Run: 2026-09-23-01M36V8JDTKJQAFA64JYSK2Z0K

Run Details

Duration:
2m 36s
Cost:
$0.000976
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The service stair down from the ticket hall had no handrail, and Harlow Quinn counted fourteen steps before her boot found the landing. Fourteen going down. She filed it, the way she filed everything, and went on counting the rest: two torch beams, one uniformed constable holding a scene log, three evidence markers already standing in the dust like small white teeth. The air under Camden was wrong. Not cold — London clay never was — but *still*, the way a room is still when no one has opened a window in twenty years. It carried a sweetness underneath the damp, something closer to candle wax than to the standing water in the tracks. "Above ground you'd never know," DS Michael Byrne said, dropping his torch beam to keep from blinding her. He'd been down here twenty minutes already. His collar was turned up against nothing at all. "Sealed since the war, according to Transport for London. Sealed since 1998, according to the two lads who run the flower stall and found him. Both stories are in the log. Neither of them is true, because there's a kiosk down there selling something that isn't quite tobacco, and I'd lay money it's been open all week." Quinn said nothing. She was looking at the platform. It was a platform, unmistakably — the curve of the wall, the tactile strip along the edge, the ghost of a destination board with the letters burned out of it. But the track bed had been floored over with boards, and the boards carried market stalls: steel frames with canvas rolled tight and lashed down, shutters padlocked, crates stacked with the neatness of people who intended to come back. Somewhere a full moon away, Byrne had told her, and she'd asked him what that meant, and he'd said it the way men say things they don't want to be quoted on. *Selling enchanted goods. Banned alchemical substances. Information.* People would say anything at four in the morning. She crossed the platform. Her torch picked out the tiled wall — cream, with a navy band at waist height, the sort of tiling that predated her by sixty years — and then the stall, and then the man on the floor between the stall's two folding tables. Forties. Fine coat, better shoes, a ring on the left hand that had been torn at the knuckle. He was on his front with one arm beneath him, and the blood had come out of him and gone a long way across the boards before it stopped. "Time of death?" she asked. "Pathologist won't give me one. Offers me 'between ten and two.' " Byrne crouched, careful of the edge of the pool. "Here's the part I don't like, guv. The boards are dry out there. Six feet away, bone dry, and this floor's been swept recently — you can see the brush marks in the dust. But there's only one set of prints on them." Quinn let the torch travel. Two prints, heel to toe, running from the mouth of the platform to the stall. Nothing coming back. She walked the line of them without stepping on them, her shadow falling ahead of her, and crouched at the far end where the prints began. Then she went back to the body and looked at his shoes. They were clean. Not scuffed, not dusty — clean in the way of shoes that had come out of a bag rather than off a pavement. There was ash on the sole of his left boot, a fine grey ash that matched nothing else on the platform, and not a grain of the swept dust anywhere on him. "He walked here," Byrne said, watching her. "First set of prints." "He didn't," Quinn said. "Look at his shoes. Look at where the prints stop — they stop *here*, at the end of the stall, six feet short of where he's lying. If he'd walked from the entrance to his own blood, there'd be prints inside the pool. There aren't. Someone carried him and set him down. The prints are theirs, walking in. And they walked out the same way without leaving a second set, which means they were carried out too, or they didn't touch the boards on the way." Byrne was quiet for a moment. "Or the second person's prints were swept." "Swept *after*? Then they'd have swept the first set as well." She straightened up. Her leather watch had slipped over her wrist bone; she pushed it back without looking at it. "Nobody swept this floor after he died. They swept it before." She moved her torch up the tiled wall, behind the head of the body, and found the spatter — a low fan of it, arterial, climbing the navy band in fine ticks. She stood where the blow must have landed and put her fist against the tile at the height the spray began. Then she stepped sideways and looked down. The blood on the wall began three feet off the floor and rose at an angle. But the floor beneath it, directly beneath the arc, was untouched. Not merely dry: *unmarked*. No drips. No drops falling from the wound to the boards. And there was no compression void, no shadow where a body had stood in the way of the spray — no silhouette in the pattern at all. Something had struck him, and nothing had been standing there. "You're going to tell me it's a ritual," Byrne said. He said it carefully, the way a man lays a coat over a wire. "The stallholders are saying that. They're saying it out loud, guv, to a uniformed officer, without being asked. He broke one of their rules. He came down without paying." "Paying what?" "The entry. Bone token. Every one of them carries one — I've seen four. Small, drilled, worn on a cord. Our man's got one in his coat pocket, still on its cord, still knotted. So he *had* paid." Byrne rubbed his face. "Which means somebody let him in, and there's no record of who's got a key to a station that's been sealed twice." Quinn crouched again. She had not yet touched anything, and she did not now. She was looking at what the torch had thrown across the man's open coat: a small brass disc, tarnished to a green so deep it was almost black, lying in the hollow of his sternum where the chain had snapped. She took an evidence bag from her pocket, shook it open, and lifted the disc by its edge. A compass. Palm-sized, weighty, the casing shot through with verdigris and worn smooth on one side by a thumb that had worried it for years. The face was etched — not with the cardinal marks, but with symbols she didn't know, cut fine and deep, the kind of engraving that came from a hand and not from a machine. It was not a maker she recognized. It was not a maker on any register she had read. She held it flat and waited for the needle. It swung. It hesitated. It did not settle north. Byrne leaned in. "Dead." "Not dead. It's moving." She turned her wrist, slowly, and the needle came around with her — not lagging, not drifting the way a magnetized needle does when it's failing. It came around like something that had caught a scent. She turned a full three hundred and sixty degrees in a slow half-crouch, torch in her other hand, and the needle tracked with her and then stopped dead, pointing past the stall, past the shuttered kiosk, down the length of the platform to where the tiled wall ran solid into brick. "There's nothing there," Byrne said. "I walked it. That's a wall." "I know." Quinn watched the needle hold, unwavering, on a wall that had been bricked up longer than she had been on the force. Somewhere behind it there was no tunnel, according to two separate sets of plans, and no platform, and no fourth set of prints on a floor that had been swept before anyone died on it. She thought, for no reason she could have defended in a report, of DS Morris — of the last thing he'd said to her on that case three years ago, the sentence she had turned over so many times it had gone smooth as the thumb-worn side of this casing. She had called it grief. She had called it a loose end. She had never once called it a warning. Quinn slipped the compass into the bag and sealed it. Her hands were steady. Eighteen years had taught her that steadiness was not the same as certainty. "The shoes didn't walk here," she said. "The blood hasn't got a man standing in it. And a compass that hasn't pointed north at any point since I picked it up has just picked a direction and committed to it." She looked at the bricked wall down the platform. "Everything down here that should be solid isn't, and everything that should be here is gone." Byrne waited. "Full moon was last night," she said. "Get on to Transport for London and find out what day this market is supposed to move. Then find out where a man can go without leaving prints on a floor he didn't walk on." She handed him the bag. "And get me the four who carry tokens. Not tomorrow. Before the boards go up."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.536
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1571
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
90.45% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1571
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"etched"
count1
1
word"unwavering"
count1
2
word"the last thing"
count1
highlights
0"etched"
1"unwavering"
2"the last thing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences83
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen86
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords12
totalWords1586
ratio0.008
matches
0"still"
1"Selling enchanted goods. Banned alchemical substances. Information."
2"here"
3"after"
4"unmarked"
5"had"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1118
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.89
worstName"Byrne"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Byrne"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn7
Camden1
London1
Michael1
Byrne10
People1
Morris1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Michael"
3"Byrne"
4"People"
5"Morris"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.631
wordCount1586
matches
0"not with the cardinal marks, but with symbols she didn't know, cut fine"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean40.67
std29.96
cv0.737
sampleLengths
062
152
291
39
4101
57
69
748
847
95
1064
1149
1212
1358
1411
1590
1613
1742
1853
197
2069
2110
2253
232
2464
2554
2618
2777
289
299
304
3191
3211
3359
3470
3527
3665
372
3862
79.90% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences83
matches
0"was turned"
1"been floored"
2"been torn"
3"was etched "
4"been bricked"
5"been swept"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs179
matches
0"was looking"
1"was looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences96
ratio0.104
matches
0"Not cold — London clay never was — but *still*, the way a room is still when no one has opened a window in twenty years."
1"It was a platform, unmistakably — the curve of the wall, the tactile strip along the edge, the ghost of a destination board with the letters burned out of it."
2"Her torch picked out the tiled wall — cream, with a navy band at waist height, the sort of tiling that predated her by sixty years — and then the stall, and then the man on the floor between the stall's two folding tables."
3"Not scuffed, not dusty — clean in the way of shoes that had come out of a bag rather than off a pavement."
4"Her leather watch had slipped over her wrist bone; she pushed it back without looking at it."
5"She moved her torch up the tiled wall, behind the head of the body, and found the spatter — a low fan of it, arterial, climbing the navy band in fine ticks."
6"And there was no compression void, no shadow where a body had stood in the way of the spray — no silhouette in the pattern at all."
7"The face was etched — not with the cardinal marks, but with symbols she didn't know, cut fine and deep, the kind of engraving that came from a hand and not from a machine."
8"\"Not dead. It's moving.\" She turned her wrist, slowly, and the needle came around with her — not lagging, not drifting the way a magnetized needle does when it's failing."
9"She thought, for no reason she could have defended in a report, of DS Morris — of the last thing he'd said to her on that case three years ago, the sentence she had turned over so many times it had gone smooth as the thumb-worn side of this casing."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1110
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.021621621621621623
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0045045045045045045
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean16.52
std15.42
cv0.933
sampleLengths
023
13
236
36
426
520
618
77
89
957
103
116
1230
1339
1432
153
163
171
189
194
2044
211
2217
2329
245
2521
2643
275
2815
293
3026
3112
323
3323
3432
357
364
374
3886
396
407
4114
4217
4311
4432
4521
467
4716
4811
494
69.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.4895833333333333
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners47
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences70
matches
0"Somewhere a full moon away,"
1"Then she went back to"
2"Then she stepped sideways and"
3"Somewhere behind it there was"
ratio0.057
31.43% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences70
matches
0"She filed it, the way"
1"It carried a sweetness underneath"
2"He'd been down here twenty"
3"His collar was turned up"
4"She was looking at the"
5"It was a platform, unmistakably"
6"She crossed the platform."
7"Her torch picked out the"
8"He was on his front"
9"She walked the line of"
10"They were clean."
11"She straightened up"
12"Her leather watch had slipped"
13"She moved her torch up"
14"She stood where the blow"
15"He said it carefully, the"
16"She had not yet touched"
17"She was looking at what"
18"She took an evidence bag"
19"It was not a maker"
ratio0.471
88.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences70
matches
0"The service stair down from"
1"She filed it, the way"
2"The air under Camden was"
3"It carried a sweetness underneath"
4"DS Michael Byrne said, dropping"
5"He'd been down here twenty"
6"His collar was turned up"
7"Quinn said nothing."
8"She was looking at the"
9"It was a platform, unmistakably"
10"People would say anything at"
11"She crossed the platform."
12"Her torch picked out the"
13"He was on his front"
14"Byrne crouched, careful of the"
15"Quinn let the torch travel."
16"Nothing coming back."
17"She walked the line of"
18"They were clean."
19"Byrne said, watching her"
ratio0.743
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
81.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She walked the line of them without stepping on them, her shadow falling ahead of her, and crouched at the far end where the prints began."
1"Palm-sized, weighty, the casing shot through with verdigris and worn smooth on one side by a thumb that had worried it for years."
2"Somewhere behind it there was no tunnel, according to two separate sets of plans, and no platform, and no fourth set of prints on a floor that had been swept be…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.8238%