Run: 2026-09-23-01M36TDK06RYNJZ2H6TRQYBNQ6

Run Details

Duration:
1m 59s
Cost:
$0.003471
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came sideways off the canal and Quinn ran. Her shoes slapped the wet flagstones three paces behind the grey hood. Purcell. Lean, fast, stupid enough to bolt, which meant the satchel on his hip held something worth more than the five years he'd get for resisting. She had his shoulder blade in her mind like a target. Forty-one years old and eighteen of them spent chasing men down alleys, and her lungs still burned the same way they had at twenty-three. "Police! Stop!" Purcell cut left across the bridge without looking at traffic. A taxi threw up a wall of spray and the horn went off like a slap. Quinn hurdled the kerb, badge held out in her fist, and the driver's shouting dissolved behind her. Camden Lock churned black below. Stallholders hauled tarpaulins over their tables as the storm thickened, and Purcell shouldered through them, sending a crate of candles across the pavement. "Get out of the way! Move!" Quinn vaulted the crate. Wax skated underfoot and she punched one hand against a stall post to keep her balance, hard enough to sting the meat of her palm. Ahead, Purcell stuffed something into his mouth. His jaw worked once, twice. A coin, a chip, something small and pale. He swallowed. She filed it. Later. He plunged into the alley behind the market row, the narrow service cut that stank of bin water and old hops. Quinn went in after him. Fire escapes criss-crossed overhead and the rain found every gap in the brickwork. Her watch, the leather darkened to the colour of wet rope, read five past eleven. Full moon behind all that cloud. Every drunk and pickplock in Camden had gone to ground hours ago and the city had that hollow sound it kept for trouble. Purcell hit the end of the alley and dropped. Vanished. Not a door, not a wall — the ground took him. Quinn slowed. Slowed again. Her torch found a flight of iron steps descending into a rectangle of deeper dark, the rail bolted to Victorian brick, the treads furred with grit and mineral bloom. A maintenance entrance. Council signage hung off one screw, and beneath it someone had screwed on a plate of their own, hand-cut steel, letters punched through with a nail. CLOSED. ALL TRAFFIC. TAKE YOUR DEAD DOWN WITH YOU. "Quinn to Control." She keyed the radio at her collar and got static for an answer. Tried again. Rain on the roof of the alley roared like applause. Dead air below ground, and the city had never once given her a signal when she needed one. She switched it off and clicked the torch to steady. The stairs turned twice. Forty steps, she counted, then a corridor with cable trays sagging from the ceiling and puddles standing in the dips of the floor. The smell shifted. Wet stone gave way to something else underneath — saltpetre, tallow smoke, and a sweetness like burnt sugar and copper filings. Alchemy. The word surfaced unbidden and she pushed it down with the others, the ones she kept in the same drawer as Morris and the chalk marks on the ceiling of that warehouse in Bermondsey. Then the corridor opened, and the noise hit her. A vault. Tiled walls the colour of old teeth, arched ceiling vaulting thirty feet over head, and down the length of a dead Tube platform a market sprawled in the light of three hundred lanterns. Canvas awnings. Trestle tables heaped with things that glimmered wrong — jars of moving liquid, feathers too large for any bird, coins stacked in columns that leaned without falling. Figures moved between the stalls, hooded, gloved, faces turned away from anyone who looked too long. A woman with silver in her eyes haggled over a bundle of dried hands. A man in a pinstripe suit bought a jar and the jar screamed once as he pocketed it. Quinn's fingers found the warrant card in her coat and left it there. The Veil Market. The name had crossed her desk three times in two years and every time it evaporated — informants who recanted, surveillance photographs that came back fogged, a raid on a warehouse in Wapping that found six kilos of flour and one very confused customs officer. Purcell moved along the platform thirty yards ahead, shoulders down, blending. He reached a barrier of iron railings manned by a figure the size of a wardrobe — waxed coat, shaved skull, hands like two raw steaks. Purcell opened his mouth and produced a token from under his tongue. Bone, pale and carved. The big man took it between finger and thumb, bit it, and stood aside. Quinn walked. Measured pace. Torch down. The crowd parted for her the way crowds do for anyone who refuses to look at them, and she reached the railings as Purcell's grey hood went down the far stairwell toward the southbound tunnel. "Evening." The big man filled the gap in the railings. Up close he had a burn scar pulling at one ear and eyes that sat in his face like two stones in dough. "Token." "I don't have one." "Then you don't go down." Quinn raised the warrant card. Metropolitan Police. Detective Inspector. She watched his eyes read it and felt the familiar cold slot machine of her stomach waiting for the lever to pull. He smiled. He had most of his teeth and they were too small for his head. "Nice picture. Who's that then, when he's up top?" "That's me when I'm down here too. Move aside." "Market's older than your badge. Older than your lot's whole building." He folded his hands in front of his belt. "Rules is tokens. Don't make 'em, don't sell 'em. Man's got one in his gob, man passes. Woman's got one in her hand, woman passes. Nothing else speaks down here." "Then I'll speak for the man who just went through with a satchel full of whatever he took off a seventeen-year-old in Kentish Town. Step aside or add obstructing a police officer to whatever else you've got going tonight." "Harlow." The voice came from the stairwell behind the railings. Tomás Herrera climbed the last few steps with a canvas roll of instruments under one arm and a wad of bloodied cloth in his fist. Wet dark curls stuck to his forehead and the Saint Christopher medallion caught a lantern's light as he straightened to his full height. He looked at the big man, then at the card in her hand, then at the stairwell Purcell had vanished down. "You picked tonight to go shopping." "Your friend in the doorway is keeping me out." "Our friend in the doorway keeps all of us honest." Tomás set the canvas roll on the rail and unwound it, revealing steel that had no business being in a paramedic's kit — probes, clamps, a saw with teeth ground thin. He began wiping them clean with the cloth. The scar along his left forearm shone pink where the rain had got to it. "I'm in there stitching a man whose kneecap came out of its case. Nine minutes of work and I've been asked to look at two more before midnight. Nobody down here wants police above them and police below them." "Purcell crippled a boy for a box of pills." "Purcell." Tomás tested the edge of a probe against his thumb and nodded to himself. "Grey hood, drinks his tokens early so nobody can take them off him. Yes. He's down there and he'll be up through Kentish Town before the lanterns go out, and if you go after him now, with no token and no idea what you're walking into—" He stopped. Looked at her straight on with those warm brown eyes gone flat and careful. "That market changes location every full moon. Tonight is the night. Everyone inside knows it. Everyone inside is buying the things they can only buy once a month, and half of them would cut their own grandmother for a jar of what's on those tables. You walk in there with a badge, you are not a detective. You're a hostage with paperwork." "Then give me a token and let me be a detective." The big man behind the railings made a sound in his chest. Tomás wiped the last of the blood off the saw and rolled the kit closed. He reached into his shirt and lifted the Saint Christopher over his head, chain and all, and held it out on his palm. From beneath the roll of canvas he produced a disc of pale carved bone, drilled at one edge, warm from his skin. He pressed the medallion into her free hand and the token between her finger and thumb. "Bone gets you past him. The saint gets you back up the stairs." Quinn looked at the token. Small. Smooth on one face, scored with marks she couldn't read. Somewhere below, in the dark of the southbound tunnel, Purcell's footsteps had long since gone. The boy in Kentish Town was fifteen, not seventeen, and he'd hold a fractured cheekbone for the rest of his life. She closed her fist.
created_at"2026-09-23T09:44:15.628Z" 9/23/2026, 9:44:15 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.261
leniency0.522
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.73% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1528
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
80.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1528
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"churned"
count1
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"fractured"
count1
highlights
0"churned"
1"measured"
2"familiar"
3"stomach"
4"footsteps"
5"fractured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences97
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences114
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen62
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1534
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount1207
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity0.83
worstName"Purcell"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Purcell"
discoveredNames
Quinn9
Lock1
Purcell10
Camden2
Victorian1
Tried1
Morris1
Bermondsey1
Tube1
Veil1
Market1
Wapping1
Police1
Inspector1
Herrera1
Saint2
Christopher2
Looked1
Kentish1
Town1
Tomás4
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Lock"
2"Purcell"
3"Morris"
4"Market"
5"Herrera"
6"Saint"
7"Christopher"
8"Tomás"
places
0"Victorian"
1"Bermondsey"
2"Wapping"
3"Kentish"
4"Town"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1534
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences114
matches
0"photographs that came"
1"eyes that sat"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean38.35
std35.14
cv0.916
sampleLengths
010
173
22
371
46
551
64
783
821
962
109
1156
1286
139
14112
1513
1648
1767
1841
1934
204
215
2231
2325
249
2550
2639
271
2878
296
309
31103
329
33139
3411
3512
3676
3713
3852
394
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs185
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences114
ratio0.053
matches
0"Not a door, not a wall — the ground took him."
1"Wet stone gave way to something else underneath — saltpetre, tallow smoke, and a sweetness like burnt sugar and copper filings."
2"Trestle tables heaped with things that glimmered wrong — jars of moving liquid, feathers too large for any bird, coins stacked in columns that leaned without falling."
3"The name had crossed her desk three times in two years and every time it evaporated — informants who recanted, surveillance photographs that came back fogged, a raid on a warehouse in Wapping that found six kilos of flour and one very confused customs officer."
4"He reached a barrier of iron railings manned by a figure the size of a wardrobe — waxed coat, shaved skull, hands like two raw steaks."
5"\"Our friend in the doorway keeps all of us honest.\" Tomás set the canvas roll on the rail and unwound it, revealing steel that had no business being in a paramedic's kit — probes, clamps, a saw with teeth ground thin."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1205
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.021576763485477178
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences114
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences114
mean13.46
std11.63
cv0.864
sampleLengths
010
112
21
325
411
524
62
710
816
917
105
1123
126
134
1425
157
165
178
182
193
201
2121
225
2313
2415
256
2623
279
281
2911
302
312
3229
333
3426
351
362
376
3816
392
4010
4118
4210
434
4423
453
4621
471
4834
499
85.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5350877192982456
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners61
86.58% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences77
matches
0"Then the corridor opened, and"
1"Somewhere below, in the dark"
ratio0.026
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences77
matches
0"Her shoes slapped the wet"
1"She had his shoulder blade"
2"His jaw worked once, twice."
3"She filed it."
4"He plunged into the alley"
5"Her watch, the leather darkened"
6"Her torch found a flight"
7"She keyed the radio at"
8"She switched it off and"
9"He reached a barrier of"
10"She watched his eyes read"
11"He had most of his"
12"He folded his hands in"
13"He looked at the big"
14"He began wiping them clean"
15"He reached into his shirt"
16"He pressed the medallion into"
17"She closed her fist."
ratio0.234
89.87% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences77
matches
0"The rain came sideways off"
1"Her shoes slapped the wet"
2"She had his shoulder blade"
3"Purcell cut left across the"
4"A taxi threw up a"
5"Quinn hurdled the kerb, badge"
6"Camden Lock churned black below."
7"Stallholders hauled tarpaulins over their"
8"Quinn vaulted the crate."
9"Wax skated underfoot and she"
10"His jaw worked once, twice."
11"A coin, a chip, something"
12"She filed it."
13"He plunged into the alley"
14"Quinn went in after him."
15"Her watch, the leather darkened"
16"Every drunk and pickplock in"
17"Purcell hit the end of"
18"Her torch found a flight"
19"A maintenance entrance."
ratio0.74
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Lean, fast, stupid enough to bolt, which meant the satchel on his hip held something worth more than the five years he'd get for resisting."
1"Trestle tables heaped with things that glimmered wrong — jars of moving liquid, feathers too large for any bird, coins stacked in columns that leaned without fa…"
2"The name had crossed her desk three times in two years and every time it evaporated — informants who recanted, surveillance photographs that came back fogged, a…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
91.3072%