Run: 2026-09-23-01M36V4NMBV4604HPXJ2J7814M

Run Details

Duration:
1m 13s
Cost:
$0.001601
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The tape across the tiled archway read POLICE — DO NOT CROSS. Beyond it, the abandoned Tube platform opened into darkness that swallowed torchlight. Harlow Quinn ducked under the tape and dropped onto the platform, her heels striking cracked Victorian tiling. Damp air carried the ghost of coal smoke and something sweeter, like burnt sugar. "Careful on the third rail, ma'am." A constable held a lantern toward the tracks, where the rails gleamed black with standing water. "Nothing down here's been live since '79, but I wouldn't trust it." "Where's the body?" "End of the northbound platform. Where the old kiosk was." The constable pointed down the tunnel mouth. "DS Whitaker's already with the Scene of Crime lads." She walked the platform edge, one hand brushing the tiled wall. The tiles here carried a pattern — deep green and bone white — that she had not seen on any Transport for London heritage tour. Spirals. Spirals that resolved, if she slowed her pace, into faces with too many eyes. She filed it away and kept moving. The station had been a market. She read it in the debris: strings of hooks above the kiosk, chalk marks on the floor in ranks like stall numbers, wax and powder residue in the gutters. Booths of crates and draped cloth had been dragged back against the walls in a hurry. Someone had tried to sweep the evidence into the tunnel and given up halfway. DS Whitaker stood at the edge of the torch circle, notebook already open. He had the look of a man who wanted to be above ground. "Detective Quinn." "Whitaker." She took in the scene without moving her feet. The body lay between the kiosk and the tunnel mouth, arranged on its back with the arms folded. A man, fifty-odd, in an expensive charcoal overcoat. Blood pooled beneath the head in a corona the shape of a dropped halo. No spatter on the tiles. No drag marks from the tunnel. "Who found him?" "One of theirs." Whitaker tilted his head toward a group of figures held back near the stairwell — a dozen or more, wrapped in coats and scarves, watching. "Market keeper, calls himself Barrow. Says the deceased was a customer. Says he choked. On the spot." Whitaker closed his notebook. "I believe him." Quinn crouched. She kept her knees off the ground and her watch face turned away from the body. The victim's collar had been opened and re-buttoned. The buttons sat one hole out of alignment, the top button fastened into the second hole. "You believe a man choked and then someone buttoned him up wrong." "He fell. These people rushed over, tried to sit him up, gave him air. Panic. Then the market keeper cleared the stalls because he didn't want police crawling through his — what would you even call this — antique fair." Whitaker gestured at the debris. "They moved the stock and they moved each other. That's why the scene's a mess." "It's a mess because someone made it a mess." She looked at the coat again. The hem carried a dusting of grey powder, fine as ash. She smelled her fingers without touching it. No scent. The pockets had been turned out and folded back, neat as a shop display. "Where are his things?" "No wallet, no phone, no keys." "And you read that as panic." "I read that as the reason he was down here. These markets —" Whitaker lowered his voice and glanced toward the stairwell. "It's stolen goods, Detective. Fences work this way. Somebody rolled him for whatever he brought down to trade, and the market closed ranks. It's simple." "Simple." She stood. The constable's lantern threw their shadows long up the tunnel. Her eyes had adjusted; the tilework spirals continued the whole length of the platform, spirals and faces and something that looked like a compass rose every eight feet. She walked to the nearest rose and crouched again. Fresh scuff marks scored the tile in front of it. Heel marks. Two of them, deep, as if someone had braced there and pushed. She looked back at the body. No mud on the victim's heels. His shoes were polished. The scuffs pointed away from the tunnel mouth. "Whitaker." "What." "He didn't come out of the tunnel. He came from the platform. Someone braced here and moved him." She pointed at the scuffs with two fingers. "Two feet, planted, shoving something heavy on wheels — see the parallel groove? A trolley. They brought him on a trolley and set him down where we found him." Whitaker leaned in, then straightened. "Or the market keeper moved a crate earlier tonight and this is that." "The groove runs under the body. It stops underneath him. Does the crate move stop underneath him too?" He did not answer that. He rubbed his jaw and looked toward the stairwell again. Quinn watched the muscle work in his cheek. He wanted a fence, a robbery, a body that made sense in a report. She knew the wanting. She had wanted the same the night they pulled Morris out of the Fleet sewer with frost in his lungs in the middle of August. She moved along the platform wall, counting the compass roses. The seventh one had the same scuffs. The twelfth had a smear of grey powder on the tile beside it. She touched nothing. She crouched and looked along the floor at an angle so the lantern raked across the surface instead of flooding it. "There." She pointed. "Footprints. Dozens. All pointing at the compass roses and none pointing away. Everyone who came down here tonight walked to these marks and stopped." Whitaker came and stood at her shoulder. His breathing had changed. "So what are you telling me?" "That the traffic moved to the marks and did not come back the way it came." She stood and faced the dark platform. The tiles glinted. "This isn't a stall layout. It's a floor plan. The stalls are drawn on it." "That's —" He stopped himself. "Say it." "That's a stretch, Quinn." She turned to the body. The grey powder on the coat hem had smeared where someone had gripped the fabric to lift him. Four fingers and a thumb, low on the right side. The grip pattern on a trolley handle, not a body. Whoever moved him held the trolley and rolled him into position and set his arms and re-buttoned his collar with the hurry of a person performing a ritual they had rehearsed but not practised. Her gaze dropped to the victim's left hand. Beneath the folded forearm, wedged between sleeve and waistcoat, something small caught the light. Brass, green with age. She reached down with a pen from her pocket and tipped the sleeve back. A compass. Small, heavy-looking, its face etched with sigils that matched the spirals on the tiles. Verdigris caked the hinge. The needle swung, shivered, and pointed past her at the tunnel mouth. Whitaker saw it and his hand went to his radio. "That's his, then. Part of what he was trading." "It's not his." "It's in his clothing." "It's etched with the same marks as the floor." Quinn kept her eyes on the needle. It held steady toward the dark, trembling the way a compass trembles when the thing it wants is near and getting nearer. "And the needle isn't north."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1229
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1229
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"resolved"
count1
1
word"etched"
count2
highlights
0"resolved"
1"etched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences80
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1236
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount844
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.83
worstName"Whitaker"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Whitaker"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Quinn4
Victorian1
Transport1
London1
Whitaker7
Morris1
Fleet1
August1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Victorian"
2"Whitaker"
3"Morris"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a compass rose every eight fe"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1236
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean32.53
std23.97
cv0.737
sampleLengths
055
134
23
326
458
565
628
764
852
954
1060
1153
126
136
1447
1574
1624
171
181
1955
2018
2118
2266
2354
2427
2511
266
2741
285
292
304
3177
3240
3332
3419
353
364
3743
92.11% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences80
matches
0"been dragged"
1"been opened"
2"been turned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs146
matches(empty)
37.04% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences108
ratio0.037
matches
0"The tape across the tiled archway read POLICE — DO NOT CROSS."
1"The tiles here carried a pattern — deep green and bone white — that she had not seen on any Transport for London heritage tour."
2"\"One of theirs.\" Whitaker tilted his head toward a group of figures held back near the stairwell — a dozen or more, wrapped in coats and scarves, watching."
3"Her eyes had adjusted; the tilework spirals continued the whole length of the platform, spirals and faces and something that looked like a compass rose every eight feet."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount738
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.014905149051490514
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean11.44
std8.2
cv0.716
sampleLengths
012
112
217
314
422
512
63
717
89
911
1025
111
1214
137
146
1529
1616
1714
1813
1913
202
2110
2218
238
2414
255
266
273
2828
2921
303
312
3216
338
3416
3512
3645
3715
3815
3911
407
412
4214
434
446
456
4622
4725
483
4910
63.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.4444444444444444
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners48
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
72.05% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences73
matches
0"She walked the platform edge,"
1"She filed it away and"
2"She read it in the"
3"He had the look of"
4"She took in the scene"
5"She kept her knees off"
6"She looked at the coat"
7"She smelled her fingers without"
8"Her eyes had adjusted; the"
9"She walked to the nearest"
10"She looked back at the"
11"His shoes were polished."
12"She pointed at the scuffs"
13"He did not answer that."
14"He rubbed his jaw and"
15"He wanted a fence, a"
16"She knew the wanting."
17"She had wanted the same"
18"She moved along the platform"
19"She touched nothing."
ratio0.37
42.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences73
matches
0"The tape across the tiled"
1"Harlow Quinn ducked under the"
2"A constable held a lantern"
3"The constable pointed down the"
4"She walked the platform edge,"
5"The tiles here carried a"
6"She filed it away and"
7"The station had been a"
8"She read it in the"
9"Booths of crates and draped"
10"Someone had tried to sweep"
11"DS Whitaker stood at the"
12"He had the look of"
13"She took in the scene"
14"The body lay between the"
15"A man, fifty-odd, in an"
16"Blood pooled beneath the head"
17"Whitaker tilted his head toward"
18"Whitaker closed his notebook"
19"She kept her knees off"
ratio0.836
68.49% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"Whoever moved him held the"
ratio0.014
48.87% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Beyond it, the abandoned Tube platform opened into darkness that swallowed torchlight."
1"Harlow Quinn ducked under the tape and dropped onto the platform, her heels striking cracked Victorian tiling."
2"Her eyes had adjusted; the tilework spirals continued the whole length of the platform, spirals and faces and something that looked like a compass rose every ei…"
3"He wanted a fence, a robbery, a body that made sense in a report."
4"Small, heavy-looking, its face etched with sigils that matched the spirals on the tiles."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.0813%