Run: 2026-09-23-01M36VJK0KCVXF2E5KKHHVQ96S

Run Details

Duration:
2m
Cost:
$0.002951
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The arc lights threw a hard white glare across the platform and turned the tiled walls the colour of old teeth. Harlow Quinn ducked under the tape at the top of the escalator, where a gloved hand pressed a bone token into her palm without a word, and took the steps down two at a time. Eighteen years of crime scenes and her stomach still tightened on the descent. Not from the body. From the place. The station had been closed since the seventies. Posters for variety shows peeled off the walls in curls, and the air carried soot, damp wool, and something sweet underneath it all, like fruit left to turn. She held up the token to the constable at the platform entrance. "One of yours, love, or did you pick it up on the way in?" "Protocol for the Veil Market." The constable kept his eyes on the middle distance. "Bone for entry. They take them back at the door. Nobody gets in without one." "How many inside tonight?" "Forty-one, all accounted for. Counted twice." Quinn pocketed the token and walked the platform. Market stalls lined the north wall under moth-eaten velvet and tarpaulin, crates of stoppered bottles, jars of grey powder, a cage of something that had stopped moving. Traders huddled behind the tape in a loose clot of coats and hoods. Nobody met her eye. The southern tunnel mouth gaped behind a rusted grille, and beyond it the dark had a depth to it that made her jaw set. DS Roake came out from behind a pillar with his notebook open and his tie pulled loose. "Bloody circus," he said. "Half of them won't give a name and the other half give me three." "Walk me in." They had set up beside the second pillar from the tunnel end. The victim sat against it, legs folded to one side, chin resting on layered scarves. Female, hard to age. Grey coat, grey skirts, hands in her lap with the palms turned up like she was waiting for change. No blood on the platform, no blood on the pillar, no blood anywhere that Quinn could see. Arc light showed her face waxy and still, mouth closed, eyes half open and filmed. Quinn crouched. She checked her watch out of habit, the worn leather strap riding on her wrist, and looked past the body to the floor. "You've swept this." "SOCO finished ten minutes ago. Prints lifted, photographs done." Roake flipped a page. "Nothing under the fingernails, no marks on the neck, no puncture we can find. She's cold but the rigor's not come on yet, so you're looking at a few hours, give or take." "She's been moved." Quinn pointed. "Ash everywhere else. Clean under her back and under her left hip. She lay flat somewhere else first and someone sat her up against my pillar." Roake scratched the back of his neck. "Lividity. Fair enough." "Look at the coat." She took a pen from her pocket and nudged the hem away from the ankle. The boot was caked in dark mud, glossy and clotted. "London's been dry six days. There's no wet on this platform anywhere near her and that's fresh." "Could have come in from the street like that." "Then where are the prints? This ash takes a footprint if you breathe on it hard. There's not one mark between her and any exit." Quinn stood and looked down the length of the platform, at the smooth grey drift of it, the braided trails where the SOCO team had worked and the single-file lanes they had laid boards over. "Nobody walked her to that pillar. Nobody walked away from her." Roake shut his notebook against his thigh. "So she was carried in. That's my point exactly." He gestured at the stalls, the hooded traders, the dead thing in its cage. "You've got a hundred banned substances down here tonight and half these people sell them. My read: she's a dealer, she sold someone a bad batch or short weight, and they dosed her at the stall where she lay down flat when it hit. Tox screen will come back with something that isn't on any register. By the time we locked the gates the shooter was three streets up in Camden High Street and laughing. Every one of these markets ends the same way, Harlow. Quarrel over territory, no witnesses, no weapon." "And the missing hour?" "The what?" "Call came in at half nine. She's been dead longer than that and the constables say the market was sealed at eight." She looked at him. "Forty-one inside. One body. Whoever did it was one of the forty-one and is still standing behind that tape." Roake rubbed his mouth and glanced toward the traders. "Or the caller lied about the time to shake the tree. These lot play games." Quinn turned back to the scene. SOCO had circled a small brass object where it had lain in the ash, a foot from the victim's right hand. The evidence marker sat beside it and nothing else had touched it. She crouched again and looked at it through the polythene bag Roake had sealed it into. Small brass compass. A patina of verdigris furred the casing, green as pond water, and the face had been etched with marks that were not any lettering she knew, fine little cuts that crawled around the rim. A Shade artisan's work, if you believed the traders. She did not believe the traders. "This was near her hand." "Right there. Probably hers. They all carry charms down here, half the stalls sell them." Roake shrugged. "Junk. Another brass cog for the pile." "It's not in her hand. It's a foot away and everything else in a foot radius is undisturbed ash. If it dropped from her fingers there'd be a drag mark where she shifted, or an imprint. It was placed. Somebody wanted us to catalogue it." "Somebody wanted us to look at a compass instead of the poison in her tea." Quinn held the bag up to the arc light. The needle behind the scratched glass had stopped turning. It pointed steady and true at the pillar. At the body against the pillar, to be exact, and it did not wobble when she changed the angle of her wrist. "They sell these at the third stall. Attuned, they call it." Roake tapped the bag with one finger. "Points at the nearest rift. Whatever that means. There's one down the south tunnel, that's the story these people tell, some kind of doorway. My guess is our killer went out that way and this thing's still whining about it, only there's a body in between." "The tunnel is the opposite direction." "What?" "It's pointing at her. Not past her. Not at the tunnel grille. At her." Quinn set the bag down on the board, careful, and looked along the line the needle drew. It ran to the dead woman's sternum and stopped there. She thought about mud on a dry platform, a body laid flat and then lifted, no prints in the ash, forty-one people and a locked gate. Then she looked at the floor again, past the SOCO boards and the evidence markers, to the chalk that ringed the pillar's base. "You chalk this?" Roake followed her eyes. "That's not ours. Traders mark out their ground before they set up, same as a market stall. She had her claim on that pillar." Quinn lowered herself onto one knee at the edge of the boards and looked along the chalk at floor level. The line curved around the pillar's foot in a closed loop, pale against the grey, and where it met the tiles it did not stop at the pillar. It bent. It bent and ran out along the grout in two fine rails that she had taken for cracks, running toward the wall, and it did not fade into the ash the way the traders' scuffed stall-marks did. This line had been laid over the ash. Fresh. The ash inside the loop had been swept flat and even, no drift, no swirl from the draught that pushed along the platform. The chalk did not stop at the pillar. It started there. "The stall marks are outside the loop," Quinn said. "Every other claim on this platform is a rectangle scratched out where the stall sits. This is a circle around the pillar and the body is inside it, and the compass points at the centre of it." "Circle, rectangle. It's chalk, Harlow." "It's a line somebody drew on purpose, after the ash settled, with a body inside it that was carried here and set down and arranged with its hands open." Quinn looked up at the pillar, then past it at the tiles where the chalk rails ran and met the wall. The tiles there were the same nicotine yellow as the rest, the same cracked glaze, and yet the grout was paler in two clean lines that stopped dead at the old poster for the variety show. "And our compass, which everyone tells me points at rifts, has decided the rift is not in your tunnel at all." She held Roake's eye. "It's pointing at whatever's behind those tiles."
created_at"2026-09-23T10:04:28.058Z" 9/23/2026, 10:04:28 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.295
leniency0.591
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1546
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.06% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1546
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"velvet"
2"weight"
3"etched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences66
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences66
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen92
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1546
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
81.43% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount875
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity1.37
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn12
Roake10
Shade1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Roake"
places(empty)
globalScore0.814
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1546
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean32.21
std29.92
cv0.929
sampleLengths
076
136
212
314
429
54
66
776
817
918
103
1182
1225
133
1446
1531
1610
1746
189
1971
2016
2114
2292
234
242
2545
2624
2755
2852
295
3024
3145
3215
3348
3464
356
361
3767
3823
393
4028
41119
4211
4346
445
45107
464
477
78.68% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences66
matches
0"been closed"
1"was caked"
2"been etched"
3"been laid"
4"been swept"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs129
matches
0"was waiting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences98
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount866
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"under moth-eaten velvet"
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.016166281755196306
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean15.78
std14.12
cv0.895
sampleLengths
021
135
213
34
43
58
628
712
814
914
1015
114
126
138
1427
1513
164
1724
1817
194
2014
213
2212
2315
244
2519
2617
2715
282
2923
303
3113
3233
335
3426
357
363
3719
3810
3917
409
4160
4211
437
449
4514
4692
474
482
4926
87.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5510204081632653
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners54
56.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"Then she looked at the"
ratio0.017
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences59
matches
0"She held up the token"
1"They had set up beside"
2"She checked her watch out"
3"She took a pen from"
4"He gestured at the stalls,"
5"She looked at him"
6"She crouched again and looked"
7"She did not believe the"
8"It pointed steady and true"
9"It ran to the dead"
10"She thought about mud on"
11"It bent and ran out"
12"It started there."
13"She held Roake's eye."
ratio0.237
44.75% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences59
matches
0"The arc lights threw a"
1"Harlow Quinn ducked under the"
2"The station had been closed"
3"Posters for variety shows peeled"
4"She held up the token"
5"The constable kept his eyes"
6"Quinn pocketed the token and"
7"Traders huddled behind the tape"
8"Nobody met her eye."
9"The southern tunnel mouth gaped"
10"DS Roake came out from"
11"They had set up beside"
12"The victim sat against it,"
13"Arc light showed her face"
14"She checked her watch out"
15"Roake flipped a page"
16"Roake scratched the back of"
17"She took a pen from"
18"The boot was caked in"
19"Quinn stood and looked down"
ratio0.831
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
44.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Market stalls lined the north wall under moth-eaten velvet and tarpaulin, crates of stoppered bottles, jars of grey powder, a cage of something that had stopped…"
1"The southern tunnel mouth gaped behind a rusted grille, and beyond it the dark had a depth to it that made her jaw set."
2"A patina of verdigris furred the casing, green as pond water, and the face had been etched with marks that were not any lettering she knew, fine little cuts tha…"
3"The tiles there were the same nicotine yellow as the rest, the same cracked glaze, and yet the grout was paler in two clean lines that stopped dead at the old p…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.045
leniency0.091
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.1502%