Run: 2026-09-23-01M36VGMY8ZW10QAH81NHMNNE0

Run Details

Duration:
1m 13s
Cost:
$0.000672
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts turned one after another, and the door swung inward. Aurora stood in the gap, a dish towel slung over one shoulder, the smell of reheated noodles curling out behind her. She looked at him for a full second without blinking. "Rory." His voice carried the faint rasp of someone who'd been standing on a street corner for longer than he wanted to admit. Lucien Moreau stood on the top stair in his charcoal suit, ivory-handled cane resting against his shin, his heterochromatic gaze fixed on her face — amber on the left, black on the right. Slicked-back platinum blond had loosened at the temples from the rain. "You're wet," she said. "I am." He didn't move. She didn't step aside. The narrow hallway behind her held a stack of delivery bags from Golden Empress and a lamp that threw warm light across the scuffed floorboards. Ptolemy wound between her ankles, tail high, and she nudged him away with her bare foot. "You could have called." "I could have." Silence built a wall between them. She leaned against the doorframe, arms crossing over her chest, the crescent scar on her left wrist catching the light. He looked at it — not deliberately, not coyly — but his eyes dropped to it the way they always had, the way he used to trace it with his thumb when they sat together on Eva's rooftop, their legs dangling over Brick Lane. "I need a word," he said. "Words are free. You could've texted." "Words are not free. Not the ones I have." Her jaw shifted. She stepped back from the door, and he took that for what it was — not permission, but a concession to the fact that the stairwell was damp and cold and he looked like a man who hadn't slept. He crossed the threshold. She closed the door behind him, and the lock clicked shut with the finality of a verdict. The flat was small, the ceiling low, the window above the sink looking out over Silas' bar where the amber sign buzzed and hummed in the dark. She moved to the counter and picked up a pair of chopsticks, turning them over in her fingers while she waited. "Sit down," she said, nodding at the stool. He sat. The cane leaned against the counter beside him, and he rested both hands on the wood between his knees. Rainwater dripped from his cuffs and spotted the floor. "Last time I was here," he began. "Last time you were here, you told me to stay out of your business and walked out that door before I could finish a sentence." She set the chopsticks down. "So. Choose carefully." His mouth twitched — not quite a smile, not quite the opposite. He exhaled through his nose. "Lucien." She said his name without heat, without frost, the way you'd say a word you'd rehearsed. "Whatever it is, say it plainly." "Evan Carter reached out to someone I work with. Three days ago. He's asking questions about you — not about where you live, not about your mother, not about the flat. He wants to know if you're under anyone's protection." The room contracted. Rory's hand went to her wrist, thumb pressing against the old scar, a habit she'd never broken. "Why now? He hasn't come near me in over a year." "Because your name appeared in a case file he has access to. Pre-Law at Cardiff — you didn't finish, but your name was still in the system when he pulled records through the firm he interned at. He saw your London address attached to a delivery contract for a Chinese restaurant on the Strand." Lucien's amber eye caught the lamplight. "He has your address, Rory." She turned away from him and walked to the window. Below, a couple stumbled out of Silas' bar into the rain, laughing, clinging to each other. She watched them go. "You came all the way down here, in this weather, to tell me that?" "I came because no one else would." She spun around. "Don't. Don't do that. Don't dress this up as nobility." Her voice stayed level, but the chopsticks in her grip creaked. "You had my number. You had six months of it. You could have called from your office in Soho and told me over the phone like a professional." He held her gaze — both eyes, amber and black, and the discomfort of it never lessened. "Yes," he said. "I could have." "That's it? Yes?" "I came because I wanted to see your face when I told you." Her mouth closed. She set the chopsticks down on the counter with a sharp knock, the sound too loud in the small kitchen. Ptolemy startled and leapt onto the back of the chair behind her, fur bristled. "That's a terrible reason." "It's an honest one." She pressed her palms flat against the counter, leaning forward, and the distance between them shrank to the width of the stool and a breath. He didn't lean back. He never had. "You left," she said, quieter now. "You stood in that same spot and told me I was a liability, and you left, and I didn't hear from you for half a year, and now you're sitting in my kitchen telling me you came because you wanted to see my face." "I said you were a liability to my work. I never said you were a liability to me." "That distinction doesn't matter when you're the one walking out." The rain thickened against the glass, and the lamp buzzed, and somewhere below them Silas poured a last round and locked the front door. Lucien's hands hadn't moved from his knees. The ivory handle of the cane caught the light like bone. "No," he said. "I suppose it doesn't." Rory straightened. She crossed her arms again, and the sleeve of her shirt rode up, exposing the crescent scar, and she didn't pull it down. "So what do I do with this? You show up at my door, tell me my ex has my address, and expect what — gratitude? Forgiveness?" "I expect you to do what you always do. Think three steps ahead, make a plan I haven't seen, and prove me wrong about every calculation I ever made." His voice dropped. "And I expect you to let me stay close while you do it, because Evan Carter doesn't move the way I do, but he moves in circles where I'm already standing." She studied him — the rain-darkened suit, the loosened hair, the way his fingers hadn't uncurled from his knees the entire time. He was a man who held himself like a drawn blade, and right now, on her stool, in her kitchen, he looked like he hadn't decided whether to sheathe or strike. "You could've stayed," she said. "I know." "You could have called." "I know." "You could have —" She stopped. Breathed. Pressed her tongue against the back of her teeth and started again. "You could have just told me. Whatever that was you felt, or didn't feel, you could have said it instead of performing some grand exit." He uncapped one hand and placed it flat on the counter between them — palm down, fingers spread, the way you'd offer something fragile for inspection. Not reaching for her. Just present. "I was afraid," he said. "Not of him. Of you seeing what I am and deciding I was the liability." Rory looked at his hand on the counter. The wood between them was warm from the lamp, and the rain kept falling, and Ptolemy had settled into the chair behind her with the quiet certainty of a creature who understood nothing of what was being said and didn't care to. She didn't take his hand. She didn't pull away from it either. "The address," she said. "How much does he actually have?" Lucien's fingers curled once against the wood, then flattened again. "Street and postcode. Building number. He doesn't know which floor, which door, or that you live above a bar owned by a man with connections he'd never survive approaching." "Silas." "Silas." A beat. "You've done well for yourself, Rory. Better than I calculated." She huffed — not a laugh, something drier, something that had been a laugh once and had worn thin in the intervening months. "You calculated me?"
created_at"2026-09-23T10:03:24.495Z" 9/23/2026, 10:03:24 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.327
leniency0.654
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.19% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1388
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count1
1
adverb"coyly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"deliberately"
1"coyly"
2"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
89.19% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1388
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"calculated"
count2
highlights
0"silence"
1"calculated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen60
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1400
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount831
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.48
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Golden1
Empress1
Eva1
Brick1
Lane1
Silas1
Rory3
Breathed1
Ptolemy3
Lucien4
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Lucien"
places
0"Golden"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like a man who hadn't slept"
1"not quite a smile, not quite the opposite"
2"not quite the opposite"
3"looked like he hadn't decided whether to"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.714
wordCount1400
matches
0"not permission, but a concession to the fact"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean22.95
std20.11
cv0.876
sampleLengths
043
11
266
34
42
548
64
73
870
96
106
119
1242
1369
148
1530
167
1733
1817
1923
2040
2120
2211
2365
2430
2514
267
2752
2817
296
303
3113
3237
334
344
3532
3650
3718
3810
3942
407
4125
4226
4363
4453
455
462
474
482
4944
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"being said"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs134
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences107
ratio0.075
matches
0"Lucien Moreau stood on the top stair in his charcoal suit, ivory-handled cane resting against his shin, his heterochromatic gaze fixed on her face — amber on the left, black on the right."
1"He looked at it — not deliberately, not coyly — but his eyes dropped to it the way they always had, the way he used to trace it with his thumb when they sat together on Eva's rooftop, their legs dangling over Brick Lane."
2"She stepped back from the door, and he took that for what it was — not permission, but a concession to the fact that the stairwell was damp and cold and he looked like a man who hadn't slept."
3"His mouth twitched — not quite a smile, not quite the opposite."
4"He held her gaze — both eyes, amber and black, and the discomfort of it never lessened."
5"She studied him — the rain-darkened suit, the loosened hair, the way his fingers hadn't uncurled from his knees the entire time."
6"He uncapped one hand and placed it flat on the counter between them — palm down, fingers spread, the way you'd offer something fragile for inspection."
7"She huffed — not a laugh, something drier, something that had been a laugh once and had worn thin in the intervening months."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount806
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.02481389578163772
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0024813895781637717
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean13.08
std11.81
cv0.903
sampleLengths
012
121
210
31
422
533
611
74
82
93
104
1125
1216
134
143
156
1620
1744
186
196
209
213
2239
234
2417
2527
2621
278
282
2919
309
317
3230
333
3412
355
3617
376
3840
393
4017
4111
4260
435
4410
4516
464
4714
487
493
50.47% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3364485981308411
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences58
matches
0"She looked at him for"
1"His voice carried the faint"
2"He didn't move."
3"She didn't step aside."
4"She leaned against the doorframe,"
5"He looked at it —"
6"Her jaw shifted."
7"She stepped back from the"
8"He crossed the threshold."
9"She closed the door behind"
10"She moved to the counter"
11"she said, nodding at the"
12"She set the chopsticks down"
13"His mouth twitched — not"
14"He exhaled through his nose."
15"She said his name without"
16"She turned away from him"
17"She watched them go."
18"She spun around."
19"Her voice stayed level, but"
ratio0.603
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences58
matches
0"The three deadbolts turned one"
1"Aurora stood in the gap,"
2"She looked at him for"
3"His voice carried the faint"
4"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
5"He didn't move."
6"She didn't step aside."
7"The narrow hallway behind her"
8"Ptolemy wound between her ankles,"
9"Silence built a wall between"
10"She leaned against the doorframe,"
11"He looked at it —"
12"Her jaw shifted."
13"She stepped back from the"
14"He crossed the threshold."
15"She closed the door behind"
16"The flat was small, the"
17"She moved to the counter"
18"she said, nodding at the"
19"The cane leaned against the"
ratio0.931
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
50.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The narrow hallway behind her held a stack of delivery bags from Golden Empress and a lamp that threw warm light across the scuffed floorboards."
1"She stepped back from the door, and he took that for what it was — not permission, but a concession to the fact that the stairwell was damp and cold and he look…"
2"The wood between them was warm from the lamp, and the rain kept falling, and Ptolemy had settled into the chair behind her with the quiet certainty of a creatur…"
3"She huffed — not a laugh, something drier, something that had been a laugh once and had worn thin in the intervening months."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.192
leniency0.385
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.9848%