Run: 2026-09-23-01M36VARMVTD1RWDHBAHS872QK

Run Details

Duration:
2m 30s
Cost:
$0.003720
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered Camden High Street in grey sheets and turned the shutters into mirrors. Harlow Quinn sat in the unmarked Astra with the engine cold and the heater colder, water coursing down the windscreen in ropes. The leather strap of her watch had gone dark with damp. She tilted her wrist toward the sodium glow. Eleven minutes past one. The radio on the passenger seat coughed. "Delta Two, nothing moving on the north side. You want us to pull round to the lock-up?" She thumbed the button. "Hold your position, Ellis. He'll come out the front. He always comes out the front." "Copy. Standing by." She watched the green neon of the chip shop flicker across the pavement and die, flicker and die. Three years of this. Three years of sitting in cars outside places that smelled of fryer fat and old rain, chasing a clique that never left fingerprints, never left a body the coroner could file. Morris would have cracked a joke by now. Morris would have had a flask. The shutter on the lock-up rose six inches. Then a metre. A man slid out under it. Hood up, duffel bag clutched to his chest like a child. Quinn was out of the car before the door chime sounded. The rain hit her face like a handful of gravel. "Police! Stop where you are!" The man bolted north. She ran. Her shoes slapped the flooded pavement and the street blurred past — a florist's buckets, a stack of pallets, the wet flank of a delivery van. He cut left down the side street, duffel swinging, and she followed, closing, boots finding the camber of the road by instinct. "Delta Two to control, foot pursuit, male suspect, dark clothing, carrying a holdall, heading north from the lock-up toward the market." "Received, Delta Two. Units rerouting. Stay on the line." The alley mouth swallowed him. She went in after him and the rain became a tunnel of its own, brick on both sides, fire escapes dripping. A cat shot out of a doorway and she didn't flinch. Ahead, his trainers slapped puddles and his breath came in ragged huffs. "Stop! You're only making it worse!" "You don't know what worse looks like!" He threw the words over his shoulder and vaulted a stack of crates. Milk cartons burst under his knee and he stumbled, caught himself, kept going. She cleared the crates without touching them. Twenty metres. Fifteen. Her lungs burned with the cold. She could hear the rustle of the duffel, the slap of wet nylon against his hip. The alley spat them out onto the high street again, opposite the tube station entrance, its lights streaming with rain. He didn't go for the station. He cut across the road, through the nose of a black cab that blared its horn, and into the warren of streets behind the old market buildings. "Delta Two, suspect's crossed toward the rear of the Camden Arcade. I'm with him." "Copy, Delta Two. ETA four minutes." Four minutes. She wouldn't need four minutes. He looked back once and she caught a slice of his face under the hood — young, sharp-chinned, a smear of something dark along his jaw. She knew the face. She'd seen it across an interview table eighteen months ago, silent behind a solicitor's bland smile, and again in a photograph taken outside a place in Soho with a green neon sign and a bookshelf that moved. She'd seen it in the file on Morris. He ducked through a gap in a hoarding where the plywood had been cut and hinged like a door. Quinn went through after him and the world closed over her head. Concrete stairs. A service corridor strung with a single caged bulb, dripping from the ceiling seams. He took the steps three at a time and she took them the same, one hand dragging along the rail, the metal cold enough to sting. The air changed — damp turned to cold damp, the kind that lived underground and never saw a season. Tiled walls appeared, white tiles gone the colour of old teeth, and a faded enamel sign arched overhead: the ghost lettering of a station closed since the war. The corridor opened onto a platform edge. Tracks below, wet and gleaming. Across the gap, another stairwell, another corridor, and he was already into it, the duffel banging the wall. She paused at the platform edge for half a second. The tunnel breathed at her, a long wet draught that smelled of iron and something sweeter underneath. Sugar and copper. Alchemical, the reports said. Morris's report had used a word she didn't recognise and then stopped mid-sentence, the handwriting trailing off the page. She crossed the gap. The corridor bent twice and descended another flight, and at the bottom the ceiling rose and the light changed colour — amber, smoke-oiled, moving with the flicker of flame. Voices gathered. Laughter, and something with too many vowels that wasn't laughter at all. A rope cordon blocked the archway ahead, and behind it stood a man no higher than her shoulder, his coat hung with tokens on string — small, pale, carved. Bone. He looked up at her with eyes the colour of pond water. "Token or trade. That's all there is." "Metropolitan Police." She held up the warrant card and it dripped onto his coat. "A man came through here thirty seconds ago. Dark hood, duffel bag. Where did he go?" The man didn't look at the card. He looked at her shoes, at the rain soaking through her shoulders, at the way she stood. "No police down here, love. This isn't your borough. This isn't your century." "Move the rope." "For a token." He rattled the strings at his chest. The bones clicked together with a dry sound that had nothing to do with wind chimes. "Everyone pays. That's the whole of the law." Beyond him, the market sprawled through the gut of the abandoned station — stalls under oilcloth awnings, jars catching the lamplight, chalk marks on the tiles that seemed to shift when she looked at them from the corner of her eye. A woman weighed something glittering onto a brass scale. Two figures argued over a crate that hummed. Somewhere deeper in, a voice called out a price in a currency she'd never heard of. The suspect's hood bobbed through the crowd near the far wall and vanished behind a stall hung with charms. And there, at a trestle table stacked with bandages and stoppered vials, a man rolled a sleeve down over a scar that ran the length of his left forearm. Olive skin, short dark curls, a Saint Christopher medallion catching the light as he bent to pack his kit. Tomás Herrera. Former NHS. His name sat in her notebook in ink, three pages after Morris. He looked up at the archway as if her stare had weight. Their eyes met across thirty feet of smoke. His hand went to the medallion and stayed there. The bone-seller leaned on the rope. "You going in, or are you going to stand there letting the wet ruin my floor?" The crowd shifted. Herrera turned back to his table and said something to a customer she couldn't hear. Quinn's fingers found the warrant card in her pocket and closed around its edges. The suspect was in there. So was Herrera. So was every answer she hadn't been given in three years. "One token," the man said. "Or one secret. Fair's fair." She looked past him, into the amber dark, where the market breathed and bargained and waited.
created_at"2026-09-23T10:00:11.684Z" 9/23/2026, 10:00:11 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1267
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.32% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1267
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"flicker"
count3
1
word"streaming"
count1
2
word"gleaming"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"streaming"
2"gleaming"
3"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences91
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1273
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount1095
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.46
worstName"Morris"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Camden1
High1
Street1
Quinn4
Astra1
Milk1
Soho1
Morris5
Saint1
Christopher1
Herrera3
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Morris"
2"Saint"
3"Christopher"
4"Herrera"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore1
74.24% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"appeared, white tiles gone the colour of old teeth, and a faded enamel sign arched overhead: the ghost lettering of a station closed since the war"
1"tiles that seemed to shift when she looked at them from the corner of her eye"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1273
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean26.52
std21.81
cv0.822
sampleLengths
059
17
217
319
43
567
611
717
821
95
104
1150
1221
139
1449
156
1633
1732
1853
1914
206
217
2275
2319
2412
2589
2630
2753
284
2943
3030
3112
327
3330
3424
3513
363
3734
3874
3919
4064
4129
426
4316
4418
4533
4610
4716
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"been given"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs168
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences107
ratio0.056
matches
0"Her shoes slapped the flooded pavement and the street blurred past — a florist's buckets, a stack of pallets, the wet flank of a delivery van."
1"He looked back once and she caught a slice of his face under the hood — young, sharp-chinned, a smear of something dark along his jaw."
2"The air changed — damp turned to cold damp, the kind that lived underground and never saw a season."
3"The corridor bent twice and descended another flight, and at the bottom the ceiling rose and the light changed colour — amber, smoke-oiled, moving with the flicker of flame."
4"A rope cordon blocked the archway ahead, and behind it stood a man no higher than her shoulder, his coat hung with tokens on string — small, pale, carved."
5"Beyond him, the market sprawled through the gut of the abandoned station — stalls under oilcloth awnings, jars catching the lamplight, chalk marks on the tiles that seemed to shift when she looked at them from the corner of her eye."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1094
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.012797074954296161
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean11.9
std8.39
cv0.705
sampleLengths
014
122
211
38
44
57
617
74
815
93
1018
114
1231
138
146
158
163
176
1811
1911
2010
215
224
232
2426
2522
2621
279
285
2921
3011
3112
326
3320
3413
357
362
371
386
3916
4020
416
4227
4314
446
452
465
4726
484
4937
76.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4953271028037383
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners53
81.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences82
matches
0"Then a metre."
1"Somewhere deeper in, a voice"
ratio0.024
73.66% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences82
matches
0"She tilted her wrist toward"
1"She thumbed the button."
2"She watched the green neon"
3"Her shoes slapped the flooded"
4"He cut left down the"
5"She went in after him"
6"He threw the words over"
7"She cleared the crates without"
8"Her lungs burned with the"
9"She could hear the rustle"
10"He didn't go for the"
11"He cut across the road,"
12"She wouldn't need four minutes."
13"He looked back once and"
14"She knew the face."
15"She'd seen it across an"
16"She'd seen it in the"
17"He ducked through a gap"
18"He took the steps three"
19"She paused at the platform"
ratio0.366
51.46% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences82
matches
0"Harlow Quinn sat in the"
1"The leather strap of her"
2"She tilted her wrist toward"
3"The radio on the passenger"
4"She thumbed the button."
5"She watched the green neon"
6"Morris would have cracked a"
7"Morris would have had a"
8"The shutter on the lock-up"
9"A man slid out under"
10"Hood up, duffel bag clutched"
11"Quinn was out of the"
12"The rain hit her face"
13"The man bolted north."
14"Her shoes slapped the flooded"
15"He cut left down the"
16"The alley mouth swallowed him."
17"She went in after him"
18"A cat shot out of"
19"He threw the words over"
ratio0.817
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
65.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Three years of sitting in cars outside places that smelled of fryer fat and old rain, chasing a clique that never left fingerprints, never left a body the coron…"
1"He cut across the road, through the nose of a black cab that blared its horn, and into the warren of streets behind the old market buildings."
2"She'd seen it across an interview table eighteen months ago, silent behind a solicitor's bland smile, and again in a photograph taken outside a place in Soho wi…"
3"The tunnel breathed at her, a long wet draught that smelled of iron and something sweeter underneath."
4"Beyond him, the market sprawled through the gut of the abandoned station — stalls under oilcloth awnings, jars catching the lamplight, chalk marks on the tiles …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.05
leniency0.1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.6384%