| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.62% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1193 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 49.71% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1193 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "quickened" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "footsteps" | | 5 | "velvet" | | 6 | "echo" | | 7 | "vibrated" | | 8 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 65 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1204 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 14 | | wordCount | 1158 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.17 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 2 | | Petersham | 1 | | Road | 1 | | Tuesday | 1 | | New | 1 | | Cross | 1 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Carter | 1 | | Irish | 1 | | Welsh | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Petersham" | | 3 | "Road" | | 4 | "Cardiff" | | 5 | "Welsh" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 16.07% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed manufactured" | | 1 | "looked like velvet and felt like sponge," | | 2 | "felt like sponge, and the cold left her" | | 3 | "felt like damp paper" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1204 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 33.44 | | std | 25.51 | | cv | 0.763 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 73 | | 1 | 72 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 75 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 75 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 68 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 30 | | 10 | 60 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 32 | | 13 | 54 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 36 | | 17 | 38 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 45 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 49 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 44 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 72 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 54 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 42 | | 32 | 45 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 44 | | 35 | 64 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 190 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 85 | | ratio | 0.118 | | matches | | 0 | "The temperature had dropped since she'd left New Cross; her breath came out in ragged curls that the torch caught and shredded." | | 1 | "She counted pylons the way her father had taught her to count barristers in a room — one, two, three — a trick to keep the mind occupied so the feet could work." | | 2 | "The petals were real — cold, wet, veined — and the frost around their stems held perfectly still while the grass beyond shivered in a wind that never reached her." | | 3 | "Something cracked in the dark beyond the ring — a branch, or a foot set down wrong on dry ground." | | 4 | "The voice was her father's — the Cardiff vowels flattened, the pacing too even, each word laid down like a brick." | | 5 | "Not a click — the sound simply ended, the way a word ends when whoever's saying it opens their mouth wider than before." | | 6 | "Her torch picked out a carving she was certain hadn't been there when she counted — not runes, not script, a figure no taller than her hand, straight-haired, one arm raised, standing inside a circle of smaller figures." | | 7 | "The torch beam swept the ring and found nothing but the blue flowers and the seam between two stones — the seam that hadn't existed a minute ago, the hairline gap widening as she watched, a mouth opening between oak and oak." | | 8 | "She backed up a step and her heel found a footprint that wasn't hers — the moss compressed, deep, the shape of a bare foot with too many toes pressed into the sponge." | | 9 | "Something breathed in the gap between the stones — a long, wet, patient draw of air that ended before it should have." |
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| 99.14% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 122 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 5 | | adverbRatio | 0.040983606557377046 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 85 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 85 | | mean | 14.16 | | std | 13.19 | | cv | 0.931 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 65 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 33 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 35 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 47 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 32 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 53.57% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.35714285714285715 | | totalSentences | 84 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 79.46% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "She checked her phone: 11:47," | | 1 | "It had been warm since" | | 2 | "She followed the heat." | | 3 | "Her torch cut a white" | | 4 | "She counted pylons the way" | | 5 | "She stood and kept walking." | | 6 | "She counted them as she" | | 7 | "It pressed at her ears." | | 8 | "Her footsteps went soft on" | | 9 | "She turned once, to mark" | | 10 | "She walked the circumference." | | 11 | "Her phone read 11:12." | | 12 | "She pressed the screen until" | | 13 | "She killed the torch and" | | 14 | "she said, and heard her" | | 15 | "She raised the torch." | | 16 | "She answered because silence had" | | 17 | "He rolled it, always had," | | 18 | "She held the phone to" | | 19 | "She pressed it." |
| | ratio | 0.351 | |
| 68.11% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "The bolt on the Richmond" | | 1 | "She checked her phone: 11:47," | | 2 | "The pendant sat warm against" | | 3 | "It had been warm since" | | 4 | "She followed the heat." | | 5 | "Her torch cut a white" | | 6 | "The temperature had dropped since" | | 7 | "She counted pylons the way" | | 8 | "Torch beam dropped to the" | | 9 | "Chickweed and yarrow and something" | | 10 | "The petals were real —" | | 11 | "She stood and kept walking." | | 12 | "The pendant quickened." | | 13 | "The heat climbed from ember" | | 14 | "Oak, all of them." | | 15 | "She counted them as she" | | 16 | "A ring with a gap" | | 17 | "It pressed at her ears." | | 18 | "Her footsteps went soft on" | | 19 | "She turned once, to mark" |
| | ratio | 0.784 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 91.84% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Chickweed and yarrow and something blue she had no name for pushed up through frost-rimed soil, every head open, every face tilted toward her light as though th…" | | 1 | "She held the phone to her ear a few seconds longer, listening to a room tone that wasn't any room she'd stood in." | | 2 | "She backed up a step and her heel found a footprint that wasn't hers — the moss compressed, deep, the shape of a bare foot with too many toes pressed into the s…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |