Run: 2026-09-23-01M36TXXWGPEBWM12TSF903W73

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Duration:
1m 27s
Cost:
$0.000754
Provider:
Xiaomi

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The stairs beneath Camden Town station went down farther than any municipal plan would allow. Harlow Quinn counted thirty-two steps before the concrete gave way to tile, Victorian tile with green and cream chevrons that hadn't seen a scrubbing brush since the Blitz. Her boots crunched over glass. Flashlight beams cut through the dark ahead of her, bobbing with the footsteps of uniforms she'd already dismissed from her mind. "Detective." The officer at the bottom of the stairs straightened up. Young face, plastic gloves still clinging to one hand. "We've got a body on the platform. Well — what's left of one." She moved past him without a word. The platform stretched into blackness in both directions, the rails long since stripped for scrap, the third rail still live with something that hummed against the fillings in her teeth. Two forensics techs knelt near the far end beside a shape she couldn't yet make out, their white suits glowing under the portable lights someone had dragged down here. Quinn's leather watch caught the beam as she raised her wrist. Two forty-seven. She'd been in bed forty minutes when the call came in. "What are we looking at?" The tech nearest the body looked up. "Male, forties, maybe fifties. Identification found in the jacket pocket — a library card, no wallet otherwise. Cause of death is..." She paused, and Quinn watched the pause travel through the woman's shoulders before she found her next sentence. "Unusual." Quinn crouched. The man lay on his back with his arms folded neatly across his chest, as though someone had arranged him there with patient fingers. His face had gone slack and grey, mouth slightly open, eyes shut. Nothing on him screamed violence. No blood. No contusions on the visible skin. His coat — a heavy wool thing far too warm for September — sat buttoned to the throat, not a hair out of place. "No wound?" "Not one we've found." The tech lifted the coat's hem with a gloved finger. Beneath it, the shirt was dry and clean. "No punctures, no lacerations, no bruising. Internals pending, obviously, but externally there's nothing. It's as though he just stopped." Quinn straightened. She swept her light across the platform. Beyond the body, the tunnel mouth opened like a throat. Torn posters clung to the far wall — one advertising a market she didn't recognize, a handbill for a stall selling "enchanted wares" in bold copperplate. Someone had crossed it out with a stripe of black paint. "You're right, that's wrong." A voice came from the stairs behind her. Detective Sergeant Coles emerged from the dark, carrying a clipboard and wearing the expression of a man who'd already made up his mind. "But I don't think it's the body that doesn't add up." Quinn kept her light on the far wall. "Go on." Coles stopped beside her, close enough that she caught the mint of his gum. "Two blocks north, a CCTV camera caught our victim walking into this station at eleven fifteen. Alone. No one followed him down. So he came down here by himself, to an abandoned platform, in the middle of the night, and he died of..." Coles let the sentence dangle, then snapped his fingers once. "Nothing." "Someone could have come down the other end. Camden Road, Chalk Farm — there are service tunnels that aren't mapped." "Sure. Except the other end's been sealed since 2012. I checked." He tapped the clipboard. "Concrete block, twelve inches thick, still intact when the utilities team surveyed it last spring. So either our man walked thirty-two steps into the dark, folded his arms, and died on his own, or there's a door down here that doesn't show up on any plan I've been given." Quinn moved along the platform, her light tracing the tile wall. Halfway down, she stopped. There, pressed into the grout between two chevron tiles, something pale and round. She pulled a pen from her jacket and nudged it out. It rolled across her glove — a coin of some kind, bone-white, no larger than a thumbnail, with a symbol pressed into its face that she didn't recognize. A circle bisected by a vertical line, with three small notches along the curve. She held it up to the beam. Coles leaned in. "What's that?" "Not on him. It was in the wall." "Gum, maybe. Or some kid left it." "Nobody's been down here in years." Quinn turned the token over. The reverse was blank except for a shallow groove worn smooth by handling — something had been rubbed across it repeatedly, like a worry stone. "This was dropped and then wedged into the gap by a foot, not a hand. Too far down for a finger." Coles took it from her, held it up, then shrugged and dropped it into an evidence bag without sealing it. "Means a person was here. Doesn't tell us how they got in or how they left." Quinn moved on. The body lay near the tunnel mouth, and as she circled it she noticed something the techs hadn't flagged. The tile beneath the man's left shoulder was dry. The tile beneath his right shoulder was wet — a thin film of condensation, recent, catching the light like oil. She crouched and touched it. Cold. Not the ambient cold of the station, which sat around twelve degrees; this was colder, the kind of cold that made her fingertip ache. She checked the surrounding tiles. The moisture formed an arc, roughly a foot across, curving from the tunnel side toward the body. As though something had passed through there and left the air behind it unsettled. "You getting anything on the forensics side?" she asked without looking up. The tech at the body's head shook hers. "No prints on the coat, no prints on the tiles. Whoever handled him wore gloves or wiped everything down." "Or didn't touch him at all." Quinn traced the arc with her pen. The condensation didn't extend past the tunnel mouth. She stood and aimed her light into the opening. The beam caught something twenty feet in — a glint, metallic, sitting on the track bed below the platform edge. "There." She climbed down onto the rails. The third rail's hum rose in her ears, a sound she could feel in her jaw. She stepped over it with care, boots finding purchase on sleepers, and reached the spot where the glint had been. A small brass object lay half-buried in ballast. She pulled it free. A compass. Its casing carried a patina of verdigris, the green creeping over the brass like mold on old copper. The face was etched with marks she'd seen once before — on a handbill pinned to the wall behind her, the crossed-out market poster. The needle spun. Not lazily, not the way a damaged needle drifts; it spun with purpose, then stopped, then spun again, each time settling on a different bearing as though the thing it pointed to wouldn't hold still. She carried it back up to the platform and held it out to Coles. "Found that twenty feet in." He took it, turned it over. "Old compass. Probably part of whatever junk they had stored down here." The needle caught his movement and swung. It pointed — directly at the body. Coles noticed. He held the compass at arm's length and rotated it. The needle followed the body, always the body, a thin steel finger reaching through brass and glass. "Well," he said. "That's a coincidence." "Is it." Quinn took the compass back. She held it near the wall where the token had been. The needle swung away from the body, settled toward the tile she'd searched, spun once, and went still. She held it near the tunnel mouth. The needle whipped hard toward the dark, and she felt a pull in her hand, a faint drag, as though the compass were a live thing straining on a leash. She slid it into an evidence bag and sealed it. "Nothing's been stored down here in a decade, Coles. The council sealed this platform in 2012 and forgot about it. Yet somebody came down tonight with a bone token in his pocket, a compass in his hand, and a coat buttoned to his throat in weather that doesn't call for one." She looked at the body again, the arms folded so neatly, the face arranged into something that almost resembled peace. "The evidence doesn't say he wandered. It says he was expected." Coles chewed his gum, the mint sharp in the cold air. "Expected by who?" Quinn crouched beside the man's left hand. The fingers were curled around nothing, but the nails were clean — not dirt-under-the-nails clean, scrubbed clean, the cuticles pushed back. Someone had cared for these hands recently, or the man himself had. She pried the fingers open anyway and found a crease in the palm where a ring had sat and, deeper, a faint mark pressed into the skin: a circle bisected by a line. The same symbol as the bone token. "The handbill on the wall," she said. "Pull it down." Coles retrieved it with his pen and held it up under the light. The crossed-out words were still readable beneath the black stripe: *The Veil Market — Full Moon, platform four. Bone token required. All wares enchanted, all prices final.* "Somebody didn't want us reading that." Quinn took the handbill, folded it once, and slipped it into her bag. She stood facing the tunnel, the compass warm against her hip through the evidence bag, and listened to the hum of the third rail settle into a rhythm that almost sounded like breathing.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.395
leniency0.789
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.76% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1603
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"lazily"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"lazily"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
75.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1603
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"unsettled"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"glint"
count2
5
word"could feel"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"tracing"
2"unsettled"
3"traced"
4"glint"
5"could feel"
6"etched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences99
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen71
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords17
totalWords1617
ratio0.011
matches
0"The Veil Market — Full Moon, platform four. Bone token required. All wares enchanted, all prices final."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount1213
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.07
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Coles"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Town1
Quinn13
Victorian1
Blitz1
Young1
September1
Detective1
Sergeant1
Coles9
Veil1
Market1
Full1
Moon1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"September"
2"Sergeant"
3"Coles"
places
0"Camden"
1"Town"
globalScore0.964
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like breathing"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1617
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean36.75
std26.71
cv0.727
sampleLengths
069
133
266
324
45
547
675
72
841
956
1046
1110
1268
1320
1464
1581
167
175
188
197
2057
2136
2281
2336
2412
2527
2651
2754
2882
2914
305
3118
3214
3329
346
3573
3610
3782
3814
3973
407
4110
4240
4352
94.63% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences99
matches
0"been rubbed"
1"was etched"
2"were curled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs197
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences122
ratio0.098
matches
0"His coat — a heavy wool thing far too warm for September — sat buttoned to the throat, not a hair out of place."
1"Torn posters clung to the far wall — one advertising a market she didn't recognize, a handbill for a stall selling \"enchanted wares\" in bold copperplate."
2"It rolled across her glove — a coin of some kind, bone-white, no larger than a thumbnail, with a symbol pressed into its face that she didn't recognize."
3"The reverse was blank except for a shallow groove worn smooth by handling — something had been rubbed across it repeatedly, like a worry stone."
4"The tile beneath his right shoulder was wet — a thin film of condensation, recent, catching the light like oil."
5"Not the ambient cold of the station, which sat around twelve degrees; this was colder, the kind of cold that made her fingertip ache."
6"The beam caught something twenty feet in — a glint, metallic, sitting on the track bed below the platform edge."
7"The face was etched with marks she'd seen once before — on a handbill pinned to the wall behind her, the crossed-out market poster."
8"Not lazily, not the way a damaged needle drifts; it spun with purpose, then stopped, then spun again, each time settling on a different bearing as though the thing it pointed to wouldn't hold still."
9"It pointed — directly at the body."
10"The fingers were curled around nothing, but the nails were clean — not dirt-under-the-nails clean, scrubbed clean, the cuticles pushed back."
11"The crossed-out words were still readable beneath the black stripe: *The Veil Market — Full Moon, platform four."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1211
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.03303055326176713
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.006606110652353427
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean13.25
std11.1
cv0.837
sampleLengths
015
128
25
321
411
59
613
77
830
929
1011
112
1211
135
147
1539
161
172
1824
1912
205
212
226
2324
242
2514
268
2719
282
297
3010
3126
3211
3312
3423
3511
368
372
3814
3953
401
4120
4215
4349
4411
454
4613
4711
4828
4914
64.21% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4098360655737705
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners50
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
91.11% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences90
matches
0"Her boots crunched over glass."
1"She moved past him without"
2"She'd been in bed forty"
3"She paused, and Quinn watched"
4"His face had gone slack"
5"His coat — a heavy"
6"She swept her light across"
7"He tapped the clipboard"
8"She pulled a pen from"
9"It rolled across her glove"
10"She held it up to"
11"She crouched and touched it."
12"She checked the surrounding tiles."
13"she asked without looking up"
14"She stood and aimed her"
15"She climbed down onto the"
16"She stepped over it with"
17"She pulled it free."
18"Its casing carried a patina"
19"She carried it back up"
ratio0.322
21.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences90
matches
0"The stairs beneath Camden Town"
1"Harlow Quinn counted thirty-two steps"
2"Her boots crunched over glass."
3"Flashlight beams cut through the"
4"The officer at the bottom"
5"She moved past him without"
6"The platform stretched into blackness"
7"Quinn's leather watch caught the"
8"She'd been in bed forty"
9"The tech nearest the body"
10"She paused, and Quinn watched"
11"The man lay on his"
12"His face had gone slack"
13"Nothing on him screamed violence."
14"His coat — a heavy"
15"The tech lifted the coat's"
16"She swept her light across"
17"Someone had crossed it out"
18"A voice came from the"
19"Detective Sergeant Coles emerged from"
ratio0.878
55.56% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences90
matches
0"As though something had passed"
ratio0.011
34.16% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Harlow Quinn counted thirty-two steps before the concrete gave way to tile, Victorian tile with green and cream chevrons that hadn't seen a scrubbing brush sinc…"
1"The platform stretched into blackness in both directions, the rails long since stripped for scrap, the third rail still live with something that hummed against …"
2"The man lay on his back with his arms folded neatly across his chest, as though someone had arranged him there with patient fingers."
3"Detective Sergeant Coles emerged from the dark, carrying a clipboard and wearing the expression of a man who'd already made up his mind."
4"Not the ambient cold of the station, which sat around twelve degrees; this was colder, the kind of cold that made her fingertip ache."
5"Not lazily, not the way a damaged needle drifts; it spun with purpose, then stopped, then spun again, each time settling on a different bearing as though the th…"
6"The needle whipped hard toward the dark, and she felt a pull in her hand, a faint drag, as though the compass were a live thing straining on a leash."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.079
leniency0.158
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.7640%