| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.316 | | leniency | 0.632 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.85% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1399 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 53.54% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1399 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "resolved" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "traced" | | 6 | "profound" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "resonance" | | 9 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1417 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 1134 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.23 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 4 | | Underground | 1 | | Hammersmith | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 1 | | Gate | 1 | | Nyx | 11 | | Dymas | 1 | | Shade | 1 | | Rory | 14 | | Varga | 1 | | Isolde | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Shade" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Varga" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Hammersmith" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.883 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite arriving — like words on the tip of her tongue that vanished when she reached for them" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 2.823 | | wordCount | 1417 | | matches | | 0 | "not blue but a deep, watered amber" | | 1 | "not letters exactly but shapes" | | 2 | "not carried on the wind the way Nyx's was, but woven into the hum itself, rising out of the grove's resonan" | | 3 | "not with hostility, but with the calm inventory of pieces" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 60 | | mean | 23.62 | | std | 20.87 | | cv | 0.884 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 43 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 62 | | 9 | 61 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 47 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 50 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 48 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 55 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 86 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 83 | | 36 | 31 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 30 | | 40 | 39 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 31 | | 45 | 41 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 96.38% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 185 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 17 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 15 | | totalSentences | 105 | | ratio | 0.143 | | matches | | 0 | "It had been warm since they'd left the Underground at Hammersmith — a slow, persistent pulse like a second heartbeat pressed against her sternum." | | 1 | "Beyond it, wildflowers carpeted the ground in colors she had no name for — a blue that shifted toward violet as she watched, petals that opened and closed in slow rhythm like breathing." | | 2 | "Her sneakers sank into moss that gave beneath her weight with a sigh, and the sounds of Richmond Park — the rumble of traffic along Richmond Gate, the distant bark of someone's dog, a jogger's footfalls — all of it vanished behind her as though a door had shut." | | 3 | "The moss gave way to packed earth that glittered with flecks of mica, and the wildflowers grew taller here — some at waist height, their blooms shaped like open palms." | | 4 | "A sound reached her from somewhere beyond the third ring of stones — a low, resonant hum, felt more in the bones than heard with the ears." | | 5 | "They were capless — just stalks of pale luminescence, each one no thicker than a matchstick, fanning outward in a pattern that repeated itself across every surface it had colonized." | | 6 | "The canopy above was wrong — too dense, too layered." | | 7 | "The moss here was different — shorter, darker, almost black, and it yielded under her shoes like fresh snow." | | 8 | "Yet the meanings pressed at her, not quite arriving — like words on the tip of her tongue that vanished when she reached for them." | | 9 | "She turned to look at Nyx — their form left no mark either, a ribbon of shadow flowing over the ground without pressing into it." | | 10 | "The wildflowers nearest the outer stones closed simultaneously, folding their petals inward with a sound like fabric tearing, then opened again — and each bloom now faced them." | | 11 | "Not a figure — not yet — but the suggestion of one: a displacement in the air where the light bent wrong, where the amber sky flickered for a heartbeat before settling back to blue." | | 12 | "A voice reached them then — not carried on the wind the way Nyx's was, but woven into the hum itself, rising out of the grove's resonance as though the stones had given it breath." | | 13 | "She looked at Rory the way someone examines a chessboard — not with hostility, but with the calm inventory of pieces and their possibilities." | | 14 | "The Heartstone pulsed — slower now, steadier, syncing to something that wasn't Rory's heartbeat." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1120 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "long, shadow-black hand." |
| | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.03125 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005357142857142857 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 105 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 105 | | mean | 13.5 | | std | 10.12 | | cv | 0.75 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 49 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 30 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 27 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 30 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 63.17% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.41904761904761906 | | totalSentences | 105 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't bark." | | 1 | "It was bone-smooth and pale," | | 2 | "Their violet eyes glowed faintly" | | 3 | "It had been warm since" | | 4 | "She stepped through." | | 5 | "It thickened, sweetened, pressed against" | | 6 | "Her sneakers sank into moss" | | 7 | "They stood behind her, solid" | | 8 | "Their violet eyes swept the" | | 9 | "Their voice carried that wind-caught" | | 10 | "She pulled her arm back." | | 11 | "They drifted to her left," | | 12 | "It rose and fell in" | | 13 | "She knelt at the base" | | 14 | "They were capless — just" | | 15 | "She reached for one, then" | | 16 | "Its surface was carved with" | | 17 | "She could read none of" | | 18 | "She turned to look at" | | 19 | "She wore a dress of" |
| | ratio | 0.3 | |
| 45.71% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak standing stones rose" | | 1 | "Rory stopped at the first" | | 2 | "It wasn't bark." | | 3 | "It was bone-smooth and pale," | | 4 | "Nyx's voice came from nowhere" | | 5 | "Their violet eyes glowed faintly" | | 6 | "Rory pulled her hand back," | | 7 | "It had been warm since" | | 8 | "Rory looked at the opening" | | 9 | "She stepped through." | | 10 | "The air changed." | | 11 | "It thickened, sweetened, pressed against" | | 12 | "Her sneakers sank into moss" | | 13 | "The standing stones she'd counted" | | 14 | "Some leaned at impossible angles." | | 15 | "Rory turned, looking for Nyx" | | 16 | "They stood behind her, solid" | | 17 | "Their violet eyes swept the" | | 18 | "Their voice carried that wind-caught" | | 19 | "Rory moved deeper." |
| | ratio | 0.829 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "It was bone-smooth and pale, threaded with veins of something that caught the amber afternoon light and threw it back in slivers." | | 1 | "Beyond it, wildflowers carpeted the ground in colors she had no name for — a blue that shifted toward violet as she watched, petals that opened and closed in sl…" | | 2 | "Her sneakers sank into moss that gave beneath her weight with a sigh, and the sounds of Richmond Park — the rumble of traffic along Richmond Gate, the distant b…" | | 3 | "Inside, they numbered far more, scattered in rings that overlapped like ripples from stones dropped in still water." | | 4 | "They stood behind her, solid now, their tall frame casting no shadow on the moss despite the light that filtered through the canopy in gold coins." | | 5 | "Their violet eyes swept the clearing with the alertness of something that had spent centuries reading rooms it didn't belong to." | | 6 | "The moss gave way to packed earth that glittered with flecks of mica, and the wildflowers grew taller here — some at waist height, their blooms shaped like open…" | | 7 | "Branches intertwined with branches that belonged to entirely different species, oak fingers laced through birch and ash and something with bark the color of dri…" | | 8 | "Silver hair caught the light first, then pale lavender eyes that held the flat, patient gaze of something that had watched three centuries of visitors step into…" | | 9 | "The Heartstone pulsed — slower now, steadier, syncing to something that wasn't Rory's heartbeat." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.37% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Rory repeated (repeat)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.237 | | leniency | 0.474 | | rawRatio | 0.222 | | effectiveRatio | 0.105 | |