| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 25 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 50 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.04 | | effectiveRatio | 0.04 | |
| 89.83% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1967 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "gently" | | 3 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 87.29% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1967 | | totalAiIsms | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "traced" | | 1 | "etched" | | 2 | "intricate" | | 3 | "magnetic" | | 4 | "unwavering" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 112 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 65 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1986 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 1238 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.29 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 16 | | Camden | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 | | Kowalski | 1 | | British | 1 | | Museum | 1 | | Eva | 13 | | Tucked | 1 | | Wren | 1 | | Scene | 1 | | Crime | 1 | | Shade | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Kowalski" | | 3 | "Museum" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Wren" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.854 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 99.30% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.007 | | wordCount | 1986 | | matches | | 0 | "not brick and not pipe but a dark vertical gap" | | 1 | "not pipe but a dark vertical gap" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 51 | | mean | 38.94 | | std | 32.83 | | cv | 0.843 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 77 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 115 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 78 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 68 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 63 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 54 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 48 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 59 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 34 | | 25 | 60 | | 26 | 77 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 62 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 77 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 65 | | 33 | 75 | | 34 | 72 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 45 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 30 | | 39 | 56 | | 40 | 71 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 109 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 96 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 115 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 85.33% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "been opened" | | 1 | "being asked" | | 2 | "were gone " | | 3 | "was untouched" | | 4 | "been made" |
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| 24.56% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 190 | | matches | | 0 | "was polishing" | | 1 | "was looking" | | 2 | "was pointing" | | 3 | "was pointing" | | 4 | "was looking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 112 | | ratio | 0.116 | | matches | | 0 | "The stairs from the street came down in three flights, and by the second one Harlow Quinn could smell it — wet lime, iron, and the cold mineral breath of a place that had not been opened in years." | | 1 | "The rails were long since lifted; where they had been there was only ballast and standing water, black and still." | | 2 | "The stalls of the Veil Market were gone — three nights from the full moon, and the traders packed up and moved the way they always did, leaving nothing but chalk, a scatter of bent nails, and the ghost of a striped awning's shadow on the tiled wall." | | 3 | "Fifties, maybe sixties; thinning hair; the calloused hands of someone who counted things for a living." | | 4 | "They came from the north staircase — the stairs she had just descended — and they went straight across the platform to where the body lay." | | 5 | "Her knees protested; she ignored them." | | 6 | "But the victim's footprints ran right over the chalk, three, four, five steps, and crossed the line itself — and where they crossed, the chalk was untouched, lying in its crisp ridge on top of his own print, undisturbed." | | 7 | "The wound under Wren's ribs nagged at her — a single clean puncture, hardly any blood for it, the shirt soaked in a patch no bigger than a hand." | | 8 | "Small brass, casing filmed with verdigris, face etched around its rim with sigils far more intricate than the chalk forgery on the floor — the work of a Shade artisan, Eva had told her once, when Quinn had first seen one in an evidence tray and asked why the needle was pointing at the wall." | | 9 | "The needle stood at an angle to the platform, steady as a plumb line, aimed at a patch of cream tiling beneath the station's ghost-sign — the words half scrubbed away, a destination that trains had stopped serving in 1968." | | 10 | "She put her gloved hand flat against it and felt, very faintly, a current of air — warm, organic, moving." | | 11 | "It came away with a soft grating sound, and behind it was not brick and not pipe but a dark vertical gap, and the warm breath of it touched her face, and the compass in her other hand jumped — the needle whipping round twice and settling, pointing into the hole as if it had found a home." | | 12 | "\"A story.\" Quinn checked her watch out of habit — half past five, the leather strap soft and dark with eighteen years of use." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1228 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.03257328990228013 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007328990228013029 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 112 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 112 | | mean | 17.73 | | std | 14.76 | | cv | 0.832 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 39 | | 1 | 38 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 26 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 29 | | 44 | 29 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 61.61% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.4017857142857143 | | totalSentences | 112 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 55.62% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "She looped it over her" | | 1 | "Her round glasses had steamed" | | 2 | "She tucked her curly red" | | 3 | "She stopped, tucking hair behind" | | 4 | "She was looking at the" | | 5 | "They came from the north" | | 6 | "They came down the stairs," | | 7 | "She nodded at the dead" | | 8 | "She let that sit" | | 9 | "Her knees protested; she ignored" | | 10 | "She took out her torch" | | 11 | "She let the torch beam" | | 12 | "She was shorter by half" | | 13 | "Her breath went out of" | | 14 | "She pushed her glasses up" | | 15 | "she said quietly" | | 16 | "She looked at Quinn" | | 17 | "She pushed her glasses up" | | 18 | "He had not bled like" | | 19 | "He had bled somewhere else," |
| | ratio | 0.411 | |
| 35.34% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "The stairs from the street" | | 1 | "A constable at the cordon" | | 2 | "She looped it over her" | | 3 | "The rails were long since" | | 4 | "The stalls of the Veil" | | 5 | "Someone had swept." | | 6 | "Someone always swept, and then" | | 7 | "Eva Kowalski stood just beyond" | | 8 | "Her round glasses had steamed" | | 9 | "She tucked her curly red" | | 10 | "Eva's freckled nose wrinkled" | | 11 | "Quinn crouched at the tape" | | 12 | "The man lay on his" | | 13 | "Fifties, maybe sixties; thinning hair;" | | 14 | "Lividity had already fixed purple" | | 15 | "A single dark wound showed" | | 16 | "Eva said it with the" | | 17 | "She stopped, tucking hair behind" | | 18 | "Quinn did not answer." | | 19 | "She was looking at the" |
| | ratio | 0.849 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 48.87% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva Kowalski stood just beyond the chalk line, her satchel slung across her body as if the restricted archives of the British Museum might close up and expire w…" | | 1 | "Fifties, maybe sixties; thinning hair; the calloused hands of someone who counted things for a living." | | 2 | "The needle stood at an angle to the platform, steady as a plumb line, aimed at a patch of cream tiling beneath the station's ghost-sign — the words half scrubbe…" | | 3 | "It came away with a soft grating sound, and behind it was not brick and not pipe but a dark vertical gap, and the warm breath of it touched her face, and the co…" | | 4 | "It pointed into the dark behind the tiles with the patient, unwavering certainty of a thing that had been made to find exactly this, and would not be argued wit…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 25 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 50 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |