| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.395 | | leniency | 0.789 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.76% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1603 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 75.05% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1603 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "footsteps" | | 1 | "tracing" | | 2 | "unsettled" | | 3 | "traced" | | 4 | "glint" | | 5 | "could feel" | | 6 | "etched" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 122 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 71 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 17 | | totalWords | 1617 | | ratio | 0.011 | | matches | | 0 | "The Veil Market — Full Moon, platform four. Bone token required. All wares enchanted, all prices final." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 1213 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.07 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Coles" | | discoveredNames | | Camden | 1 | | Town | 1 | | Quinn | 13 | | Victorian | 1 | | Blitz | 1 | | Young | 1 | | September | 1 | | Detective | 1 | | Sergeant | 1 | | Coles | 9 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 | | Full | 1 | | Moon | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "September" | | 2 | "Sergeant" | | 3 | "Coles" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.964 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like breathing" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1617 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 36.75 | | std | 26.71 | | cv | 0.727 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 69 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 66 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 47 | | 6 | 75 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 41 | | 9 | 56 | | 10 | 46 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 68 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 64 | | 15 | 81 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 57 | | 21 | 36 | | 22 | 81 | | 23 | 36 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 51 | | 27 | 54 | | 28 | 82 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 29 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 73 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 82 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 73 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 40 | | 43 | 52 |
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| 94.63% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "been rubbed" | | 1 | "was etched" | | 2 | "were curled" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 197 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 122 | | ratio | 0.098 | | matches | | 0 | "His coat — a heavy wool thing far too warm for September — sat buttoned to the throat, not a hair out of place." | | 1 | "Torn posters clung to the far wall — one advertising a market she didn't recognize, a handbill for a stall selling \"enchanted wares\" in bold copperplate." | | 2 | "It rolled across her glove — a coin of some kind, bone-white, no larger than a thumbnail, with a symbol pressed into its face that she didn't recognize." | | 3 | "The reverse was blank except for a shallow groove worn smooth by handling — something had been rubbed across it repeatedly, like a worry stone." | | 4 | "The tile beneath his right shoulder was wet — a thin film of condensation, recent, catching the light like oil." | | 5 | "Not the ambient cold of the station, which sat around twelve degrees; this was colder, the kind of cold that made her fingertip ache." | | 6 | "The beam caught something twenty feet in — a glint, metallic, sitting on the track bed below the platform edge." | | 7 | "The face was etched with marks she'd seen once before — on a handbill pinned to the wall behind her, the crossed-out market poster." | | 8 | "Not lazily, not the way a damaged needle drifts; it spun with purpose, then stopped, then spun again, each time settling on a different bearing as though the thing it pointed to wouldn't hold still." | | 9 | "It pointed — directly at the body." | | 10 | "The fingers were curled around nothing, but the nails were clean — not dirt-under-the-nails clean, scrubbed clean, the cuticles pushed back." | | 11 | "The crossed-out words were still readable beneath the black stripe: *The Veil Market — Full Moon, platform four." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1211 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.03303055326176713 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006606110652353427 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 122 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 122 | | mean | 13.25 | | std | 11.1 | | cv | 0.837 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 39 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 53 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 49 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 64.21% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.4098360655737705 | | totalSentences | 122 | | uniqueOpeners | 50 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 91.11% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots crunched over glass." | | 1 | "She moved past him without" | | 2 | "She'd been in bed forty" | | 3 | "She paused, and Quinn watched" | | 4 | "His face had gone slack" | | 5 | "His coat — a heavy" | | 6 | "She swept her light across" | | 7 | "He tapped the clipboard" | | 8 | "She pulled a pen from" | | 9 | "It rolled across her glove" | | 10 | "She held it up to" | | 11 | "She crouched and touched it." | | 12 | "She checked the surrounding tiles." | | 13 | "she asked without looking up" | | 14 | "She stood and aimed her" | | 15 | "She climbed down onto the" | | 16 | "She stepped over it with" | | 17 | "She pulled it free." | | 18 | "Its casing carried a patina" | | 19 | "She carried it back up" |
| | ratio | 0.322 | |
| 21.11% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "The stairs beneath Camden Town" | | 1 | "Harlow Quinn counted thirty-two steps" | | 2 | "Her boots crunched over glass." | | 3 | "Flashlight beams cut through the" | | 4 | "The officer at the bottom" | | 5 | "She moved past him without" | | 6 | "The platform stretched into blackness" | | 7 | "Quinn's leather watch caught the" | | 8 | "She'd been in bed forty" | | 9 | "The tech nearest the body" | | 10 | "She paused, and Quinn watched" | | 11 | "The man lay on his" | | 12 | "His face had gone slack" | | 13 | "Nothing on him screamed violence." | | 14 | "His coat — a heavy" | | 15 | "The tech lifted the coat's" | | 16 | "She swept her light across" | | 17 | "Someone had crossed it out" | | 18 | "A voice came from the" | | 19 | "Detective Sergeant Coles emerged from" |
| | ratio | 0.878 | |
| 55.56% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "As though something had passed" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 34.16% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Harlow Quinn counted thirty-two steps before the concrete gave way to tile, Victorian tile with green and cream chevrons that hadn't seen a scrubbing brush sinc…" | | 1 | "The platform stretched into blackness in both directions, the rails long since stripped for scrap, the third rail still live with something that hummed against …" | | 2 | "The man lay on his back with his arms folded neatly across his chest, as though someone had arranged him there with patient fingers." | | 3 | "Detective Sergeant Coles emerged from the dark, carrying a clipboard and wearing the expression of a man who'd already made up his mind." | | 4 | "Not the ambient cold of the station, which sat around twelve degrees; this was colder, the kind of cold that made her fingertip ache." | | 5 | "Not lazily, not the way a damaged needle drifts; it spun with purpose, then stopped, then spun again, each time settling on a different bearing as though the th…" | | 6 | "The needle whipped hard toward the dark, and she felt a pull in her hand, a faint drag, as though the compass were a live thing straining on a leash." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.079 | | leniency | 0.158 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |