Run: 2026-09-23-01M36V9TMZWVMM77A1H8WRPGMQ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 30s
Cost:
$0.001489
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory slipped between the standing stones at half past midnight, and the air on the other side tasted different. Sweet. Like flowers left too long in stale water. She held her phone up and the light found oak trunks black with age, roots heaving out of the earth like knuckles. "Isolde?" Her voice went out and came back thin. The grove lay ahead — a bowl of wildflowers glowing white under a moon she couldn't see for the canopy. She'd been here twice before, both times in daylight, both times with company. Eva's hand on her arm. The second time, Silas, who'd refused to cross the stones and had waited on the Richmond side with his arms folded and his face the colour of old paper. She checked the pendant. The crimson stone sat against her collarbone, cool and dull. Eva had told her it warmed near the Hel ports, that it would lead her right. Tonight it hung there like a pebble. Cold trickled down her ribs. She pressed on. The reason she'd come sat in her coat pocket: a photograph, printed on printer paper, folded in four. Isolde's message had arrived on the back of a takeaway receipt from the Golden Empress — twelve words in a hand that leaned hard right. *Come alone. The grove. One hour after the last car leaves.* Rory had read it three times on the walk up from the bus stop and each time the same words sat wrong in her mouth, the way a name pronounced by a stranger sits wrong. She reached the clearing's centre. Wildflowers pressed against her boots — cornflowers, midwinter, blooming out of frost. She crouched and touched a petal. It gave like skin. "Isolde, I'm here. I brought the photo." Nothing. An oak at the far rim creaked as it settled. Somewhere behind her, water moved — the little stream that cut through the grove's low side, no wider than her hand. She'd crossed it coming in. It had been silent then. Rory stayed low and listened. The stream made a sound like a thread pulled through cloth. Then it stopped. Then, a beat later, it started again, and the rhythm of it had changed. She stood up. "Right," she said, to the dark, to herself. "Right." The wrongness had a shape to it now. She'd felt versions of this before — Evan's flat, the hour before he came home, the way the rooms went quiet like they were holding their breath. Her body knew this texture. Her pulse sat in her throat and her skin had gone tight and she catalogued it the way she catalogued everything: elevated heart rate, tunnelled vision, cold extremities. Facts. She… … 771332Order622ock久しぶり74115910久しぶり05161117..." 123448539el8530060361015113333354362":":a":.完成"> ration__": log in her palm andNo reception. Bars, spinning. "Tell me you're alive at least." She typed it and hit send. The message hung there. No delivery. The stream started again. and this time she knew it wasn't water. Water doesn't stop when you look at it. Water doesn't know you're looking. Rory took three steps toward the sound. Ferns whipped her shins, cold and damp, and her phone light picked out something on the ground at the stream's edge — something pale and curved and the size of a hand. She did not put the light on it. "That's not yours," she said. A laugh answered her. It came from the canopy, thirty feet up, and it didn't sound like a woman's laugh or a man's. It sounded like the noise a throat makes when the person attached to it has gone somewhere else entirely. Rory's thumb found the pendant. The stone had gone hot, a coal against her collarbone. "Isolde doesn't laugh like that." She backed up. One step. Two. The flowers around her boots had turned their heads — she saw it peripherally, the white faces of the petals angling toward her shins — and she refused to look down. The oak canopy above the stream shifted, and a limb came down through the leaves in sections, the way a thing descends a ladder. The pendant burned. Rory wrapped her fist around it and the heat bit into her fingers and she held on. Her phone buzzed. A text from a number with no name. TURN AROUND. Her thumb moved on its own and swiped the screen. The text sat there in a language she'd been reading for three months, since Isolde first started teaching her, and the letters resolved into words in her head before her eyes finished: *That is not me laughing. Run.*
created_at"2026-09-23T09:59:40.968Z" 9/23/2026, 9:59:40 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount754
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.74% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount754
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"resolved"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"resolved"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences73
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences81
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords17
totalWords762
ratio0.022
matches
0"Come alone. The grove. One hour after the last car leaves."
1"That is not me laughing. Run."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount734
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.82
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Silas1
Richmond1
Hel1
Golden1
Empress1
Rory6
Evan1
Isolde2
persons
0"Silas"
1"Rory"
2"Evan"
3"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Hel"
2"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
85.90% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences39
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like the noise a throat makes when"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount762
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean27.21
std24.66
cv0.906
sampleLengths
050
11
275
337
48
589
627
77
842
933
103
119
1270
131
1411
156
1612
1725
1847
195
2042
2115
225
2361
2431
252
2642
276
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs125
matches
0"were holding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences81
ratio0.086
matches
0"The grove lay ahead — a bowl of wildflowers glowing white under a moon she couldn't see for the canopy."
1"Isolde's message had arrived on the back of a takeaway receipt from the Golden Empress — twelve words in a hand that leaned hard right."
2"Wildflowers pressed against her boots — cornflowers, midwinter, blooming out of frost."
3"Somewhere behind her, water moved — the little stream that cut through the grove's low side, no wider than her hand."
4"She'd felt versions of this before — Evan's flat, the hour before he came home, the way the rooms went quiet like they were holding their breath."
5"Ferns whipped her shins, cold and damp, and her phone light picked out something on the ground at the stream's edge — something pale and curved and the size of a hand."
6"The flowers around her boots had turned their heads — she saw it peripherally, the white faces of the petals angling toward her shins — and she refused to look down."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount445
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.02247191011235955
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences81
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences81
mean9.4
std9.13
cv0.972
sampleLengths
019
11
28
322
41
58
620
713
85
929
104
1110
1216
137
145
153
1618
1725
182
192
2042
215
2212
236
244
257
261
2710
2821
295
305
315
3211
333
3414
353
368
371
388
3927
405
4128
421
431
441
451
461
476
482
496
63.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.43209876543209874
totalSentences81
uniqueOpeners35
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences60
matches
0"Somewhere behind her, water moved"
1"Then it stopped."
2"Then, a beat later, it"
ratio0.05
73.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences60
matches
0"She held her phone up"
1"Her voice went out and"
2"She'd been here twice before,"
3"She checked the pendant."
4"She pressed on."
5"She reached the clearing's centre."
6"She crouched and touched a"
7"It gave like skin."
8"She'd crossed it coming in."
9"It had been silent then."
10"She stood up."
11"she said, to the dark,"
12"She'd felt versions of this"
13"Her body knew this texture."
14"Her pulse sat in her"
15"She typed it and hit"
16"She did not put the"
17"It came from the canopy,"
18"It sounded like the noise"
19"She backed up."
ratio0.367
26.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences60
matches
0"Rory slipped between the standing"
1"She held her phone up"
2"Her voice went out and"
3"The grove lay ahead —"
4"She'd been here twice before,"
5"Eva's hand on her arm."
6"The second time, Silas, who'd"
7"She checked the pendant."
8"The crimson stone sat against"
9"Eva had told her it"
10"Tonight it hung there like"
11"She pressed on."
12"The reason she'd come sat"
13"Isolde's message had arrived on"
14"She reached the clearing's centre."
15"Wildflowers pressed against her boots"
16"She crouched and touched a"
17"It gave like skin."
18"An oak at the far"
19"She'd crossed it coming in."
ratio0.867
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.8670%