Run: 2026-09-23-01M36VJJ1JR4TXZWJ6KNC74B85

Run Details

Duration:
1m 18s
Cost:
$0.000539
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oak standing stones rose from the earth like the knuckles of something buried and restless. Rory stopped at the first one, her fingers hovering over the bark. It wasn't bark. It was bone-smooth and pale, threaded with veins of something that caught the amber afternoon light and threw it back in slivers. "Don't touch it yet." Nyx's voice came from nowhere and everywhere at once, a whisper that snagged at the edges of her ears. Their violet eyes glowed faintly from the shadow they'd slipped into beside the second stone. "Why not?" Rory pulled her hand back, pressing it against her chest where the Heartstone pendant hung. It had been warm since they'd left the Underground at Hammersmith — a slow, persistent pulse like a second heartbeat pressed against her sternum. "Because the grove listens. And it remembers the shape of every hand that's been placed on these stones." Rory looked at the opening between the two central oaks. Beyond it, wildflowers carpeted the ground in colors she had no name for — a blue that shifted toward violet as she watched, petals that opened and closed in slow rhythm like breathing. "Then we don't touch the stones." She stepped through. The air changed. It thickened, sweetened, pressed against her skin like damp wool. Her sneakers sank into moss that gave beneath her weight with a sigh, and the sounds of Richmond Park — the rumble of traffic along Richmond Gate, the distant bark of someone's dog, a jogger's footfalls — all of it vanished behind her as though a door had shut. Ahead, the clearing spread wider than it should have. The standing stones she'd counted from outside numbered twelve. Inside, they numbered far more, scattered in rings that overlapped like ripples from stones dropped in still water. Some leaned at impossible angles. One had split down the center, its halves held apart by a growth of fungi that glowed a soft green. "Is this it?" Rory turned, looking for Nyx. They stood behind her, solid now, their tall frame casting no shadow on the moss despite the light that filtered through the canopy in gold coins. Their violet eyes swept the clearing with the alertness of something that had spent centuries reading rooms it didn't belong to. "This is a wound in the world," Nyx murmured. Their voice carried that wind-caught quality, each word arriving slightly out of sync with their lipless mouth. "One that healed wrong." "You sound like you've seen it before." "I've seen many wounds. Never one so green." Rory moved deeper. The moss gave way to packed earth that glittered with flecks of mica, and the wildflowers grew taller here — some at waist height, their blooms shaped like open palms. When she brushed past one, it turned to follow her, petals tracking her movement with slow precision. She pulled her arm back. "It's watching us," she said. "Every living thing watches," Nyx replied. They drifted to her left, incorporeal now, their form a ribbon of shadow that pooled and stretched across the ground. "Most simply have no interest." A sound reached her from somewhere beyond the third ring of stones — a low, resonant hum, felt more in the bones than heard with the ears. It rose and fell in a pattern that almost resolved into language. Rory stood still and let it wash over her. The Heartstone pulsed against her chest, three quick beats, then steady. "What's that noise?" she asked. "Old words," Nyx said. "The grove speaks in them when something crosses its threshold for the first time." She knelt at the base of the nearest split stone and examined the fungi growing in the crack. They were capless — just stalks of pale luminescence, each one no thicker than a matchstick, fanning outward in a pattern that repeated itself across every surface it had colonized. She reached for one, then caught herself. "Ask first?" "You learn fast." "Is it safe?" Nyx solidified beside her and extended a long, shadow-black hand. The fungi dimmed where their fingers passed close, recoiling. "Not safe. Not dangerous. Something stranger than either." Rory sat back on her heels and looked up. The canopy above was wrong — too dense, too layered. Branches intertwined with branches that belonged to entirely different species, oak fingers laced through birch and ash and something with bark the color of dried blood. Light filtered through in bands, and between the bands, the sky showed not blue but a deep, watered amber that she recognized from descriptions she'd read in old texts: the sky of Dymas, warm and saturated and tasting of overripe fruit. She blinked. The amber was gone. Blue again, ordinary, cut into shards by the canopy. "That sky," she said. "Ny." The Shade's whisper carried weight. "That was the Veil, thin as paper. You saw through it to the other side." "To Hel?" "To Dymas. To all of it. The grove sits between the barriers — the soil itself is half Earth, half something older." Rory stood and walked to the center of the innermost ring. The moss here was different — shorter, darker, almost black, and it yielded under her shoes like fresh snow. At the very center, a flat stone the size of a coffee table rose from the ground. Its surface was carved with symbols she didn't recognize, not letters exactly but shapes that suggested the idea of letters, their edges worn smooth by centuries of wind and water and hands that had traced them. She could read none of them. Yet the meanings pressed at her, not quite arriving — like words on the tip of her tongue that vanished when she reached for them. "What do you feel?" Nyx asked from behind her. "Like I almost understand something." "That is the grove's oldest trick. It offers understanding without knowledge. Most visitors leave with the certainty that they've learned something profound, and the certainty that they cannot remember what." Rory looked down at her feet. In the black moss, no footprints had formed. She turned to look at Nyx — their form left no mark either, a ribbon of shadow flowing over the ground without pressing into it. "You said Isolde lives here." "She does." "Then where is she?" The hum deepened. The wildflowers nearest the outer stones closed simultaneously, folding their petals inward with a sound like fabric tearing, then opened again — and each bloom now faced them. From beyond the farthest ring, movement. Not a figure — not yet — but the suggestion of one: a displacement in the air where the light bent wrong, where the amber sky flickered for a heartbeat before settling back to blue. The Heartstone against her chest blazed warm, nearly hot, and she pressed her palm flat over it through her shirt. Rory turned to Nyx, whose violet eyes had narrowed to slits. "She knows we're here," they said. "She's known since before we left the flat." A voice reached them then — not carried on the wind the way Nyx's was, but woven into the hum itself, rising out of the grove's resonance as though the stones had given it breath. "A door opens inward, and those who walk through it carry the dust of every room they've left behind. You've brought weather with you, Aurora Carter. Rain that hasn't fallen yet." The displacement in the air sharpened. Silver hair caught the light first, then pale lavender eyes that held the flat, patient gaze of something that had watched three centuries of visitors step into this clearing and leave changed or not at all. Isolde Varga stood at the edge of the inner ring. She wore a dress of undyed linen, and her bare feet pressed into the black moss without leaving a single impression. She looked at Rory the way someone examines a chessboard — not with hostility, but with the calm inventory of pieces and their possibilities. "Rain that hasn't fallen yet," Rory repeated. "What does that mean?" Isolde tilted her head, silver hair sliding over one shoulder like poured mercury. "The question that hasn't been asked yet is the sharpest blade in any room." "That's not an answer." "It's the only one that fits the shape of what you brought through the stones." Nyx's shadow coiled tighter around Rory's feet. The hum continued, patient and deep, threading through the silence between each exchange. The Heartstone pulsed — slower now, steadier, syncing to something that wasn't Rory's heartbeat.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.316
leniency0.632
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1399
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.54% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1399
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"whisper"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"resolved"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"profound"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"resonance"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"pulse"
2"weight"
3"resolved"
4"pulsed"
5"traced"
6"profound"
7"flickered"
8"resonance"
9"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences79
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1417
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1134
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.23
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone4
Underground1
Hammersmith1
Richmond2
Park1
Gate1
Nyx11
Dymas1
Shade1
Rory14
Varga1
Isolde2
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Shade"
2"Rory"
3"Varga"
4"Isolde"
places
0"Hammersmith"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
globalScore0.883
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite arriving — like words on the tip of her tongue that vanished when she reached for them"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords2.823
wordCount1417
matches
0"not blue but a deep, watered amber"
1"not letters exactly but shapes"
2"not carried on the wind the way Nyx's was, but woven into the hum itself, rising out of the grove's resonan"
3"not with hostility, but with the calm inventory of pieces"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean23.62
std20.87
cv0.884
sampleLengths
053
14
234
341
418
543
66
73
862
961
108
1147
1230
137
148
1550
165
175
1831
1948
2011
215
2218
2355
242
253
263
2719
288
2986
3015
314
3221
332
3422
3583
3631
379
385
3930
4039
415
422
434
4431
4541
4620
4711
486
498
96.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences79
matches
0"was gone"
1"was carved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs185
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount17
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences15
totalSentences105
ratio0.143
matches
0"It had been warm since they'd left the Underground at Hammersmith — a slow, persistent pulse like a second heartbeat pressed against her sternum."
1"Beyond it, wildflowers carpeted the ground in colors she had no name for — a blue that shifted toward violet as she watched, petals that opened and closed in slow rhythm like breathing."
2"Her sneakers sank into moss that gave beneath her weight with a sigh, and the sounds of Richmond Park — the rumble of traffic along Richmond Gate, the distant bark of someone's dog, a jogger's footfalls — all of it vanished behind her as though a door had shut."
3"The moss gave way to packed earth that glittered with flecks of mica, and the wildflowers grew taller here — some at waist height, their blooms shaped like open palms."
4"A sound reached her from somewhere beyond the third ring of stones — a low, resonant hum, felt more in the bones than heard with the ears."
5"They were capless — just stalks of pale luminescence, each one no thicker than a matchstick, fanning outward in a pattern that repeated itself across every surface it had colonized."
6"The canopy above was wrong — too dense, too layered."
7"The moss here was different — shorter, darker, almost black, and it yielded under her shoes like fresh snow."
8"Yet the meanings pressed at her, not quite arriving — like words on the tip of her tongue that vanished when she reached for them."
9"She turned to look at Nyx — their form left no mark either, a ribbon of shadow flowing over the ground without pressing into it."
10"The wildflowers nearest the outer stones closed simultaneously, folding their petals inward with a sound like fabric tearing, then opened again — and each bloom now faced them."
11"Not a figure — not yet — but the suggestion of one: a displacement in the air where the light bent wrong, where the amber sky flickered for a heartbeat before settling back to blue."
12"A voice reached them then — not carried on the wind the way Nyx's was, but woven into the hum itself, rising out of the grove's resonance as though the stones had given it breath."
13"She looked at Rory the way someone examines a chessboard — not with hostility, but with the calm inventory of pieces and their possibilities."
14"The Heartstone pulsed — slower now, steadier, syncing to something that wasn't Rory's heartbeat."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1120
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"long, shadow-black hand."
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.03125
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005357142857142857
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean13.5
std10.12
cv0.75
sampleLengths
016
112
23
322
44
519
615
717
824
918
1010
1133
126
133
143
1510
1649
179
189
1918
205
2120
228
2326
2421
259
2617
274
287
298
303
3130
3217
335
345
356
3620
375
3827
3912
409
4111
425
434
4414
4518
4630
477
482
493
63.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.41904761904761906
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners44
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences70
matches
0"It wasn't bark."
1"It was bone-smooth and pale,"
2"Their violet eyes glowed faintly"
3"It had been warm since"
4"She stepped through."
5"It thickened, sweetened, pressed against"
6"Her sneakers sank into moss"
7"They stood behind her, solid"
8"Their violet eyes swept the"
9"Their voice carried that wind-caught"
10"She pulled her arm back."
11"They drifted to her left,"
12"It rose and fell in"
13"She knelt at the base"
14"They were capless — just"
15"She reached for one, then"
16"Its surface was carved with"
17"She could read none of"
18"She turned to look at"
19"She wore a dress of"
ratio0.3
45.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences70
matches
0"The oak standing stones rose"
1"Rory stopped at the first"
2"It wasn't bark."
3"It was bone-smooth and pale,"
4"Nyx's voice came from nowhere"
5"Their violet eyes glowed faintly"
6"Rory pulled her hand back,"
7"It had been warm since"
8"Rory looked at the opening"
9"She stepped through."
10"The air changed."
11"It thickened, sweetened, pressed against"
12"Her sneakers sank into moss"
13"The standing stones she'd counted"
14"Some leaned at impossible angles."
15"Rory turned, looking for Nyx"
16"They stood behind her, solid"
17"Their violet eyes swept the"
18"Their voice carried that wind-caught"
19"Rory moved deeper."
ratio0.829
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"It was bone-smooth and pale, threaded with veins of something that caught the amber afternoon light and threw it back in slivers."
1"Beyond it, wildflowers carpeted the ground in colors she had no name for — a blue that shifted toward violet as she watched, petals that opened and closed in sl…"
2"Her sneakers sank into moss that gave beneath her weight with a sigh, and the sounds of Richmond Park — the rumble of traffic along Richmond Gate, the distant b…"
3"Inside, they numbered far more, scattered in rings that overlapped like ripples from stones dropped in still water."
4"They stood behind her, solid now, their tall frame casting no shadow on the moss despite the light that filtered through the canopy in gold coins."
5"Their violet eyes swept the clearing with the alertness of something that had spent centuries reading rooms it didn't belong to."
6"The moss gave way to packed earth that glittered with flecks of mica, and the wildflowers grew taller here — some at waist height, their blooms shaped like open…"
7"Branches intertwined with branches that belonged to entirely different species, oak fingers laced through birch and ash and something with bark the color of dri…"
8"Silver hair caught the light first, then pale lavender eyes that held the flat, patient gaze of something that had watched three centuries of visitors step into…"
9"The Heartstone pulsed — slower now, steadier, syncing to something that wasn't Rory's heartbeat."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
1"Rory repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.237
leniency0.474
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.105
77.5454%