Run: 2026-09-23-01M36VPPETAN6FADX75315CZZA

Run Details

Duration:
1m 50s
Cost:
$0.000782
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain had been falling since six and showed no intention of stopping. It came off the roofs of Soho in sheets, gutting the gutters, turning Berwick Street into a black mirror that carried the green bleed of the sign above The Raven's Nest. Harlow Quinn stood in the doorway of a shuttered tailor's across the road, collar up, brown eyes fixed on the bar's entrance, and let the water run down the back of her neck because she had stopped feeling it an hour ago. The leather watch on her left wrist read 11:47. She turned her wrist, caught the neon, turned it back. Fourteen days of surveillance and the pattern had finally congealed: the bar took deliveries at odd hours, the same three faces came and went, and twice now a woman in a grey parka had entered through the front and left through a side alley that served no purpose anyone had been able to explain. Tonight the woman in the grey parka was late. The door of The Raven's Nest opened and a slice of warm light fell across the wet pavement. Quinn's hand went to her hip without thought, fingers settling against the flat of her holster. Out came a man she didn't recognise — young, slight, hood up, moving with the quick, nervous economy of someone who expects to be followed. He turned left. Then, three steps later, he turned back, as though he'd heard something the rain had swallowed. His face lifted. Wet curls clungged to his forehead. Quinn stepped out of the doorway. The man ran. It was not a considered decision on either side. It simply happened, the way it always happened — a body in motion, a body in pursuit, the street narrowing to the space between them. Quinn's boots hit the puddles and the water came up hard against her shins. She had eighteen years of this in her legs and the years showed: she gained on him along the first block, close enough to see the Saint Christopher medallion swinging free of his collar, close enough to see the scar that ran the length of his left forearm where his sleeve had ridden up. "Police! Stop!" He didn't stop. He cut hard right, shoulder-checking a woman with an umbrella, and took the alley between the kebab shop and the print works. Quinn went in after him. Bins. A mattress. A cat that erupted from a crate and vanished. The alley spat them out onto Charing Cross Road and the man went north, which was wrong — north was the wrong direction entirely if he wanted to disappear, north was open ground — and Quinn understood, in the part of her brain that had once been good at this before Morris, that he wasn't running away from her. He was running toward something. She gained again at the junction. Her hand caught the back of his parka and he spun, and for a half-second they were face to face in the headlights of a taxi, his eyes wide and wet and bright with something that was not fear of her. He drove an elbow backward. It caught her ribs — amateur, sloppy, but it hurt — and he wrenched free and was gone into the crossing against the lights. Quinn went after him. A horn blared. She struck the bonnet of a car with both palms, felt the vibration in her teeth, and kept moving. Camden. She knew the geography the way you know the inside of a wound: the lock market shutters, the bridge, the strip of bars that emptied at midnight. The man with the medallion ran past all of it. He plunged down a side street Quinn had never had cause to use, then a second, then a fire escape that clanged under his weight and spat him out on a service road behind a row of arches. She took the stairs three at a time, the metal slick under her palms, her breath burning. By the time she dropped to the other side he was at a door set into the brickwork of what her map, later, would tell her had been a Tube station — disused, tiled, the roundel long since pried from its fixings. He had something in his fist. Bone, she thought, though she couldn't have said how she knew. A token, dark and irregular, held up to a slot beside the door. The door opened on darkness and the smell of cold air from far below. He went through. Quinn reached it four seconds later and put her hand flat against the frame. The door was heavy, iron, and it swung under her without resistance. No lock on this side. Nothing but a stairwell spiralling down into a light that was not electric — amber, unsteady, the colour of a struck match held too long. She stood at the top and listened. Below, a sound she had no name for: voices, dozens of them, not speaking so much as accumulating, and beneath them a low irregular rhythm like a heartbeat amplified through tile. Music of a kind. Her radio, on her hip, had stopped producing anything but static the moment she crossed the threshold, and she became aware of this only when her thumb went to it out of habit and found nothing there to answer. Quinn looked back up the stairwell. Rain on the service road. The distant shout of a night bus. The ordinary city, thirty feet above her head and entirely reachable. Then she looked down. She thought of DS Morris. She thought of the report she had filed, the one that had said *unexplained circumstances*, and of the three years since in which the phrase had sat in her chest like a stone she could neither swallow nor cough up. She thought of the woman in the grey parka who left through an alley that led nowhere, and the bookshelf in the back room of The Raven's Nest that no one had been permitted to examine, and the word *clique* which she had written in her own hand into a file that her sergeant had returned to her with a single line in red ink: *Insufficient basis.* Above her, the city. Below her, the answer, or something that would at least be a door. Quinn checked her weapon. She checked the watch. 11:56, and somewhere beneath Camden a market that the file she'd pulled — illegally, at eleven o'clock that morning, from a database that should not have contained it — described as *mobile, subterranean, entry by token.* The full moon was in two days. She had not been given a token. She had watched a man use one, and the door had closed behind him, and the door had opened again for her anyway, as though it had been waiting to see what she would do. She went down. The stairwell tightened as it turned, the tiling giving way to raw brick, then to something older that her fingers, grazing the wall for balance, could not identify. The amber light came from lanterns hung at intervals — real lanterns, flame behind clouded glass — and by their glow she counted eleven flights before the corridor opened and the sound resolved into people. The Veil Market occupied the guts of the abandoned station. Stalls had been built into the curved walls between the pillars, draped in cloth the colour of old blood, selling things she could not catalogue: bottles that moved when she wasn't looking directly at them, jars of grey powder, a rack of knives with marks on the blades that might have been decoration and might have been language. A creature she would later describe, in a report she would never submit, as *approximately human* was haggling over a leather-bound ledger. The crowd parted around Quinn and closed behind her, and she understood with a cold, clean clarity that no one down here was surprised to see her. The man with the medallion was thirty feet ahead. He had stopped. He was looking at her over his shoulder, and his expression had changed — no longer fear, but something worse: pity. "You shouldn't have followed me," he said. His accent was Spanish, softened by years in England. Quinn's hand stayed off the weapon. Down here, she suspected, drawing it would be the last thing she did. "Tomás Herrera," she said, because she had run his face through the system at nine o'clock and found the paramedic's licence revoked eighteen months ago and a list of complaints that read like the ravings of people who had been told, repeatedly, that what they were seeing was not there. "You were in The Raven's Nest. You were meeting someone." "I was being treated," he said. He held up the arm with the scar, and in the lantern light she could see that it was healing wrong — the tissue beneath the skin shifting, alive in a way that living tissue should not be. "Some of us can't go to a hospital." "Then explain it to me. Up there, where I can write it down." Herrera glanced past her, up the corridor, and something passed across his face — a quick, involuntary calculation. "You have a file," he said. "You've had one for months. And your sergeant sent it back." He paused. "We read your mail, Detective. Not all of it. Enough." Quinn said nothing. The lanterns fluttered. "Three years ago," Herrera said, more quietly, "a man died under circumstances you still don't understand. You've been walking toward this street every night since." He tilted his head. "You can go back up. Take the stairs. There's a door, and rain, and a city that will agree with you that none of this happened. Or you can come with me and I will tell you what happened to DS Morris — not the version in the file. The real one." Above, the rain. Below, the market's endless low murmur, the lantern-flame, the thing in the jars that turned to face her when she wasn't looking at it directly. Quinn looked at her watch. 12:01. The leather was soaked through and warm against her wrist. "If you're lying," she said, "I will find you. I found you tonight, and I had no lead at all." "I know," said Herrera, and something in his voice suggested he considered that the most frightening fact in the building. He turned and walked deeper into the market, and Quinn Quinn followed him down, and the door at the top of the stairwell swung shut behind her on its own weight, and the rain went on falling on a city that had already forgotten she was in it.
created_at"2026-09-23T10:06:42.656Z" 9/23/2026, 10:06:42 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1776
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
80.29% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1776
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"electric"
count1
2
word"database"
count1
3
word"resolved"
count1
4
word"the last thing"
count1
5
word"fluttered"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"electric"
2"database"
3"resolved"
4"the last thing"
5"fluttered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences100
matches
0"was surprised"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences100
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"know"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen67
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords12
totalWords1792
ratio0.007
matches
0"unexplained circumstances"
1"clique"
2"Insufficient basis."
3"mobile, subterranean, entry by token."
4"approximately human"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
97.85% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount1630
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity1.04
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Berwick1
Street1
Raven3
Nest3
Quinn17
Saint1
Christopher1
Charing1
Cross1
Road1
Morris2
Tube1
Camden2
Veil1
Market1
Spanish1
England1
Herrera3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Quinn"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Morris"
6"Spanish"
7"Herrera"
places
0"Soho"
1"Berwick"
2"Street"
3"Charing"
4"Cross"
5"Road"
6"England"
globalScore0.979
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.558
wordCount1792
matches
0"neither swallow nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences106
matches
0"see that it"
1"considered that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean44.8
std34.95
cv0.78
sampleLengths
086
119
263
334
453
56
63
7102
82
9101
105
1176
1226
1393
1472
1514
1659
177
1874
1929
204
21112
2217
2393
243
2563
26117
2733
287
2928
3060
3152
3213
3347
346
3581
3628
3716
3820
3968
84.21% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences100
matches
0"was gone"
1"been permitted"
2"been given"
3"been built"
4"was surprised"
5"been told"
19.82% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs259
matches
0"wasn't running"
1"was running"
2"wasn't looking"
3"was haggling"
4"was looking"
5"were seeing"
6"wasn't looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences106
ratio0.104
matches
0"Out came a man she didn't recognise — young, slight, hood up, moving with the quick, nervous economy of someone who expects to be followed."
1"It simply happened, the way it always happened — a body in motion, a body in pursuit, the street narrowing to the space between them."
2"The alley spat them out onto Charing Cross Road and the man went north, which was wrong — north was the wrong direction entirely if he wanted to disappear, north was open ground — and Quinn understood, in the part of her brain that had once been good at this before Morris, that he wasn't running away from her."
3"It caught her ribs — amateur, sloppy, but it hurt — and he wrenched free and was gone into the crossing against the lights."
4"By the time she dropped to the other side he was at a door set into the brickwork of what her map, later, would tell her had been a Tube station — disused, tiled, the roundel long since pried from its fixings."
5"Nothing but a stairwell spiralling down into a light that was not electric — amber, unsteady, the colour of a struck match held too long."
6"11:56, and somewhere beneath Camden a market that the file she'd pulled — illegally, at eleven o'clock that morning, from a database that should not have contained it — described as *mobile, subterranean, entry by token.* The full moon was in two days."
7"The amber light came from lanterns hung at intervals — real lanterns, flame behind clouded glass — and by their glow she counted eleven flights before the corridor opened and the sound resolved into people."
8"He was looking at her over his shoulder, and his expression had changed — no longer fear, but something worse: pity."
9"He held up the arm with the scar, and in the lantern light she could see that it was healing wrong — the tissue beneath the skin shifting, alive in a way that living tissue should not be."
10"Herrera glanced past her, up the corridor, and something passed across his face — a quick, involuntary calculation."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1619
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.027177269919703522
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.0067943174799258805
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean16.91
std15.66
cv0.926
sampleLengths
013
131
242
39
410
554
69
718
816
925
103
1116
123
136
146
153
169
1725
1814
1954
202
213
2222
235
241
252
269
2759
285
296
3041
315
3224
334
343
3519
361
3727
3810
3938
4017
4142
426
4311
4413
4514
463
4714
4812
495
44.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.34285714285714286
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners36
73.26% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences91
matches
0"Then, three steps later, he"
1"Then she looked down."
ratio0.022
66.15% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences91
matches
0"It came off the roofs"
1"She turned her wrist, caught"
2"He turned left."
3"His face lifted."
4"It was not a considered"
5"It simply happened, the way"
6"She had eighteen years of"
7"He didn't stop."
8"He cut hard right, shoulder-checking"
9"He was running toward something."
10"She gained again at the"
11"Her hand caught the back"
12"He drove an elbow backward."
13"It caught her ribs —"
14"She struck the bonnet of"
15"She knew the geography the"
16"He plunged down a side"
17"She took the stairs three"
18"He had something in his"
19"He went through."
ratio0.385
53.41% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences91
matches
0"The rain had been falling"
1"It came off the roofs"
2"Harlow Quinn stood in the"
3"The leather watch on her"
4"She turned her wrist, caught"
5"Tonight the woman in the"
6"The door of The Raven's"
7"Quinn's hand went to her"
8"He turned left."
9"His face lifted."
10"Quinn stepped out of the"
11"The man ran."
12"It was not a considered"
13"It simply happened, the way"
14"Quinn's boots hit the puddles"
15"She had eighteen years of"
16"He didn't stop."
17"He cut hard right, shoulder-checking"
18"Quinn went in after him."
19"A cat that erupted from"
ratio0.813
54.95% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"By the time she dropped"
ratio0.011
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount13
matches
0"It came off the roofs of Soho in sheets, gutting the gutters, turning Berwick Street into a black mirror that carried the green bleed of the sign above The Rave…"
1"Fourteen days of surveillance and the pattern had finally congealed: the bar took deliveries at odd hours, the same three faces came and went, and twice now a w…"
2"Out came a man she didn't recognise — young, slight, hood up, moving with the quick, nervous economy of someone who expects to be followed."
3"She had eighteen years of this in her legs and the years showed: she gained on him along the first block, close enough to see the Saint Christopher medallion sw…"
4"The alley spat them out onto Charing Cross Road and the man went north, which was wrong — north was the wrong direction entirely if he wanted to disappear, nort…"
5"Her hand caught the back of his parka and he spun, and for a half-second they were face to face in the headlights of a taxi, his eyes wide and wet and bright wi…"
6"She knew the geography the way you know the inside of a wound: the lock market shutters, the bridge, the strip of bars that emptied at midnight."
7"Nothing but a stairwell spiralling down into a light that was not electric — amber, unsteady, the colour of a struck match held too long."
8"She thought of the woman in the grey parka who left through an alley that led nowhere, and the bookshelf in the back room of The Raven's Nest that no one had be…"
9"11:56, and somewhere beneath Camden a market that the file she'd pulled — illegally, at eleven o'clock that morning, from a database that should not have contai…"
10"Stalls had been built into the curved walls between the pillars, draped in cloth the colour of old blood, selling things she could not catalogue: bottles that m…"
11"Below, the market's endless low murmur, the lantern-flame, the thing in the jars that turned to face her when she wasn't looking at it directly."
12"He turned and walked deeper into the market, and Quinn Quinn followed him down, and the door at the top of the stairwell swung shut behind her on its own weight…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.4901%