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Run: 2026-09-23-01M36THYCKB4DFQBJAS8FBJHW0
Run Details
Model:
Grok 4.7 (Reasoning, High)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
2m 26s
Cost:
$0.053070
Provider:
xAI
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
80.57%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
99.65%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
53.37%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
56.89%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
3.69%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
48.54%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
79.55%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
87.4087%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
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The third deadbolt shrieked and
gave. Aurora hauled the door inward, and Lucien Moreau filled the gap, ivory handle braced against the frame so the wood could not slam shut on his tailored charcoal suit. "Move." "No."
Curry steam climbed the stairwell
and clung to his cuffs.
Cardamom, hot oil, a burnt
edge of onion. Below them the Brick Lane kitchen roared. Pans knocked.
Someone swore in Bengali and
laughed straight after.
Eva's flat held its own
air above all that, paper and dust and the sour note of a cat with firm opinions.
Aurora's fingers stayed on the
lock. Three bolts. She had set every one.
He had still reached the
mat. "Eva's out." "I know."
His amber eye caught the
landing bulb.
The other eye, black as
wet tar, gave her nothing. "I came for you." "Bad habit." "Persistent, rather."
The cane's tip sat between
door and jamb, polite as a finger in a book.
Platinum hair, slicked back, not
a strand loose from the climb.
He looked like a man
who had never run for a bus and never intended to start.
Ptolemy wound out from the
books and stopped at Lucien's shoe. The tabby sniffed the leather, decided, and bit it. "Your cat has taste." "He's Eva's. And he bites liars." "Then I shall keep my ankles clear of the truth."
A laugh rose in her
throat. She swallowed it.
Laughter had been the first
thing lost between them, back when she still let a French fixer walk her home past Silas' bar and pretend the night was ordinary. She stepped aside. Not an invitation. A calculation.
If she left him on
the landing, the curry house staff would hear every word, and Eva's research did not belong to Brick Lane. Lucien entered like a man entering a church he had
been banned
from.
He set the cane in
the crook of his arm.
His gaze moved once, over
the scrolls, the stacked notes, the narrow bed visible through the bedroom door, and came back to her. "You cut your hair." "You don't get comments." "Shoulder-length suits you. It always did." "Stop." He stopped. That landed harder than a push.
He listened when she drew
a line, then stood so close to it she
could feel
the heat of the trespass he had not committed.
She crossed to the desk
and put herself behind a fortress of Eva's books. A cracked spine. A ribbon marker. A mishmash of notes, margins crammed, tea rings overlapping the ink.
She refused to read the
symbols while he watched. "Say your piece and go." "You left without a word." "I left with several. You were busy selling the street I lived on." His mouth tightened. On another man it would have been nothing. On Lucien Moreau it was a crack in the plaster. "I sold a radius. Not your name. Not your flat above the bar. Not the scar." Her left hand twitched. The sleeve of her black jumper rode up, and there it was, the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, pale against the rest of her. Childhood. A broken bottle in a Cardiff lane. He had kissed it once, in a hallway that smelt of gin and rain, and called it a map. She tugged the cuff down. "A radius is how men like you keep their cuffs clean." "Men like me do not bother."
He set the cane against
a stack of atlases. The ivory handle clicked. "I told the client the girl from Cardiff had already gone to ground. I gave him three postcodes and none of them were yours." "And the fourth?" Silence. The kitchen below banged a pan. Ptolemy leapt onto a pile of journals and stared, tail thick. "The fourth was the price of the lie." Lucien's voice dropped, French vowels rounding the edges. "He wanted proof I had looked. I looked. I did not deliver you." "You looked."
Her voice came out flat
. "Into my shifts. Into Yu-Fei's rota. Into which nights I carried prawn crackers up to Clerkenwell and which nights I came here to feed a cat that hates everyone but Eva." "Yes." No
dance
around it. Evan had wrapped every cruelty in a joke. Lucien put the knife on the table and waited to see if she would pick it up. "Get out." "I cannot." "You can. Door. Stairs. Street. France, if you're feeling dramatic." "France is a long way to run from a contract that already has your handwriting near it." The fridge ticked.
Her pulse knocked in her
ears, loud enough to insult her. "I didn't sign anything." "You did not have to."
He nodded at the desk
. "Eva did. A locator. Old work, sloppy work, the sort of thing a clever woman drafts when she wants a friend found if the friend goes missing. Your blood is in the margin. A pinprick. You held the page while she sealed it." Aurora looked down. A brown fleck on the corner of a cream sheet.
She had thought it was
ink. "You came to collect." "I came to burn it before someone else does." His black eye held her. "The client from Marseille does not like being sold a false radius. He has hired a reader. The reader will smell that fleck from the pavement." "Convenient." "Inconvenient, actually. I had a quiet evening planned. A glass of Bordeaux. No cats." The laugh escaped, short and raw. It scraped her throat on the way out. "You don't get to be funny." "I rarely get what I want. You know this." He moved. Not fast. A step around the desk, careful of the books, careful of her. She held her ground because retreat would tell him more than a shout. Bergamot reached her first, then smoke, then the clean cotton of a shirt that had no right to smell like a place she could rest. "Don't." "I am not touching you." "You're standing in my air." "Your air is full of cumin and bad decisions. I am only borrowing a little." Her bright blue gaze locked on his mismatched eyes. Up close the amber one was not gold. It was the colour of whisky left too long in the glass. The black one reflected her, small and furious, shoulder-length hair and a mouth she kept shut. "You left me in that bar." The words came low. "Silas asked where you'd gone. I said France. I said a job. I said I didn't care. Then I washed pint glasses until my scar split, and the soap stung, and I kept washing." "I know." "You don't." "I stood across the road until the lights went out." His hand lifted, stopped, hovered near her wrist and did not land. "You told me once that if I ever watched you without your leave, we were finished. So I finished us. I did not cross the road." The hover of his hand was worse than a grip. Heat came off his palm. Her skin answered, a pull low in her
stomach
she refused to give a name. "That's not noble." "No. It is the only obedience I have ever managed." Ptolemy knocked a pen to the floor. It rolled under the desk and clicked against a pipe. Neither of them looked. Aurora's fingers found his lapel. The wool was fine, dense, warm from his chest. She had meant to shove him back. Her hand stayed. "I hate this." "I know the flavour." His breath touched her forehead. He bent, slow enough that she could have broken his wrist, and stopped with his mouth a finger's width from hers. "Tell me to go, Aurora, and I will. Say it clean. Not this." She did not say it. Her other hand rose and caught the back of his neck, platinum hair cool against her knuckles, skin hot underneath. The kiss was not gentle. It was a collision, teeth and fury and the taste of him, mint and clove and the ghost of red wine. He made a sound against her mouth and kept his hands off her, fists at his sides, shaking with the effort. She broke the kiss. Their foreheads met. His
pulse
kicked under her thumb. "You still don't touch." "You have not said I may." The word sat between them, hot as the pan-fire below. She opened her mouth to give it to him or to damn him with it. The light on Eva's desk flared red. Not a lamp. A ward, scratched into the wood under a coaster, woke in a thin bloody line. A criss-cross of pencil marks lit from within. Ptolemy hissed and shot under the sofa, fur on end, tail a bottle brush. Lucien moved then. He snatched the cane, twisted the ivory handle, and the thin blade came free with a soft metallic sigh. His black eye flooded, pupil gone, the whole iris a pit. "Behind the books. Now." "What is it?" On the landing, the first deadbolt turned. Nobody stood at the door. The metal moved anyway, slow, sure, as if an invisible hand had all night. The second bolt began its click-clack slide. "Company,"
Lucien said, and the blade caught the red light
. "And they did not come for the cat."
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
11
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
62
tagDensity
0.177
leniency
0.355
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1544
totalAiIsmAdverbs
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
80.57%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1544
totalAiIsms
6
found
0
word
"could feel"
count
1
1
word
"silence"
count
1
2
word
"dance"
count
1
3
word
"pulse"
count
2
4
word
"stomach"
count
1
highlights
0
"could feel"
1
"silence"
2
"dance"
3
"pulse"
4
"stomach"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
111
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
111
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"tended to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
163
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
43
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1544
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
7
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
30
wordCount
1032
uniqueNames
10
maxNameDensity
0.78
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
1.5
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien
8
Moreau
2
Brick
2
Lane
2
Bengali
1
French
2
Eva
4
Cardiff
1
Aurora
4
Ptolemy
4
persons
0
"Lucien"
1
"Moreau"
2
"Eva"
3
"Aurora"
4
"Ptolemy"
places
0
"Brick"
1
"Lane"
2
"Bengali"
3
"Cardiff"
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
74
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"looked like a man who had never run for a"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1544
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
163
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
83
mean
18.6
std
17.36
cv
0.933
sampleLengths
0
35
1
1
2
1
3
57
4
19
5
2
6
23
7
2
8
2
9
43
10
20
11
4
12
6
13
10
14
38
15
32
16
46
17
4
18
4
19
6
20
1
21
33
22
40
23
5
24
5
25
13
26
21
27
16
28
56
29
5
30
11
31
43
32
3
33
18
34
29
35
38
36
1
37
29
38
2
39
2
40
10
41
17
42
14
43
4
44
53
45
19
46
4
47
40
48
1
49
14
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
111
matches
0
"been banned"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
166
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
163
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
99.65%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
594
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
24
adverbRatio
0.04040404040404041
lyAdverbCount
4
lyAdverbRatio
0.006734006734006734
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
163
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
163
mean
9.47
std
7.56
cv
0.798
sampleLengths
0
6
1
29
2
1
3
1
4
10
5
8
6
7
7
2
8
8
9
22
10
6
11
2
12
5
13
6
14
2
15
9
16
10
17
4
18
2
19
2
20
15
21
11
22
17
23
11
24
9
25
4
26
6
27
10
28
6
29
3
30
29
31
3
32
3
33
2
34
24
35
13
36
10
37
23
38
4
39
4
40
6
41
1
42
2
43
6
44
25
45
14
46
3
47
3
48
11
49
9
53.37%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
8
diversityRatio
0.3496932515337423
totalSentences
163
uniqueOpeners
57
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
103
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
56.89%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
42
totalSentences
103
matches
0
"She had set every one."
1
"He had still reached the"
2
"His amber eye caught the"
3
"He looked like a man"
4
"She swallowed it."
5
"She stepped aside."
6
"He set the cane in"
7
"His gaze moved once, over"
8
"He listened when she drew"
9
"She crossed to the desk"
10
"She refused to read the"
11
"His mouth tightened."
12
"Her left hand twitched."
13
"He had kissed it once,"
14
"She tugged the cuff down."
15
"He set the cane against"
16
"Her voice came out flat"
17
"Her pulse knocked in her"
18
"He nodded at the desk"
19
"She had thought it was"
ratio
0.408
3.69%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
94
totalSentences
103
matches
0
"The third deadbolt shrieked and"
1
"Aurora hauled the door inward,"
2
"Curry steam climbed the stairwell"
3
"Cardamom, hot oil, a burnt"
4
"Someone swore in Bengali and"
5
"Eva's flat held its own"
6
"Aurora's fingers stayed on the"
7
"She had set every one."
8
"He had still reached the"
9
"His amber eye caught the"
10
"The other eye, black as"
11
"The cane's tip sat between"
12
"Platinum hair, slicked back, not"
13
"He looked like a man"
14
"Ptolemy wound out from the"
15
"The tabby sniffed the leather,"
16
"A laugh rose in her"
17
"She swallowed it."
18
"Laughter had been the first"
19
"She stepped aside."
ratio
0.913
48.54%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
1
totalSentences
103
matches
0
"If she left him on"
ratio
0.01
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
41
technicalSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"The metal moved anyway, slow, sure, as if an invisible hand had all night."
79.55%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
11
uselessAdditionCount
1
matches
0
"Lucien said, and the blade caught the red light"
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
1
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
62
tagDensity
0.016
leniency
0.032
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
87.4087%