Run: 2026-09-23-01M36VHPZ4HT8HFDJTCFY8YVK8

Run Details

Duration:
1m 6s
Cost:
$0.017462
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon bled across the wet pavement and caught in the puddle by the kerb, a sickly halo that shivered every time a taxi shouldered past. Aurora Carter stood under it with her collar turned up and her hands jammed in her coat pockets, watching the door of The Raven’s Nest as if the wood might tell her whether she still had any right to push it. Rain threaded her black hair to her jaw. The scar on her left wrist itched where the cuff rubbed it. She had not planned the turn off Dean Street. Her feet had done it, the way feet do when a city keeps an old map under the new one. Inside, the air held whisky, citrus peel, and the damp wool of coats left too long on hooks. Maps yellowed on the walls. Black-and-white photographs leaned in their frames, faces she half-remembered and faces she had never known. A man at the far end nursed a pint and did not look up. The bar itself was the same scarred oak, the same row of bottles catching what little light the lamps allowed. Silas Blackwood stood behind it with his back to the door, reaching for a glass on the high shelf. Grey had taken more of the auburn. The beard was trim, the shoulders still set as if a uniform had only just come off. When he turned, the left leg lagged a fraction, a hitch he covered by setting the glass down before the rest of him arrived. Hazel eyes found her and did not flinch. The signet ring on his right hand clicked once against the wood. “You’re letting the weather in.” She shut the door. The green from the sign died on the threshold. “Table by the window’s free,” he said. “Or the bar, if you’ve come to be looked at.” “I came because the street turned.” She crossed the room and took the stool that had always been slightly lower than the others. Her boots left two dark prints. “Didn’t know you’d still be pouring.” “Someone has to.” He set a tumbler in front of her without asking, then a bottle of the peaty stuff he used to keep for people who did not want conversation. He did not pour. “Cardiff still on the bottles at home, or have you given that up along with the rest?” “I gave up the pretending I was going to sit the exams.” Her bright blue eyes stayed on the unpoured glass. “Mum still asks. Dad still doesn’t.” Silas braced a hand on the bar. The limp had settled into the way he stood, weight cocked, as if the knee had negotiated terms and he had signed them. Up close the years sat in the lines at his mouth and in the careful economy of his movements. The man who used to cross a room like a door had been left open now measured the distance between bottle and glass. “You cut your hair.” “It got in the way on the bike.” She pushed a wet strand behind her ear. “Delivery work. Golden Empress, most nights. Boxes that leak. People who don’t tip and people who tip too much because they want you to stay on the step.” “Yu-Fei still shouting at the pass?” “Louder.” A corner of her mouth moved. “She asked after you last month. I told her I hadn’t seen you.” “True enough, until ten minutes ago.” He poured two fingers, then matched it in a glass of his own. The ring flashed once. “Flat upstairs is let. Couple from Leeds. They play the wireless too loud and they pay on time. I didn’t keep it empty.” “I didn’t ask you to.” “No.” He slid her drink across. Their fingers did not meet. “You left a note on the pump. Three lines. No address.” Rory turned the tumbler. The crescent scar showed when her sleeve rode up, pale against the rest of her wrist. “Evan found the old number. I didn’t want him finding the stairs as well.” Silas’s jaw worked once under the beard. He drank, set the glass down square to the bar’s edge, and looked past her at a photograph of a bridge she did not recognise. “You could have said that in the note.” “I could have said a lot of things.” Rain ticked at the window. A bus sighed somewhere on Shaftesbury Avenue. “You’d have come after me.” “I’d have asked where.” “Same thing, with you.” She met his eyes then. The cool she wore for customers and for her father’s voicemails thinned. “You don’t ask like other people ask. You ask like the answer already belongs to you.” He almost smiled. It did not reach the hazel. “Old habit. Bad one.” “Prague habit.” The word sat between them with the maps. Silas shifted his weight and the left leg answered late. He did not reach for it. “Prague was a knee and a file that never closed. This was a girl on my stairs who stopped answering when I knocked.” “I wasn’t a girl.” “You were twenty-one and you flinched when the door stuck.” He nodded at her wrist. “You still cover that when you think someone’s clocking it.” She dropped her hand to her lap, then brought it back up on purpose, scar plain on the oak. “Childhood. Banister. Not him.” “I know which scars are which.” He polished a dry spot that did not need it. “Doesn’t mean I liked the new ones you wouldn’t show me.” A couple came in, shook out an umbrella, and took the window table. Silas poured their order without leaving the conversation so much as visiting it. When he returned, Rory had not touched her whisky. “Eva wrote,” she said. “Christmas before last. Said you’d gone quiet. Said the Nest looked the same and you didn’t.” “Eva talks.” “Eva notices.” Rory’s voice stayed low. “You used to stand like the room had to arrange itself around you. Now you stand like you’re bargaining with the floor.” “Floor won.” He tapped the signet against the glass, a small, precise sound. “Surgeon in Marylebone took what he could. The rest is weather and stairs. I count them. I pretend I don’t.” “And the other work?” His eyes cut to the bookshelf at the back, the one that did not quite sit flush, then away again. “Retired is a word people use when they want the questions to stop. I pour. I listen. I make a phone call if a phone call keeps someone from doing something stupid in an alley. That’s the size of it.” “You hate the size of it.” “I hate the alternative more.” He leaned in, forearms on the bar, and for a moment the old authority sat on him like a coat he had not quite hung up. “You vanished, Rory. Not a postcard. Not a wrong number I could trace without making myself the man I retired from being. Your mother rang the bar once. I told her you were well. I didn’t know if that was a lie.” “It wasn’t.” She drank then, and the peat burned a clean line down. “I was in Bristol for a year. Shared a house with a woman who collected broken clocks and never fixed them. Then Manchester. Then back, because London is a bad habit and Yu-Fei pays cash. I walked past this door six times before tonight. Tonight the rain made the choice.” “Six times.” He repeated it as if filing it. “And not one of them for a drink.” “I didn’t know what I’d say to your face.” “You’re saying it.” “I’m saying the edges.” Her fingers found the scar and left it. “I used to think if I stayed above this bar I’d turn into the version of me that needed a retired spy to check the locks. I left so I wouldn’t. Then I spent three years checking them myself and resenting you for teaching me how.” Silas was quiet long enough for the couple at the window to laugh at something small. The man with the pint turned a page of a paper he was not reading. “I checked the locks,” Silas said, “because a man with your old address in his phone had already put his hands where they didn’t belong. Not because I thought you were glass.” “I know that now.” “You knew it then.” No heat in it. Just the weight. “You left anyway, and I let the note be the whole of the story because chasing you would have proved your point. So we both got to be right, and neither of us got to be in the room.” Rory looked at the photographs, at a younger Silas in one of them, hair darker, no beard, a city behind him that might have been anywhere with bad weather and worse politics. “You look like you’ve been apologising to empty stools.” “I look like a man who pours for a living.” He straightened, and the hitch in the left leg made the movement a negotiation. “You’ve got Yu-Fei’s soy sauce on your cuff and a scar you finally let me see. That’s not the girl who wrote three lines and ran. That’s not nothing.” “It’s not an apology either.” “No.” He refilled her glass, a measured pour, then capped the bottle. “Apologies are for people who think words put the years back in the bottle. I’m not one of them. You’re not either, or you wouldn’t have stood in that puddle so long.” She glanced at the door, at the green still leaking under it. “The Leeds couple. Do they know about the cupboard behind the maps?” “They know the wireless works and the rent’s due on the first.” A ghost of dryness crossed his face. “Some doors stay mine.” “Good.” She wrapped both hands around the tumbler. The blue of her eyes had gone darker in the low light. “I don’t want the flat. I don’t want a key. I want to sit here until this rain decides it’s finished, and I want you to tell me if the bitter’s still undrinkable.” “It’s worse.” He pulled a pint glass, set it under the tap, and drew it with the care of a man who had decided the knee could wait. Foam climbed, settled. He placed it beside her whisky. “You’ll hate it. You’ll finish it. That’s the arrangement we used to have.” Rory lifted the pint. The scar caught the lamp. Outside, another taxi stitched the neon into the gutter, and inside the bar the maps kept their old borders, and neither of them reached for the sentence that would have made the years smaller than they were.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She drank then [then]"
dialogueSentences73
tagDensity0.342
leniency0.685
rawRatio0.04
effectiveRatio0.027
97.21% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1792
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1792
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"weight"
count3
1
word"measured"
count2
highlights
0"weight"
1"measured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences127
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1792
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount956
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.84
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Raven1
Nest1
Dean1
Street1
Blackwood1
Silas8
Shaftesbury1
Avenue1
Rory5
Foam1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Raven"
2"Blackwood"
3"Silas"
4"Rory"
5"Foam"
places
0"Dean"
1"Street"
2"Shaftesbury"
3"Avenue"
globalScore1
windowScore1
25.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"not quite sit flush, then away again"
1"not quite hung up"
2"as if filing it"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1792
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences127
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean32
std24.33
cv0.76
sampleLengths
0117
172
287
35
413
517
635
752
827
972
104
1144
126
1320
1446
155
1622
1734
1840
1925
204
2137
2213
232
2447
254
2625
2723
2827
2935
3020
312
3228
3333
344
3560
366
3773
3863
3917
409
413
4258
4331
4432
454
4650
4741
4853
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"been left"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs157
matches
0"was not reading"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences127
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount959
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.03336809176225235
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0031282586027111575
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences127
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences127
mean14.11
std10.4
cv0.737
sampleLengths
027
141
28
312
49
520
618
75
815
914
1020
1119
127
1317
1424
158
1612
175
184
199
207
2110
2223
236
246
2531
264
2717
2821
296
307
3123
3219
3323
344
3516
3628
376
387
3913
4019
414
4223
435
446
455
4611
474
4816
4914
66.40% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.41732283464566927
totalSentences127
uniqueOpeners53
43.29% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"Just the weight."
ratio0.013
53.77% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences77
matches
0"She had not planned the"
1"Her feet had done it,"
2"She shut the door."
3"She crossed the room and"
4"Her boots left two dark"
5"He set a tumbler in"
6"He did not pour."
7"Her bright blue eyes stayed"
8"She pushed a wet strand"
9"He poured two fingers, then"
10"He slid her drink across"
11"Their fingers did not meet."
12"He drank, set the glass"
13"She met his eyes then"
14"He almost smiled."
15"It did not reach the"
16"He did not reach for"
17"He nodded at her wrist"
18"She dropped her hand to"
19"He polished a dry spot"
ratio0.416
18.44% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences77
matches
0"The green neon bled across"
1"Aurora Carter stood under it"
2"Rain threaded her black hair"
3"The scar on her left"
4"She had not planned the"
5"Her feet had done it,"
6"Maps yellowed on the walls."
7"A man at the far"
8"The bar itself was the"
9"Silas Blackwood stood behind it"
10"The beard was trim, the"
11"Hazel eyes found her and"
12"The signet ring on his"
13"She shut the door."
14"The green from the sign"
15"She crossed the room and"
16"Her boots left two dark"
17"He set a tumbler in"
18"He did not pour."
19"Her bright blue eyes stayed"
ratio0.883
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
68.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The green neon bled across the wet pavement and caught in the puddle by the kerb, a sickly halo that shivered every time a taxi shouldered past."
1"Rory looked at the photographs, at a younger Silas in one of them, hair darker, no beard, a city behind him that might have been anywhere with bad weather and w…"
2"Outside, another taxi stitched the neon into the gutter, and inside the bar the maps kept their old borders, and neither of them reached for the sentence that w…"
85.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She drank then, and the peat burned a clean line down"
1"He refilled, a measured pour, then capped the bottle"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"He set (set)"
1"He repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences73
tagDensity0.068
leniency0.137
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.055
84.8042%