| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1267 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 76.32% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1267 | | totalAiIsms | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flicker" | | 1 | "streaming" | | 2 | "gleaming" | | 3 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 107 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1273 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 1095 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.46 | | worstName | "Morris" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Herrera" | | discoveredNames | | Camden | 1 | | High | 1 | | Street | 1 | | Quinn | 4 | | Astra | 1 | | Milk | 1 | | Soho | 1 | | Morris | 5 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | Herrera | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Morris" | | 2 | "Saint" | | 3 | "Christopher" | | 4 | "Herrera" |
| | places | | 0 | "Camden" | | 1 | "High" | | 2 | "Street" | | 3 | "Soho" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 74.24% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "appeared, white tiles gone the colour of old teeth, and a faded enamel sign arched overhead: the ghost lettering of a station closed since the war" | | 1 | "tiles that seemed to shift when she looked at them from the corner of her eye" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1273 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 26.52 | | std | 21.81 | | cv | 0.822 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 59 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 67 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 50 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 49 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 32 | | 18 | 53 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 75 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 89 | | 26 | 30 | | 27 | 53 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 43 | | 30 | 30 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 30 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 34 | | 38 | 74 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 64 | | 41 | 29 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 33 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 16 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 168 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 107 | | ratio | 0.056 | | matches | | 0 | "Her shoes slapped the flooded pavement and the street blurred past — a florist's buckets, a stack of pallets, the wet flank of a delivery van." | | 1 | "He looked back once and she caught a slice of his face under the hood — young, sharp-chinned, a smear of something dark along his jaw." | | 2 | "The air changed — damp turned to cold damp, the kind that lived underground and never saw a season." | | 3 | "The corridor bent twice and descended another flight, and at the bottom the ceiling rose and the light changed colour — amber, smoke-oiled, moving with the flicker of flame." | | 4 | "A rope cordon blocked the archway ahead, and behind it stood a man no higher than her shoulder, his coat hung with tokens on string — small, pale, carved." | | 5 | "Beyond him, the market sprawled through the gut of the abandoned station — stalls under oilcloth awnings, jars catching the lamplight, chalk marks on the tiles that seemed to shift when she looked at them from the corner of her eye." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1094 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 14 | | adverbRatio | 0.012797074954296161 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 107 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 107 | | mean | 11.9 | | std | 8.39 | | cv | 0.705 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 26 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 37 |
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| 76.95% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.4953271028037383 | | totalSentences | 107 | | uniqueOpeners | 53 | |
| 81.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Then a metre." | | 1 | "Somewhere deeper in, a voice" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 73.66% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "She tilted her wrist toward" | | 1 | "She thumbed the button." | | 2 | "She watched the green neon" | | 3 | "Her shoes slapped the flooded" | | 4 | "He cut left down the" | | 5 | "She went in after him" | | 6 | "He threw the words over" | | 7 | "She cleared the crates without" | | 8 | "Her lungs burned with the" | | 9 | "She could hear the rustle" | | 10 | "He didn't go for the" | | 11 | "He cut across the road," | | 12 | "She wouldn't need four minutes." | | 13 | "He looked back once and" | | 14 | "She knew the face." | | 15 | "She'd seen it across an" | | 16 | "She'd seen it in the" | | 17 | "He ducked through a gap" | | 18 | "He took the steps three" | | 19 | "She paused at the platform" |
| | ratio | 0.366 | |
| 51.46% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Harlow Quinn sat in the" | | 1 | "The leather strap of her" | | 2 | "She tilted her wrist toward" | | 3 | "The radio on the passenger" | | 4 | "She thumbed the button." | | 5 | "She watched the green neon" | | 6 | "Morris would have cracked a" | | 7 | "Morris would have had a" | | 8 | "The shutter on the lock-up" | | 9 | "A man slid out under" | | 10 | "Hood up, duffel bag clutched" | | 11 | "Quinn was out of the" | | 12 | "The rain hit her face" | | 13 | "The man bolted north." | | 14 | "Her shoes slapped the flooded" | | 15 | "He cut left down the" | | 16 | "The alley mouth swallowed him." | | 17 | "She went in after him" | | 18 | "A cat shot out of" | | 19 | "He threw the words over" |
| | ratio | 0.817 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 65.22% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Three years of sitting in cars outside places that smelled of fryer fat and old rain, chasing a clique that never left fingerprints, never left a body the coron…" | | 1 | "He cut across the road, through the nose of a black cab that blared its horn, and into the warren of streets behind the old market buildings." | | 2 | "She'd seen it across an interview table eighteen months ago, silent behind a solicitor's bland smile, and again in a photograph taken outside a place in Soho wi…" | | 3 | "The tunnel breathed at her, a long wet draught that smelled of iron and something sweeter underneath." | | 4 | "Beyond him, the market sprawled through the gut of the abandoned station — stalls under oilcloth awnings, jars catching the lamplight, chalk marks on the tiles …" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.05 | | leniency | 0.1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |