Run: 2026-09-23-01M36TZZVQJXH7W2FYAPA5X934

Run Details

Duration:
1m 14s
Cost:
$0.002163
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain came sideways off the Euston Road and hit Harlow Quinn's face like handfuls of cold gravel. She didn't slow down. Twenty yards ahead, the suspect cut left across four lanes of traffic, a grey hood and a canvas messenger bag flapping against his hip, and Quinn went after him without a thought in her head except the arithmetic of distance and speed. A taxi blared. She slapped its bonnet, vaulted the curb, landed hard on the balls of her feet. Her watch, the worn leather one that had been Morris's, slid wetly on her wrist. She tightened the strap with her teeth and kept running. He was younger than her by fifteen years and faster on the flats, but he was getting sloppy. Twice now he'd looked back, and looking back cost him. He clipped a bin outside the Tesco Metro and went down on one knee, and she closed four yards before he was up again. Her radio crackled against her collarbone. She ignored it. Whatever the dispatcher wanted could wait until she had this man's wrists in front of him. She knew his face now. Not from the file, not from the six weeks of dead-end forensics and phone dumps and three interviews that produced nothing, but from the way he moved through Soho on a Tuesday night like he owned the shadows there. She'd first clocked him leaving the Raven's Nest at half eleven, that green neon sign bleeding colour onto the wet pavement, and something in her chest had gone taut and stayed taut. It was the walk. He walked like a man carrying something he could not put down. He ducked into the warren of streets behind Camden High Street, past shuttered shops and the black mouth of an alley where someone had stacked flattened boxes into a kind of nest. Quinn took the corner wide, hand on the ASP at her belt, and saw him stop. Not slow down — stop, dead, at a doorway with no sign above it. He pressed something to the lock. There was no light, no sound she could hear over the rain, but the door gave. She was ten feet behind him when it swung shut. She got her fingers in the gap and hauled it open onto a flight of concrete steps descending into a thick, warm dark that smelled of candle smoke and wet stone and something older, something like a butcher's cellar. Quinn stood in the doorway. Water ran from her cropped hair into her collar and down her spine. Every rule she had ever learned in eighteen years said don't. Solo pursuit, no backup on scene, unknown premises, no warrant, no eyes on exits. She could hear Morris saying it in that flat Midlands voice of his: *You want to die curious, Quinn, there are cheaper ways.* And he would know. Whatever had taken him three years ago had happened in a place like this — a place that wasn't on any map she'd been able to draw. She still had the case file in her desk drawer. She still opened it on the bad nights. The suspect's footsteps were receding down the stairwell. Thirteen steps, fourteen. He was moving fast but not panicked now, and that was worse. He wasn't running anymore. He was going home. She keyed her radio. "Control, this is DC Quinn. I'm pursuing a male suspect into a premises off — " She looked back at the street, at the wet bins and the flat boxes and the delivery bike chained to a drainpipe. "Off Hartley Street, north end. Requesting units to contain the rear. Over." Static. Then a wash of sound like a wave breaking. Then nothing. She tried again. Nothing. Quinn put the radio away and drew the ASP. She thought about the bone token. That was the part that had lodged under her skin all evening, the detail she couldn't file away. She'd found it three days ago in the Raven's Nest, in the hidden back room behind the bookshelf, wedged behind a loose panel where Silas kept the things he thought the police wouldn't find. A finger bone — human, small, polished to a shine by handling — with a mark burned into the base that matched nothing in any database she'd run. Silas had watched her turn it over in her gloved hands with an expression she couldn't read, and he had said, very carefully, *That's not mine, Detective. And if I were you I'd put it back.* She had not put it back. It was in her coat pocket right now, wrapped in an evidence bag, and it was warm against her ribs in a way that a small piece of bone had no business being. Now the suspect stopped at an unmarked door in the dark and the door opened for him without a key. Quinn went down. The stairwell curved and the concrete gave way to old tile, white with a green border, cracked and buckled by a century of damp. Underground, Camden's abandoned stations lay in a knot beneath the streets, and she had been in two of them on raids — but this was not one of those. This passage ran wrong. It angled deeper than it should have and turned when it had no reason to turn. Her torch threw a circle of light ahead of her feet and she kept to the edges, one shoulder brushing tile that wept. At the bottom, the air changed. It grew warm and close and fragrant, and she heard, faintly, the sound of many people talking at once in a low unhurried murmur, the way people talk in churches and at wakes. A second door. It stood open, and through it poured light the colour of a low fire — amber and gold and smoke. Quinn stopped on the threshold and looked. The platform stretched away in both directions, its vaulted ceiling lost in shadow. Market stalls had been thrown up along the length of it in two ragged rows, and between them moved a crowd she could not count and did not want to. Canvas awnings dripped. A woman with silver hair braided to her waist stood behind a table of stoppered bottles that glowed faintly from within, each one holding its own weather — a curl of fog, a flicker of lightning no bigger than a match head. Two stalls down, something hung in a cage and she refused to look at it directly. A man with too many rings on his fingers sold information from ledgers stacked to his chin, and a queue of — of clients, she made herself think, clients — waited with their hoods up and their faces turned away. Enchanted goods. Banned alchemical substances. Information. She had heard rumours for eighteen months and believed perhaps a tenth of them. She believed all of it now. Her hand went to her pocket and found the bone. The warmth of it pulsed once against her fingers, steady as a resting heart. *Entry requirement*, the fragmentary intelligence had said, and she had laughed at the phrase when it came across her desk, because it read like a joke, like the punchline to a story nobody would tell her. Quinn looked at the crowd. Her suspect was in there somewhere, moving through it with the ease of a man among friends. If she lost him here, she lost the case. She lost the six weeks. She lost the four men whose bodies had been pulled out of the Thames with their mouths full of river silt and their eyes wide open, and she lost whatever chain of events had started with them and would end with someone else. She also lost the slim, cold, irrational chance that this place could tell her what had happened to Morris. The rain had stopped. She realized that only now, standing under the ground, with the drip of the tunnel behind her and the amber light on her face. Somewhere above, London went on being London. Somewhere above, control would be paging her and finding only static and eventually, in an hour or two, sending someone to look. In an hour or two, this market would be gone. It moved every full moon, and tonight the moon was fat and low over the river. Quinn unwrapped the bone from its evidence bag. She weighed it in her palm — an ounce, perhaps less — and watched the crowd for any sign that they had noticed her, this woman in a soaked trench coat with a police baton and a dead man's watch and rain in her shoes. A few faces turned her way and turned back. The silver-haired woman at the bottle stall regarded her with an expression that might have been pity and might have been hunger. *You want to die curious*, Morris's voice said. "Yeah," Quinn muttered. "I know what I want." She dropped the bone token into the shallow wooden dish at the market's threshold. It landed with a small, precise sound, and the sound carried. Two or three of the nearest figures glanced over and then away, and a stallholder shifted to make room, as though a place had been kept for her. As though she had been expected. The token sat in the dish, glowing faintly now, and the warmth went out of her pocket and out of her ribs, and she felt oddly lighter, oddly more visible, as though she had stepped from a darkened room into daylight. Quinn drew a breath that tasted of candle smoke and old iron. She folded the empty evidence bag and put it away — contamination, chain of custody, all of it already ruined, and she would think about that later — and she walked in. The crowd did not part for her. It closed behind her. She felt it close like water, like a held breath released, and the tunnel mouth and the rain and the whole reasonable world went away behind her shoulder. Ahead, at the far end of the platform, the grey hood bobbed once and disappeared around a stall stacked with jars of something that moved. Quinn lengthened her stride.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.09% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1691
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1691
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"down her spine"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"database"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count2
5
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"down her spine"
1"footsteps"
2"database"
3"flicker"
4"warmth"
5"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences110
matches(empty)
90.91% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences110
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"think"
hedgeMatches
0"happened to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences112
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords30
totalWords1706
ratio0.018
matches
0"You want to die curious, Quinn, there are cheaper ways."
1"That's not mine, Detective. And if I were you I'd put it back."
2"Entry requirement"
3"You want to die curious"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1672
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity0.78
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Euston1
Road1
Harlow1
Quinn13
Morris4
Tesco1
Metro1
Soho1
Tuesday1
Raven2
Nest2
Camden2
High1
Street1
Midlands1
Static1
Silas2
Detective1
Thames1
London2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Raven"
4"Silas"
places
0"Euston"
1"Road"
2"Tesco"
3"Soho"
4"Camden"
5"High"
6"Street"
7"Midlands"
8"Thames"
9"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like a butcher's cellar"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1706
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean44.89
std36.16
cv0.805
sampleLengths
064
143
277
392
484
549
618
797
831
954
1012
114
1215
13116
1439
1520
163
1796
1839
1923
207
21164
226
2324
2436
2579
2619
2757
2826
2984
308
318
3259
3341
3444
3539
3625
374
92.50% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences110
matches
0"been thrown"
1"been pulled"
2"been kept"
3"been expected"
95.42% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs255
matches
0"was getting"
1"were receding"
2"wasn't running"
3"was going"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences112
ratio0.08
matches
0"Not slow down — stop, dead, at a doorway with no sign above it."
1"Whatever had taken him three years ago had happened in a place like this — a place that wasn't on any map she'd been able to draw."
2"A finger bone — human, small, polished to a shine by handling — with a mark burned into the base that matched nothing in any database she'd run."
3"Underground, Camden's abandoned stations lay in a knot beneath the streets, and she had been in two of them on raids — but this was not one of those."
4"It stood open, and through it poured light the colour of a low fire — amber and gold and smoke."
5"A woman with silver hair braided to her waist stood behind a table of stoppered bottles that glowed faintly from within, each one holding its own weather — a curl of fog, a flicker of lightning no bigger than a match head."
6"A man with too many rings on his fingers sold information from ledgers stacked to his chin, and a queue of — of clients, she made herself think, clients — waited with their hoods up and their faces turned away."
7"She weighed it in her palm — an ounce, perhaps less — and watched the crowd for any sign that they had noticed her, this woman in a soaked trench coat with a police baton and a dead man's watch and rain in her shoes."
8"She folded the empty evidence bag and put it away — contamination, chain of custody, all of it already ruined, and she would think about that later — and she walked in."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1661
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"slim, cold, irrational chance"
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.027694160144491272
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.006622516556291391
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences112
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences112
mean15.23
std11.79
cv0.774
sampleLengths
018
14
242
33
415
515
610
718
810
924
106
113
1216
135
1439
1532
164
1712
1832
1916
2014
216
2216
2310
2439
255
2613
2711
2814
2927
3027
3110
328
338
343
3512
364
374
384
3938
4012
411
429
432
443
451
469
476
4818
4934
55.06% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.38392857142857145
totalSentences112
uniqueOpeners43
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences104
matches
0"Twice now he'd looked back,"
1"Then a wash of sound"
2"Somewhere above, London went on"
3"Somewhere above, control would be"
ratio0.038
31.54% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences104
matches
0"She didn't slow down."
1"She slapped its bonnet, vaulted"
2"Her watch, the worn leather"
3"She tightened the strap with"
4"He was younger than her"
5"He clipped a bin outside"
6"Her radio crackled against her"
7"She ignored it."
8"She knew his face now."
9"She'd first clocked him leaving"
10"It was the walk."
11"He walked like a man"
12"He ducked into the warren"
13"He pressed something to the"
14"She was ten feet behind"
15"She got her fingers in"
16"She could hear Morris saying"
17"She still had the case"
18"She still opened it on"
19"He was moving fast but"
ratio0.471
65.77% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences104
matches
0"The rain came sideways off"
1"She didn't slow down."
2"A taxi blared."
3"She slapped its bonnet, vaulted"
4"Her watch, the worn leather"
5"She tightened the strap with"
6"He was younger than her"
7"He clipped a bin outside"
8"Her radio crackled against her"
9"She ignored it."
10"Whatever the dispatcher wanted could"
11"She knew his face now."
12"She'd first clocked him leaving"
13"It was the walk."
14"He walked like a man"
15"He ducked into the warren"
16"Quinn took the corner wide,"
17"He pressed something to the"
18"She was ten feet behind"
19"She got her fingers in"
ratio0.788
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences104
matches
0"Now the suspect stopped at"
1"If she lost him here,"
2"As though she had been"
ratio0.029
97.51% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences63
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She got her fingers in the gap and hauled it open onto a flight of concrete steps descending into a thick, warm dark that smelled of candle smoke and wet stone …"
1"A woman with silver hair braided to her waist stood behind a table of stoppered bottles that glowed faintly from within, each one holding its own weather — a cu…"
2"The silver-haired woman at the bottle stall regarded her with an expression that might have been pity and might have been hunger."
3"Ahead, at the far end of the platform, the grey hood bobbed once and disappeared around a stall stacked with jars of something that moved."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Quinn muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.5
86.5366%