| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 22 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "they said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.55 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.045 | | effectiveRatio | 0.045 | |
| 78.70% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2113 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "very" | | 4 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 76.34% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2113 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "gloom" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "streaming" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "comforting" | | 7 | "depths" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 128 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 60 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 2138 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 21 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.09% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 57 | | wordCount | 1788 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.4 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Isolde | 9 | | Rory | 25 | | Nyx | 10 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Grove | 4 | | Veil | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Grove" | | 5 | "Veil" | | 6 | "Yu-Fei" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.801 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 59.68% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 1.403 | | wordCount | 2138 | | matches | | 0 | "Not gradually, the way a wood settles at dusk, but all at once, as if some silent hand had closed over the whol" | | 1 | "Not silence, not the muffled hush she'd braced for, but a sound like a struck bowl left ringing, enormous" | | 2 | "not the muffled hush she'd braced for, but a sound like a struck bowl left ringing, enormous" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 63 | | mean | 33.94 | | std | 31.05 | | cv | 0.915 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 62 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 65 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 119 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 33 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 68 | | 14 | 74 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 37 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 38 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 54 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 114 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 101 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 45 | | 30 | 52 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 59 | | 33 | 30 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 92 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 60 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 82 | | 44 | 45 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 41 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 102 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 89.31% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "been carved" | | 1 | "were petrified" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "was irritated" | | 4 | "been asked" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 297 | | matches | | 0 | "was coming" | | 1 | "were standing" | | 2 | "were listening" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 24 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 20 | | totalSentences | 128 | | ratio | 0.156 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory noticed it first as a change in the light — the late afternoon sun going soft and golden, as though it had passed through honey before reaching the bracken." | | 1 | "She walked ahead in her pale coat, silver hair moving against her back like slow water, and where her feet touched the deer-cropped grass there was nothing — no broken stems, no pressed print." | | 2 | "They stood in a broken ring among the oaks — nine of them, or eight and a stub — each one taller than Nyx's solid height and shaped with the rough, honest irregularity of things that had grown rather than been carved." | | 3 | "And something answered the pressure — a faint, deliberate pulse, timed to nothing in her own body." | | 4 | "Nyx had gone to the gap in the ring — the place where the ninth stone stood stunted and split." | | 5 | "She walked into it — into the space where it should have been air — and the world folded over her like a page turning, and she was gone." | | 6 | "She touched it, the way she had taken to touching it — a habit, a coin rubbed for luck — and stepped through." | | 7 | "The standing stones ringed it — but here they were not broken, and here they were unmistakably alive: vast trunks of pale oak rising into a canopy that closed overhead like the roof of a cathedral, their bark streaming with slow currents of light the colour of pondweed and new leaves." | | 8 | "Between the stones the air shimmered, a faint distortion like heat off tarmac, except cold — she felt it on her cheeks as she passed, felt the Veil peeling back from her face like a veil, literally, the word suddenly embarrassing in its accuracy." | | 9 | "They covered the floor of the Grove in drifts and shoals — white, gold, the blue of a gas flame, a red so deep it read as black until the light moved across it." | | 10 | "A big black butterfly — or something that had decided, for today, on the shape of one — crossed Rory's face close enough for her to feel the wingbeats on her eyelids." | | 11 | "For one bright, horrible instant Rory saw them stretched thin against the seam of the world, a shadow pulled like tar, their violet eyes flaring wide — and then they were through, staggering, dropping to one knee on the moss with a sound like a page tearing." | | 12 | "They looked at it a moment — at the small crescent scar white against the inside of her wrist — and took it, and she hauled." | | 13 | "They went deeper, single file along a path that was not a path until they were already on it — a run of pale stones surfaced in the moss, fitted together too well to be natural, too moss-grown to be new." | | 14 | "Rory counted the stones under her breath and lost count twice, because numbers behaved strangely here; seven stones took a long time and then nine stones took no time at all, and the light did not change to account for it." | | 15 | "They found the pool where the oaks thinned — a still black eye of water ringed in white flowers whose petals opened and closed on no schedule she could follow, slow as breathing." | | 16 | "She stood at the rim and watched something vast and slow turn over in the depths, and felt the Heartstone go hot against her skin — a quick, hard pulse, the way it behaved near a Hel portal." | | 17 | "They were standing very still in the way that meant they were listening to something only they could hear — the old language of thresholds and between-spaces, the grammar of 1643 and a ritual that had gone wrong and kept going wrong for four hundred years." | | 18 | "\"Old ones. Mine isn't here, but I know the hand that cut them.\" They touched the bark, and this time nothing blackened; the slow green current in the wood brightened under their fingers and dimmed again." | | 19 | "Rory took the blade from her belt — moonsilver, leaf-shaped, cold enough to ache in her palm — and did not draw it, and felt the Grove take notice of it the way a dog takes notice of a hand that knows where to scratch." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1581 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "slow, deep, languid currents" |
| | adverbCount | 58 | | adverbRatio | 0.036685641998734975 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008222643896268185 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 128 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 128 | | mean | 16.7 | | std | 13.62 | | cv | 0.815 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 42 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 37 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 29 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 37 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 58.59% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.3984375 | | totalSentences | 128 | | uniqueOpeners | 51 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the birds stopped." | | 1 | "Then the light." | | 2 | "Then Nyx came through." | | 3 | "Then they looked up at" | | 4 | "Somewhere far above the glowing" |
| | ratio | 0.056 | |
| 86.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "She walked ahead in her" | | 1 | "They stood in a broken" | | 2 | "She took her hand back." | | 3 | "They were more solid here" | | 4 | "They crouched and touched the" | | 5 | "Their fingers sank to the" | | 6 | "They pulled their hand out" | | 7 | "She did not walk around" | | 8 | "She walked into it —" | | 9 | "She touched it, the way" | | 10 | "It shivered in her sternum." | | 11 | "It said nothing in any" | | 12 | "It was a bowl of" | | 13 | "They covered the floor of" | | 14 | "They bloomed out of moss," | | 15 | "They simply turned, very slowly," | | 16 | "she asked, and was irritated" | | 17 | "It settled on a spike" | | 18 | "She crossed to the blackened" | | 19 | "They looked at it a" |
| | ratio | 0.333 | |
| 71.11% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 70 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks began where the" | | 1 | "Rory noticed it first as" | | 2 | "Isolde did not turn." | | 3 | "She walked ahead in her" | | 4 | "Rory had watched for it" | | 5 | "The standing stones were not" | | 6 | "That was the second thing" | | 7 | "They stood in a broken" | | 8 | "The air around them smelled" | | 9 | "Rory reached out and pressed" | | 10 | "She took her hand back." | | 11 | "Isolde said, watching her with" | | 12 | "Nyx had gone to the" | | 13 | "They were more solid here" | | 14 | "They crouched and touched the" | | 15 | "Their fingers sank to the" | | 16 | "They pulled their hand out" | | 17 | "She did not walk around" | | 18 | "She walked into it —" | | 19 | "Rory looked at Nyx." |
| | ratio | 0.778 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 14 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory noticed it first as a change in the light — the late afternoon sun going soft and golden, as though it had passed through honey before reaching the bracken…" | | 1 | "Not gradually, the way a wood settles at dusk, but all at once, as if some silent hand had closed over the whole living throat of Richmond Park." | | 2 | "They stood in a broken ring among the oaks — nine of them, or eight and a stub — each one taller than Nyx's solid height and shaped with the rough, honest irreg…" | | 3 | "Where the light caught them, the grain moved: slow, deep, languid currents of dark green and brown, as if the pillars were petrified wood dreaming of being tree…" | | 4 | "They pulled their hand out and shook it, and droplets fell from their shadow-fingers that caught no light at all." | | 5 | "Not silence, not the muffled hush she'd braced for, but a sound like a struck bowl left ringing, enormous and deep and everywhere, the kind of sound that has no…" | | 6 | "The standing stones ringed it — but here they were not broken, and here they were unmistakably alive: vast trunks of pale oak rising into a canopy that closed o…" | | 7 | "A big black butterfly — or something that had decided, for today, on the shape of one — crossed Rory's face close enough for her to feel the wingbeats on her ey…" | | 8 | "They went deeper, single file along a path that was not a path until they were already on it — a run of pale stones surfaced in the moss, fitted together too we…" | | 9 | "The surface held the glowing canopy perfectly, and beneath it, deeper, other lights moved: small and patient and arranged in constellations that did not match a…" | | 10 | "They were standing very still in the way that meant they were listening to something only they could hear — the old language of thresholds and between-spaces, t…" | | 11 | "Somewhere far above the glowing canopy, or far below the water, or somewhere sideways to both, a sound went on and on like a struck bowl, and the wildflowers tu…" | | 12 | "Rory took the blade from her belt — moonsilver, leaf-shaped, cold enough to ache in her palm — and did not draw it, and felt the Grove take notice of it the way…" | | 13 | "And they went deeper, three shadows on a floor that held no shadows at all, while the Grove listened and the oaks dreamed and the ancient marks in the bark held…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 22 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 18 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.45 | | leniency | 0.9 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |