Run: 2026-09-23-01M36VGQZ685RGDDDH59SAFCSA

Run Details

Duration:
5m 38s
Cost:
$0.097464
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory cleared the rail at the Richmond gate and dropped into grass that took the sound of her landing and kept it. Orange light stained the cloud behind her. Ahead, the dark held deer-paths, wet bark, and the thin hiss of the road she had left. The pendant knocked her sternum, hot through cotton, and the heat leaned west of the path. She followed the lean. The oaks stood in a ring the maps declined to print. She counted them with a finger against her thigh. Twelve. Trunks the colour of masonry and the grain of oak, roots knuckled out of the earth like monument feet. Between two of them the air changed in the space of a hand's breadth. Warmth. Crushed violet. Turned soil. Wildflowers packed the threshold: campion, vetch, a yellow spill that belonged to a month with longer light. January had split her knuckles on the bus. The flowers had missed the news. She set her palm to the nearest trunk. Resin tacked her skin. Under her sleeve the crescent scar caught a leak of crimson from the chain at her throat. She put the reason into the open air. "Three nights you cooked against my chest in the flat. Tonight you pulled. I want the hand that closed this chain, and I want the door you keep pointing at. That's the whole of it." She stepped through. The road-hiss ended between one boot and the next, cut with the neatness of a latch. Her breath stayed. Flowers brushed her calves and held the bend. Overhead the cloud had cleared, and the sky carried stars in numbers London never permitted, none of them bruised by sodium. She dragged her mobile free. 00:17. No signal. The torch threw her shadow across moss combed flat, each blade laid the same way. Eva had the note on Silas' bar. Silas had the cellar and the keys. Neither had this ring. In a Hackney kitchen with the windows shut, Rory had set a return against the morning shift, and the terms stayed on that side of the oaks. In here she put her voice where she could hear it work. "You told me an hour in this place can walk back out as a day. I gave you the morning. If the hand on this chain has ears, it can match that and step out before the clock cheats me." The grove sent the last word back from the left, a beat behind her mouth, pitched under it. "Me." She swept the torch across the sound. Foxglove. A root. No legs. Every bell of the foxglove faced her. She had not touched a stem. She killed the light. Dark came down, and the pendant took up the work, a coal under cloth, rimming the nearest bark. She put her back to a trunk. She counted breaths, one through eight, and spent the ninth. A twig snapped at the distance of a long stride. "Deer, you're bold. Anything else, you're behind me. The invitation went out at the stones." Another snap. A heel left the moss. The rhythm matched the path she had used outside the ring: same weight, same hitch where she had broken stride to count trunks. She fitted her boot back into her own print and stayed there. "Copy the walk. A face comes before a name." No wind moved the clearing. The stems ticked, dry clocks, and under the ticking a breath drew at the height of her shoulder. Inhale. Hold. Release. It borrowed her timing and missed by a fraction. She slid her gaze along the ring. Between the fourth oak and the fifth, in the tail of her eye, a paler vertical held. Person-tall. Narrow as a shut door. She set her eyes on it. The gap offered night and a knot in the bark the shape of a closed lid. She returned her attention to the flowers. The vertical occupied the gap again. It did not sway. It took up space only when she denied it the centre of her look. "Edge of the eye. I see the mechanic. Pack it in." The breath at her shoulder warmed the hair at her nape. Pendant-heat lived on her chest, a contained burn along the silver. This other heat belonged to a mouth set close to her skin. No footfall had announced the closed distance. She stepped off the trunk. The breath followed as sound: an inhale placed where hers belonged, half a beat after, a listener set against the pattern of her ribs. The mobile came out because numbers had never broken faith with her above the bar. 00:17. The seconds sat on forty-two. She watched them. They refused the minute. Inside the glass a tick jumped that the handset had not earned, then stillness. Dew beaded her fringe. The fringe had been dry at the rail. She pushed the mobile into her pocket and lifted the chain clear of her collar. Crimson painted her palm. The stone pulsed. Beat, rest, beat. The rest matched the breath behind her. She emptied her lungs and held them empty. The stone kept the foreign rhythm and warmed with it, a second metronome against the crescent scar. "There. You pulse for a Hel-door. Point at it. I didn't cross a park at night to be paced at the heel." The pull in the chain strengthened towards the centre. She went with it. A shift waited at the Golden Empress before noon, oil and steam and Yu-Fei's eye for woodland on a delivery bike. Flowers opened under her soles and rose uncrushed, faces turning after her ankles. She counted blooms with no right to that colour and lost the count when the heads kept rotating behind her. A bicycle bell rang once from the middle of the ring. The chipped note belonged to the bike under Silas' stairs, the bell she struck with a glove on narrow roads. No wheel turned. No rider stood in the crimson reach of the stone. The note ended. The stems ticked over the place where the sound had been. The pale vertical held the corner of her sight. Left. Then the side she had not chosen. Never in the middle of a look. She halted. It halted. She lengthened her stride. The second footfall lengthened and landed close enough that air tapped her calf. "Brendan Carter's daughter. Jennifer's. If you've taken their mouths, put them down. They didn't give you the right." The flowers answered in a classroom hush. Many stems. One throat. "Aurora." The vowel sat where her mother placed it on parents' evening, exact, the Welsh of it intact. No chalk. No hall. No woman with a biro behind one ear. Rory locked her fingers on the chain. The scar drew tight. "Say the name she used when I came home in trouble." The heads leaned towards her boots. "Rory." "Trouble was Aurora. You missed. Sundays are Rory. You don't have her." She took three paces and stopped. In the moss ahead, on ground her boots had not reached, a print waited. Her size. Heel deep. The toe pointed along the pendant's pull. Starlight pooled in the water at the bottom. She set her foot beside the print. The stone stung her palm. Breath arrived at her ear and moved a strand of black hair against her jaw. Damp hair. No wind she could point to had laid that damp on her. "Missed." Her correction, in a mouth that was not hers. She turned. Oaks. Flowers. Stars. Empty reach, the distance a body would need to speak at her ear, and that reach stood bare in the centre of her eyes. In the tail of her sight the pale vertical had come closer. A shoulder-line. No head above it. She kept the shape where she kept vans off her handlebars, and set her gaze on the gap the stone demanded. Finger to thumb, she counted the ring again. Twelve. A thirteenth dark opened between two trunks that had stood flush. Air bent inside that dark. Night bit her cheeks and set an ache in her teeth. The bent air smelled of iron and of rain on stone left through a day of sun. Weight shifted in the bend. One foot to the other. The print beside her boot filled, water rising under a sole that grew no ankle, no cloth, no skin. The footstep landed in the hollow she had refused. Shock ran into her own sole. Mud lifted and speckled the leather from a depression her weight had never entered. The pale shoulder crossed the colour of her sleeve and stayed there, sharing the inch of dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.231
leniency0.462
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1446
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
72.34% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1446
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"footfall"
count2
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"weight"
2"footfall"
3"pulsed"
4"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences150
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences150
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences163
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1446
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount1247
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.24
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
London1
Silas1
Hackney1
Rory3
Golden1
Empress1
Yu-Fei1
Flowers3
persons
0"Silas"
1"Rory"
2"Yu-Fei"
3"Flowers"
places
0"Richmond"
1"London"
2"Hackney"
3"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1446
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences163
matches
0"jumped that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean31.43
std24.3
cv0.773
sampleLengths
066
190
229
38
435
53
671
757
840
918
101
1125
1239
1310
1415
1530
1612
179
1835
197
2076
2111
2241
2329
2469
2542
2622
2767
2858
2945
3018
3111
321
3340
3411
356
361
3712
3851
3929
401
419
4268
4353
4410
4565
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences150
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs197
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences163
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount397
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount0
adverbRatio0
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences163
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences163
mean8.87
std7.03
cv0.793
sampleLengths
022
17
217
316
44
511
69
71
819
914
101
112
122
1317
148
156
168
174
1817
198
2035
213
2216
233
248
2521
265
271
282
2915
307
317
324
3327
3412
3540
3618
371
387
391
402
412
427
436
444
4518
467
4710
4810
4915
66.05% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.4409937888198758
totalSentences161
uniqueOpeners71
28.01% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences119
matches
0"Then the side she had"
ratio0.008
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences119
matches
0"She followed the lean."
1"She counted them with a"
2"She set her palm to"
3"She put the reason into"
4"She stepped through."
5"Her breath stayed."
6"She dragged her mobile free."
7"She swept the torch across"
8"She had not touched a"
9"She killed the light."
10"She put her back to"
11"She counted breaths, one through"
12"She fitted her boot back"
13"It borrowed her timing and"
14"She slid her gaze along"
15"She set her eyes on"
16"She returned her attention to"
17"It did not sway."
18"It took up space only"
19"She stepped off the trunk."
ratio0.261
65.04% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount94
totalSentences119
matches
0"Rory cleared the rail at"
1"The pendant knocked her sternum,"
2"She followed the lean."
3"The oaks stood in a"
4"She counted them with a"
5"Trunks the colour of masonry"
6"Wildflowers packed the threshold: campion,"
7"January had split her knuckles"
8"The flowers had missed the"
9"She set her palm to"
10"Resin tacked her skin."
11"She put the reason into"
12"She stepped through."
13"The road-hiss ended between one"
14"Her breath stayed."
15"Flowers brushed her calves and"
16"She dragged her mobile free."
17"The torch threw her shadow"
18"Eva had the note on"
19"Silas had the cellar and"
ratio0.79
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Wildflowers packed the threshold: campion, vetch, a yellow spill that belonged to a month with longer light."
1"The print beside her boot filled, water rising under a sole that grew no ankle, no cloth, no skin."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
91.0479%