Run: 2026-09-23-01M36VPANZBKAYDTTTH5DEMPXV

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Duration:
1m 30s
Cost:
$0.000602
Provider:
Xiaomi

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The oaks came first — not as trees but as a wall of them, their trunks fused at the base into a ring of grey-bark pillars so old the lichen had grown itself into script. Rory stopped at the boundary of Richmond Park where the path simply ended, as though the concept of continuing had grown tired, and looked between two of the standing stones into a clearing that shouldn't have fit inside the gap. "That's not possible," she said. Isolde, who had been walking three paces ahead without ever seeming to arrive, turned. Her pale lavender eyes held nothing of surprise. "Nothing here is possible, Miss Carter. That is rather the point of it." Nyx materialised from the shadow of a beech on Rory's left, rising out of the dark like smoke drawn upward. Their violet eyes were the only fixed thing in a form that never quite settled — a humanoid silhouette with edges that frayed into the air. "They're not lying," they whispered, and their voice moved like wind through high grass, arriving slightly before their mouth formed the words. "The space compresses. Step through and you will find it larger on the inside than the eye allows." "You've been here before?" "Never." A pause that was almost amusement. "I have passed *near* here. Shadows do not like this place. They thin out at the stones and refuse to cross without invitation." Rory looked down at her wrist, at the small crescent scar, and then at the Heartstone Pendant resting in the hollow of her throat. It was warm. Not the ambient warmth of skin and chain, but a slow, deliberate heat, like something with a pulse had curled up beneath her collarbone and gone to sleep. It had been cool all week. She pushed it beneath her shirt and stepped between the oaks. The cold hit her first — not temperature but *presence*, the way a held breath is different from an unfilled lung. The air inside tasted of rain that hadn't fallen yet, of crushed green stems, of something faintly metallic and sweet, like blood and honeysuckle sharing the same breath. The standing stones passed her shoulders and the world rearranged. Wildflowers bloomed everywhere. Not in the polite, seasonal way of a park in June — these grew in defiant, impossible abundance, foxglove and snowdrop and violet and things she had no name for, their petals translucent and veined with light that pulsed faintly, rhythmically, as though the whole clearing had a heartbeat she could almost match to her own. Grass between them was black-green and uncannily lush. Somewhere out of sight, water moved — not a stream's chatter but a slow, deep sound, like something enormous turning over in its sleep. "Bloody hell," Rory said softly. Behind her, Nyx passed between the stones and immediately hissed — a sound like fabric tearing. Their form flinched, edges scattering, and for a half-second Rory saw through them to the flowers beyond. Then they gathered themselves, taller and more solid than before, shoulders drawn up as though against a wind. "The light here bites," Nyx said. Their whisper had thinned. "Even shade needs darkness, and there is almost none of it." "There is," Isolde said, moving ahead of them both, her bare feet silent on the black grass. "There simply isn't enough of it for *you*." Rory noticed it then — the thing she'd been reaching for since she stepped through. Isolde left no impression on the ground. The grass did not bend where her weight should have pressed. Wildflowers did not part beneath her. She walked on top of the world the way a thought walks through a mind: entirely present, entirely unsubstantial. They went deeper. The clearing unfolded in a way that made distance feel negotiable — the far side of it stayed far no matter how long they walked, while the trees they passed repeated themselves with small, deliberate variations. Rory counted seven oaks, then counted them again and found nine, and the seventh oak had a knot in its bark shaped exactly like an open hand. She stopped. Touching things was how she understood them; it was how she'd always understood them. She pressed her palm flat against the hand-knot and felt — nothing at first. Then a sensation like pushing through cold water into warmth, and beneath it, faint and unmistakable, *recognition*. The tree had been waiting for a hand to fit there. She pulled back. Her palm was damp and smelled of iron. "Nyx," she said. "Did you feel that?" Nyx drifted closer, their form thinning where it crossed the patch of shadow the oak cast. They extended something that resolved into a hand — long-fingered, dark as pooled ink — and hovered it over the knot without touching. "It remembers," they said. "Old things here keep impressions the way stone keeps footprints. Someone has stood at this tree before. Someone very large, or very patient, or both." "How long ago?" "Their impression has faded to almost nothing. Centuries." A breath that wasn't a breath. "Aldric would have known." They said the name the way a person says a name they used to answer to — flat, careful, as though handling it by the edges. Rory filed it away and did not push. Isolde had stopped at the centre of the clearing, where the grass gave way to a circle of flat, pale stone half-swallowed by moss. She stood at its exact middle and turned slowly, silver hair lifting in a wind Rory could not feel. "You are both looking for the wrong thing," Isolde said. "I'm looking for anything at this point," Rory said. "We came because you said come. You didn't say why." "No." Isolde's smile carried no apology. "Because you would not have believed the why until you had seen the where." The Heartstone surged against Rory's sternum — a single, hard throb of heat — and she caught her breath. Not a portal. Not yet. But the pendant knew something it hadn't known a moment ago. She curled her fingers around it through her shirt and felt the deep crimson stone answer her grip with another pulse, faint but certain, like a second heartbeat trying to sync with her own. Above them, the sky through the canopy was wrong in a way that took Rory several seconds to name. It was amber. Not sunset amber, not lamplight-through-smoke amber, but a deep, warm, living gold that belonged to no hour of any English day she had lived through. It poured down between the leaves and lit nothing — the flowers made their own light, the stones gave none back — and the wrongness of it settled into Rory's ribs like a stone. "That's not our sky," she said. "It is between skies," Isolde said. She was looking at the canopy with an expression Rory had not seen on her before: something almost like grief. "You are standing in a door, Miss Carter. Doors do not have weather of their own." Nyx had gone very still. When they spoke, their voice had dropped to something barely above a thread. "Something has crossed recently. Through here." They knelt — or the shape of them lowered — and traced a line in the black grass that had gone grey and brittle in a narrow track, no wider than a hand. "Whatever passed did not leave shadows alone. It *took* them." Rory knelt beside them. The grass beneath her fingers was cold and dry and dead in a line that curved away toward the far side of the clearing, where the amber light thickened and the trees stood too close together, their trunks interlocking like clasped hands. Isolde did not kneel. Isolde never knelt. She looked down at the dead track with her pale lavender eyes and said, in the measured cadence of someone choosing each word as though it cost them, "Three days ago, or three weeks — time here keeps its own accounts. Something walked this path that casts no shadow of its own, and it went toward the deep wood, and it has not come back." "Something that casts no shadow," Nyx repeated. Their violet eyes found Rory's. "Like me." The silence that followed was not empty. It was full of the slow turning of that unseen water, of flowers breathing their cold light, of a pendant beating against Rory's chest with increasing urgency. Somewhere beyond the interlocked trees, something that had taken the shadows of things was waiting to be found. Rory stood. She drew a breath of air that tasted of honeysuckle and iron and a rain that would never fall, and she felt, for the first time since she'd left Cardiff and the flat above Silas' bar and the small, survivable life she'd built in London, that she had stepped into something from which walking back out was not guaranteed. "Right," she said. "Then we go toward it." The flowers brightened, all of them at once, as though the clearing had heard her. Isolde smiled without surprise. Nyx rose from the ground and became, for one unguarded moment, almost solid. They went into the wood, and the amber light closed behind them like a door being politely, patiently shut.
created_at"2026-09-23T10:06:30.598Z" 9/23/2026, 10:06:30 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.059
80.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1524
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count3
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"very"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1524
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"resolved"
count1
6
word"throb"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"measured"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"pulse"
2"pulsed"
3"whisper"
4"weight"
5"resolved"
6"throb"
7"traced"
8"measured"
9"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences87
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen64
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords5
totalWords1543
ratio0.003
matches
0"near"
1"presence"
2"you"
3"recognition"
4"took"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount1249
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.44
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Isolde10
Rory18
Heartstone2
Pendant1
June1
Nyx7
English1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Rory"
2"Pendant"
3"Nyx"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"June"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0.779
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as though handling it by the edges"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches6
per1kWords3.889
wordCount1543
matches
0"not as trees but as a wall of them, their trunks fused at the base into a rin"
1"Not the ambient warmth of skin and chain, but a slow, deliberate heat, like something with a pulse had cur"
2"not temperature but *presence*, the way a held breath is different from an unfil"
3"not a stream's chatter but a slow, deep sound, like something enormous turning over in"
4"Not sunset amber, not lamplight-through-smoke amber, but a deep, warm, living gold"
5"not lamplight-through-smoke amber, but a deep, warm, living gold"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean39.56
std26.72
cv0.675
sampleLengths
075
15
235
386
44
530
672
759
891
95
1051
1121
1225
1358
1466
1558
1611
177
1868
193
2018
2134
2243
2310
2419
2520
2669
2781
286
2942
3067
3146
3272
3314
3452
3561
368
3732
3819
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs203
matches
0"was looking"
1"was waiting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount18
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences15
totalSentences103
ratio0.146
matches
0"The oaks came first — not as trees but as a wall of them, their trunks fused at the base into a ring of grey-bark pillars so old the lichen had grown itself into script."
1"Their violet eyes were the only fixed thing in a form that never quite settled — a humanoid silhouette with edges that frayed into the air."
2"The cold hit her first — not temperature but *presence*, the way a held breath is different from an unfilled lung."
3"Not in the polite, seasonal way of a park in June — these grew in defiant, impossible abundance, foxglove and snowdrop and violet and things she had no name for, their petals translucent and veined with light that pulsed faintly, rhythmically, as though the whole clearing had a heartbeat she could almost match to her own."
4"Somewhere out of sight, water moved — not a stream's chatter but a slow, deep sound, like something enormous turning over in its sleep."
5"Behind her, Nyx passed between the stones and immediately hissed — a sound like fabric tearing."
6"Rory noticed it then — the thing she'd been reaching for since she stepped through."
7"The clearing unfolded in a way that made distance feel negotiable — the far side of it stayed far no matter how long they walked, while the trees they passed repeated themselves with small, deliberate variations."
8"Touching things was how she understood them; it was how she'd always understood them."
9"She pressed her palm flat against the hand-knot and felt — nothing at first."
10"They extended something that resolved into a hand — long-fingered, dark as pooled ink — and hovered it over the knot without touching."
11"They said the name the way a person says a name they used to answer to — flat, careful, as though handling it by the edges."
12"The Heartstone surged against Rory's sternum — a single, hard throb of heat — and she caught her breath."
13"It poured down between the leaves and lit nothing — the flowers made their own light, the stones gave none back — and the wrongness of it settled into Rory's ribs like a stone."
14"\"Something has crossed recently. Through here.\" They knelt — or the shape of them lowered — and traced a line in the black grass that had gone grey and brittle in a narrow track, no wider than a hand."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1189
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"deep, warm, living gold"
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.03616484440706476
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.011774600504625737
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean14.98
std12.51
cv0.835
sampleLengths
035
140
25
314
48
513
620
726
822
918
104
117
1223
1324
143
1528
166
1711
1821
1928
2010
213
2256
238
2424
255
2616
2717
2818
296
304
3111
3217
338
3415
357
3611
376
3819
393
4036
4127
422
4314
4414
4517
4611
473
488
493
56.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.36893203883495146
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners38
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences74
matches
0"Somewhere out of sight, water"
1"Then they gathered themselves, taller"
2"Then a sensation like pushing"
3"Somewhere beyond the interlocked trees,"
ratio0.054
79.46% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences74
matches
0"Her pale lavender eyes held"
1"Their violet eyes were the"
2"they whispered, and their voice"
3"It was warm."
4"It had been cool all"
5"She pushed it beneath her"
6"Their form flinched, edges scattering,"
7"Their whisper had thinned."
8"She walked on top of"
9"They went deeper."
10"She pressed her palm flat"
11"She pulled back."
12"Her palm was damp and"
13"They extended something that resolved"
14"They said the name the"
15"She stood at its exact"
16"She curled her fingers around"
17"It was amber."
18"It poured down between the"
19"She was looking at the"
ratio0.351
47.84% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences74
matches
0"The oaks came first —"
1"Rory stopped at the boundary"
2"Isolde, who had been walking"
3"Her pale lavender eyes held"
4"Nyx materialised from the shadow"
5"Their violet eyes were the"
6"they whispered, and their voice"
7"A pause that was almost"
8"Rory looked down at her"
9"It was warm."
10"It had been cool all"
11"She pushed it beneath her"
12"The cold hit her first"
13"The air inside tasted of"
14"The standing stones passed her"
15"Wildflowers bloomed everywhere."
16"Grass between them was black-green"
17"Rory said softly"
18"Their form flinched, edges scattering,"
19"Their whisper had thinned."
ratio0.824
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"Rory stopped at the boundary of Richmond Park where the path simply ended, as though the concept of continuing had grown tired, and looked between two of the st…"
1"Isolde, who had been walking three paces ahead without ever seeming to arrive, turned."
2"The air inside tasted of rain that hadn't fallen yet, of crushed green stems, of something faintly metallic and sweet, like blood and honeysuckle sharing the sa…"
3"Not in the polite, seasonal way of a park in June — these grew in defiant, impossible abundance, foxglove and snowdrop and violet and things she had no name for…"
4"Then they gathered themselves, taller and more solid than before, shoulders drawn up as though against a wind."
5"The clearing unfolded in a way that made distance feel negotiable — the far side of it stayed far no matter how long they walked, while the trees they passed re…"
6"They extended something that resolved into a hand — long-fingered, dark as pooled ink — and hovered it over the knot without touching."
7"Not sunset amber, not lamplight-through-smoke amber, but a deep, warm, living gold that belonged to no hour of any English day she had lived through."
8"The grass beneath her fingers was cold and dry and dead in a line that curved away toward the far side of the clearing, where the amber light thickened and the …"
9"Somewhere beyond the interlocked trees, something that had taken the shadows of things was waiting to be found."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
61.76% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"they whispered (whisper)"
1"She looked down (look dow)"
2"Nyx repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.412
leniency0.824
rawRatio0.214
effectiveRatio0.176
78.2436%