Run: 2026-09-23-01M36VGWDP3WAEZ1QF9V2K1ZN1

Run Details

Duration:
1m 22s
Cost:
$0.000653
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came down sideways off the roof of the car park, and Harlow Quinn didn't slow down. She'd spotted him on the corner of Delancey Street — the same gaunt figure from the Grainstore CCTV, the one who'd slipped through the drain cover at eleven minutes past two in the morning while her colleagues were arguing about warrants. Now he was forty metres ahead of her, hood up, moving fast along the slick pavement toward Camden High Street. "Quinn, hold position—" She thumbed the radio off and clipped it back to her belt. The voice of DS Achebe dissolved into static behind her. Boots struck puddles. The suspect cut left into a narrow alley between a shuttered takeaway and a locksmith's shop, and Harlow followed, one hand steadying herself against the brickwork as she rounded the corner. Trash bags split open underfoot. Something warm and rank sprayed across her ankle. She kept moving. He was faster than he looked — long legs, a runner's gait — but he glanced back twice, and both times she caught the flash of his eyes beneath the hood. Fear. Good. Fear made people clumsy. "You! Stop! Metropolitan Police!" Her voice came out raw. The alley dead-ended at a chain-link fence topped with barbed wire, and for one clean second she thought she had him. He hit the fence without breaking stride, boots finding the diamond pattern of the mesh, fingers hooking over the top. Barbed wire snagged his jacket but not his skin. He rolled over the other side and dropped into the car park behind the old bus depot. Harlow vaulted after him. The wire bit into her forearm through her sleeve. She landed hard on the far side, the impact jarring up through her knee, and kept going. The depot was a skeletal wreck — corrugated iron walls, a collapsed roof at one end, a floor of cracked concrete pooled with black water. Her suspect ran diagonally across it, toward a gap in the far wall where someone had wrenched the metal sheeting aside. She followed, each breath a blade in her chest. Eighteen years on the force and her lungs still burned like this, though she'd run in worse — Helmand, twenty twelve, sprinting across open ground with IED dust in her mouth. He squeezed through the gap. She followed, the torn edge of the metal catching her belt and tearing it loose. She caught it one-handed and kept moving. Beyond the depot lay a warren of back streets she didn't recognise, though she'd worked Camden a dozen times. The suspect seemed to know them well — he took turns without hesitation, cutting through a courtyard, over a low wall, past a row of wheelie bins that toppled behind him. She hurdled the wall, landed in mud, and pressed on. A scream of tyres. A taxi swerved, horn blaring. She raised one hand, barked her warrant card number into the night, and kept running. Then the streets began to change. The shop fronts thinned. The buildings grew older — Georgian brick swallowed by grime, windows boarded with mismatched timber. The rain hammered harder, drumming against the road like something trying to get in. Harlow's jacket was soaked through, the water sitting cold against her skin beneath her shirt. Her leather watch, a wedding gift from a marriage that had ended four years ago, slipped around her wrist as it filled with rainwater. She saw him again — fifty metres ahead, turning onto a street she didn't recognise. The pavement sloped downward. The buildings on either side drew closer together until they were almost touching overhead, a bridge of crumbling masonry that blocked out the sky. She caught up to the sound of him: footsteps echoing off stone, not tarmac. She rounded the corner and found the mouth of a staircase descending beneath a Victorian arch. No sign. No light except a bulb behind a wire cage halfway down, throwing amber circles on wet steps. At the bottom, a set of heavy iron gates stood open. Beyond them, a tiled corridor stretched into darkness — white subway tiles, cracked and missing in patches, the name of a station she didn't recognise spelled out in mosaic above the archway: CANTLOW. Not on any Tube map she'd ever seen. A draft of warm air rolled up the stairs, carrying with it a smell — incense and something metallic, copper maybe, mixed with the sweet rot of old money. And beneath it, voices. Dozens of them, a low rumble like a congregation. Harlow stopped at the iron gate. Her radio sat silent on her belt; whatever signal there'd been up on street level died down here. She thumbed the channel anyway. "Achebe, this is Quinn. I'm below ground, Camden, unknown station, following a male suspect, white, six foot, grey hooded—" Nothing. She keyed it again. Static, then nothing. She looked down the corridor. The amber light flickered. Three steps beyond the gate, a human skull sat on the tiled floor, bleached clean, a token of bone hanging from its jaw on a length of gut string. She crouched, pulled a pen from her pocket, and hooked the token up. Bone, by the feel of it. Real. A small disc, flat as a coin, etched with a spiral she didn't recognise. The voices grew louder as she moved deeper. The corridor curved left and opened onto a platform — not a station platform but something carved from the tunnel itself, wider than it should have been, the ceiling supported by iron pillars bolted into the rock. Lanterns hung from hooks along the walls, and the light they threw was wrong: green, the colour of old copper, painting everything in sick shades. Market stalls lined both sides of the tunnel, and behind them, figures moved. A woman in a coat of iridescent feathers haggled over a jar of something that glowed faintly. A man with scarred hands laid out rows of knives on a blanket, each blade engraved with symbols that seemed to shift when she wasn't looking directly at them. At the far end, a card table held stacks of paper — documents, maps — and a figure sat behind them with a ledger open on his knees, reading aloud to a queue of customers. No one looked at her. No one seemed surprised by her presence either. A few glanced at the bone token in her hand and looked away again. She thought of Morris. Three years since the case that took him, the one she still couldn't explain — the reports that didn't add up, the evidence that vanished from the property store, the postmortem findings that contradicted each other. She'd stood over his body in a Chalk Farm flat and felt the ground shift under her, something she'd never felt before, a certainty that the world was wider than the one she'd been taught to patrol. She'd been hunting for this. She knew it the way she knew the shape of a bullet wound. The suspect was twenty metres ahead, threading through the crowd, his grey hood low. He turned his head — one more glance back — and their eyes met across the green light. He quickened. A stall keeper to her left — a broad woman with close-cropped hair and a tattoo of a raven on her throat — reached out and touched her arm. "You're not supposed to be down here, love." Harlow pulled her arm free. "Police." The woman's expression didn't change. She leaned in close enough that Harlow could smell ginger and tobacco on her breath. "Then you'd better decide quick. Market moves after moonrise, and once it does, there's no coming back the way you came." The suspect reached the far end of the tunnel where a gap in the stonework yawned black and narrow, a passage that didn't belong to any station construction Harlow had ever studied. He slipped inside without a backward glance this time. She stood at the edge of the crowd, the bone token warm in her palm, rain still dripping from the hem of her jacket onto the filthy floor of a place that should not exist beneath Camden. Behind her, the tunnel curved back toward the iron gates, toward the stairs, toward the wet London night and her radio with no signal and her colleagues who wouldn't come looking for at least another hour. The passage swallowed the last of him. His footsteps echoed, then thinned, then were gone. The stall keeper watched her from across the aisle, the raven on her throat caught in the lantern light. No one else paid attention. The market continued around her — bargaining, laughter, the clink of glass, the scrape of coin on wood — as if a uniformed detective standing in their midst was the most ordinary thing in the world. Harlow shifted her weight. The bone token pressed into her fingers. Behind her, the way out. Ahead, the dark. The woman with the raven tattoo spoke again, her voice flat and matter-of-fact. "Either way, you've got about ten minutes before the tide turns."
created_at"2026-09-23T10:03:32.157Z" 9/23/2026, 10:03:32 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1502
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
70.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1502
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"footsteps"
count2
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"mosaic"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"quickened"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"echoing"
2"mosaic"
3"flickered"
4"etched"
5"quickened"
6"echoed"
7"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences103
matches
0"seemed surprised"
87.38% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences103
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1522
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount1455
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.62
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow9
Quinn1
Delancey1
Street2
Grainstore1
Camden3
High1
Achebe1
Helmand1
Georgian1
Victorian1
Tube1
Morris1
Chalk1
Farm1
London1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Achebe"
3"Morris"
places
0"Delancey"
1"Street"
2"Grainstore"
3"Camden"
4"High"
5"Victorian"
6"Chalk"
7"Farm"
8"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
79.58% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"symbols that seemed to shift when she wasn't looking directly at them"
1"seemed surprised by her presence either"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.657
wordCount1522
matches
0"not a station platform but something carved from the tunnel itself, wider than it shoul"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean36.24
std24.42
cv0.674
sampleLengths
018
161
23
322
450
537
64
772
830
986
1027
1160
1224
136
1472
1543
1649
1752
1842
1929
2019
218
2251
2321
2470
2594
2627
2777
2818
2934
3029
318
326
3320
3421
3541
3673
3715
3860
3919
4013
4111
98.45% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences103
matches
0"been taught"
1"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs222
matches
0"were arguing"
1"were almost touching"
2"wasn't looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount20
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences16
totalSentences110
ratio0.145
matches
0"She'd spotted him on the corner of Delancey Street — the same gaunt figure from the Grainstore CCTV, the one who'd slipped through the drain cover at eleven minutes past two in the morning while her colleagues were arguing about warrants."
1"He was faster than he looked — long legs, a runner's gait — but he glanced back twice, and both times she caught the flash of his eyes beneath the hood."
2"The depot was a skeletal wreck — corrugated iron walls, a collapsed roof at one end, a floor of cracked concrete pooled with black water."
3"Eighteen years on the force and her lungs still burned like this, though she'd run in worse — Helmand, twenty twelve, sprinting across open ground with IED dust in her mouth."
4"The suspect seemed to know them well — he took turns without hesitation, cutting through a courtyard, over a low wall, past a row of wheelie bins that toppled behind him."
5"The buildings grew older — Georgian brick swallowed by grime, windows boarded with mismatched timber."
6"She saw him again — fifty metres ahead, turning onto a street she didn't recognise."
7"Beyond them, a tiled corridor stretched into darkness — white subway tiles, cracked and missing in patches, the name of a station she didn't recognise spelled out in mosaic above the archway: CANTLOW."
8"A draft of warm air rolled up the stairs, carrying with it a smell — incense and something metallic, copper maybe, mixed with the sweet rot of old money."
9"Her radio sat silent on her belt; whatever signal there'd been up on street level died down here."
10"The corridor curved left and opened onto a platform — not a station platform but something carved from the tunnel itself, wider than it should have been, the ceiling supported by iron pillars bolted into the rock."
11"At the far end, a card table held stacks of paper — documents, maps — and a figure sat behind them with a ledger open on his knees, reading aloud to a queue of customers."
12"Three years since the case that took him, the one she still couldn't explain — the reports that didn't add up, the evidence that vanished from the property store, the postmortem findings that contradicted each other."
13"He turned his head — one more glance back — and their eyes met across the green light."
14"A stall keeper to her left — a broad woman with close-cropped hair and a tattoo of a raven on her throat — reached out and touched her arm."
15"The market continued around her — bargaining, laughter, the clink of glass, the scrape of coin on wood — as if a uniformed detective standing in their midst was the most ordinary thing in the world."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1441
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.02498265093684941
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.002081887578070784
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean13.84
std10.59
cv0.765
sampleLengths
018
141
220
33
412
510
63
731
85
98
103
1131
121
131
144
154
165
1721
1820
199
2017
214
229
2317
2425
2521
269
2731
285
2915
307
3119
3231
3310
344
355
3615
376
384
3915
4014
4115
4224
4315
444
4524
4614
4716
482
4917
42.73% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.32727272727272727
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners36
34.36% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences97
matches
0"Then the streets began to"
ratio0.01
83.92% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences97
matches
0"She'd spotted him on the"
1"She thumbed the radio off"
2"She kept moving."
3"He was faster than he"
4"Her voice came out raw."
5"He hit the fence without"
6"He rolled over the other"
7"She landed hard on the"
8"Her suspect ran diagonally across"
9"She followed, each breath a"
10"He squeezed through the gap."
11"She followed, the torn edge"
12"She caught it one-handed and"
13"She hurdled the wall, landed"
14"She raised one hand, barked"
15"Her leather watch, a wedding"
16"She saw him again —"
17"She caught up to the"
18"She rounded the corner and"
19"Her radio sat silent on"
ratio0.34
73.40% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences97
matches
0"The rain came down sideways"
1"She'd spotted him on the"
2"She thumbed the radio off"
3"The voice of DS Achebe"
4"Boots struck puddles."
5"The suspect cut left into"
6"Trash bags split open underfoot."
7"Something warm and rank sprayed"
8"She kept moving."
9"He was faster than he"
10"Fear made people clumsy."
11"Her voice came out raw."
12"The alley dead-ended at a"
13"He hit the fence without"
14"He rolled over the other"
15"Harlow vaulted after him."
16"The wire bit into her"
17"She landed hard on the"
18"The depot was a skeletal"
19"Her suspect ran diagonally across"
ratio0.773
51.55% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences97
matches
0"Now he was forty metres"
ratio0.01
64.94% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The suspect seemed to know them well — he took turns without hesitation, cutting through a courtyard, over a low wall, past a row of wheelie bins that toppled b…"
1"Her leather watch, a wedding gift from a marriage that had ended four years ago, slipped around her wrist as it filled with rainwater."
2"A woman in a coat of iridescent feathers haggled over a jar of something that glowed faintly."
3"The suspect reached the far end of the tunnel where a gap in the stonework yawned black and narrow, a passage that didn't belong to any station construction Har…"
4"Behind her, the tunnel curved back toward the iron gates, toward the stairs, toward the wet London night and her radio with no signal and her colleagues who wou…"
5"The market continued around her — bargaining, laughter, the clink of glass, the scrape of coin on wood — as if a uniformed detective standing in their midst was…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.2113%