Run: 2026-09-23-01M36VAE6K37WQYVYVXANQ6C9X

Run Details

Duration:
1m 48s
Cost:
$0.000874
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The bolt on the Richmond Park gate had rusted through months ago, and the panel swung wide without protest when Rory shouldered it. Beyond the fence the grass ran silver under a moon half-eaten by cloud, and the park stretched away in a silence so complete it seemed manufactured. No dogs barking from the kennels. No traffic bleeding through from Petersham Road. She checked her phone: 11:47, no signal, one bar of battery. The pendant sat warm against her sternum. It had been warm since Tuesday, a dull ember she kept pressing with her thumb through her coat, and every evening the heat had pulled a little further west, away from the flat above Silas' bar, away from the smell of fryer oil and gin, until tonight it had pulled due south and kept pulling until she stood here with the gate at her back. She followed the heat. Her torch cut a white tunnel through the dark, catching seed heads and the low ribs of a fallen oak. The temperature had dropped since she'd left New Cross; her breath came out in ragged curls that the torch caught and shredded. She counted pylons the way her father had taught her to count barristers in a room — one, two, three — a trick to keep the mind occupied so the feet could work. Twenty minutes in, the wildflowers started. She stopped. Torch beam dropped to the ground. Chickweed and yarrow and something blue she had no name for pushed up through frost-rimed soil, every head open, every face tilted toward her light as though the beam had weight and pushed them back. She crouched. The petals were real — cold, wet, veined — and the frost around their stems held perfectly still while the grass beyond shivered in a wind that never reached her. She stood and kept walking. The pendant quickened. The heat climbed from ember to fever, a pulse she felt in her teeth, and the trees ahead opened into a ring of standing stones she had read about once, years ago, in a Cardiff library where her mother taught, half-asleep over a book of local curiosities. Oak, all of them. Rough as unstripped timber, black with age, taller than the doorframe of her flat. She counted them as she stepped between the two widest. Six. A ring with a gap where the seventh should have been. Inside, the silence changed texture. It pressed at her ears. Her footsteps went soft on moss that looked like velvet and felt like sponge, and the cold left her hands. She turned once, to mark the gap she'd entered through, and found the stones numbered differently. Five now, the gap shut, the ring closed but for a hairline seam she could have put a fingernail into. She walked the circumference. Six stones. The seventh stood where it always had, and the seam she'd seen was a knot in the wood. Her phone read 11:12. She pressed the screen until it went black, then lit it again. 11:12. Twenty-six minutes behind her, then, or ahead of her, and either way the number sat there refusing to move. Something cracked in the dark beyond the ring — a branch, or a foot set down wrong on dry ground. She killed the torch and stood very still, and the dark closed over her like water. When the sound came again it was closer, on her left, a slow grinding of bark against bark. "Eva?" she said, and heard her own voice go out and not come back. No echo. The grove swallowed it whole. She raised the torch. Light fell on moss, on the base of a stone, on the blue flowers standing in a ring with their faces turned inward, away from her now, all of them, every head. The phone vibrated against her palm. A number she didn't recognise, the digits rearranging themselves as she stared, three becoming eight becoming nothing. She answered because silence had become worse than whatever would be on the other end. "Rory." The voice was her father's — the Cardiff vowels flattened, the pacing too even, each word laid down like a brick. Brendan Carter never said her name that way. He rolled it, always had, the Irish coming up through the Welsh like weed through concrete. "You're up late," the voice said. "Who is this?" A laugh that started and stopped in the wrong place. "You walked a long way for warmth." The line died. Not a click — the sound simply ended, the way a word ends when whoever's saying it opens their mouth wider than before. She held the phone to her ear a few seconds longer, listening to a room tone that wasn't any room she'd stood in. The pendant had gone cold. She pressed it. It sat against her skin like a coin left out in winter, and the absence of heat left a shape behind, a pressure where the warmth used to be, and that shape pointed deeper into the ring, toward the seventh stone. She walked. At the stone, she laid her palm flat. Oak, cold, ridged with lichen that felt like damp paper. Her torch picked out a carving she was certain hadn't been there when she counted — not runes, not script, a figure no taller than her hand, straight-haired, one arm raised, standing inside a circle of smaller figures. The figure's face had been worn smooth. Every other line in the carving held its edge. Behind her, the grass gave a single slow sigh. She spun. The torch beam swept the ring and found nothing but the blue flowers and the seam between two stones — the seam that hadn't existed a minute ago, the hairline gap widening as she watched, a mouth opening between oak and oak. Beyond it, a dark that her light refused to enter. The beam died. Not the battery. The screen still glowed when she glanced down, 11:12, full bars of nothing. The torch simply stopped being a torch, and the dark came in and stood close enough that she felt it on the backs of her hands. She backed up a step and her heel found a footprint that wasn't hers — the moss compressed, deep, the shape of a bare foot with too many toes pressed into the sponge. Beside it, another. Beside that, her own boot-print, fresh, the tread clear. The prints led in a circle. Hers among them, spaced the way she walked, stride for stride, each one placed ahead of the last. Something breathed in the gap between the stones — a long, wet, patient draw of air that ended before it should have. Rory stopped breathing herself to hear it better, and the breathing went on without her, slower now, matching nothing in her chest. She said nothing. She stood with the cold pendant against her ribs and the prints at her feet and the carved figure with the erased face watching from the stone, and the certainty settled in her ribs like a second, heavier heartbeat: the grove was not empty, and whatever filled it had been waiting in the dark longer than the dark had been there.
created_at"2026-09-23T10:00:00.987Z" 9/23/2026, 10:00:00 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1193
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1193
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"silence"
count3
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"quickened"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"velvet"
count1
6
word"echo"
count1
7
word"vibrated"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count2
highlights
0"silence"
1"weight"
2"quickened"
3"pulse"
4"footsteps"
5"velvet"
6"echo"
7"vibrated"
8"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences82
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences85
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen65
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1204
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount1158
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.17
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Rory2
Petersham1
Road1
Tuesday1
New1
Cross1
Cardiff2
Carter1
Irish1
Welsh1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Carter"
2"Irish"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Petersham"
3"Road"
4"Cardiff"
5"Welsh"
globalScore1
windowScore1
16.07% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed manufactured"
1"looked like velvet and felt like sponge,"
2"felt like sponge, and the cold left her"
3"felt like damp paper"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1204
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean33.44
std25.51
cv0.763
sampleLengths
073
172
24
375
46
575
65
768
822
930
1060
114
1232
1354
1414
157
1636
1738
181
1945
206
213
2217
2349
245
2544
262
2772
289
2954
303
3142
3245
3324
3444
3564
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"been worn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs190
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences85
ratio0.118
matches
0"The temperature had dropped since she'd left New Cross; her breath came out in ragged curls that the torch caught and shredded."
1"She counted pylons the way her father had taught her to count barristers in a room — one, two, three — a trick to keep the mind occupied so the feet could work."
2"The petals were real — cold, wet, veined — and the frost around their stems held perfectly still while the grass beyond shivered in a wind that never reached her."
3"Something cracked in the dark beyond the ring — a branch, or a foot set down wrong on dry ground."
4"The voice was her father's — the Cardiff vowels flattened, the pacing too even, each word laid down like a brick."
5"Not a click — the sound simply ended, the way a word ends when whoever's saying it opens their mouth wider than before."
6"Her torch picked out a carving she was certain hadn't been there when she counted — not runes, not script, a figure no taller than her hand, straight-haired, one arm raised, standing inside a circle of smaller figures."
7"The torch beam swept the ring and found nothing but the blue flowers and the seam between two stones — the seam that hadn't existed a minute ago, the hairline gap widening as she watched, a mouth opening between oak and oak."
8"She backed up a step and her heel found a footprint that wasn't hers — the moss compressed, deep, the shape of a bare foot with too many toes pressed into the sponge."
9"Something breathed in the gap between the stones — a long, wet, patient draw of air that ended before it should have."
99.14% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount122
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount5
adverbRatio0.040983606557377046
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean14.16
std13.19
cv0.931
sampleLengths
023
126
26
37
411
57
665
74
820
922
1033
116
122
136
1435
152
1630
175
183
1947
204
2114
2210
231
2411
255
265
2720
2816
2920
304
312
3218
334
3412
351
3619
3720
3816
3918
4014
412
425
434
4432
456
4617
4715
481
4921
53.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.35714285714285715
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners30
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
79.46% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences74
matches
0"She checked her phone: 11:47,"
1"It had been warm since"
2"She followed the heat."
3"Her torch cut a white"
4"She counted pylons the way"
5"She stood and kept walking."
6"She counted them as she"
7"It pressed at her ears."
8"Her footsteps went soft on"
9"She turned once, to mark"
10"She walked the circumference."
11"Her phone read 11:12."
12"She pressed the screen until"
13"She killed the torch and"
14"she said, and heard her"
15"She raised the torch."
16"She answered because silence had"
17"He rolled it, always had,"
18"She held the phone to"
19"She pressed it."
ratio0.351
68.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences74
matches
0"The bolt on the Richmond"
1"She checked her phone: 11:47,"
2"The pendant sat warm against"
3"It had been warm since"
4"She followed the heat."
5"Her torch cut a white"
6"The temperature had dropped since"
7"She counted pylons the way"
8"Torch beam dropped to the"
9"Chickweed and yarrow and something"
10"The petals were real —"
11"She stood and kept walking."
12"The pendant quickened."
13"The heat climbed from ember"
14"Oak, all of them."
15"She counted them as she"
16"A ring with a gap"
17"It pressed at her ears."
18"Her footsteps went soft on"
19"She turned once, to mark"
ratio0.784
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Chickweed and yarrow and something blue she had no name for pushed up through frost-rimed soil, every head open, every face tilted toward her light as though th…"
1"She held the phone to her ear a few seconds longer, listening to a room tone that wasn't any room she'd stood in."
2"She backed up a step and her heel found a footprint that wasn't hers — the moss compressed, deep, the shape of a bare foot with too many toes pressed into the s…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.6504%