Run: 2026-09-23-01M36TMVNZQHTG0VZGYSEW7QCD

Run Details

Duration:
1m 14s
Cost:
$0.002560
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The last deadbolt stuck the way it always did, and Rory had to shoulder the door twice before it gave. She was mid-sentence — "If you're the landlord, the rent's paid through March, and if you're the police, I want a solicitor and a coffee" — and then the door swung wide and the words died in her mouth. Lucien Moreau stood in the corridor of the curry house's back stairwell, rain shining on the shoulders of his charcoal suit, holding a paper bag of something that smelled of cardamom and burnt sugar. His hair was slicked back and dark at the temples with wet. One amber eye. One black. He looked at her the way men look at old injuries — carefully, and with a kind of grim respect for the fact that they still hurt. "Hello, Rory," he said. Ptolemy chose that moment to wind between her ankles, purring like a diesel engine, and the vibration was the only thing that kept her from shutting the door in his face. "It's Laila tonight," she said. "And you don't live here." "No." He glanced past her at the siege of Eva's flat — books stacked into cairns on every surface, scrolls held open with butter knives, sticky notes flowering across the walls in yellow constellations. "Though I see Eva's research has colonised the place as usual. I wouldn't dream of interrupting it." "Then don't." "I need to ask you for something." "You need," she repeated. She should have shut the door. The thought sat in her mind very clean and cold, like a coin at the bottom of a well. She thought of the last time she had seen him — the November rain in the alley behind Silas' bar, his hand closed around her wrist where the little crescent scar sat, and her saying, *Don't. Don't touch me like you get to keep it.* She had walked away and she had not looked back and that had been eight months and eleven days, not that she counted, except that she had counted, in the way of a debt, on the grey mornings when she was out delivering noodles for the Golden Empress and London smelled of wet stone and diesel. "The restaurant," he said. "Yu-Fei's girl said you were here." "I'm nobody's girl." "No," he agreed, softly, in the way he had of agreeing with her so completely that it stung. "You never were." Behind her, Eva's flat smelled of curry from downstairs and old paper and the lavender oil Eva dabbed on the radiators. Ptolemy had given up on her and gone to sit on a stack of unrolled scrolls, licking one enormous paw with the air of a creature who had never once in his nine lives been asked to pick a side. Rory stepped back. It wasn't an invitation. It was logistics: the corridor was narrow and he took up too much of it, and if she kept standing in the doorway they would be breathing each other's air, and she remembered what his cologne smelled like, sandalwood and something bitter underneath, like orange peel, like the ghost of smoke. He came in. He set the paper bag on the one clear corner of the table and drew off his gloves, finger by finger, and she watched his hands and hated herself for watching. The ivory head of his cane caught the lamplight. She knew the blade that lived inside it — he had shown her once, in what she now understood had been a species of trust so total it frightened him, that flicker of alarm in the black eye when she'd said, *You carry a sword-stick, Lucien, like a villain in a novel.* "These are for Eva," he said, nodding at the bag. "The pistachio ones from the place on Wardour Street. She has a weakness." "She does," Rory said. "Why are you at her door and not mine?" "Because you live above a bar owned by a man who owes me a favour, and I didn't want to spend it on this. And because I knew you'd be here on a Thursday." He paused, and the pause had weight to it. "I've known where you were every Thursday for some time." The flat felt very small. Rory leaned her hip against the door she'd just shut and folded her arms, which put the crescent scar on her left wrist on display like a signature, and she saw his amber eye go to it and stay. "That's not charming," she said. "That's unsettling." "It's meant to be neither. It's meant to be honest." He set his gloves on top of the paper bag, precise as a man laying down cards. "I have a problem in the undercroft at Blackfriars. A woman — I won't give you her name yet — and a debt I inherited from my father's people that I did not agree to and cannot refuse. Eva has the translations. You have—" He stopped. "You have the nerve." "Nerve." "You walked into the Croydon thing alone. You held a door shut for eleven minutes against something twice your weight. I heard about it in three languages, Rory, and in one of them the word they used for you rhymes with 'knife.'" "Go on, flatter me in demonic. That always works." "I'm not flattering you." He took a step toward her and then, visibly, stopped himself, and that restraint — that visible leash he kept on his own body in her presence — undid her more than the flattery would have. "I'm asking. There will be money. There will be considerable danger. And there will be me, which I understand is its own kind of danger, and I would rather tell you that plainly than have you find out halfway through and think I manoeuvred you." "You did manoeuvre me. You just showed up at my friend's flat with pastries." "Yes," he said. "I did." Ptolemy jumped down from his scroll-stack and crossed the room and butted his broad tabby head against Lucien's shin. Lucien looked down at the cat with an expression Rory had seen exactly once before, on the steps of St Martin-in-the-Fields, when he'd given his scarf to a woman who'd been crying, and had stood there afterward blinking as though his own kindness had struck him across the face. "Traitor," Rory told the cat. "He has better instincts than you give him credit for." "He also eats string." She pushed off the door. The flat was full of the small sounds of London — the rumble of the 8 from Brick Lane, a siren somewhere toward Whitechapel, the shouted Bengali of the kitchen staff closing up below. She poured two glasses of the wine Eva kept for emergencies and handed him one, and when their fingers brushed she held on a half-second too long, deliberately, because she was not going to be the only one bleeding here. His black eye was unreadable. The amber one wasn't. It had gone soft at the edges, and softness on Lucien Moreau looked like damage. "Eight months," she said. "I know." "You said—" She stopped. The wine was cheap and she drank some of it. "You said it meant nothing. The thing in the alley. You said—" "I said what I needed to say to get you out of that alley before my father's broker turned the corner, because he would have filed you as leverage the moment he saw your face, and I have seen what Avaros does to leverage." His voice had gone low and rough, stripped of its four-language polish. "I said a great many things that evening which I have spent eight months unable to unsay. And you said, *Don't touch me like you get to keep it*, and I have thought about that sentence every day since, because I didn't want to keep it. I wanted to keep you. There is a difference, and I was too much of a coward to explain it in a wet alley with two minutes to spare." The kitchen staff's laughter came up through the floorboards. Someone dropped a pot. "Say it again," Rory said. "Say it somewhere dry. Say it with the door shut and the deadbolts on and nowhere to run to, Lucien, because I have had eight months of you being careful at me across rooms and I am so tired of careful." He set down his glass. He took the two steps that closed the distance between them and he put one hand against the wall beside her head, and the other — the other he held out, palm up, and waited. "You have my name and not my hands," he said. "That has always been the arrangement. Take it or don't." She looked at his open palm. She thought of Evan's grip and the way it had left its own pale half-moon on her skin for weeks, and she thought of Lucien's fingers around her wrist in the rain, the lightest possible pressure, and how he had let go the instant she'd said *don't*, and how that had been the thing that actually broke her. She put her hand in his. He closed his fingers around hers like a man reciting a vow he'd written badly and rewritten every night since, and then he leaned in and kissed her, and he tasted of rain and cardamom and the sharp bitter rind of whatever he'd been carrying alone all this time. Ptolemy yowled. They broke apart, laughing — the first real laugh either of them had managed in eight months — and Lucien pressed his forehead to hers and said, against her mouth, "Blackfriars. Friday. Bring the knife Eva keeps in the biscuit tin and wear your boots with the good tread." "You've been studying my boots now." "I have been studying you since the night you insulted me in three sentences at Silas' bar. I simply got careless about hiding it." He drew back, and his thumb traced once over the crescent scar on her wrist, and then he let her go. "Tell Eva the pistachios are from the Wardour Street place. She'll know." "And what will you tell your broker?" His smile was the old one, the dangerous one, the one that had started all of this. "That I've come into an asset he doesn't need to know about. Friday, Rory. Alone, at the door in the arch, at ten. If I'm not there by ten past, run." He picked up his gloves, and she opened all three deadbolts, and he went down the back stair of the curry house into the wet London dark. Rory shut the door and locked it and stood there with her hand on her mouth and her wrist still warm, listening to Ptolemy eat cardamom sugar off the pastry bag. Friday. Ten o'clock. She had two days to decide whether she was a fool, and she already knew she'd be there.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"They broke apart [apart]"
1"He drew back [back]"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.481
leniency0.962
rawRatio0.08
effectiveRatio0.077
83.50% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1818
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"completely"
count1
4
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"very"
2"softly"
3"completely"
4"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1818
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"unreadable"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"weight"
2"unreadable"
3"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences69
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen75
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords31
totalWords1832
ratio0.017
matches
0"Don't. Don't touch me like you get to keep it."
1"You carry a sword-stick, Lucien, like a villain in a novel."
2"Don't touch me like you get to keep it"
3"don't"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions32
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1172
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity0.68
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory8
Moreau2
Ptolemy5
Eva4
November1
Don1
Golden1
Empress1
London3
Lucien7
St1
Martin-in-the-Fields1
Brick1
Lane1
Whitechapel1
Bengali1
Evan1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Eva"
4"Lucien"
5"Evan"
places
0"London"
1"St"
2"Martin-in-the-Fields"
3"Brick"
4"Lane"
5"Whitechapel"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"smelled like, sandalwood and something bit"
1"her and then, visibly, stopped himself, a"
2"looked like damage"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1832
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences97
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean35.92
std32.28
cv0.899
sampleLengths
020
139
278
34
431
510
651
72
87
9130
1010
113
1221
1361
1458
1595
1623
1713
1853
1944
207
2177
221
2342
249
2585
2614
275
2868
295
3010
3183
3224
334
342
3526
36131
3713
3846
3940
4020
4164
426
4349
4451
456
4657
477
4848
4958
95.09% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences69
matches
0"was slicked"
1"been asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs193
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences97
ratio0.093
matches
0"She was mid-sentence — \"If you're the landlord, the rent's paid through March, and if you're the police, I want a solicitor and a coffee\" — and then the door swung wide and the words died in her mouth."
1"He looked at her the way men look at old injuries — carefully, and with a kind of grim respect for the fact that they still hurt."
2"\"No.\" He glanced past her at the siege of Eva's flat — books stacked into cairns on every surface, scrolls held open with butter knives, sticky notes flowering across the walls in yellow constellations."
3"She thought of the last time she had seen him — the November rain in the alley behind Silas' bar, his hand closed around her wrist where the little crescent scar sat, and her saying, *Don't."
4"She knew the blade that lived inside it — he had shown her once, in what she now understood had been a species of trust so total it frightened him, that flicker of alarm in the black eye when she'd said, *You carry a sword-stick, Lucien, like a villain in a novel.*"
5"\"I'm not flattering you.\" He took a step toward her and then, visibly, stopped himself, and that restraint — that visible leash he kept on his own body in her presence — undid her more than the flattery would have."
6"The flat was full of the small sounds of London — the rumble of the 8 from Brick Lane, a siren somewhere toward Whitechapel, the shouted Bengali of the kitchen staff closing up below."
7"He took the two steps that closed the distance between them and he put one hand against the wall beside her head, and the other — the other he held out, palm up, and waited."
8"They broke apart, laughing — the first real laugh either of them had managed in eight months — and Lucien pressed his forehead to hers and said, against her mouth, \"Blackfriars. Friday. Bring the knife Eva keeps in the biscuit tin and wear your boots with the good tread.\""
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount788
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.031725888324873094
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0038071065989847717
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean18.89
std17.91
cv0.948
sampleLengths
020
139
234
312
43
52
627
74
831
95
105
1134
1217
132
147
154
166
1719
1836
1965
204
216
223
2318
243
2521
2640
273
284
2951
303
3131
329
3352
3410
3513
364
379
3843
3910
405
4139
425
432
4427
4546
464
471
4842
499
47.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.35051546391752575
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners34
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences53
matches
0"She was mid-sentence — and"
1"His hair was slicked back"
2"He looked at her the"
3"He glanced past her at"
4"She should have shut the"
5"She thought of the last"
6"he agreed, softly, in the"
7"It wasn't an invitation."
8"It was logistics: the corridor"
9"He came in."
10"He set the paper bag"
11"She knew the blade that"
12"he said, nodding at the"
13"He paused, and the pause"
14"He set his gloves on"
15"He took a step toward"
16"She pushed off the door"
17"She poured two glasses of"
18"His black eye was unreadable."
19"It had gone soft at"
ratio0.604
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences53
matches
0"The last deadbolt stuck the"
1"She was mid-sentence — and"
2"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
3"His hair was slicked back"
4"He looked at her the"
5"Ptolemy chose that moment to"
6"He glanced past her at"
7"She should have shut the"
8"The thought sat in her"
9"She thought of the last"
10"he agreed, softly, in the"
11"Ptolemy had given up on"
12"Rory stepped back."
13"It wasn't an invitation."
14"It was logistics: the corridor"
15"He came in."
16"He set the paper bag"
17"The ivory head of his"
18"She knew the blade that"
19"he said, nodding at the"
ratio0.943
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
5.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Lucien Moreau stood in the corridor of the curry house's back stairwell, rain shining on the shoulders of his charcoal suit, holding a paper bag of something th…"
1"Ptolemy chose that moment to wind between her ankles, purring like a diesel engine, and the vibration was the only thing that kept her from shutting the door in…"
2"She knew the blade that lived inside it — he had shown her once, in what she now understood had been a species of trust so total it frightened him, that flicker…"
3"Rory leaned her hip against the door she'd just shut and folded her arms, which put the crescent scar on her left wrist on display like a signature, and she saw…"
4"Lucien looked down at the cat with an expression Rory had seen exactly once before, on the steps of St Martin-in-the-Fields, when he'd given his scarf to a woma…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He paused, and the pause had weight to it"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she repeated (repeat)"
1"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.077
73.9138%