| 88.89% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "He gestured back [back]" | | 1 | "She knelt once [once]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.417 | | leniency | 0.833 | | rawRatio | 0.133 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1457 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 82.84% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1457 | | totalAiIsms | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfect" | | 1 | "database" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "pristine" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.83% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 56 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1478 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.34% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 871 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.03 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rafiq" | | discoveredNames | | Camden | 1 | | Town | 1 | | Northern | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 9 | | King | 1 | | Cross | 1 | | Detective | 2 | | Sergeant | 1 | | Omar | 1 | | Rafiq | 7 | | Morris | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "King" | | 3 | "Cross" | | 4 | "Sergeant" | | 5 | "Omar" | | 6 | "Rafiq" | | 7 | "Morris" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.983 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 95.65% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like animal teeth strung on cord," |
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| 64.68% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.353 | | wordCount | 1478 | | matches | | 0 | "not accidental torque but a braided pattern, two bands of metal woven together" | | 1 | "not cleaned, but pristine, as though it had been protected from the beginning" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 36.05 | | std | 29.91 | | cv | 0.83 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 91 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 54 | | 4 | 74 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 70 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 39 | | 9 | 50 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 72 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 100 | | 18 | 49 | | 19 | 37 | | 20 | 64 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 52 | | 24 | 69 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 64 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 32 | | 30 | 66 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 68 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 93 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 79 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 3 |
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| 82.99% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "were blistered" | | 1 | "been torqued" | | 2 | "was torn" | | 3 | "been protected" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 154 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 84 | | ratio | 0.107 | | matches | | 0 | "Below Camden Town's buzzing streets, the old Northern line platform had become something else entirely — a corridor of stalls and draped canvas that stretched deeper into the tunnel than any railway had ever gone." | | 1 | "Price tags dangled from everything — but no one was selling tonight." | | 2 | "He wore a long charcoal coat, and his fingers — Quinn leaned closer — his fingers were blistered, the skin split along every crease as though he'd plunged both hands into boiling water." | | 3 | "His expression wasn't fear exactly — it was more like recognition, mouth open as if he'd started to say a name and the name had never arrived." | | 4 | "The air in the tunnel was stale but oddly warm, carrying a faint tang she couldn't place — copper and something older, like the inside of a church bell." | | 5 | "The circle of clean grout was visible from this angle — a perfect ring, not quite concentric with the body." | | 6 | "Under magnification the twist revealed itself as deliberate — not accidental torque but a braided pattern, two bands of metal woven together." | | 7 | "The fluorescent lights overhead flickered once — just a stutter — and the shadows along the far end of the platform shifted, though nothing moved." | | 8 | "The stone was cold and smooth, the grime absent as if the surface had never been dirty — not cleaned, but pristine, as though it had been protected from the beginning." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 864 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.023148148148148147 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004629629629629629 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 84 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 84 | | mean | 17.6 | | std | 13.09 | | cv | 0.744 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 35 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 34 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 33 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 31 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 28 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 29 | | 41 | 40 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 45 | | 45 | 37 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 49 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 25 |
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| 81.75% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.5119047619047619 | | totalSentences | 84 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 54.48% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "He hadn't gone pale that" | | 1 | "His shoes squeaked on the" | | 2 | "He wore a long charcoal" | | 3 | "She circled the body." | | 4 | "she asked the nearest uniform" | | 5 | "His expression wasn't fear exactly" | | 6 | "She crouched and examined the" | | 7 | "She pointed at the circle" | | 8 | "She let the observation settle" | | 9 | "She walked further down the" | | 10 | "It hung open six inches," | | 11 | "He gestured back at the" | | 12 | "She walked back toward the" | | 13 | "Its edge was sharp, no" | | 14 | "She pulled her phone from" | | 15 | "She zoomed in on the" | | 16 | "She'd seen something similar in" | | 17 | "She kept her eyes forward." | | 18 | "She let the silence hold" | | 19 | "She looked at Rafiq directly" |
| | ratio | 0.414 | |
| 28.97% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "The barrier tape caught the" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn crouched at" | | 2 | "He hadn't gone pale that" | | 3 | "Quinn asked, though she already" | | 4 | "Detective Sergeant Omar Rafiq stepped" | | 5 | "His shoes squeaked on the" | | 6 | "Quinn stood and stepped past" | | 7 | "The platform ran about eighty" | | 8 | "Someone had set up a" | | 9 | "The stalls were intact, dust" | | 10 | "The body was different." | | 11 | "A man lay on his" | | 12 | "He wore a long charcoal" | | 13 | "A brass ring sat on" | | 14 | "Rafiq flipped a page" | | 15 | "She circled the body." | | 16 | "The concrete beneath him was" | | 17 | "she asked the nearest uniform" | | 18 | "Quinn's eyes moved to the" | | 19 | "His expression wasn't fear exactly" |
| | ratio | 0.862 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 31.25% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Below Camden Town's buzzing streets, the old Northern line platform had become something else entirely — a corridor of stalls and draped canvas that stretched d…" | | 1 | "He wore a long charcoal coat, and his fingers — Quinn leaned closer — his fingers were blistered, the skin split along every crease as though he'd plunged both …" | | 2 | "A faint ring of discoloration spread outward from his body, about a meter across, the grime in the grout lines gone clean as if something had bleached them." | | 3 | "Rafiq's expression flattened into the careful blankness of a man who'd heard about DS Morris and the file that had vanished from the records." | | 4 | "The stone was cold and smooth, the grime absent as if the surface had never been dirty — not cleaned, but pristine, as though it had been protected from the beg…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "She knelt once (kneel)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.139 | | leniency | 0.278 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.056 | |