| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 96.50% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1429 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 33.52% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1429 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "remarkable" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "resolved" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "vibrated" | | 8 | "churned" | | 9 | "searing" | | 10 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 118 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 118 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 120 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 49 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 12 | | totalWords | 1458 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "come alone, come at night, bring nothing you can't afford to lose." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 1453 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.34 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | November | 1 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Thames | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Two | 1 | | Rory | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Empress" | | 1 | "Yu-Fei" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Golden" | | 3 | "November" | | 4 | "London" | | 5 | "Thames" | | 6 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 55.06% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "something like a face when she tilted her he" | | 1 | "sounded like teeth" | | 2 | "looked like knuckles" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.686 | | wordCount | 1458 | | matches | | 0 | "not uncomfortable, but the kind of heat" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 34.71 | | std | 30.02 | | cv | 0.865 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 106 | | 1 | 75 | | 2 | 62 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 45 | | 5 | 56 | | 6 | 64 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 53 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 79 | | 11 | 81 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 33 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 57 | | 16 | 55 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 79 | | 19 | 41 | | 20 | 63 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 35 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 47 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 32 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 37 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 67 | | 32 | 60 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 40 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 63 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 58 | | 41 | 1 |
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| 99.32% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "being drawn" | | 1 | "been worn" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 238 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't answering" | | 1 | "weren't breathing" | | 2 | "were watching" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 29 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 22 | | totalSentences | 120 | | ratio | 0.183 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory checked her phone again — no signal, no time, the clock frozen at 11:47 — and slipped it into her jacket pocket." | | 1 | "The stones themselves were nothing remarkable at first glance — grey, lichen-covered, waist-high, arranged in a loose circle that the borough council probably hadn't sanctioned." | | 2 | "Not temperature — pressure, like the moment before a vacuum seal broke." | | 3 | "The London soundscape she'd grown up ignoring — distant sirens, the hum of the A3, aircraft lighting up the clouds — cut clean, as though someone had struck a record needle across the needle groove." | | 4 | "She pressed two fingers to it and felt the pulse — faint, regular, almost like breath." | | 5 | "The reason for being here — the note, the coordinates, the promise of an answer about the pendant and its unknown benefactor — pulled her forward like a hook." | | 6 | "The vibration came through the ground too — steady, wet, a sound like someone chewing with their mouth closed, amplified through soil." | | 7 | "The deep crimson gem caught nothing — there was no light source in the grove, and yet the stone showed a faint inner glow, a warmth that didn't illuminate anything but made the darkness around it seem thicker." | | 8 | "Movement at the edge of her vision — low, near the base of the largest oak." | | 9 | "Not words — a breath, drawn in through what sounded like teeth." | | 10 | "She held her ground and counted to three — a habit she'd built after leaving Evan, after learning that flinching gave someone else the advantage." | | 11 | "The gap between the oak stones where she'd entered — gone." | | 12 | "The screen showed 11:47 — still frozen — but beneath the time, a single line of text glowed in an interface she didn't recognise: YOU'RE LATE." | | 13 | "The pendant was hot now — not uncomfortable, but the kind of heat that spoke of proximity." | | 14 | "And beneath it, another sound layered underneath — a child's voice, counting backwards." | | 15 | "At the base, the grass had been worn away to exposed soil — dark, wet, churned." | | 16 | "The fingerprints she'd left in the soil glowed — crimson, the same colour as the Heartstone — and then the glow bled out of them as though the earth had swallowed it." | | 17 | "Beneath the roots, where solid ground should have been, a gap opened — a space that went down further than roots could reach, a crack in the soil that breathed out air that tasted of iron and deep water." | | 18 | "Not warmth now — heat, a searing line of it that drove her to her feet and back two steps." | | 19 | "The silence came back — heavier now, pressing against her eardrums, thick enough to feel in her teeth." | | 20 | "Something at the edge of the trees — in the space between two trunks where the darkness stacked up — moved." | | 21 | "The crimson gem split a beam of light outward, a narrow spear aimed straight at the gap beneath the oak's roots, and the beam struck and held, illuminating the crack, illuminating the depth of it — deeper than the grove, deeper than Richmond Park, deeper than any soil should hold —" |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1431 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.027253668763102725 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0041928721174004195 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 120 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 120 | | mean | 12.15 | | std | 10.84 | | cv | 0.892 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 34 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 35 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 29 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 38 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 25 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 46.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.35 | | totalSentences | 120 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd told herself she had" | | 1 | "Their petals held dew in" | | 2 | "She stepped over the boundary" | | 3 | "Her ears popped." | | 4 | "Her own heartbeat came back" | | 5 | "She pressed two fingers to" | | 6 | "She kept walking." | | 7 | "She crouched and put her" | | 8 | "She straightened and took another" | | 9 | "She unhooked it from beneath" | | 10 | "She tracked it with her" | | 11 | "Her voice came out flat." | | 12 | "It didn't carry." | | 13 | "It went out and did" | | 14 | "She called again, louder." | | 15 | "She held her ground and" | | 16 | "Her phone, back in her" | | 17 | "She pulled it out." | | 18 | "She locked the screen and" | | 19 | "She'd read about the portal" |
| | ratio | 0.296 | |
| 31.43% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 84 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak stones stood where" | | 1 | "Rory checked her phone again" | | 2 | "The pendant sat against her" | | 3 | "She'd told herself she had" | | 4 | "The note in her locker" | | 5 | "The stones themselves were nothing" | | 6 | "Bulbs of foxglove and clusters" | | 7 | "Their petals held dew in" | | 8 | "She stepped over the boundary" | | 9 | "Her ears popped." | | 10 | "The London soundscape she'd grown" | | 11 | "Rory stopped walking." | | 12 | "Her own heartbeat came back" | | 13 | "The Heartstone Pendant warmed by" | | 14 | "She pressed two fingers to" | | 15 | "The clearing opened ahead of" | | 16 | "Grass stood green and close-mown" | | 17 | "A fractal that resolved into" | | 18 | "She kept walking." | | 19 | "The reason for being here" |
| | ratio | 0.857 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant sat against her collarbone, its chain cool against skin that had gone damp from the walk through Richmond Park after dark." | | 1 | "The London soundscape she'd grown up ignoring — distant sirens, the hum of the A3, aircraft lighting up the clouds — cut clean, as though someone had struck a r…" | | 2 | "Grass stood green and close-mown despite the hour and the season, and between the blades, wildflowers formed patterns that looked deliberate if she stared long …" | | 3 | "The deep crimson gem caught nothing — there was no light source in the grove, and yet the stone showed a faint inner glow, a warmth that didn't illuminate anyth…" | | 4 | "The grass there was pressed flat in a pattern that radiated outward from the tree, as if something heavy had crouched and then moved away." | | 5 | "The grass ran unbroken from her boots to the tree line, and the stones themselves stood in a ring around her at a distance that hadn't existed a moment ago, eac…" | | 6 | "The pendant was hot now — not uncomfortable, but the kind of heat that spoke of proximity." | | 7 | "Its trunk was wider than her arm span, and its roots broke the surface in a tangle that looked like knuckles." | | 8 | "The fingerprints she'd left in the soil glowed — crimson, the same colour as the Heartstone — and then the glow bled out of them as though the earth had swallow…" | | 9 | "Not warmth now — heat, a searing line of it that drove her to her feet and back two steps." | | 10 | "She grabbed the chain and felt the gem pulse so hard it vibrated against her palm, over and over, rapid, the heartbeat of something that had been waiting and kn…" | | 11 | "A column of dark that grew taller while maintaining its width, rising until it reached the canopy, until it was a shape too tall to exist in this space." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |