"It was such a small motion, the kind she would once have catalogued without meaning to — the way he favored that leg on wet days, the way he'd stop mid-step and pretend it was to adjust his cuff."
1
"She had rehearsed saying no, in the abstract, in the shower, on her delivery bike cutting through Whitechapel at dusk — a whole repertoire of refusals in three registers, cool and warm and scorched."
2
"Eva's books had colonised every surface — teetering stacks on the kitchen counter, scrolls held down with mugs, index cards pinned to a corkboard in a system only Eva understood — and Lucien navigated it without touching a single thing, setting his cane against the arm of the sofa and lowering himself with the particular controlled care of a man who did not permit himself to wince in company."
3
"\"You came across London at—\" she glanced at the clock on the microwave, which read 9:14 and had been wrong by six minutes since August, \"—half past nine at night. To tell me you want nothing.\""
4
"Not a smile — a fracture in the composure, quick as a fish turning under dark water, and then it was gone and he was smooth again."
5
"\"You said, and I am quoting, that you were not in the business of—\" she gestured at the small of the air between them, \"—any of this.\""
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"\"I'm going to take the chain off the door now,\" she said, \"and you are going to stay exactly where you are, and then I am going to make tea, and you are going to tell me the actual reason you came, because I don't believe for one second there isn't one, and then—\" she held up a hand to stop him speaking, and he closed his mouth, which was its own kind of miracle, \"—and then we will see about the rest of it.\""
7
"Rory looked at the two of them, the half-demon in the tailored suit and the traitorous tabby, and felt the laugh come up before she could stop it, and the way he looked at her when she laughed — openly, helplessly, like a man setting down something he had carried too far — undid something in her chest she had spent five months and three weeks nailing shut."
8
"She could already feel the shape of the thing she was going to have to give up to have it, and she knew — God help her, she had always known — that she would hand it over gladly, and that he would never ask for it, and that this was precisely the trouble and precisely the reason she was going to do it anyway."
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"She took down two mismatched mugs — Eva's were all chipped, all strange, one of them had a Welsh dragon on it and she gave him that one without thinking, and the look he gave her when he took it was worth every bad night she'd had since March."
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"Inside, the deadbolts held, and the cat slept, and neither of them said the things that still weren't sayable, and it was enough — for tonight, in this cramped flat stacked to the ceiling with someone else's research, with a man who did not know how to be in a room except on the terms of a trade, holding a mug with a red dragon on it like it was something he'd won — it was enough, and they both knew there would be a morning after this one, and neither of them was going to spend it alone."
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"The curry house below had begun its evening service and the smell of frying onions came up through the floorboards, warm and stupidly domestic, and Ptolemy woun…"
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"Then Ptolemy, traitor, sat on the threshold and began to wash one paw with enormous ceremony, blocking the doorway like a furry little customs official who had …"
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"Eva's books had colonised every surface — teetering stacks on the kitchen counter, scrolls held down with mugs, index cards pinned to a corkboard in a system on…"
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"Ptolemy hopped onto the sofa beside him and immediately began to occupy the exact middle of the available space, and Lucien, with two fingers, scratched the cat…"
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"Her heart was doing something stupid and loud in her ears and she crossed her arms, which was a retreat and she knew it."
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"Inside, the deadbolts held, and the cat slept, and neither of them said the things that still weren't sayable, and it was enough — for tonight, in this cramped …"