Run: 2026-09-23-01M36TYB22314RNBMBER6VSXZF

Run Details

Duration:
2m 52s
Cost:
$0.000691
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign outside The Raven's Nest flickered through the rain as Rory pushed through the door, her delivery bag slung over one shoulder, rainwater darkening the shoulders of her jacket. The bar was quiet for a Tuesday — just a scatter of regulars nursing pints along the far wall, the black-and-white photographs of London watching from every surface. She nodded toward Silas behind the counter, who was polishing a glass with a cloth that had seen better decades, and slid onto a stool at the end of the bar. "Pint," she said. "And something for the walk home." Silas studied her for a moment, his hazel eyes catching the amber light from the bottle shelf behind him, then reached for a glass. His silver signet ring clicked against the counter as he set the drink down. "Rough one?" "Three wrong addresses, a lift broken in Camberwell, and Yu-Fei called to say I left a customer's spring rolls at the wrong door." She wrapped both hands around the pint. "So, standard." Before Silas could respond, the door swung open and a gust of wet air rolled through the room. A woman stepped inside — tall, red-haired, wearing a coat that cost more than Rory's monthly rent — and shook the rain from her umbrella with a sharp, efficient motion. She glanced around the bar with the careful assessment of someone choosing an exit before choosing a seat, and then her gaze locked onto Rory. The woman's mouth opened. Closed. She took two steps forward. "Rory?" Rory turned slowly on the stool. The face was rounder now, the jawline sharper, but the eyes — green, wide-set, a freckled constellation across the bridge of the nose — those hadn't changed. "Dee?" Dervla Hughes crossed the bar in four strides and stood there, rain still dripping from the hem of her coat, her lips pressed into a shape that could have been a smile or the beginning of something worse. "My God." Dervla's voice cracked on the second word. She pressed a hand to her own collarbone as if to physically hold herself together. "I can't — how long has it been? Four years? Five?" "Close to five." Rory stayed on the stool but shifted her weight, a small adjustment that put her body at an angle rather than square-on. "Sit down, Dee." Dervla sat. She flagged Silas down without looking at him, ordered a whiskey neat, and when it arrived, she drank half of it in one go. The glass hit the counter with a sound that turned a few heads. "I heard you were in London," Dervla said. "Mam told me. She saw your mother at the market in Pontcanna last spring. Said you were 'doing deliveries.' I assumed she meant you'd been sent out for the shopping." "And now?" Dervla's eyes moved over Rory's face — the black hair cut shorter than it used to be, falling straight to the jaw in a way that had nothing to do with style and everything to do with convenience. The crescent scar on her left wrist, visible where her sleeve had ridden up. "Now I see it." Dervla folded her hands on the bar. Her nails were manicured, a deep burgundy. "You look tired, Rory." "I look like I got rained on." "You look like someone who's been carrying something for a long time and doesn't know how to put it down." Dervla leaned back. "You were always like that, even as a kid. You'd eat the whole bag of chips yourself rather than admit you were hungry." Rory almost laughed. The sound came out wrong — half-formed, swallowed by the noise of a glass hitting a coaster at the other end of the bar. She took a drink instead. "What are you doing in Soho, Dee? You don't drink in places like this." "Meeting a client. Dentist's office in Marylebone — I'm in property law now, if you can believe it." Dervla said it like an offering, something she expected Rory to reach for and be impressed by. She waited. "That tracks," Rory said. "You always liked arguing about who got which room." "I liked being right about it." Dervla traced the rim of her whiskey glass. The smile that followed was careful, placed. "I heard about Evan. What happened. I didn't know where you'd gone — you dropped off the map completely. Deleted everything. Your number, your socials, all of it. I called Eva, and she told me not to call again." "She was protective." "She was right to be." Dervla's green eyes stayed on Rory's. "I should have been the one protecting you. Instead I was the one who introduced you to him at that party in Canton, and I remember — I remember exactly what I said. I said, 'That's Evan from the rugby club, he's harmless.'" Rory said nothing. She turned the pint glass a quarter rotation on the bar, watching the foam collapse. "I've thought about that sentence," Dervla continued, "more times than I'd like to admit. What it meant that I called him harmless. What it said about how well I actually knew you, because if I'd known you, I'd have seen what was coming a mile off." "You couldn't have." "Don't do that." Dervla's voice tightened. "Don't make it easier for me. I sat across from you in my kitchen six months after you started seeing him, and you had a bruise on your upper arm shaped like a thumbprint, and you told me you'd walked into a cupboard door. And I nodded. I actually nodded, Rory. I sat there and nodded at a lie that big." The bar seemed to contract around them. Rory became aware of Silas at the far end, wiping down the counter with slow, deliberate strokes, giving them the room. "I didn't come here to unload on you," Dervla said. She rubbed her thumb across the signet ring-shaped indentation on the cloth of her coat, though she wore no rings. "I came here because I saw you through the window and I couldn't walk past." "And now you're here." "And now I'm here." Dervla swallowed. The whiskey glass was empty. She set it down. "I want to know where you went. Not the version your mother tells people at the market. The real one." Rory pulled the sleeve of her jacket down over her wrist. She looked at the photographs on the wall behind Dervla — faces from another decade, all of them strangers, all of them caught mid-sentence with their mouths open as though they were still talking to someone who had since left the room. "I came to London because Eva called and said she had a spare room," Rory said. "That was the beginning. After that it was just — one day after another. I worked for a restaurant. I found a flat. I stopped going back to Cardiff." "You stopped going back," Dervla repeated. She let the words settle between them like coins on a counter. "I stopped going back," Rory said. "And you stopped looking for me. Those are two different kinds of disappearing, Dee, but they end up in the same place." Dervla's hand tightened around the empty glass. She didn't argue. Her jaw worked — the muscles shifting beneath the skin — and she looked down at the bar surface where the wood had been scarred by decades of rings and spilled drinks, a landscape of small damage. "I looked for you for two years," she said quietly. "After that I told myself you didn't want to be found. That seemed like the kinder interpretation." "It wasn't kinder. It was easier." The word hung there. Dervla exhaled through her nose and rubbed the space between her eyebrows with two fingers, a gesture so old and so familiar that Rory felt something shift behind her ribs — a wall she'd built settling a fraction out of true. Silas appeared with two fresh glasses and set them down without comment. He caught Rory's eye for half a second, then returned to his end of the bar, the limp in his left leg more pronounced as he moved away, as it always did when he'd been standing too long. Dervla picked up the new glass. "So what happens now? We sit here and do a post-mortem on fifteen years of friendship in a Soho bar at eleven o'clock on a Tuesday?" "I don't know." Rory meant it. She had no script for this, no angle to work, no quick solution she could offer and watch it land. "I know I should have called someone. I know that. I know you would have picked up." "I would have driven to London at two in the morning if you'd asked." "I know that too." They drank. The neon sign outside buzzed and stuttered, casting green light across the wet pavement, and somewhere behind them a photograph frame had come loose from the wall and hung at an angle, its subject tilting sideways into an eternity Rory couldn't read.
created_at"2026-09-23T09:53:24.55Z" 9/23/2026, 9:53:24 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Dervla leaned back [back]"
1"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.08
93.32% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1496
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1496
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"standard"
count1
2
word"efficient"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"standard"
2"efficient"
3"weight"
4"traced"
5"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences67
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen61
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1512
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount893
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.13
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Dervla"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory19
Tuesday1
London1
Silas6
Hughes1
Dervla19
persons
0"Nest"
1"Rory"
2"Silas"
3"Hughes"
4"Dervla"
places
0"Raven"
1"London"
globalScore0.436
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1512
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean30.86
std20.8
cv0.674
sampleLengths
091
19
238
32
432
573
610
71
833
91
1038
1135
1228
1339
1438
152
1652
1722
187
1946
2032
2114
2237
2313
2460
253
2654
2718
2846
293
3067
3128
3245
334
3435
3553
3645
3718
3828
3947
4027
416
4245
4350
4432
4543
4614
474
4844
94.79% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences67
matches
0"were manicured"
1"been scarred"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs149
matches
0"was polishing"
1"were still talking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences97
ratio0.082
matches
0"The bar was quiet for a Tuesday — just a scatter of regulars nursing pints along the far wall, the black-and-white photographs of London watching from every surface."
1"A woman stepped inside — tall, red-haired, wearing a coat that cost more than Rory's monthly rent — and shook the rain from her umbrella with a sharp, efficient motion."
2"The face was rounder now, the jawline sharper, but the eyes — green, wide-set, a freckled constellation across the bridge of the nose — those hadn't changed."
3"Dervla's eyes moved over Rory's face — the black hair cut shorter than it used to be, falling straight to the jaw in a way that had nothing to do with style and everything to do with convenience."
4"The sound came out wrong — half-formed, swallowed by the noise of a glass hitting a coaster at the other end of the bar."
5"She looked at the photographs on the wall behind Dervla — faces from another decade, all of them strangers, all of them caught mid-sentence with their mouths open as though they were still talking to someone who had since left the room."
6"Her jaw worked — the muscles shifting beneath the skin — and she looked down at the bar surface where the wood had been scarred by decades of rings and spilled drinks, a landscape of small damage."
7"Dervla exhaled through her nose and rubbed the space between her eyebrows with two fingers, a gesture so old and so familiar that Rory felt something shift behind her ribs — a wall she'd built settling a fraction out of true."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount890
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.025842696629213482
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0044943820224719105
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean15.59
std13.11
cv0.841
sampleLengths
032
128
231
33
46
524
614
72
830
92
1018
1130
1225
134
141
155
161
176
1827
191
2038
219
2215
2311
2425
253
262
2724
2813
298
3030
312
3238
3314
3411
357
364
377
3823
3923
403
4124
425
4314
4435
452
464
479
4814
497
45.02% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.31958762886597936
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
79.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences54
matches
0"She nodded toward Silas behind"
1"His silver signet ring clicked"
2"She wrapped both hands around"
3"She glanced around the bar"
4"She took two steps forward."
5"She pressed a hand to"
6"She flagged Silas down without"
7"Her nails were manicured, a"
8"She took a drink instead."
9"She turned the pint glass"
10"She rubbed her thumb across"
11"She set it down."
12"She looked at the photographs"
13"She let the words settle"
14"She didn't argue."
15"Her jaw worked — the"
16"she said quietly"
17"He caught Rory's eye for"
18"She had no script for"
ratio0.352
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences54
matches
0"The green neon sign outside"
1"The bar was quiet for"
2"She nodded toward Silas behind"
3"Silas studied her for a"
4"His silver signet ring clicked"
5"She wrapped both hands around"
6"A woman stepped inside —"
7"She glanced around the bar"
8"The woman's mouth opened."
9"She took two steps forward."
10"Rory turned slowly on the"
11"The face was rounder now,"
12"Dervla Hughes crossed the bar"
13"Dervla's voice cracked on the"
14"She pressed a hand to"
15"Rory stayed on the stool"
16"She flagged Silas down without"
17"The glass hit the counter"
18"Dervla's eyes moved over Rory's"
19"The crescent scar on her"
ratio0.981
92.59% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"Before Silas could respond, the"
ratio0.019
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"She nodded toward Silas behind the counter, who was polishing a glass with a cloth that had seen better decades, and slid onto a stool at the end of the bar."
1"A woman stepped inside — tall, red-haired, wearing a coat that cost more than Rory's monthly rent — and shook the rain from her umbrella with a sharp, efficient…"
2"Dervla Hughes crossed the bar in four strides and stood there, rain still dripping from the hem of her coat, her lips pressed into a shape that could have been …"
3"She pressed a hand to her own collarbone as if to physically hold herself together."
4"Dervla's eyes moved over Rory's face — the black hair cut shorter than it used to be, falling straight to the jaw in a way that had nothing to do with style and…"
5"She looked at the photographs on the wall behind Dervla — faces from another decade, all of them strangers, all of them caught mid-sentence with their mouths op…"
6"The neon sign outside buzzed and stuttered, casting green light across the wet pavement, and somewhere behind them a photograph frame had come loose from the wa…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Dervla continued (continue)"
1"Dervla repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.08
79.4973%