Run: 2026-09-23-01M36T3VBYZJCXCJ4D2PZSZ5XY

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Duration:
6m 50s
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$0.132744
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain worried the paint off the doorframe of The Raven's Nest. Rory shouldered in, insulated bag knocking her hip, and the green neon over the lintel stuttered before it laid a thin wash of colour across the wet boards. The bar held its dark close. Old maps covered the walls, coastlines browned at every fold. Between them, black-and-white photographs kept faces stopped mid-laugh or mid-lie. She set the bag by the coat stand. Ginger and hot oil clung to her jacket from a last run for the Golden Empress. Upstairs the flat had a dead bulb and a kettle with opinions. Down here the lamps worked. A man stood at the far end of the counter, back to the door, one palm on the wood, the other working a cloth through a glass. Auburn hair had gone grey at the temples. The beard followed the jaw, cut close. When he turned, the left leg arrived after the right, the knee declining the full trust of the step. Hazel eyes found her. The cloth stopped in the bowl of the glass. Rory left her hand on the strap. Eight years occupied the boards between them, and neither of them offered those years a smile. "Aurora." "Nobody uses that." She took a stool and laid her wrist on the bar. The crescent scar showed pale against the grain. "Rory. If you're pouring." Silas Blackwood set the glass down. The silver signet on his right hand clicked against the rim. He looked at the scar, then at her hair, black and straight and cut to the shoulder, rain gathered at the tips. "Rory." The voice carried the low grain she remembered from her mother's dining room in Cardiff, though the polish had come off it. "I had you taller." "Five six. Same as the Sunday you told Mum her gravy was a diplomatic incident. You were long in the leg and sure of the room." His mouth moved. Not a smile. He took down a bottle and poured a measure of whisky that caught the lamps. The glass travelled to her along the wood. She left it where it stopped. "Two sugars in the tea. And a row with the Telegraph before your coat was off." "I rowed with a lot of things that year." "You used to lift the ginger nuts from Jennifer's tin and deal them under the table. Called it rent for sitting through Brendan's port." "You took the broken one every time and looked pleased with the sacrifice." "I was educating you." "You were hiding from the port." He came down the bar. The limp set the rhythm, no apology in the shoulders, no show in the pace. He halted opposite her. Cedar and metal came off him, and the faint bite of spirit on his cuff. Lines had cut in beside the eyes. He took his place behind the wood as if the counter had been built to the measure of that limp and that ring. "Your father wrote. After Prague. I left the letter in a drawer until the drawer became the answer." She turned her glass a quarter inch. The scar pulled taut. Nicks crossed her knuckles, crate wire and cold handlebars, and his gaze snagged on them before he picked up the cloth and set it down again. "Brendan writes to anyone he reckons owes him a clean paragraph. He wanted me in chambers. I wanted a door that locked from my side. We called it a debate until the debate packed a bag." "Pre-Law." "Gone." His glance took the delivery bag, the damp cuffs, the oil on her sleeve. "This, then." "London, then. A shift that ends when the last carton leaves Yu-Fei's pass. A flat with a tap that shrieks and a landlord I hadn't put a face to. You can save the bit about wasted promise. I run that one on the bike, and the bike never tips." "I don't do promise. I do measures, and I do the books." He set his right hand on the counter. The ring sat dull under the lamps. "The sign outside covers the rent. I cover what the sign won't." A photograph behind his shoulder showed a bridge and a coat turned half away from the lens. She put no city to it. He offered none. The missing name pressed on the talk the way a gap in the teeth presses the tongue. "You knew someone was upstairs." "The agent sent a name. Laila. I took it for a whim. People pick light names when they don't want the post to find them." "Eva wrote Laila on the form. Aurora Carter gets found too fast, and Evan still has mates with nothing better to do than ring round." Rory lifted the whisky and drank. Heat tracked down and settled. "I didn't know the bar was yours. Side door, odd hours. No reason to come in and stare at the man who takes the rent." "And tonight." "Bulb's dead. Corner shop shut at nine. Your lamps were on." "An accident, then." "A door and a thirst. Don't hang ribbons on it." A man in a wet mac pushed in, stamped water off his shoes, and lifted two fingers. Silas moved to pull a pint. The left knee made a small mechanical complaint he treated as weather. He set the pint down, took the coins, came back without rush. The newcomer carried his drink to a table under a map of the Baltic and bent over his phone. "You pour like a man who's had years of being looked past." "Useful in this trade." He drew a second glass and gave himself a finger of the same whisky. He drank standing, weight on the good leg. "Useful in the one before it, as well." "Dad called it an accident. He used the voice he saves for adjourned. I was nineteen. I had a seminar in the morning and a boy who went quiet and mean any time I put another person's name in the room." Her fingers stayed loose around the glass. "So I stopped putting your name in it. After a while the stopping cost me nothing." "I counted on Brendan to keep you aimed. Barrister's girl. Quick enough to take a qualifying course apart and post me the wreckage." He studied the rings her glass had printed on the wood. "Wrong about the course. Not wrong about the quick." "You don't know what I am." "I know you marked the exit, the till, and the mac before you sat. I know the bag stays where your eye can find it. I know that scar is old, a gate or a fall, and the thing that put you on a night coach out of Cardiff left no mark you mean to show a stranger." His eyes came up level with hers. "I'm not a stranger. That's the awkward bit." Rory's jaw set. She turned the glass. The lamp swam and broke. "The scar is a gate. I was eight. Jennifer tells it as a lesson about wet stone." She set her thumb over the crescent and lifted it clear. "The rest doesn't get a telling. Not for a drink I didn't order." "Then we leave it." "You already spent Prague in the first minute and my father in the second. You want a matching coin from me so the scales look honest." "I want to know if the girl who took a columnist apart over Sunday roast still sits behind the new name, or if London kept the name and handed me a tenant." "Both. She takes things apart in her head, on landings, in the half-minute before a customer decides to be a problem. She doesn't sit exams. She doesn't ring Cardiff. She delivers rice to people who call her darling and get the darling wrong, and she sleeps over a bar with maps on the walls because Eva found the listing and the listing forgot to mention you." Silas shifted his weight. The floorboard under the left shoe had learned him and kept its peace. "I told you a thing, that Sunday. Jennifer went tight around the mouth. Brendan hid his pride behind the salt cellar. You'd pulled a leader writer to pieces for sport." "I remember the roast. I don't remember a blessing." "I said a degree comes and goes. Nerve had better stay, because no one returns it once you've spent it on being pleasant." His thumb found the signet and turned it. "Then Prague took the knee in a courtyard I don't describe, and I never wrote to learn which of the two you kept." Rory looked at the bag by the coat stand. Red, scuffed, loud among the brown photographs. She looked at his hand. She left the bridge alone. "I kept the nerve. I spent the degree on a man who liked the sound of his own key in my lock. If that crowns your old advice, keep the crown. I'm not selling you a lesson for the price of a measure." "I'm not in the market for a lesson. I'm late. That's smaller, and it sits worse." He left the word where it was. She didn't reach for it. The second man's phone lit the Baltic and went dark. "Mum thinks I'm enrolled. I let the thought stand. Easier than five-spice in the coat and Yu-Fei's hours." Her eyes followed a route on the nearest map. Cardiff, the channel, the smear of streets they stood in. "If I ring, Dad hears a failure of planning. He offers a train fare and a talk on reputation. He doesn't ask about landings. He never has." "He asked about mine." "And you filed the letter." Silas took that without a shift of the beard. The eyes gave more away. He reached under the till, brought out a cardboard packet, and set a bulb on the wood beside her glass. Cheap glass, brass thread, the kind corner shops lose first. "For upstairs." "Take that and this turns into a kindness. Kindness sands the years down until they look planned." "The years aren't planned. The bulb has no opinion." He left his hand near it, not on it. "You can owe me nothing and still see the stairs." Sound left her, too small for a laugh. "You did that in Cardiff as well. A hard line, then a useful object, so nobody could charge you with softness." She nudged the bulb. It rolled a half inch and stopped against the glass. "Eva said this street stays calm if you don't go hunting trouble. She left out the green sign, the limp, and the man who used to deal biscuits under my mother's table." "Retired." "A word for the door, so the questions wipe their feet and go." "What word do you put up, when someone asks where Aurora Carter went?" She kept her hands flat on the wood. "I tell them Rory does the round and keeps her own key. I tell them she's faster than the ones who stayed in the library, because their seminars never put a man on the landing counting her pauses. I don't tell them I build cross-examinations while the lift takes its time. I don't tell them I practise what I'd say to Brendan if I had the spine for a phone call, or to you if you ever turned up pouring drinks under a flat I already paid for. Those stay where I put them." "Until a dead bulb." "Until a dead bulb." He poured again, her glass, then his. The bottle met the wood with a short knock. Rain worked at the neon. The man in the mac turned his pint and left them to it. "Ask it. The one you carried in with the bag. It's been at your teeth since the cloth stopped." Rory held the glass and did not drink. Her thumb found the scar and left it alone. "Did you ever mean to write back?" Silas's thumb rested on the bottle. The signet gave a dull glint. His mouth opened, shut, and stayed shut. The bulb sat on the wood between them, and neither of them touched it.
created_at"2026-09-23T09:38:56.517Z" 9/23/2026, 9:38:56 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2037
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
90.18% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2037
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"mechanical"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"glint"
count1
highlights
0"mechanical"
1"weight"
2"glint"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences91
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences159
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen95
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2037
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount902
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.67
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Golden1
Empress1
Blackwood1
Cardiff2
Baltic2
Rory6
Silas5
persons
0"Raven"
1"Blackwood"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2037
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences159
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs103
mean19.78
std17.65
cv0.892
sampleLengths
065
141
261
313
423
51
63
719
84
939
101
1122
124
1326
1435
1516
169
1724
1813
194
206
2169
2218
2337
2436
251
261
2714
282
2949
3012
3115
3212
3343
345
3525
3625
3711
3825
392
4011
413
4210
4366
4412
454
4622
478
4841
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"been built"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs140
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences159
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount906
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.012141280353200883
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences159
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences159
mean12.81
std12.18
cv0.951
sampleLengths
011
128
26
310
410
58
616
712
85
927
108
117
1219
134
149
157
1616
171
183
1911
208
214
226
2311
2422
251
2622
274
2826
293
303
3115
328
336
3416
359
3624
3713
384
396
405
4115
424
4315
447
4523
4618
477
484
4926
55.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3710691823899371
totalSentences159
uniqueOpeners59
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
61.76% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences91
matches
0"She set the bag by"
1"She took a stool and"
2"He looked at the scar,"
3"His mouth moved."
4"He took down a bottle"
5"She left it where it"
6"He came down the bar."
7"He halted opposite her."
8"He took his place behind"
9"She turned her glass a"
10"His glance took the delivery"
11"He set his right hand"
12"She put no city to"
13"He offered none."
14"He set the pint down,"
15"He drew a second glass"
16"He drank standing, weight on"
17"Her fingers stayed loose around"
18"He studied the rings her"
19"His eyes came up level"
ratio0.396
20.44% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences91
matches
0"Rory shouldered in, insulated bag"
1"The bar held its dark"
2"She set the bag by"
3"Ginger and hot oil clung"
4"A man stood at the"
5"Auburn hair had gone grey"
6"The beard followed the jaw,"
7"Hazel eyes found her."
8"The cloth stopped in the"
9"Rory left her hand on"
10"She took a stool and"
11"The crescent scar showed pale"
12"Silas Blackwood set the glass"
13"The silver signet on his"
14"He looked at the scar,"
15"The voice carried the low"
16"His mouth moved."
17"He took down a bottle"
18"The glass travelled to her"
19"She left it where it"
ratio0.879
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.5978%