Run: 2026-09-23-01M36SXN8AADAFEWGMFC5ZVX5G

Run Details

Duration:
1m 38s
Cost:
$0.002744
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past eleven, three sharp raps with the knuckle, no urgency and no apology. Rory set down the scroll she'd been pretending to read and listened to the curry-house smell of Brick Lane drift up through the floorboards. Ptolemy lifted his head from the mountain of research notes on the armchair, tabby ears swivelling toward the door. Nobody knocked like that. Eva knocked like she was trying to wake the dead, and the landlord knocked like a man delivering bad news who wanted to get it over with. Delivery drivers buzzed from downstairs. This was precise. Measured. The knock of a man who had already decided how the evening would go and was simply announcing it. She crossed the cramped flat in four steps, past towers of books that leaned over the narrow path like crooked tenements, past the scrolls stacked on the kitchen counter next to Eva's unwashed teacups, and stood on her toes to look through the peephole. Charcoal wool. Silk knot. The top of a platinum head. Her stomach dropped out from under her and she stood very still, one hand flat against the door, until it came back. He hadn't seen her. He couldn't — not through the peephole, not from out there in the dim landing above the curry house. And yet, as if he'd felt the shift of her weight on the creaking boards, Lucien Moreau turned his head and looked directly at the lens with that impossible mismatched gaze — one eye amber as whisky, one eye black as a well with no bottom — and the corner of his mouth moved. She undid the first deadbolt. Then the second. Her fingers were steady and she hated that her pulse was not. The third bolt slid back with a sound like a bone setting. She opened the door three inches and stood in the gap. "You're a long way from anywhere useful, Lucien." "Rory." He said her name the way he always had, the r softening toward the French, as if he were tasting something he'd been rationed. "May I come in?" "It's twenty to twelve." "It is. I have been standing on this landing for eleven minutes trying to decide whether to knock. I concluded that descending the stairs again would be more embarrassing than being turned away." He looked, she thought, expensive and exhausted. The charcoal suit fit him the way only his suits did, cut close through the shoulders, the silk tie a muted bronze that made the amber eye look lit from inside. His hair was slicked back but a single platinum strand had escaped across his temple. The ivory-handled cane rested against his right leg — his weight settled slightly off true on the landing's narrow boards. She'd once watched him kill a man with the blade hidden inside it and she'd never been able to look at the thing as an affectation since. "Who told you I was here?" she asked. "Eva." "Eva's in Cardiff." "Yes, she was admirably forthcoming over the phone. She also told me where the spare key is and suggested I make you eat something." He paused. "I declined to use the key. That is why I knocked." Some tight wire behind her ribs pulled taut and stayed there. Of course he'd declined. He would. He had made a career of knowing which doors to open and he had stood on this filthy landing for eleven minutes rather than turn a lock on her unawares. "Eva's got a lot to answer for," Rory said, and stepped back from the door. He came in sideways — not out of caution but out of courtesy, folding himself through the gap she'd left him, and even so the flat seemed to shrink around him. The smell of him moved in first: bergamot, clean wool, something dark underneath that wasn't quite smoke and wasn't quite spice and had no name in any of the four languages he spoke fluently. Ptolemy stood up on the armchair, stretched, and wound himself once around Lucien's cane-hand with immediate and total betrayal. "Ptolemy," Rory said. "Traitor." The cat purred like a small engine. Lucien bent — carefully, one hand braced on his thigh — and scratched behind the tabby's ears with two fingers, and Rory watched the lean of his shoulders and understood that he was hurt worse than the suit admitted. "Sit down," she said. "Before you fall down. Move the cat first — no, those notes are Eva's life's work, sit there. Do you want whisky? Eva keeps the cheap stuff in the —" "The cabinet above the kettle. I remember." He eased himself onto the second-hand sofa and set the cane across his knees. "Whisky would be kind." She poured two fingers into a mug with a chipped lip and one finger into a glass for herself, and handed him the mug. Their fingers touched on the transfer and she pulled away a half-beat too slowly, and he noticed, because he noticed everything, and said nothing, because he knew exactly how much unsaid things were costing them both and had apparently decided to keep paying. "When did you eat last?" she asked. "You sound like Eva." "Eva's not here. Answer the question." "This afternoon. In passing. A slice of something at a café in Belgravia while I waited for a man who did not arrive." "Which means you didn't eat." She turned to the counter, shoved aside a scroll weighted down with a butter knife, and started assembling bread and cheese and the cold roast chicken she'd bought for herself and been too restless to touch. "And which means you spent the evening doing something that ended badly. Because nobody comes to Brick Lane at half eleven looking like that unless it ended badly." Behind her, silence. She heard the creak of the sofa as he leaned back, heard the slow careful breath he took, and when she turned with the plate he was watching her with both eyes steady and one hand loose around the mug and an expression she had last seen in a rain-dark doorway in Soho eleven weeks ago, the night she had told him she couldn't do this with him and had walked away before he could argue. That night he had let her go. That was the part she could not forgive. "Eat," she said, and put the plate on the stack of books beside him. He ate. She sat cross-legged in the armchair with Ptolemy immediately reinstalling himself on her lap, and drank her small glass of whisky, and pretended to read Eva's notes while the silence thickened with everything neither of them had said in eleven weeks. "Six ribs," Lucien said at last, around a piece of chicken, mildly. "Two cracked, one badly. A demon of the lower court who felt his contract had been unfairly renegotiated." "Unfairly by you." "I renegotiate. I do not cheat. There is a difference, and it is a difference he had three hours to consider while I explained it." "And you're here because?" "Because the gentleman I was to meet in Belgravia sold that same demon the address of this flat." The notes blurred. Rory looked up. Ptolemy's purr faltered against her leg as her hand stilled on his spine. "He sold —" "Your address, no. Eva's. But you have been staying here for six days, Rory. I checked. I have been checking." He set the plate down, half-finished but half-finished was more than she'd expected. "I told the gentleman that if anything happened to anyone in this building I would find out where his mother lived, and he wept, and gave me everything he knew, and I came here. That is why I am here. It is entirely practical." "Entirely practical," she repeated. "Entirely." "You stood on the landing for eleven minutes being entirely practical." His mouth did the thing again. In the low light from Eva's anglepoise lamp the black eye was depthless and the amber one was warm and the mismatch should have been unsettling and instead it was the face she had watched, three months ago, while he talked a bound lesser demon out of a warehouse in Rotherhithe in perfect, patient Latin, and thought, with a kind of quiet terror: oh, no. Not this one. "I stood on the landing," Lucien said, "because the last time I saw you, you told me that whatever this was, it was finished. And I have respected that. I have respected it badly and reluctantly and in four languages, but I have respected it. And I did not wish to arrive at your door at midnight and have you think I was using an excuse." "And yet here you are at midnight with an excuse." "And yet here I am." He held her gaze and did not look away and did not soften it into charm, and that was the worst of him, that he could strip the whole performance away and simply be a man on a sofa with cracked ribs and a chipped mug, waiting to be told to leave. Rory set her whisky on the floor. She pulled up the sleeve of her jumper to scratch her wrist out of habit, and the small crescent scar there caught the lamplight, and she watched him look at it, and she remembered that he knew what it was from, and where the other scars were, and which nights she woke up gasping and what to say and — more importantly — what not to. "There's a demon who thinks he knows where my best friend sleeps," she said. "Yes." "And you came here to stand between that and her." "I came here to tell you. The standing is a matter I would prefer to discuss." "There's nothing to discuss. If he comes here —" "If he comes here, you will do something brilliant and reckless and improvised, and I will be somewhere in the vicinity being entirely practical, and we will both survive it, and then in the morning I will make you coffee and you will tell me to go, and I will go." He lifted the mug. "But that is the morning. It is not yet the morning." Ptolemy climbed off her lap, offended by the tension, and stalked to the kitchen to sit in the sink. Rory looked at the empty warm spot he'd left on her legs, and at Lucien Moreau, immaculate and bruised, drinking cheap whisky out of a chipped mug in the middle of a flat buried in research, having spent eleven minutes on a filthy landing because he would not open a door she hadn't opened first. "You didn't have to respect it badly and reluctantly in four languages," she said. "In that case," he said, and the amber eye was very warm, "I take it entirely back." She laughed before she could stop it, short and graceless, and watched his whole face change at the sound of it — watched the fixer fall away, the broker, the man who spoke four languages and wore charcoal like armour and hid a blade in a cane, and saw just Lucien, thirty-two years old and Marseille-born and impossibly tired, startled into hope at the sound of her laughing in a cramped flat above a curry house at midnight. Something cracked open in her chest where the wire had been pulled tight. "That's my mug, by the way," she said. "Eva's got no whisky worth the name and you're drinking out of my mug." "Should I be flattered?" "You should be careful. That mug's the only thing in this flat I own." He looked down at it, turning it in his fingers as if it were something far finer than it was, and when he looked up the black eye glistened and the amber one burned. "Then I will guard it with my life," he said, "and you will tell me to go in the morning, and I will go." "In the morning," she agreed. Outside, Brick Lane stank of cardamom and rain and closing time. Inside, the anglepoise lamp threw their shadows long across Eva's towers of books, and Ptolemy sang a small complaint from the sink, and Lucien Moreau stayed. Neither of them said anything at all. It was, Rory thought, the loudest silence of her life.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.389
leniency0.778
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.96% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2054
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"reluctantly"
count2
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
2"carefully"
3"slowly"
4"reluctantly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2054
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"silk"
count2
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"silence"
count3
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"charm"
count1
8
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"silk"
2"stomach"
3"weight"
4"pulse"
5"silence"
6"perfect"
7"charm"
8"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
74.01% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences83
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen79
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2065
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions29
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1423
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.56
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Brick2
Lane2
Eva5
Lucien8
Moreau3
French1
Rory8
Soho1
Ptolemy6
Rotherhithe1
Latin1
Marseille-born1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Rory"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"French"
3"Soho"
4"Rotherhithe"
5"Marseille-born"
globalScore1
windowScore1
57.41% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite smoke and wasn't quite spice and had no name in any of the four languages he spoke fluently"
1"quite spice and had no name in any of the four languages he spoke fluently"
2"m both and had apparently decided to keep pay"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.484
wordCount2065
matches
0"not out of caution but out of courtesy, folding himself through the gap she'd left"
80.46% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences116
matches
0"hated that her"
1"understood that he"
2"remembered that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs71
mean29.08
std26.02
cv0.894
sampleLengths
018
143
259
344
410
522
677
732
811
98
1029
114
1233
13100
148
151
163
1737
1847
1915
2084
214
2246
2334
2425
2567
267
274
286
2923
3069
3179
3215
3314
3443
3530
363
3725
384
3918
4019
413
4277
434
441
4511
4674
4766
4810
495
92.58% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences83
matches
0"been rationed"
1"was slicked"
2"been pulled"
63.39% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs244
matches
0"was trying"
1"was simply announcing"
2"were tasting"
3"were costing"
4"was watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences116
ratio0.06
matches
0"He couldn't — not through the peephole, not from out there in the dim landing above the curry house."
1"And yet, as if he'd felt the shift of her weight on the creaking boards, Lucien Moreau turned his head and looked directly at the lens with that impossible mismatched gaze — one eye amber as whisky, one eye black as a well with no bottom — and the corner of his mouth moved."
2"The ivory-handled cane rested against his right leg — his weight settled slightly off true on the landing's narrow boards."
3"He came in sideways — not out of caution but out of courtesy, folding himself through the gap she'd left him, and even so the flat seemed to shrink around him."
4"Lucien bent — carefully, one hand braced on his thigh — and scratched behind the tabby's ears with two fingers, and Rory watched the lean of his shoulders and understood that he was hurt worse than the suit admitted."
5"She pulled up the sleeve of her jumper to scratch her wrist out of habit, and the small crescent scar there caught the lamplight, and she watched him look at it, and she remembered that he knew what it was from, and where the other scars were, and which nights she woke up gasping and what to say and — more importantly — what not to."
6"She laughed before she could stop it, short and graceless, and watched his whole face change at the sound of it — watched the fixer fall away, the broker, the man who spoke four languages and wore charcoal like armour and hid a blade in a cane, and saw just Lucien, thirty-two years old and Marseille-born and impossibly tired, startled into hope at the sound of her laughing in a cramped flat above a curry house at midnight."
97.41% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1094
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.04296160877513711
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.014625228519195612
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean17.8
std17.28
cv0.97
sampleLengths
018
124
219
34
427
55
63
71
819
944
102
112
126
1322
144
1519
1654
175
183
1912
2012
2111
228
2325
244
254
2633
277
2831
2915
3020
3127
328
331
343
3526
3611
3711
384
392
4030
4115
4231
4334
4419
453
461
477
4839
494
66.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.4396551724137931
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners51
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences66
matches
0"Then the second."
1"Of course he'd declined."
ratio0.03
44.24% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences66
matches
0"She crossed the cramped flat"
1"Her stomach dropped out from"
2"He hadn't seen her."
3"He couldn't — not through"
4"She undid the first deadbolt."
5"Her fingers were steady and"
6"She opened the door three"
7"He said her name the"
8"He looked, she thought, expensive"
9"His hair was slicked back"
10"She'd once watched him kill"
11"He had made a career"
12"He came in sideways —"
13"He eased himself onto the"
14"She poured two fingers into"
15"Their fingers touched on the"
16"She turned to the counter,"
17"She heard the creak of"
18"she said, and put the"
19"She sat cross-legged in the"
ratio0.439
20.61% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences66
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Rory set down the scroll"
2"Ptolemy lifted his head from"
3"Nobody knocked like that."
4"Eva knocked like she was"
5"Delivery drivers buzzed from downstairs."
6"This was precise."
7"The knock of a man"
8"She crossed the cramped flat"
9"The top of a platinum"
10"Her stomach dropped out from"
11"He hadn't seen her."
12"He couldn't — not through"
13"She undid the first deadbolt."
14"Her fingers were steady and"
15"The third bolt slid back"
16"She opened the door three"
17"He said her name the"
18"He looked, she thought, expensive"
19"The charcoal suit fit him"
ratio0.879
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
48.87% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Eva knocked like she was trying to wake the dead, and the landlord knocked like a man delivering bad news who wanted to get it over with."
1"She crossed the cramped flat in four steps, past towers of books that leaned over the narrow path like crooked tenements, past the scrolls stacked on the kitche…"
2"And yet, as if he'd felt the shift of her weight on the creaking boards, Lucien Moreau turned his head and looked directly at the lens with that impossible mism…"
3"She laughed before she could stop it, short and graceless, and watched his whole face change at the sound of it — watched the fixer fall away, the broker, the m…"
4"He looked down at it, turning it in his fingers as if it were something far finer than it was, and when he looked up the black eye glistened and the amber one b…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she repeated (repeat)"
1"she agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.296
leniency0.593
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.074
79.8890%