneath the roots, where solid ground should have been, a gap opened — a space that went down further than roots could reach, a crack in the soil that breathed out air that tasted of iron and deep water. The pendant screamed against her chest. Not warmth now — heat, a searing line of it that drove her to her feet and back two steps. She grabbed the chain and felt the gem pulse so hard it vibrated against her palm, over and over, rapid, the heartbeat of something that had been waiting and knew the wait was over. Five. The chewing stopped. The counting stopped. The silence came back — heavier now, pressing against her eardrums, thick enough to feel in her teeth. The trees around the clearing had turned their trunks so their veined bark faced inward. They weren't breathing anymore. They were watching. Four. Something at the edge of the trees — in the space between two trunks where the darkness stacked up — moved. It didn't crouch or shift weight the way an animal would. It lengthened. A column of dark that grew taller while maintaining its width, rising until it reached the canopy, until it was a shape too tall to exist in this space. Three. The pendant flared white-hot in her grip. The crimson gem split a beam of light outward, a narrow spear aimed straight at the gap beneath the oak's roots, and the beam struck and held, illuminating the crack, illuminating the depth of it — deeper than the grove, deeper than Richmond Park, deeper than any soil should hold — Two.
created_at"2026-09-23T09:33:58.449Z" 9/23/2026, 9:33:58 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.50% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1429
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
33.52% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1429
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"remarkable"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"resolved"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count3
6
word"warmth"
count3
7
word"vibrated"
count2
8
word"churned"
count2
9
word"searing"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"remarkable"
1"silence"
2"pulse"
3"resolved"
4"rhythmic"
5"pulsed"
6"warmth"
7"vibrated"
8"churned"
9"searing"
10"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences118
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences120
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords12
totalWords1458
ratio0.008
matches
0"come alone, come at night, bring nothing you can't afford to lose."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1453
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.34
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Golden1
Empress1
Yu-Fei1
November1
London1
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Thames1
Evan1
Hel1
Two1
Rory5
persons
0"Empress"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Pendant"
3"Evan"
4"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Golden"
3"November"
4"London"
5"Thames"
6"Hel"
globalScore1
windowScore1
55.06% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"something like a face when she tilted her he"
1"sounded like teeth"
2"looked like knuckles"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.686
wordCount1458
matches
0"not uncomfortable, but the kind of heat"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean34.71
std30.02
cv0.865
sampleLengths
0106
175
262
33
445
556
664
79
853
99
1079
1181
121
1333
148
1557
1655
172
1879
1941
2063
2123
221
2335
241
2547
261
2732
281
2937
301
3167
3260
331
343
353
3640
371
3863
391
4058
411
99.32% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences118
matches
0"being drawn"
1"been worn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs238
matches
0"wasn't answering"
1"weren't breathing"
2"were watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount29
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences22
totalSentences120
ratio0.183
matches
0"Rory checked her phone again — no signal, no time, the clock frozen at 11:47 — and slipped it into her jacket pocket."
1"The stones themselves were nothing remarkable at first glance — grey, lichen-covered, waist-high, arranged in a loose circle that the borough council probably hadn't sanctioned."
2"Not temperature — pressure, like the moment before a vacuum seal broke."
3"The London soundscape she'd grown up ignoring — distant sirens, the hum of the A3, aircraft lighting up the clouds — cut clean, as though someone had struck a record needle across the needle groove."
4"She pressed two fingers to it and felt the pulse — faint, regular, almost like breath."
5"The reason for being here — the note, the coordinates, the promise of an answer about the pendant and its unknown benefactor — pulled her forward like a hook."
6"The vibration came through the ground too — steady, wet, a sound like someone chewing with their mouth closed, amplified through soil."
7"The deep crimson gem caught nothing — there was no light source in the grove, and yet the stone showed a faint inner glow, a warmth that didn't illuminate anything but made the darkness around it seem thicker."
8"Movement at the edge of her vision — low, near the base of the largest oak."
9"Not words — a breath, drawn in through what sounded like teeth."
10"She held her ground and counted to three — a habit she'd built after leaving Evan, after learning that flinching gave someone else the advantage."
11"The gap between the oak stones where she'd entered — gone."
12"The screen showed 11:47 — still frozen — but beneath the time, a single line of text glowed in an interface she didn't recognise: YOU'RE LATE."
13"The pendant was hot now — not uncomfortable, but the kind of heat that spoke of proximity."
14"And beneath it, another sound layered underneath — a child's voice, counting backwards."
15"At the base, the grass had been worn away to exposed soil — dark, wet, churned."
16"The fingerprints she'd left in the soil glowed — crimson, the same colour as the Heartstone — and then the glow bled out of them as though the earth had swallowed it."
17"Beneath the roots, where solid ground should have been, a gap opened — a space that went down further than roots could reach, a crack in the soil that breathed out air that tasted of iron and deep water."
18"Not warmth now — heat, a searing line of it that drove her to her feet and back two steps."
19"The silence came back — heavier now, pressing against her eardrums, thick enough to feel in her teeth."
20"Something at the edge of the trees — in the space between two trunks where the darkness stacked up — moved."
21"The crimson gem split a beam of light outward, a narrow spear aimed straight at the gap beneath the oak's roots, and the beam struck and held, illuminating the crack, illuminating the depth of it — deeper than the grove, deeper than Richmond Park, deeper than any soil should hold —"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1431
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.027253668763102725
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.0041928721174004195
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences120
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences120
mean12.15
std10.84
cv0.892
sampleLengths
010
123
223
310
434
56
625
76
820
924
1012
1112
123
1335
143
158
1613
178
1816
196
2026
211
221
2322
243
2529
2613
2719
287
291
301
312
324
3315
3410
3522
366
373
387
3911
4038
4121
422
4316
447
454
4613
4716
4825
491
46.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.35
totalSentences120
uniqueOpeners42
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences98
matches
0"She'd told herself she had"
1"Their petals held dew in"
2"She stepped over the boundary"
3"Her ears popped."
4"Her own heartbeat came back"
5"She pressed two fingers to"
6"She kept walking."
7"She crouched and put her"
8"She straightened and took another"
9"She unhooked it from beneath"
10"She tracked it with her"
11"Her voice came out flat."
12"It didn't carry."
13"It went out and did"
14"She called again, louder."
15"She held her ground and"
16"Her phone, back in her"
17"She pulled it out."
18"She locked the screen and"
19"She'd read about the portal"
ratio0.296
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences98
matches
0"The oak stones stood where"
1"Rory checked her phone again"
2"The pendant sat against her"
3"She'd told herself she had"
4"The note in her locker"
5"The stones themselves were nothing"
6"Bulbs of foxglove and clusters"
7"Their petals held dew in"
8"She stepped over the boundary"
9"Her ears popped."
10"The London soundscape she'd grown"
11"Rory stopped walking."
12"Her own heartbeat came back"
13"The Heartstone Pendant warmed by"
14"She pressed two fingers to"
15"The clearing opened ahead of"
16"Grass stood green and close-mown"
17"A fractal that resolved into"
18"She kept walking."
19"The reason for being here"
ratio0.857
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences59
technicalSentenceCount12
matches
0"The pendant sat against her collarbone, its chain cool against skin that had gone damp from the walk through Richmond Park after dark."
1"The London soundscape she'd grown up ignoring — distant sirens, the hum of the A3, aircraft lighting up the clouds — cut clean, as though someone had struck a r…"
2"Grass stood green and close-mown despite the hour and the season, and between the blades, wildflowers formed patterns that looked deliberate if she stared long …"
3"The deep crimson gem caught nothing — there was no light source in the grove, and yet the stone showed a faint inner glow, a warmth that didn't illuminate anyth…"
4"The grass there was pressed flat in a pattern that radiated outward from the tree, as if something heavy had crouched and then moved away."
5"The grass ran unbroken from her boots to the tree line, and the stones themselves stood in a ring around her at a distance that hadn't existed a moment ago, eac…"
6"The pendant was hot now — not uncomfortable, but the kind of heat that spoke of proximity."
7"Its trunk was wider than her arm span, and its roots broke the surface in a tangle that looked like knuckles."
8"The fingerprints she'd left in the soil glowed — crimson, the same colour as the Heartstone — and then the glow bled out of them as though the earth had swallow…"
9"Not warmth now — heat, a searing line of it that drove her to her feet and back two steps."
10"She grabbed the chain and felt the gem pulse so hard it vibrated against her palm, over and over, rapid, the heartbeat of something that had been waiting and kn…"
11"A column of dark that grew taller while maintaining its width, rising until it reached the canopy, until it was a shape too tall to exist in this space."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
78.7499%