Run: 2026-09-23-01M36V204BCJ2A2DY8XNCWQR32

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2m 13s
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$0.002877
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The latch turned and the door swung wide before I thought better of it. Amber and black. Those eyes caught the bare stairwell bulb and held it like a match held a flame. Lucien Moreau stood on my landing in a tailored charcoal coat, cane planted on my doormat, not one crease out of place. "You kept the same locks." His French curled the words at the edges. I leaned on the doorframe and took up as much of it as I could. "You kept the same nerve." Water beaded on the wool of his shoulders. He'd walked, then, the whole miserable length from wherever he'd parked, and Lucien Moreau did not walk. Lucien Moreau had drivers. Lucien Moreau had people who opened doors so he never had to touch brass. Five months. One hundred and fifty-three days, not that I counted them, and the first thing I noticed was the cuff of his left sleeve. Dark. Stiff. Folded back half an inch too far to hide the edge of a bandage. "Invite me in." "There's a pub downstairs full of people who'd love your company." "Silas charges for the pleasure." His mouth did the thing it did when a joke cost him something. "And I have nothing left worth spending." That landed somewhere behind my ribs. I hated that it landed. I stepped back. Not an invitation. Physics. The hallway is narrow and he fills doorways the way money fills rooms, whether you want it there or not. My flat is one long shoebox over the bar: kitchen at the front, bed at the back, a sagging green sofa in between that I bought off a departing tenant for twenty quid. The radiator clicked and ticked. Below our feet, someone put money in the jukebox and a bassline shuddered up through the floorboards. Lucien took it in. The stack of takeaway menus I use as a coaster. The courier bag by the door with the Golden Empress dragon stitched onto it in gold thread. The single mug on the draining board, still wet. "Carter." He said my surname the way other people said a diagnosis. "What happened to the plants?" "They died. Like everything else in this flat that needed tending." He turned those mismatched eyes on me and let that sit. "Charming. I'd forgotten how you collect wounds and polish them." "And I'd forgotten you count the cost of everything except what you take." His hand tightened on the ivory handle. Just for a second. A flicker of pressure in the knuckles and then nothing, the way a bell keeps ringing after the striker's gone. Good. Let it ring. I put the kitchen counter between us and poured myself tea I didn't want, because both my hands needed something to do. Chamomile. Cold. I drank it anyway. "You found me through Silas." "You're not hard to find. Delivering sweet and sour pork three nights a week under a name I gave you." "You gave me Malphora because I needed a name that wasn't mine. You also gave me a courier job in Saint-Gilles and a locked box and no warning about what the buyer had done to get that rich." "He was alive when you delivered." "Check again." Silence. The jukebox downstairs changed songs. Something slow and sorry for itself. Lucien set his cane against the counter and unbuttoned his coat one-handed, favouring the left. Up close the bandage showed proper. Not a graze. Someone had gone at him with an edge, and he'd had it dressed by someone competent, and then he'd come here instead of home. "Why are you in London?" "Business." "In my hallway at midnight." "The hour keeps." "Nothing of yours keeps. That was the whole lesson." I put the mug down harder than I meant to. Tea jumped the rim and ran a warm line over my wrist, over the little crescent scar there. "You left Marseille on the first train and I spent four days explaining to very unpleasant people where their property had gone." "Zelenko's people." "Zelenko's widow. She's worse. She has his money and his grudge and no one left to be afraid of." The amber eye narrowed. The black one gave nothing away at all, a pupil swallowing a whole iris, and I remembered the first night I saw it happen, in a Marseille bar where the air tasted of salt and his hand on my wrist had felt like a door opening. He'd glamoured the whole room grey and told me not to look at him until it passed. I'd looked. Of course I'd looked. That was the entire problem with him, from the first minute to this one. "Sit down, Rory." Nobody had used that name in a while. It came out of his mouth like a key turning in a lock I'd bricked up. "No." "Then stand. I don't care. But listen." He peeled off one glove, then the other, and laid them on my counter like a hand he was willing to show. A gold signet ring, worn thin. The scar across his left palm I remembered tracing in a hotel bed while he pretended to sleep and I pretended not to notice. "Zelenko's widow is in London. She crossed three days ago. She has a broker working the underside, buying every mention of the girl who carried the box." "Malphora doesn't exist." "Malphora delivers lamb noodles to Bermondsey on Tuesdays. Malphora has a council tax bill. Malphora has a father called Brendan Carter who gives chambers in Cardiff and a mother who teaches Year Nine English and hasn't the first idea what her daughter does at night." The cold tea turned to something sour in my throat. I set the mug in the sink, very slowly, the way you put down a weapon you want to pick up later. "You brought them to my parents' door." "I brought me to your door to make sure they never reach it. There is a difference and you will hate it and it is still the difference." "Five months of silence and you arrive with a death threat and a lecture." "Five months of me keeping your name out of rooms where names get sold." He stepped closer and the counter stopped being a wall and started being an excuse. "Do you think Zelenko's widow found you on her own? She found a courier. I made sure she found a dead end instead, and it cost me this." The cuff. He turned his wrist over and there it was, red blooming fresh through the gauze where he'd flexed the joint wrong. "You're still bleeding." "I'm aware." "When did you last change it?" "Marseille." "That's not funny." "It wasn't meant to be." I came around the counter because I am, at my core, an idiot with a first aid kit, and he let me take his wrist the way he'd let me take it that first night, all surrender and calculation, giving ground to see what I'd do with it. His pulse beat fast against my thumb. Faster than he'd have liked me to know. "Sit on the sofa and take the coat off before I ruin the shirt as well." "It's a good shirt." "It's a hostage. Take it off." He sat. The sofa groaned. He moved like something costing him effort and refusing to show the receipts, coat over the armrest, cufflinks dropped into his palm, the sleeve rolled back over a forearm I had no business remembering in that much detail. I knelt with the kit and antiseptic and worked the gauze loose. Clean slice. Deep. Someone who knew where the tendon sits and wanted him to remember the lesson every time he lifted a glass. "Who did this?" "A colleague." "You don't have colleagues. You have clients and enemies and one dead man's widow." He watched my hands instead of my face. "Then a client." "Name." "Laila." The strip of tape tore under my fingers. My real name, from the alias file I'd built with him, the one he'd taught me to keep, the one nobody was supposed to speak aloud. "Laila's not a person, Lucien. Laila is a photograph and a birthday and a false NI number." "Laila is the name on the contract for the shipment she's moving tonight through Silas's cellar. She bid against Zelenko's widow for the box you carried. She won." The black eye caught the lamp. "She signs it 'A. Carter' in a hand I'd know anywhere, and I came here to ask you whose idea that was." The floorboards creaked beneath us. Neither of us had shifted our weight. Downstairs, the jukebox died mid-note. Silas's laugh cut off like a wire pulled taut, and something heavy hit the bar floor, once, hard. Lucien's cane was in his hand before the echo finished, the ivory top twisting free to let the blade whisper out into the light.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.132
leniency0.264
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1489
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.14% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1489
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"silence"
2"tracing"
3"pulse"
4"weight"
5"echo"
6"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1489
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount962
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.73
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Moreau"
discoveredNames
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French1
Lucien7
Golden1
Empress1
Tea1
Marseille1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"French"
2"Lucien"
3"Tea"
places
0"Marseille"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a door opening"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1489
matches(empty)
89.74% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences130
matches
0"hated that it"
1"let that sit"
2"used that name"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
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std20.14
cv0.987
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825
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483
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"was supposed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs171
matches
0"was willing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences130
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount965
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.024870466321243522
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0010362694300518134
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean11.45
std10.44
cv0.912
sampleLengths
014
13
216
322
413
515
65
78
817
94
1014
112
1223
131
141
1514
163
1711
1818
197
206
215
223
233
241
2520
2633
275
2817
294
3010
3117
329
3312
345
3511
3611
3710
3813
397
404
4120
421
433
4422
451
461
474
485
4920
71.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.4846153846153846
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners63
93.90% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences71
matches
0"Just for a second."
1"Of course I'd looked."
ratio0.028
79.15% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences71
matches
0"His French curled the words"
1"I leaned on the doorframe"
2"He'd walked, then, the whole"
3"His mouth did the thing"
4"I hated that it landed."
5"I stepped back."
6"My flat is one long"
7"He said my surname the"
8"He turned those mismatched eyes"
9"His hand tightened on the"
10"I put the kitchen counter"
11"I drank it anyway."
12"I put the mug down"
13"He'd glamoured the whole room"
14"It came out of his"
15"He peeled off one glove,"
16"I set the mug in"
17"He stepped closer and the"
18"He turned his wrist over"
19"I came around the counter"
ratio0.352
30.42% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences71
matches
0"The latch turned and the"
1"Amber and black."
2"Those eyes caught the bare"
3"Lucien Moreau stood on my"
4"His French curled the words"
5"I leaned on the doorframe"
6"Water beaded on the wool"
7"He'd walked, then, the whole"
8"Lucien Moreau had drivers."
9"Lucien Moreau had people who"
10"His mouth did the thing"
11"That landed somewhere behind my"
12"I hated that it landed."
13"I stepped back."
14"The hallway is narrow and"
15"My flat is one long"
16"The radiator clicked and ticked."
17"Lucien took it in."
18"The stack of takeaway menus"
19"The courier bag by the"
ratio0.859
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Lucien Moreau had people who opened doors so he never had to touch brass."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.019
leniency0.038
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.9273%