| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Dervla leaned back [back]" | | 1 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 50 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.08 | |
| 93.32% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1496 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 79.95% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1496 | | totalAiIsms | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "standard" | | 2 | "efficient" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "traced" | | 5 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 97 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 61 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1512 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 22 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 49 | | wordCount | 893 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 2.13 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 5 | | worstWindowName | "Dervla" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Rory | 19 | | Tuesday | 1 | | London | 1 | | Silas | 6 | | Hughes | 1 | | Dervla | 19 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nest" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Hughes" | | 4 | "Dervla" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.436 | | windowScore | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1512 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 49 | | mean | 30.86 | | std | 20.8 | | cv | 0.674 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 91 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 38 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 73 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 35 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 39 | | 14 | 38 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 52 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 46 | | 20 | 32 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 37 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 60 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 54 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 46 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 67 | | 31 | 28 | | 32 | 45 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 35 | | 35 | 53 | | 36 | 45 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 47 | | 40 | 27 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 45 | | 43 | 50 | | 44 | 32 | | 45 | 43 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 44 |
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| 94.79% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "were manicured" | | 1 | "been scarred" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 149 | | matches | | 0 | "was polishing" | | 1 | "were still talking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 97 | | ratio | 0.082 | | matches | | 0 | "The bar was quiet for a Tuesday — just a scatter of regulars nursing pints along the far wall, the black-and-white photographs of London watching from every surface." | | 1 | "A woman stepped inside — tall, red-haired, wearing a coat that cost more than Rory's monthly rent — and shook the rain from her umbrella with a sharp, efficient motion." | | 2 | "The face was rounder now, the jawline sharper, but the eyes — green, wide-set, a freckled constellation across the bridge of the nose — those hadn't changed." | | 3 | "Dervla's eyes moved over Rory's face — the black hair cut shorter than it used to be, falling straight to the jaw in a way that had nothing to do with style and everything to do with convenience." | | 4 | "The sound came out wrong — half-formed, swallowed by the noise of a glass hitting a coaster at the other end of the bar." | | 5 | "She looked at the photographs on the wall behind Dervla — faces from another decade, all of them strangers, all of them caught mid-sentence with their mouths open as though they were still talking to someone who had since left the room." | | 6 | "Her jaw worked — the muscles shifting beneath the skin — and she looked down at the bar surface where the wood had been scarred by decades of rings and spilled drinks, a landscape of small damage." | | 7 | "Dervla exhaled through her nose and rubbed the space between her eyebrows with two fingers, a gesture so old and so familiar that Rory felt something shift behind her ribs — a wall she'd built settling a fraction out of true." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 890 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.025842696629213482 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0044943820224719105 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 97 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 97 | | mean | 15.59 | | std | 13.11 | | cv | 0.841 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 32 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 38 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 30 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 38 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 35 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 45.02% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.31958762886597936 | | totalSentences | 97 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 79.26% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "She nodded toward Silas behind" | | 1 | "His silver signet ring clicked" | | 2 | "She wrapped both hands around" | | 3 | "She glanced around the bar" | | 4 | "She took two steps forward." | | 5 | "She pressed a hand to" | | 6 | "She flagged Silas down without" | | 7 | "Her nails were manicured, a" | | 8 | "She took a drink instead." | | 9 | "She turned the pint glass" | | 10 | "She rubbed her thumb across" | | 11 | "She set it down." | | 12 | "She looked at the photographs" | | 13 | "She let the words settle" | | 14 | "She didn't argue." | | 15 | "Her jaw worked — the" | | 16 | "she said quietly" | | 17 | "He caught Rory's eye for" | | 18 | "She had no script for" |
| | ratio | 0.352 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 53 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "The green neon sign outside" | | 1 | "The bar was quiet for" | | 2 | "She nodded toward Silas behind" | | 3 | "Silas studied her for a" | | 4 | "His silver signet ring clicked" | | 5 | "She wrapped both hands around" | | 6 | "A woman stepped inside —" | | 7 | "She glanced around the bar" | | 8 | "The woman's mouth opened." | | 9 | "She took two steps forward." | | 10 | "Rory turned slowly on the" | | 11 | "The face was rounder now," | | 12 | "Dervla Hughes crossed the bar" | | 13 | "Dervla's voice cracked on the" | | 14 | "She pressed a hand to" | | 15 | "Rory stayed on the stool" | | 16 | "She flagged Silas down without" | | 17 | "The glass hit the counter" | | 18 | "Dervla's eyes moved over Rory's" | | 19 | "The crescent scar on her" |
| | ratio | 0.981 | |
| 92.59% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Before Silas could respond, the" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "She nodded toward Silas behind the counter, who was polishing a glass with a cloth that had seen better decades, and slid onto a stool at the end of the bar." | | 1 | "A woman stepped inside — tall, red-haired, wearing a coat that cost more than Rory's monthly rent — and shook the rain from her umbrella with a sharp, efficient…" | | 2 | "Dervla Hughes crossed the bar in four strides and stood there, rain still dripping from the hem of her coat, her lips pressed into a shape that could have been …" | | 3 | "She pressed a hand to her own collarbone as if to physically hold herself together." | | 4 | "Dervla's eyes moved over Rory's face — the black hair cut shorter than it used to be, falling straight to the jaw in a way that had nothing to do with style and…" | | 5 | "She looked at the photographs on the wall behind Dervla — faces from another decade, all of them strangers, all of them caught mid-sentence with their mouths op…" | | 6 | "The neon sign outside buzzed and stuttered, casting green light across the wet pavement, and somewhere behind them a photograph frame had come loose from the wa…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Dervla continued (continue)" | | 1 | "Dervla repeated (repeat)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 50 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.08 | |