Run: 2026-09-23-01M36TF4B8H23PF268E9Q9X0GA

Run Details

Duration:
1m 3s
Cost:
$0.000725
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts gave way one by one, and Rory pushed the door open with her hip, both hands full of brown paper bags that smelled of cumin and fried onion. Ptolemy darted past her ankles before she could block him with her foot, a streak of tabby fur vanishing into the stacks. "Don't," she called after him. He was already halfway up a scroll tower. She kicked the door shut behind her with her heel and crossed the flat in four strides, setting the bags on the only clear patch of counter beside Eva's hot plate. A stack of notes slid sideways. She caught the top sheet, read the same line she'd read six times that afternoon — *Avaros, second ring, binding language unconfirmed* — and dropped it back. The knock came through the thin door like a knuckle on bone. Rory's hand went to the counter, fingers pressing into the laminate. Three solid raps. Measured. Whoever stood on the other side of that door had never learned to hurry. She wiped her palms on her jeans, crossed the flat again, and slid the last deadbolt. Lucien Moreau filled the narrow doorway in a charcoal suit that hadn't lost a crease despite the November rain. Water collected at the shoulders of his overcoat and ran in thin lines down the lapels. His platinum hair was slicked back, not a strand out of place, and the ivory handle of his cane caught the hallway light. "Aurora." Nobody called her that. Nobody but him. "What are you doing here, Lucien?" He didn't answer. His amber eye moved past her shoulder, cataloguing the flat — the books stacked in knee-high columns along the skirting, the open laptop casting blue light over Eva's desk, the open container of lo mein on the windowsill. His black eye stayed on her. "Are you going to invite me in, or do I stand in the stairwell until the curry house closes?" Rory stepped back. Not far. Just enough. He crossed the threshold and the flat shrank around him. He moved through the clutter without touching anything, which took a kind of calculation she recognized — the same way he'd moved through the back rooms of clubs, through negotiations, through her life eight months ago, always one step short of contact. His coat dripped onto Eva's floor. She fetched a dish towel from the hook and tossed it at him. He caught it, folded it once, and draped it over the coat rack. "You could have called." "I did. Thursday. And Friday." That landed somewhere beneath her ribs. She looked at the laptop screen, at the search tab still open to a real estate listing she'd been staring at for two hours without reading. "I was busy." "You were avoiding me." He set his cane against the wall with a soft click. "Which is different, and you know it." Rory leaned against the counter, arms crossed. The crescent scar on her wrist pressed against her forearm where she'd folded tight. Outside, a taxi horn sounded three floors down and Ptolemy meowed at a paper bag and the whole building creaked in the wind off Brick Lane. "Say what you came to say." Lucien pulled a chair out from under a stack of research notes, shook the papers free, and sat. He rested his hands on the cane between his knees, fingers laced, and the picture he made — the tailored wool, the heterochromatic stare, the way the lamplight carved his cheekbones — was almost aggressively composed. "The Voss contract dissolved," he said. "Three days ago. When your friend's notes hit the network, someone pulled the binding language out from under every broker in the second ring. Including me." "I didn't pull anything. Eva did." "Eva did it with your encryption key." He tilted his head. "And you handed her the key." "She asked for help." "And you gave it without knowing what she'd use it for." He said it flat, the way he might read a line of ledger. Not accusation. Observation. "That's not like you." Rory's jaw tightened. "You don't know what I'm like." "I know what you were." His amber eye held hers. "I know what happened in September, and I know you left my flat before I finished the sentence." The silence went long. Ptolemy knocked a scroll off the tower and it rolled under the desk. Neither of them moved to pick it up. "You didn't finish the sentence," she said. "No." The word sat between them, small and enormous. Lucien uncrossed his hands. He turned the cane slightly, the ivory grip catching light, and something in his expression shifted — not softened, exactly, but loosened, the way a knot gives when you stop pulling the wrong direction. "I came to tell you the Voss people are looking for whoever broke the contract," he said. "They traced the key. It leads to this postcode." He paused. "They will come here." Rory pushed off the counter. "When?" "Soon. Hours, not days." He stood. "I can fix it. I fix things. That's what I do." His black eye caught shadow. "But I need you to stop running long enough to let me." "I'm not running." The words came out sharper than she intended. She rubbed her thumb across the scar on her wrist. "I live here. I deliver spring rolls for Yu-Fei. I sit on this floor at two in the morning reading notes I don't understand about a realm I can't pronounce. That's not running, Lucien." "No." He stepped closer. Not close enough to touch — he never came close enough — but close enough that she caught the cedar and tobacco under the rain. "That's hiding. And there is a difference, even if you'd rather pretend there isn't." Rory's throat worked. She looked at his mouth, then away, at the wall of books behind him, at the photograph Eva had pinned to the corkboard — the two of them at seventeen, squinting into the Cardiff sun, before London, before Evan, before any of this. "You said you'd finish the sentence in September," she said. "Eight months of silence, and you show up soaked to the collar because someone traced a key." "Six weeks," he corrected. "I left London six weeks ago. Before that I called you every Thursday and Friday for two months and you let it ring." He held her gaze. "I have never been patient, Aurora. You know that. I became patient for you, and you made me regret it." The room went quiet except for the radiator ticking behind a shelf of paperbacks. Rory unfolded her arms. She reached for the lo man, peeled the lid off, and set it on the counter between them with a pair of chopsticks she dug out of a drawer. The steam rose and curled. "Eat," she said. Lucien looked at the container, then at her. The corner of his mouth moved — not a smile, but the memory of one. "This is not an answer." "It's dinner." She pulled out the chair across from his and sat. "You can fix your contract problem after." He stayed standing a moment longer, rain still darkening the shoulders of his coat, and the whole flat seemed to hold its breath around them. Then he crossed the space, took the chopsticks from her hand — his fingers grazed hers and neither of them pulled away — and sat down. Ptolemy leapt onto the table between them, tail high, and Lucien looked at the cat with an expression Rory had never seen on his face before. "He bites." "He doesn't." The cat sniffed Lucien's knuckles and settled into a loaf against the salt shaker. Rory picked up her own chopsticks and watched him eat — watched the precise way he lifted noodles, the slight furrow between his brows, the amber eye catching lamplight while the black one stayed flat and unreadable. She'd missed this. The shape of him at a table, ordinary and impossible in the same breath. "Thursday and Friday," she said. He looked up. "The days you called. I knew." She stabbed a piece of chicken and didn't eat it. "I kept the ringer on." Something crossed his face — quick, like a fish under dark water — and was gone. "Eat your dinner, Aurora." She ate. Outside, the rain thickened against the window, and the curry house below sent up the smell of toasted spice through the floorboards, and Ptolemy purred between them like he'd been there all along. Lucien reached for the notes she'd stacked beside the laptop and pulled the top sheet toward him. "*Second ring, binding language unconfirmed*." He set it down. "Confirmed now. I'll write it out." "Your handwriting is terrible." "My handwriting is precise." He slid the sheet back. "You'll see." Rory leaned forward, elbows on the table, close enough now that the cedar under the rain was all she could smell. "Then write it. Tonight." He met her eyes — amber and black, side by side — and nodded once. "Tonight."
created_at"2026-09-23T09:45:06.158Z" 9/23/2026, 9:45:06 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.393
leniency0.786
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.65% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1494
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.92% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1494
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"traced"
count2
3
word"unreadable"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"silence"
2"traced"
3"unreadable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"room fell silent"
count1
highlights
0"The room went quiet"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences91
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords11
totalWords1512
ratio0.007
matches
0"Avaros, second ring, binding language unconfirmed"
1"Second ring, binding language unconfirmed"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount1112
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.99
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory11
Eva4
Moreau1
November1
Ptolemy5
Brick1
Lane1
Cardiff1
London1
Evan1
Lucien7
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Moreau"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Evan"
5"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
67.72% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.323
wordCount1512
matches
0"not softened, exactly, but loosened, the way a knot gives"
1"not a smile, but the memory of one"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs69
mean21.91
std18.24
cv0.832
sampleLengths
053
15
28
364
412
529
616
758
81
97
106
1147
1219
137
1452
1532
164
175
1832
193
2022
2147
226
2354
2432
256
2617
274
2831
299
3028
3125
327
331
348
3538
3632
376
3834
3955
4043
4146
4227
4351
4414
4538
463
4723
485
4919
97.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences91
matches
0"was slicked"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs181
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount18
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences125
ratio0.096
matches
0"She caught the top sheet, read the same line she'd read six times that afternoon — *Avaros, second ring, binding language unconfirmed* — and dropped it back."
1"His amber eye moved past her shoulder, cataloguing the flat — the books stacked in knee-high columns along the skirting, the open laptop casting blue light over Eva's desk, the open container of lo mein on the windowsill."
2"He moved through the clutter without touching anything, which took a kind of calculation she recognized — the same way he'd moved through the back rooms of clubs, through negotiations, through her life eight months ago, always one step short of contact."
3"He rested his hands on the cane between his knees, fingers laced, and the picture he made — the tailored wool, the heterochromatic stare, the way the lamplight carved his cheekbones — was almost aggressively composed."
4"He turned the cane slightly, the ivory grip catching light, and something in his expression shifted — not softened, exactly, but loosened, the way a knot gives when you stop pulling the wrong direction."
5"Not close enough to touch — he never came close enough — but close enough that she caught the cedar and tobacco under the rain."
6"She looked at his mouth, then away, at the wall of books behind him, at the photograph Eva had pinned to the corkboard — the two of them at seventeen, squinting into the Cardiff sun, before London, before Evan, before any of this."
7"The corner of his mouth moved — not a smile, but the memory of one."
8"Then he crossed the space, took the chopsticks from her hand — his fingers grazed hers and neither of them pulled away — and sat down."
9"Rory picked up her own chopsticks and watched him eat — watched the precise way he lifted noodles, the slight furrow between his brows, the amber eye catching lamplight while the black one stayed flat and unreadable."
10"Something crossed his face — quick, like a fish under dark water — and was gone."
11"He met her eyes — amber and black, side by side — and nodded once."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1095
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.0273972602739726
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0036529680365296802
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean12.1
std10.14
cv0.839
sampleLengths
031
122
25
38
431
56
627
712
811
93
101
1114
1216
1319
1416
1523
161
174
183
196
203
2138
226
2319
243
252
262
2710
2842
296
3013
3113
324
335
346
3526
363
3715
387
397
4014
4126
426
4318
4436
456
4626
476
4811
496
57.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.376
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners47
43.86% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"Then he crossed the space,"
ratio0.013
35.79% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences76
matches
0"she called after him"
1"He was already halfway up"
2"She kicked the door shut"
3"She caught the top sheet,"
4"She wiped her palms on"
5"His platinum hair was slicked"
6"He didn't answer."
7"His amber eye moved past"
8"His black eye stayed on"
9"He crossed the threshold and"
10"He moved through the clutter"
11"His coat dripped onto Eva's"
12"She fetched a dish towel"
13"He caught it, folded it"
14"She looked at the laptop"
15"He set his cane against"
16"He rested his hands on"
17"He tilted his head"
18"He said it flat, the"
19"His amber eye held hers"
ratio0.461
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences76
matches
0"The three deadbolts gave way"
1"Ptolemy darted past her ankles"
2"she called after him"
3"He was already halfway up"
4"She kicked the door shut"
5"A stack of notes slid"
6"She caught the top sheet,"
7"The knock came through the"
8"Rory's hand went to the"
9"She wiped her palms on"
10"Lucien Moreau filled the narrow"
11"Water collected at the shoulders"
12"His platinum hair was slicked"
13"Nobody called her that."
14"Nobody but him."
15"He didn't answer."
16"His amber eye moved past"
17"His black eye stayed on"
18"Rory stepped back."
19"He crossed the threshold and"
ratio0.921
65.79% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"Whoever stood on the other"
ratio0.013
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The three deadbolts gave way one by one, and Rory pushed the door open with her hip, both hands full of brown paper bags that smelled of cumin and fried onion."
1"Lucien Moreau filled the narrow doorway in a charcoal suit that hadn't lost a crease despite the November rain."
2"His amber eye moved past her shoulder, cataloguing the flat — the books stacked in knee-high columns along the skirting, the open laptop casting blue light over…"
3"He moved through the clutter without touching anything, which took a kind of calculation she recognized — the same way he'd moved through the back rooms of club…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.161
leniency0.321
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.036
83.8594%