Run: 2026-09-23-01M36TNK7QGESGVC9HGS35S075

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Duration:
1m 31s
Cost:
$0.000888
Provider:
Xiaomi

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt stuck the way it always stuck, and Rory put her shoulder into it until the mechanism groaned and gave. She'd opened the door intending to tell whoever was standing on Eva's narrow landing that Eva wasn't home — Eva was never home at this hour, Eva was at the archive in Bloomsbury with her gloves and her thermos and her magnificent indifference to the world — and the words died somewhere behind her teeth. Lucien Moreau stood in the stairwell light with rain in his platinum hair. He'd given up slicking it back, or he simply hadn't bothered tonight; it fell across his forehead in wet, disordered strands, and he looked, for perhaps the first time since she'd known him, like a man who had come up three flights of stairs in a hurry. The charcoal suit was still immaculate apart from the shoulders, which had taken the worst of the weather. His cane — ivory handle, thin blade coiled inside the shaft like a held breath — rested against his shin. One eye was amber. The other was black, and both of them were fixed on her with the patient, unblinking attention of someone who had decided to wait her out. "Rory," he said. "You're at the wrong flat." "I'm at the right flat. Eva's the one who's not home." Behind her, the flat did what it always did: it contradicted her. Every surface layered with books and scroll-cases and Eva's spidery annotations, the small electric ring glowing under a pot of something cumin-heavy, Ptolemy the tabby rising from a stack of photocopied manuscripts with the aggrieved air of a landlord. The smell of Brick Lane's curry houses came up through the floorboards and wrapped around them both like an old coat. Rory didn't move from the doorway. "Then you've come for her, and she's not home." "I know." He didn't move either. Rain ran from his cuff onto the chipped tile of the landing. "I came for you. She told me you'd be here tonight." Eva, who had sworn — sworn on Ptolemy, which was the only oath Eva took seriously — that she had not given Lucien Moreau Rory's new address, her new number, or any other coordinate of her new life. Rory filed the betrayal for later. There would be a later; there was always a later with Eva, usually involving wine and a detailed accounting. "Say what you've come to say, then." "May I come in?" "No." The refusal came out flat and immediate, and she watched him take it. He inclined his head — not defeated, never defeated, just marking the fact the way he marked everything, the way a fixer marks a variable and keeps it in the sum. Water gathered at his jaw and fell. "You're going to make me say it in the corridor," he said. "I'm going to make you say it fast, in the corridor, and then I'm going to close this door." "Then I will be quick, and I will be inefficient, because you are standing between me and a dry coat." A pause. The corner of his mouth moved; it was not quite a smile, and it was not quite not. "*Laisse-moi entrer*, Rory. Five minutes. You can time me." "You speak four languages and you're still not getting through this door." "I speak four languages and none of them have a word for what I need tonight." The play drained out of his voice so suddenly that it left something raw behind. "Twenty minutes ago, someone broke into your flat above Silas' and turned it over. Not thieves. They were looking for something, and when they didn't find it, they left a message on your kitchen wall in marker pen so you would know they'd been." The stairwell was cold. The cold came in around his legs and found her bare feet on the warped floorboards of Eva's hall. Rory said, very evenly, "How do you know what's on my kitchen wall?" "Because the man who wrote it works for a client of mine, and the client was careless enough to mention it to me at dinner an hour before it happened." His amber eye caught the light; the black one gave nothing. "I tried your phone. You have not answered your phone in eleven hours, which is unlike you. Eva answered hers. Eva said you would be here." Rory's hand had found the crescent scar on her left wrist without her telling it to — the old habit, thumb worrying the little moon of raised skin, the one from the garden step in Cardiff when she was nine. She became aware of it and stopped. "What message," she said. "Not in the corridor." "I told you—" "You told me fast, in the corridor, and I have been fast, and now I am at the part where you decide whether you trust me more than you distrust me." He straightened. The cane clicked once against the tile. "Nine months, Rory. You have had nine months of deciding. If the answer is still no, then I will hand you the name on your wall and I will go back down those stairs and you will never see me again. But I am not saying your message in a corridor with the stairwell door open, because the man who wrote it is not the sort who sends only one." Something moved behind her — Ptolemy, hopping down from his manuscript stack with a soft papery slap of paws, padding over to wind once around Lucien's ankle. The cat, who had spent his entire life despising visitors, who had drawn blood from a gas man and bitten a surveyor, sat down on Lucien's shoe and began to purr. Rory looked at the cat. She looked at Lucien. Rain had worked its way under the collar of his coat and darkened the expensive charcoal wool at the base of his throat, and he was standing very still, in the particular stillness of a man who has already decided he can wait however long this takes. She stepped back. He came in and did not shake the water off, did not touch anything, did not look at the books the way other people looked at Eva's books, with that covetous flicker. He looked at the room the way he looked at rooms: exits, sightlines, the position of the window relative to the door. His gaze passed over the deadbolts — all three of them, she noticed, and she watched him notice — and settled on the empty chair by the ring hob, the one Eva kept for no one. Ptolemy followed him in and resumed purring against his ankle. "Five minutes started two minutes ago," Rory said, and closed the door, and threw the first bolt, and then the second, and then the third, which stuck, and she put her shoulder into it while she listened to the man behind her breathe. "He's left-handed," Lucien said quietly, when the bolt finally gave. Rory turned. "What?" "The man who wrote on your wall. If it's who I think it is, he's left-handed, and he will have stood at your counter with his back to the window, because he wanted to be seen from the street while he did it. He is not subtle. He is not clever." Lucien set his cane against the arm of Eva's chair and took off his coat, folding it once over his forearm with the neat, unconscious precision of a man who had been taught to respect good cloth. Beneath it his shirt was charcoal too, close-fitted, and the rain had found the hollow of his collarbone. "But he is thorough, and he has four men, and they will come back to the flat tonight because that is where you sleep, and they will not knock." "You don't know where I sleep." "I know you moved above a bar in Shoreditch in April and that you took the flat because the landlord asked no questions and the stair has a second exit into the alley. I know you work the dinner run for Yu-Fei Cheung six nights a week, north to south, because the tips are better and because you like the骑— the riding. I know you have not been back to Cardiff since February." He stopped. The amber eye came up to hers; the black one stayed where it was, steady and unreadable. "I know all of it because knowing where people are is what I do. And because you were never as far away as you thought you were." The pot on the ring had begun to tick, water heating toward a boil neither of them had put on. The flat smelled of cumin and old paper and wet wool. Somewhere below, a curry-house kitchen door slammed and a cook shouted something in Bengali, and the sound came up through the boards like the flat was underwater. Rory said, "You sold my name to Dimitri Kovač." "I did." "You swore you hadn't." "I swore a great many things that night, and three of them were true." He didn't look away. "You asked me a question at four in the morning with your hair all over my coat and I gave you the answer you wanted instead of the answer that was correct, and I have had nine months to think about which of those two answers I should have given." "Interesting." Rory's voice was level, and level was worse than loud. "You've had nine months and you've arrived at the correct one only now, tonight, when Kovač's man has already been in my kitchen." "Yes." No flinching. He picked up his cane again and turned the ivory handle once between his fingers, a small mechanic's gesture, the way another man might roll a coin. "That is exactly the shape of the mistake, and if you want to spend the next ten minutes drawing it out for me, I will stand here and let you. But your water is boiling, and I would like to sit down, and I would like very much to tell you what was written on your wall before someone else has the chance to show you." Rory crossed to the ring and lifted the pot off before it could boil over. Her hands were steady. Her hands were always steady; it was the rest of her that had to be told. "When I opened the door," she said, to the steam, "I had four things to say to you. Two of them are still true." She set the pot down. "Sit down, Lucien." He sat. Ptolemy leapt into his lap with the brazen entitlement of a creature who had chosen a side, and Lucien put a hand — careful, unhurried — along the tabby's spine, and his black eye and his amber eye both stayed on her, and neither of them blinked, and Rory stood in Eva's ruined, magnificent flat with the bolts thrown behind her and thought: *one of the two* — and did not yet know which.
created_at"2026-09-23T09:48:38.014Z" 9/23/2026, 9:48:38 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Lucien said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.349
leniency0.698
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.047
89.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1837
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count3
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
89.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1837
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"electric"
count1
1
word"variable"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"unreadable"
count1
highlights
0"electric"
1"variable"
2"flicker"
3"unreadable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences65
matches(empty)
98.90% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences65
filterMatches
0"notice "
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
95.79% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen89
ratio0.011
matches
0"\"I know you moved above a bar in Shoreditch in April and that you took the flat because the landlord asked no questions and the stair has a second exit into the alley. I know you w…"
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords6
totalWords1851
ratio0.003
matches
0"Laisse-moi entrer"
1"one of the two"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount1110
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.17
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Rory13
Eva13
Bloomsbury1
Moreau2
Ptolemy5
Brick1
Lane1
Rain2
Lucien8
Cardiff1
Bengali1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Moreau"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Rain"
5"Lucien"
places
0"Bloomsbury"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"Cardiff"
4"Bengali"
globalScore0.914
windowScore0.833
95.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite a smile, and it was not quite not"
1"not quite not"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1851
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean37.78
std36.68
cv0.971
sampleLengths
077
113
2115
33
45
511
672
715
829
963
107
114
121
1351
1412
1519
1649
1712
1875
1923
2013
2167
2247
234
244
253
26110
2758
2856
293
3090
3110
3243
3310
343
35135
366
37119
3858
399
402
414
4268
4334
4496
4535
4632
472
4874
94.47% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences65
matches
0"were fixed"
1"been taught"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs186
matches
0"was standing"
1"was standing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount6
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences90
ratio0.156
matches
0"She'd opened the door intending to tell whoever was standing on Eva's narrow landing that Eva wasn't home — Eva was never home at this hour, Eva was at the archive in Bloomsbury with her gloves and her thermos and her magnificent indifference to the world — and the words died somewhere behind her teeth."
1"He'd given up slicking it back, or he simply hadn't bothered tonight; it fell across his forehead in wet, disordered strands, and he looked, for perhaps the first time since she'd known him, like a man who had come up three flights of stairs in a hurry."
2"His cane — ivory handle, thin blade coiled inside the shaft like a held breath — rested against his shin."
3"Eva, who had sworn — sworn on Ptolemy, which was the only oath Eva took seriously — that she had not given Lucien Moreau Rory's new address, her new number, or any other coordinate of her new life."
4"There would be a later; there was always a later with Eva, usually involving wine and a detailed accounting."
5"He inclined his head — not defeated, never defeated, just marking the fact the way he marked everything, the way a fixer marks a variable and keeps it in the sum."
6"The corner of his mouth moved; it was not quite a smile, and it was not quite not."
7"\"Because the man who wrote it works for a client of mine, and the client was careless enough to mention it to me at dinner an hour before it happened.\" His amber eye caught the light; the black one gave nothing."
8"Rory's hand had found the crescent scar on her left wrist without her telling it to — the old habit, thumb worrying the little moon of raised skin, the one from the garden step in Cardiff when she was nine."
9"Something moved behind her — Ptolemy, hopping down from his manuscript stack with a soft papery slap of paws, padding over to wind once around Lucien's ankle."
10"His gaze passed over the deadbolts — all three of them, she noticed, and she watched him notice — and settled on the empty chair by the ring hob, the one Eva kept for no one."
11"The amber eye came up to hers; the black one stayed where it was, steady and unreadable."
12"Her hands were always steady; it was the rest of her that had to be told."
13"Ptolemy leapt into his lap with the brazen entitlement of a creature who had chosen a side, and Lucien put a hand — careful, unhurried — along the tabby's spine, and his black eye and his amber eye both stayed on her, and neither of them blinked, and Rory stood in Eva's ruined, magnificent flat with the bolts thrown behind her and thought: *one of the two* — and did not yet know which."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1100
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.03363636363636364
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007272727272727273
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean20.57
std18.62
cv0.905
sampleLengths
022
155
213
347
418
520
64
726
83
95
1011
1112
1239
1321
146
159
166
1712
1811
1938
206
2119
227
234
241
2513
2631
277
2812
2919
3022
3118
329
3312
3431
3544
364
3719
3813
3941
4026
4140
427
434
444
453
4633
477
4870
4927
64.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4111111111111111
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners37
60.61% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences55
matches
0"Somewhere below, a curry-house kitchen"
ratio0.018
96.36% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences55
matches
0"She'd opened the door intending"
1"He'd given up slicking it"
2"His cane — ivory handle,"
3"He didn't move either"
4"He inclined his head —"
5"His amber eye caught the"
6"She became aware of it"
7"She looked at Lucien."
8"She stepped back."
9"He came in and did"
10"He looked at the room"
11"His gaze passed over the"
12"He didn't look away"
13"He picked up his cane"
14"Her hands were steady."
15"Her hands were always steady;"
16"she said, to the steam,"
ratio0.309
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences55
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck the"
1"She'd opened the door intending"
2"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
3"He'd given up slicking it"
4"The charcoal suit was still"
5"His cane — ivory handle,"
6"The other was black, and"
7"Every surface layered with books"
8"The smell of Brick Lane's"
9"Rory didn't move from the"
10"He didn't move either"
11"Rain ran from his cuff"
12"Eva, who had sworn —"
13"Rory filed the betrayal for"
14"There would be a later;"
15"The refusal came out flat"
16"He inclined his head —"
17"Water gathered at his jaw"
18"The corner of his mouth"
19"The play drained out of"
ratio0.927
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
37.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The other was black, and both of them were fixed on her with the patient, unblinking attention of someone who had decided to wait her out."
1"Eva, who had sworn — sworn on Ptolemy, which was the only oath Eva took seriously — that she had not given Lucien Moreau Rory's new address, her new number, or …"
2"Something moved behind her — Ptolemy, hopping down from his manuscript stack with a soft papery slap of paws, padding over to wind once around Lucien's ankle."
3"Rain had worked its way under the collar of his coat and darkened the expensive charcoal wool at the base of his throat, and he was standing very still, in the …"
4"Ptolemy leapt into his lap with the brazen entitlement of a creature who had chosen a side, and Lucien put a hand — careful, unhurried — along the tabby's spine…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.186
leniency0.372
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.5074%