Run: 2026-09-23-01M36T819TR1RC29H0RS9WQEEA

Run Details

Duration:
1m 15s
Cost:
$0.002366
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came three times, each one spaced with the kind of patience that belonged to someone used to doors being closed against him. Rory stood on the other side with her hand on the middle deadbolt and her weight on her bare feet, the floorboards cold against her soles. She counted to five before turning the lock. Lucien Moreau filled the narrow doorway of the flat above Silas' bar in a charcoal overcoat still beaded with London rain. His platinum hair kept its shape despite the weather. The ivory cane rested against his forearm like an afterthought. Those mismatched eyes — one amber, one black — moved over her face and then dropped to the oversized Manchester United shirt she'd slept in. "You look—" He stopped. Adjusted the cuff of his shirt beneath the coat sleeve. "I should have called." "You don't have my number." "I have everyone's number." A corner of his mouth pulled upward without permission. "I chose not to use it. There's a difference." Rory leaned against the doorframe and crossed her arms over the crest on her chest. The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the hallway light. Behind her, the flat smelled of the takeaway containers on the counter and the clove tea gone cold on the windowsill. Rain streaked the glass over Brick Lane. A siren wound through the wet streets three floors below. "You've got about thirty seconds before I close this," she said. "Silas locks the bar at two and I've got a shift at eight." "It's midnight." "Twenty-eight seconds." Lucien exhaled through his nose — the closest thing to a laugh he allowed in doorways. He reached into his overcoat and produced a folded piece of paper, cream-coloured, heavy stock. He held it out between two fingers like a card trick. "Eva sent me." He watched her face for the flinch. She didn't give it to him. "She's been going through the archives at the Bodelian. Found something connected to the Malphora name." Rory didn't take the paper. Her eyes stayed on his, and the silence between them thickened the way it always had — with the shape of the last conversation neither of them had finished. Rain dripped from the hem of his coat onto the threshold. "Eva has my number too," Rory said. "Eva has my address. Eva has a key to my spare deadbolt. Eva doesn't need a half-demon fixer from Marseille to hand-deliver her research." "No." Lucien lowered the paper an inch. The amber eye caught the light. "She doesn't." The unspoken thing sat in the gap. Rory shifted her weight to one hip. Somewhere downstairs, a glass broke and Silas' baritone rolled through the floor joists like distant thunder. "Come in, then." She stepped back from the door and turned toward the kitchen counter without waiting to see if he followed. He did. The door clicked shut behind him and she heard the deadbolts slide into place — not the sound of trust, but of someone who'd learned to lock rooms behind her. Lucien paused inside the flat and took in the narrow corridor lined with Ella's old record sleeves and takeaway menus held up with blu-tack. The bed sat in the corner past the half-wall, unmade, a paperback face-down on the pillow. He removed his overcoat and folded it over the back of the single wooden chair at the small table. Beneath it, a tailored waistcoat hugged his ribs. He set the cane against the wall and his hand lingered on the ivory handle for a beat before letting go. "You cut your hair," he said. "And you aged about a year." She filled the kettle and set it on the burner without looking at him. "Last time I saw you, you told me I was a liability and walked out of Waterloo station. That was eleven months ago. You want tea or do you want to explain why you're here?" Lucien settled into the chair he'd hung his coat on, one leg crossed over the other, hands folded on his knee. The posture of a man conducting business. But his gaze tracked the movement of her hands at the counter — the way she pinched tea leaves from a tin, the crease between her dark eyebrows that deepened when she concentrated. "Both." His voice dropped half a register. "Tea first. I find I explain myself better with something warm in my hands." "You explained yourself fine at Waterloo. Crystal clear. 'You're a liability to the operation, Rory, and I don't work with liabilities.'" She mimicked his accent with surgical precision and poured the boiling water so hard it splashed the side of the mug. "I remember the words. I remember the platform number. I remember the way you didn't look back when you went through the gates." Lucien's jaw tightened. A muscle jumped beneath the skin of his cheek. He looked at the ceiling — the water-stained plaster, the exposed bulb — and then back at her. "What I said was true." He picked at a thread on his trouser knee. "You were in danger. My work put you in danger and I could not—" He stopped. Swallowed. Started again in French and then caught himself and switched back. "I needed you away from me. The words were wrong. The intention was not." Rory set the mug on the table in front of him. The tea steamed between them. She sat on the edge of the unmade bed instead of the other chair and pulled her knees up, her chin resting on the shelf of her crossed arms. The lamplight carved shadows under her cheekbones. Bright blue eyes held his amber and black ones across four feet of bare floorboard. "You could have told me that." Her voice came out flat. Controlled. The voice she used on angry customers and ex-boyfriends who called from blocked numbers. "You could have picked up a phone. Sent a message. Shouted it through the gates at Waterloo before the train pulled out. Eleven months, Lucien." "I know how long it's been." "Do you? Because I've been counting and it feels like longer." He picked up the tea and drank. The steam fogged the space between them and then cleared. He set the mug down and leaned forward, elbows on his knees, hands open in a gesture she'd never seen from him before — nothing concealed, no blade in the cane, no card up the sleeve. "After I left," he said, "I went to Marseille. To my mother's house. She asked about you before she asked about my work. Before she asked about my father. She asked about the Welsh girl with the scar on her wrist who used to make her laugh on the telephone." Rory's fingers tightened around her elbows. "You told your mother about me." "I told everyone about you. That was the problem." His mismatched eyes dropped to his open palms. "In my line of work, the people you love become leverage. I learned that lesson young and I have never once forgotten it. When I said you were a liability, I did not mean you were a weakness in the operation. I meant that someone would use you to hurt me, and I would burn this city to the foundation before I let that happen." The kettle ticked on the cooling burner. Rain fingered the window. Downstairs, the muffled thump of Silas' speakers pushed bass through the walls like a second heartbeat. "That's not fair," Rory said. Quiet, but the words landed with weight. "You don't get to leave me on a platform and then come back with poetry." "No poetry." Lucien straightened. His hand found the ivory handle of the cane and his fingers wrapped around it — a reflex, a comfort. "Just facts. I came back because Eva found the Malphora reference and because I could not spend one more morning in Marseille without standing in this doorway. Both things can be true." She unfolded from the bed and crossed to the table. She stood over him and he tilted his face up to meet her eyes. This close, the rain smell of his coat mingled with the clove tea and something beneath it — cedar, tobacco, the faint sulfur trace of the bloodline he hid beneath Savile Row tailoring. She reached out and straightened the knot of his tie. Her fingertips brushed the hollow of his throat and she felt his pulse jump against the pad of her thumb. "If you walk out again," she said, "you don't come back. Platform, doorway, anywhere. We're done the second that door closes behind you a second time. Are we clear?" Lucien captured her wrist — the one without the scar — and pressed his thumb into the pulse point there. Her heartbeat hammered against his skin in a rhythm that betrayed the steel in her voice. "Crystal," he said. "Good." She didn't pull her hand away. Her thumb traced the line of his collar and stopped at the knot she'd just fixed. "Now tell me what Eva found in the archives."
created_at"2026-09-23T09:41:13.663Z" 9/23/2026, 9:41:13 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"his mouth pulled upward [upward]"
1"She stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.548
leniency1
rawRatio0.087
effectiveRatio0.087
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1507
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.82% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1507
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"weight"
count3
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"unspoken"
count1
3
word"crystal"
count2
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"silence"
2"unspoken"
3"crystal"
4"pulse"
5"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
96.88% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount1
maxSentenceWordsSeen65
ratio0.01
matches
0"\"After I left,\" he said, \"I went to Marseille. To my mother's house. She asked about you before she asked about my work. Before she asked about my father. She asked about the Welsh…"
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1520
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount981
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.82
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Manchester1
United1
Adjusted1
Rory8
Brick1
Lane1
Lucien8
Ella1
Swallowed1
French1
Controlled1
Quiet1
Savile1
Row1
Rain3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Rory"
2"Lucien"
3"Ella"
4"Row"
5"Rain"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"French"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.658
wordCount1520
matches
0"not the sound of trust, but of someone who'd learned to lock rooms behind her"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean37.07
std23.09
cv0.623
sampleLengths
058
165
218
35
422
564
624
72
82
942
1032
1145
1231
1315
1430
1522
1672
1748
186
1955
2061
2121
2265
2330
2456
2567
2651
276
2811
2953
3050
3112
3282
3327
3427
3556
3687
3729
3836
393
4032
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs160
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences105
ratio0.095
matches
0"Those mismatched eyes — one amber, one black — moved over her face and then dropped to the oversized Manchester United shirt she'd slept in."
1"Lucien exhaled through his nose — the closest thing to a laugh he allowed in doorways."
2"Her eyes stayed on his, and the silence between them thickened the way it always had — with the shape of the last conversation neither of them had finished."
3"The door clicked shut behind him and she heard the deadbolts slide into place — not the sound of trust, but of someone who'd learned to lock rooms behind her."
4"But his gaze tracked the movement of her hands at the counter — the way she pinched tea leaves from a tin, the crease between her dark eyebrows that deepened when she concentrated."
5"He looked at the ceiling — the water-stained plaster, the exposed bulb — and then back at her."
6"He set the mug down and leaned forward, elbows on his knees, hands open in a gesture she'd never seen from him before — nothing concealed, no blade in the cane, no card up the sleeve."
7"His hand found the ivory handle of the cane and his fingers wrapped around it — a reflex, a comfort."
8"This close, the rain smell of his coat mingled with the clove tea and something beneath it — cedar, tobacco, the faint sulfur trace of the bloodline he hid beneath Savile Row tailoring."
9"Lucien captured her wrist — the one without the scar — and pressed his thumb into the pulse point there."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount520
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.021153846153846155
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean14.48
std10.7
cv0.739
sampleLengths
024
126
28
321
49
510
625
74
810
94
105
1113
129
1315
1411
1521
167
1710
1811
1913
202
212
2216
2315
2411
2510
266
2716
285
2929
3011
317
3224
337
346
352
367
377
3816
3922
402
4130
4224
4316
4419
458
4621
476
4820
4935
65.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.41904761904761906
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners44
93.90% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences71
matches
0"Somewhere downstairs, a glass broke"
1"Bright blue eyes held his"
ratio0.028
62.25% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences71
matches
0"She counted to five before"
1"His platinum hair kept its"
2"He reached into his overcoat"
3"He held it out between"
4"He watched her face for"
5"She didn't give it to"
6"Her eyes stayed on his,"
7"She stepped back from the"
8"He removed his overcoat and"
9"He set the cane against"
10"She filled the kettle and"
11"His voice dropped half a"
12"She mimicked his accent with"
13"He looked at the ceiling"
14"He picked at a thread"
15"She sat on the edge"
16"Her voice came out flat"
17"He picked up the tea"
18"He set the mug down"
19"His mismatched eyes dropped to"
ratio0.394
16.34% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences71
matches
0"The knock came three times,"
1"Rory stood on the other"
2"She counted to five before"
3"Lucien Moreau filled the narrow"
4"His platinum hair kept its"
5"The ivory cane rested against"
6"Those mismatched eyes — one"
7"A corner of his mouth"
8"Rory leaned against the doorframe"
9"The crescent scar on her"
10"Rain streaked the glass over"
11"A siren wound through the"
12"Lucien exhaled through his nose"
13"He reached into his overcoat"
14"He held it out between"
15"He watched her face for"
16"She didn't give it to"
17"Rory didn't take the paper."
18"Her eyes stayed on his,"
19"Rain dripped from the hem"
ratio0.887
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
86.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The door clicked shut behind him and she heard the deadbolts slide into place — not the sound of trust, but of someone who'd learned to lock rooms behind her."
1"But his gaze tracked the movement of her hands at the counter — the way she pinched tea leaves from a tin, the crease between her dark eyebrows that deepened wh…"
2"Her heartbeat hammered against his skin in a rhythm that betrayed the steel in her voice."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.2578%